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tohelpTheme?(mainidea)Characters?(who)Setting?(when,where)Conflict?(problem/challenge)Resolution?(solution)readthestoryforkeyinformationTheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity.Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.Mrs.Meredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.Sheknewtheyhadproblems,andtheyneededallkindsofhelp.Whenshehadtime,shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem....“Iwishyoucouldseehim,”shesaidtoherownchildren,John,HarryandClara.“Heissuchahelptohismother.Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney,butIdon’tseewhathecando.”Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard.“Iwishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney,”saidClara.“Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch.”“SodoI,”saidHarry.“Wereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem.”Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“Ihaveagreatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish(完成)”Repetition重復(fù)Synonym近義READFORTHEMETheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity.Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.Mrs.Meredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.Sheknewtheyhadproblems,andtheyneededallkindsofhelp.Whenshehadtime,shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem.Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore.Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy.Thelittleboy–hisnamewasBernard–hadinterestedherverymuch.Readforcharacters&setting

TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity.Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.

Mrs.Meredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.Sheknewtheyhadproblems,andtheyneededallkindsofhelp.Whenshehadtime,shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem.Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore.Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy.Thelittleboy–hisnamewasBernard–hadinterestedherverymuch.Readforcharacters&settingHypernym上義Hyponym下義Hypernym上義Hyponym下義TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity.Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.Mrs.Meredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.Sheknewtheyhadproblems,andtheyneededallkindsofhelp.Whenshehadtime,shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem.

Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore.Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy.Thelittleboy–hisnamewasBernard–hadinterestedherverymuch.ReadforsettingHypernym上義Hyponym下義“Iwishyoucouldseehim,”shesaidtoherownchildren,John,HarryandClara.“Heissuchahelptohismother.Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney,but

Idon’tseewhathecando.”Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard.“Iwishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney,”saidClara.“Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch.”“SodoI,”saidHarry.“Wereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem.”READFORCONFLICTdesiredtoearnmoneybuthadnoideahow

Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“Ihaveagreatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish(完成)”Theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention.WhenJohnhadanidea,itwassuretobeagoodone.“Itellyouwhatwecando,”saidJohn.“YouknowthatbigboxofcornUncleJohnsentus?Well,wecanmakepopcorn(爆米花),andputitintopaperbags,andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsell

it.”ReadFORRESOLUTIONHypernym上義Hyponym下義Synonym近義Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“Ihaveagreatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish(完成)”Theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention.WhenJohnhadanidea,itwassuretobeagoodone.“Itellyouwhatwecando,”saidJohn.“YouknowthatbigboxofcornUncleJohnsentus?Well,wecanmakepopcorn(爆米花),andputitintopaperbags,andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit.”WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.ReadforpredictionsForsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“Ihaveagreatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish(完成)”Theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention.WhenJohnhadanidea,itwassuretobeagoodone.“Itellyouwhatwecando,”saidJohn.“YouknowthatbigboxofcornUncleJohnsentus?Well,wecanmakepopcorn(爆米花),andputitintopaperbags,andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsell

it.”WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.Witheverythingready,

Bernard

startedoutonhisnewbusiness.ReadforpredictionsHypernym上義Hypernym上義Repetition重復(fù)Paragraph1:WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.Paragraph2:Witheverything

ready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.makepopcornputitintopaperbagsbring/tell

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itpopcornmachine/ovenorder/buy/prepare...fill/wrap/pack...paperbagsearnmoneysupportthe

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gather/collect/arrange...basketPREDICTTHERESOLUTIONhousedoordoorstepwindowneighborhoodfromhousetohousefromdoortodoorknockthedoorintheneighborhoodkindneighbors/facespoptheirheadsoutofthewindowsRepeatthewordsorsentencesfromthetextorthegivensentencesUsewordsthatarerelated

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fromthetextorthegivensentencesusedetaileddescriptionorexamplesofthewordsfromthetextorthegivensentencesIMPROVETHEWRITINGRepetition重復(fù)Collocation搭配Hypernym上義Hyponym下義Synonym近義Antonym反義cohesivedevices銜接手段Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.Itisthefamily’skindhelpandtheboy’seagernesstohelphisfamilythatworkthemiracle....ImprovetheENDINGhelp,kindness,mercy,sympathy,generosity,careandlove,community,humanity...Collocation搭配Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.Itisthefamily’skindhelpandtheboy’seagernesstohelphisfamilythatworkthemiracle.Itispeople’scareandlovethatmakesthecommunitybeautiful.It

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love

thatmakestheworldgoroundandBernardfeltitdeepinhislittleheart.Theactofhelping

plantedaseedofkindnessineveryheart,which

wasboundtothrive(蓬勃生長(zhǎng)).Tiredastheboywasafterthedayfinished,theupsurgeofhappinessofearningmoneyonhisownandfinding

highlightinhumansfloodedhisheart....ImprovetheENDINGCollocation搭配Itispeople’skindnessandsympathythatmakestheimpossiblepossible.Smallasthechildrenwere,loveandkindnessbehindtheactisenormous.Itistruethatanordinarylittleboycandosomethingextraordinary....ImprovetheENDINGAntonym反義Writekeysentences(connectingonesandending)Makeyoursentencesimpressivebyusingcohesivedevices.WritekeysentencesParagraph1:WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.

Theyquicklygottoworkand

theirmotherwentouttobuythepaperbags.JohnandHarryworkedonpoppingthecorn,while

Clarahelpedmakealistofpotentialcustomers.Whentheirmothercameback,shebroughtBernardwithher.Bernardwasgratefulfortheopportunitytoearnsomemoneyandwasexcitedtostarthisnewbusiness.Paragraph2:

Witheverythingready,Bernard

startedoutonhisnewbusiness.Hewentfromdoortodoorintheneighborhood,sellingbagsofthefreshlypoppedcorn.PeoplewerehappytobuyitandBernardwasthrilledtobeabletoearnsomemoney.AllofthiswasbecauseofJohn'sbrightidea.Bernard'sfamilywasabletousethemoneyheearnedtopaysomeoftheirbillsandmakeendsmeet.ThecommunitywashappytosupportBernardandhisfamily.

andItispeople’scareandlovethatmakestheworldgoroundandBernardfeltitdeepinhislittleheart.PossibleVersion1Hyponym下義Repetition重復(fù)Synonym近義Collocation搭配Paragraph1:WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.Verysoon,thechildrenlearnthowtopopthecornandthenwerebusyindoingthis"big"thing.Atthesametime,theirmotherwentouttobuythepaperbagsthattheyneeded.Whenshecameback,shebroughtwithherBernard.Bernardfeltgratefultoallofthemforwhattheyhaddoneforhim.Paragraph2:Witheverythingready,Bernardsta