廣東高考英語作文高分策略課件

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句子合并的語法精彩句子合并的語法精彩2

英語的句子按結(jié)構(gòu)分為簡單句、并列句和復(fù)合句。簡單句有五個基本句型：1.主語+系動詞+表語2.主語+謂語（不及物動詞）（+狀語）3.主語+謂語（及物動詞）+賓語4.主語+及物動詞+間接賓語+直接賓語5.主語+及物動詞+賓語+賓語補足語并列句是兩個簡單句通過and,or,but,so等連接在一起的句子。復(fù)合句是含有一個或一個以上的從句的句子。從句有名詞性從句（主語從句、賓語從句、表語從句及同位語從句）、定語從句和狀語從句。英語的句子按結(jié)構(gòu)分為簡單句、并列句和復(fù)合句。簡單句有五個基3

以上兩個簡單句，我們怎樣才能合并成一個高級的句子呢？最重要的是，我們要理解句子間的邏輯關(guān)系，然后用并列句和復(fù)合句表達出來。請看下面兩個簡單句：1.他考試不及格。Hedidn’tpasstheexam.(主語+謂語+賓語)Hefailedintheexam.(主語+謂語+狀語）2.他的家人很失望。Hisfamilyweredisappointed.（主語+系動詞+表語）以上兩個簡單句，我們怎樣才能合并成一個高級的句子呢？最重要4※因為他考試不及格，所以他的家人很失望。1.Hisfamilyweredisappointedbecausehehadn’tpassedtheexam.(含_____從句的復(fù)合句)2.As/Becausehehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.(含______從句的復(fù)合句)3.Hedidn’tpasstheexam,sohisfamilyweredisappointed.（______句）4.Hisfamilyweredisappointedthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.（that引導(dǎo)______從句的復(fù)合句，主要放在表示情感意義的形容詞之后，如：sorry，，glad,happy,delighted,pleased等）原因狀語原因狀語并列原因狀語..※因為他考試不及格，所以他的家人很失望。1.Hisfami5※因為他考試不及格，所以他的家人很失望。5.Thathisfamilyweredisappointedwasbecausehehadn’tpassedtheexam.（含______________的復(fù)合句）6.Thereasonwhyhisfamilyweredisappointedwasthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.(含_________________的復(fù)合句)主語從句及表語從句定語從句及表語從句※因為他考試不及格，所以他的家人很失望。5.Thathis6※他考試不及格使得他的家人很失望。7.Thathehadn’tpassedtheexammadehisfamilydisappointed.(含_________的復(fù)合句)8.Itmadehisfamilydisappointedthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.(含_______的復(fù)合句，it是形式主語)9.Itwasthathehadn’tpassedtheexamthatmadehisfamilydisappointed.(_____句型，強調(diào)主語從句)主語從句主語從句..強調(diào)※他考試不及格使得他的家人很失望。7.Thathehad7※他考試不及格，這使得他的家人很失望。10.Hedidn’tpasstheexam,anditmadehisfamilydisappointed.(________句)11.Hedidn’tpasstheexam,whichmadehisfamilydisappointed.(含________的復(fù)合句)并列定語從句※他考試不及格，這使得他的家人很失望。10.Hedidn’8※得知他考試不及格后，他的家人很失望。12.Afterhisfamilylearnedthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,theyweredisappointed.(含____________________復(fù)合句)13.Afterhisfamilyweretoldthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,theyweredisappointed.(含__________________的復(fù)合句)14.Hisfamilyweredisappointedatthenewsthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.(含_________________的復(fù)合句)時間狀語從句和賓語從句的時間狀語從句和賓語從句同位語從句的.※得知他考試不及格后，他的家人很失望。12.Afterh9

當(dāng)然，合并簡單句不一定非要用并列句和復(fù)合句。我們也可以用含非謂語的動詞的句子來表達。我們應(yīng)該知道，狀語從句、定語從句、名詞性從句都可以相應(yīng)的轉(zhuǎn)換成非謂語動詞做狀語、定語、主語、賓語和表語。請將2、6、7、11、12、13等復(fù)合句轉(zhuǎn)換成含非謂語動詞的簡單句。

因為他考試不及格，所以他的家人很失望。2.As/Becausehehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.Nothavingpassedtheexam,hemadehisfamilyfamilydisappointed.Withhimnotpassingtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointedBecauseofhisnotpassingtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.(現(xiàn)在分詞短語的完成式作原因狀語).(with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作原因狀語)（介詞短語作狀語）..當(dāng)然，合并簡單句不一定非要用并列句和復(fù)合句。我們也可以用含10

當(dāng)然，合并簡單句不一定非要用并列句和復(fù)合句。我們也可以用含非謂語的動詞的句子來表達。我們應(yīng)該知道，狀語從句、定語從句、名詞性從句都可以相應(yīng)的轉(zhuǎn)換成非謂語動詞做狀語、定語、主語、賓語和表語。請將2、6、7、11、12、13等復(fù)合句轉(zhuǎn)換成含非謂語動詞的簡單句。

2.As/Becausehehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.Nothavingpassedtheexam,hemadehisfamilyfamilydisappointed.Withhimnotpassingtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointedBecauseofhisnotpassingtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.(現(xiàn)在分詞短語的完成式作原因狀語).(with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作原因狀語)（介詞短語作狀語）..當(dāng)然，合并簡單句不一定非要用并列句和復(fù)合句。我們也可以用含116.Thereasonwhyhisfamilyweredisappointedwasthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.(含定語從句及表語從句的復(fù)合句)Thereasonforhisfamily’sbeingdisappointedwashisnotpassingtheexam.(“介詞+動名詞”作定語及動名詞作表語)。7.Thathehadn’tpassedtheexammadehisfamilydisappointed.Hisnothavingpassedtheexammadehisfamilydisappointed.（動名詞短語的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作主語）.6.Thereasonwhyhisfamilyw126.Thereasonwhyhisfamilyweredisappointedwasthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.(含定語從句及表語從句的復(fù)合句)Thereasonforhisfamily’sbeingdisappointedwashisnotpassingtheexam.(“介詞+動名詞”作定語及動名詞作表語)。7.Thathehadn’tpassedtheexammadehisfamilydisappointed.Hisnothavingpassedtheexammadehisfamilydisappointed.（動名詞短語的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作主語）.6.Thereasonwhyhisfamilyw1311.Hedidn’tpasstheexam,whichmadehisfamilydisappointed.Hedidn’tpasstheexam,makinghisfamilydisappointed.(現(xiàn)在分詞短語作結(jié)果狀語)12.Afterhisfamilylearnedthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,theyweredisappointed.Havinglearnedthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.（現(xiàn)在分詞短語作時間狀語）.After

learningthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.

（“介詞+動名詞”作時間狀語）Hisfamilyweredisappointedtolearnthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.(動詞不定式作原因狀語)11.Hedidn’tpasstheexam,w1413.Afterhisfamilyweretoldthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,theyweredisappointed.Havingbeentoldthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.Afterbeingtoldthathehadn’tpassedtheexam,hisfamilyweredisappointed.Hisfamilyweredisappointedtobetoldthathehadn’tpassedtheexam.（現(xiàn)在分詞短語的被動式作時間狀語）（“介詞+動名詞”的被動式作時間狀語。）(動詞不定式的被動式作原因狀語)13.Afterhisfamilyweretold15

句子合并的方法多種多樣，重要的是清晰句子結(jié)構(gòu),理清句子邏輯關(guān)系，學(xué)會分析句子成分。

句子合并的方法多種多樣，重要的是清晰句子結(jié)構(gòu),16

即時練習(xí)。根據(jù)漢語意思，完成英文句子。1.他很忙，他沒來。1）___________hewasbusy,hedidn’tcome.2）____________(be)busy,hedidn’tcome.3)Itwasbecausehewasbusy_________hedidn’tcome.4)Hewasbusy,________hedidn’tcome.5)Hedidn’tcome_________hewasbusy.6)________hedidn’tcomewasbecausehewasbusy.7)Hisnot___________(coming)wasbecausehewasbusy.8)Thereasonwhyhedidn’tcomewas______hewasbusy.9)_________hewasbusymadeunabletocome.10)__________(he)beingbusymadehimunabletocome.11)Hewasbusy,and______madehimunabletocome.12)Hewasbusy,___________himunabletocome.13)Hewasbusy,_______(make)himunabletocome.即時練習(xí)。根據(jù)漢語意思，完成英文句子。17

2.杰克出生在英國，他在美國長大。1）JackwasbornintheUK,_________hegrewupintheUS.2)____________hewasbornintheUK,JackgrewupintheUS.3)_________(bear)intheUK,JackgrewupintheUS.4)Jack,_________wasbornintheUK,grewupintheUS.5)Jack,_________(bear)intheUK,grewupintheUS.2.杰克出生在英國，他在美國長大。18

寫作的基本能力是“信息句子化”，在簡單句的基礎(chǔ)上運用語法知識合并句子，體現(xiàn)句子的多樣化，增添語言色彩，從而使寫作獲高分。寫作的基本能力是“信息句子化”，在簡單句19

請看下面一篇基礎(chǔ)寫作學(xué)校英語論壇針對目前城市交通擁堵、污染嚴(yán)重的問題進行了“治堵方案大家談”的討論。以下是討論概要：治堵方案1.少開私家車；多人共乘一輛小車。2.政府完善公共交通以方便市民。3.修建綠道（greenlanes）,鼓勵騎自行車。好處：省錢、省時、節(jié)能、環(huán)保?！緦懽鲀?nèi)容】請根據(jù)以上概要寫一篇短文，包括以下內(nèi)容：1.存在的問題；2.解決的方案；3.方案的好處。請看下面一篇基礎(chǔ)寫作20經(jīng)過審題，我們可以列出以下的信息點：1）Wehadadiscussion.2)Ourstreetsarecrowdedwithtraffic.Therearetoomanyprivatecars.3)Theairisseriouslypolluted.4)Somesolutionsareputforward./Everyoneisencouragedtooffersuggestions.5)Carownerscouldreducetheuseofprivatecars.6)Theycouldsharetheircarswiththeirfriendsandworkmates.7)Thegovernmentshoulddosomethingtoimprovethepublictransportsystem.8)Thegovernmentshouldbuildmoregreenlanes.9)Thepublictransportsystemshouldbemoreconvenientforcitizens.10)Peopleshouldbeencouragedtousetheirbicycles.11)Money,timeandenergywillbesaved.12)Themeasuresarefriendlytotheenvironment.經(jīng)過審題，我們可以列出以下的信息點：21請運用我們剛才所提及的名詞短語、介詞短語、with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)、非謂語短語、并列連詞和復(fù)合句來整合信息。名詞短語整合信息點2、3。運用介詞短語充當(dāng)定語整合信息點2、3;2、3、4;11、12。運用非謂語整合信息7、8、9;5,8,10;2,3;5,6。運用with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)整合信息6、12。運用復(fù)合句整合信息。請運用我們剛才所提及的名詞短語、介詞短語、with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)22Increasingnumbersofprivatecarscontributetoheavytrafficjamsandseriousairpollution.

名詞短語整合信息點2、3句。2)Ourstreetsarecrowdedwithtraffic.Therearetoomanyprivatecars.3)Theairisseriouslypolluted.Increasingnumbersofprivate23Peoplearemoreawareofthefactthatincreasingnumberofprivatecarshasgivenrisetoseriousproblemsliketrafficjamsandairpollution.（2,3）運用介詞短語充當(dāng)定語整合信息點2、3;2、3、4;11、12。2)Ourstreetsarecrowdedwithtraffic.Therearetoomanyprivatecars.3)Theairisseriouslypolluted.4)Somesolutionsareputforward./Everyoneisencouragedtooffersuggestions.11)Money,timeandenergywillbesaved.12)Themeasuresarefriendlytotheenvironment.Weheldadiscussioninthehopeofcomingupwithsomepracticalsolutionstoendtheshamefulconditionoftrafficjamsandairpollutioninourcity.(2,3,4)Bytakingtheabovemeasures,notonlycanwesavemoney,timeandenergybutalsowecancontributetoacitywithbetterenvironment.（11,12）Peoplearemoreawareofthef24Thegovernmentshouldimprovethepublictransportsystemtomakeitmoreconvenientforpeople.（7、8、9）運用非謂語整合信息7、8、9;5,8,10;2,3;5,6。Buildingmoregreenlanesisobviouslyagoodwaytoencouragecyclinginsteadofdriving.(5,8,10)Thereisawidespreadconcernoverenvironmentalpollutionandtrafficjamscausedbyprivatecars.(2,3)First,carownerscouldsharetheircarswiththeirfriendsandworkmates,thusreducingtheuseprivateofcars.（5,6）Thegovernmentshouldimprove25Hopefully,withpeoplesharingprivatecarswitheachother,ourcitywilldefinitelybeanenvironment-friendlyplacetolive運用with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)整合信息6、12。Hopefully,withpeoplesharing26Whenitcomestotrafficjamsandairpollution,somepeoplecomeupwiththeideathatcarownerscouldreducetheuseofprivatecarsbysharingcarswiththeirfriendsandworkmates.

運用復(fù)合句整合信息。定語從句整合2、3句。Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,moreandmorepeoplehavetheirowncars,whichinturnleadstosuchproblemastrafficjamsandairpollution.狀語從句整合7、9句Ifthegovernmentcouldimprovethepublictransportsystem,itwouldbemoreconvenientforpeopletotravel.

名詞性從句整合2、3、6句。Whenitcomestotrafficjams27Recentlytheissueoftrafficjamsandairpollutioncausedbyprivatecarshasbeenbroughttotheconcernofallpeople,especiallyusstudents,whocameupwithsomepracticalsuggestioninadiscussion(信息點1-4).Inouropinion,citizenscouldreducetheuseofprivatecarsbysharingwiththeirfriendsandworkmates(信息點5-6).Besides,whatreallymattersisthatthegovernmentimprovesthepublictransportsystemtomakeitmoreconvenientforpeopletotravel（信息點7和9）.Meanwhile,thegovernmentshouldhavemoregreenlanesbuilttoencouragecycling（信息點8和10）.Bytakingtheabovemeasures,notonlycanwesavemoney,time,andenergybutalsowecancontributetoacitywithbetterenvironment（信息點11和12）.Recentlytheissueoftraf28

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表示遞進;在同一話題上補充內(nèi)容另外，還有：and,andthen,even,whatismore/worse/better,besides,also,moreover,inaddition…2.表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系但是，然而，相反：but,however,yet,instead,ontheotherhand,oth