高考英語二輪復習情人節(jié)的驚喜（人與社會幫助）課件

情人節(jié)的意外金華十校續(xù)寫《》whowhenwherewhatMainidea1.I:Roberta2.Otherpatients3.thenurseValentine’sDay,adayofloveandfriendshipOutsidethedoctor’sofficeMycaraswellasmyphonewasdead,aftermycheckup.Ineedhelp.1.主題語境：人與社會2.主題：社會服務與人際溝通-良好的人際關(guān)系與社會交往3.主題意義：在遇到緊急情況，即使看似形同陌路的陌生人也會伸手相助，體現(xiàn)互幫互助，人間關(guān)愛！4.話題：日常生活、社會互助。Whatistheproblemtobesolvedinthestory?

ReadforconflictWhatistheproblemtobesolvedinthestory?1.Mycarwasdead,likemyphone2.Ihadtousethephoneinside,butthereceptionistwasnotthere.3.Ihadtoturnbacktothepeopleforhelp.1.Everyonewasintheirownlittleworld,lackinginconnectionwitheachother.2.ItwasValentine'sDay,adayofloveandfriendshipWilltheyrespondtomyrequestandofferhelp?VSPara1:Iturnedtoseealltheotherpatientsfollowingme.銜接句1：Whydotheyfollowme?情節(jié)推進（心理）：HowdoIfeel?情節(jié)推進（動作）：Howwillthenurseandotherpatientscooperatewitheachothertohelpmycarstart?銜接句2：Howtochecktheresult?Para2:Isaidaquickprayerandturnedthekey.銜接句3：Whatistheresult?情節(jié)推進（心理\動作）：Whatispeople’sresponsetotheresult?結(jié)尾：Whatismyreflectionontheincident?主題升華：Howtoechowiththeformerpart?主題升華：Whatisthethemeofthestory?THREE優(yōu)秀學生作文及下水作文伏筆：Icouldn'tjudgethembyit.

照應伏筆Actuallytheywerewarmandkind.照應伏筆：Theytriedtogetmycarstarted.照應伏筆：Theirhelpreallysavedmyday伏筆：adayofloveandfriendship照應伏筆：ThemeChatGPT作品：Iturnedtoseealltheotherpatientsfollowingme.Thenursewalkedahead,leadingustomycar.Ifeltaknotinmystomach,embarrassedtohavesomanypeoplewatchingmeasItriedtostartmycar.Whatifitdidn'tstartatall?Whatifitmadealoudnoiseandeveryonelaughed?IfelttheircuriouseyesonmeasIreachedformykeys,feelingtheweightoftheirexpectation.Thenursebentdowntotakealookunderthehood,andItriedtokeepmyhandsfromshakingasIinsertedthekeyintotheignition.Isaidaquickprayerandturnedthekey.Theengineroaredtolife,andIfeltawaveofreliefwashoverme.Thenursegavemeathumbsupandwalkedbackinside,leavingmealonewiththecarandtheotherpatientsstillwatching.Ibackedoutoftheparkingspaceslowly,feelingtheireyesonmeasIdroveaway.ButasIturnedontothestreet,Irealizedthattheirstaresdidn'tmatter.Ihadconqueredmyfearandfixedmycar,andthatwasallthatmattered.小情節(jié)構(gòu)建及可讀性細節(jié)描寫3.

虛擬語氣、非謂語與對比修辭Iwouldprobablybeburiedinmycellphonetoo-ifIhadn’tforgottentochargeitbeforeIlefthome.Itwouldhavebeennicetostrikeupaconversationtopassthetimeonthisday.如果我沒忘記在離家前給手機充電，我也可能會沉浸于其中。在這個日子里，和人聊聊天以消磨時間會很不錯。Havingfetchedthetoolfromhiscar,hebegantotwistit.他從車里取出工具，開始轉(zhuǎn)動。Itwasdead,likemycar.就像我的汽車一樣，手機也不工作了。4.動作IbreezedoutoftheofficetomylittleHonda.

我輕松地走出辦公室到我的小本田車旁。Thenursepoppedherheadintotheroom.護士把頭探進房間。Severalothersbentforward,mostprobablyleaningintochecktheengine.3.幾個人向前彎腰，很可能是為了檢查引擎。Itwasnotlongbeforehestraighteneduptorest,rubbinghisback.他不久后挺直身子放松了一下，揉著背部Acheerwentup.歡呼聲響起。5.心理

Abitpuzzled,Iwenttomycarandslidintothedriver’sseat.

感到有點困惑，我走向我的車，鉆進駕駛座。FOUR相似“救助”類續(xù)寫考題對比參考范文：IwasstandingbymycarwhenamanwithbrokenEnglishsuddenlyappeared.Hesaidifhecouldhewouldhelpme.IsaidIthoughttherewasagasleakbecauseIsmelledit.Hegotunderthecar,and2minuteslater,heslidoutandsaiditwasallfixed.Heaskedmetostartitupandseeifitworkedwell.Actually,atfirst,Iwasalittleskeptical.ButIdidashesaid.Tomydelightandrelief,mycardidindeedroartolifeandhadpower.IthankedmyrescuerandaskedhimifIcouldpayhimforhishelp.Heshookhisheadinstantlyandpolitelyrefusedmyoffer.Ithankedthenicemanagainandgavehimabighug.Myheartwasfullandsaidhewasablessinginmylife.Hisfacelitupandhadabeautifulsmile.MysisterandIwerebothtearyeyedandextremelygrateful.TherearesomanystoriesofrudenessandunkindnesstoothersbutIhavebeenblessedmanytimesbykindandhelpfulpeople.2021八省聯(lián)考Duringthispastyear,I'vehadthreeinstancesofcartrouble.Eachtimethesethingshappened,Iwassickofthewaymostpeoplehadn'tbotheredtohelp.Oneofthosetimes,IwasonthesideoftheroadforclosetothreehourswithmybigJeep.Iputsignsinthewindows,bigsignsthatsaidNEEDAJACK(千斤頂),andofferedmoney.Nothing.RightasIwasabouttogiveup,aMexicanfamilyinasmalltruckpulledover,andthefatherboundedout.Hesizedupthesituationandcalledforhisdaughter,whospokeEnglish.HeconveyedthroughherthathehadajackbutthatitwastoosmallfortheJeep.sowewouldneedsomethingtosupportit.Thenhegotasaw(鋸子)fromthetruckandcutasectionoutofabiglogonthesideoftheroad.Werolleditoverandputhisjackontop,andwewereinbusiness.Istartedtakingthewheeloff,andthen,ifyoucanbelieveit,Ibrokehistireiron.Noworries:Hehandedittohiswife,andshewasgoneinaflashdowntheroadtobuyanewtireiron.Shewasbackin15minutes.Wefinishedthejob,andIwasaveryhappyman.Thetwoofusweredirtyandsweaty.Hiswifepreparedapotofwaterforustowashourhands.Itriedtoputa$20billintheman'shand,buthewouldn'ttakeit,soinsteadIwentuptothetruckandgaveittohiswifeasquietlyasIcould.Iaskedthelittlegirlwheretheylived.Mexico,shesaid.TheywereinOregonsoMommyandDaddycouldworkonafruitfarmforthenextfewweeks.Thentheywouldgohome.

WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI'dhadlunch.Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.參考范文：WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI'dhadlunch.Shakingmyheadwithmyhandsstretchingintheair,Ihadnomoodtoeatanythingbeforemycarwasrepaired.Withsmilesheledmeintotheircar,treatingmetoavarietyoffoods.Ithankedthemamillionwith.Iwassohungryasifahungrytigerwereswallowinganelephant.IbetitwasthemostdeliciousfoodthatIhadhad.Watchingmywolfingthemdown,thefamilygrinnedfromeartoear,sodidI.Wechattedfreelyasifwewerefriendsformanyyears.Afterexchangingtelephonenumbers,expandingmythanksagain,Igotoffthecar,whenthegirlpassedapaperbagtome.Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.Atthesightofth