初三英語中考復(fù)習(xí)課-寫作指導(dǎo)-話題作文-課件整理+學(xué)案-無答案

寫作指導(dǎo)—話題作文寫作指導(dǎo)—話題作文thecityofBeijingtheTian’anmenSquarethecityofBeijingtheTian’antheGreatWalltheGreatWallthePalaceMuseum/theForbiddenCitythePalaceMuseum/theForbidtheTempleofHeaventheTempleofHeaventheSummerPalacetheSummerPalacetheBeihaiParktheBeihaiParktheBeijingZootheBeijingZootheOlympicParktheOlympicParkWritingSteps1.PREWRITE2.OUTLINE3.DRAFT 4.REVISE 5.PROOFREAD6.PUBLISH

構(gòu)思/審題列提綱打草稿改進(jìn)校對定稿謄寫WritingSteps1.PREWRITE

北京是一座美麗的城市，作為一名北京的中學(xué)生，你一定對這里的景點非常熟悉。某英語報紙正在向北京的中學(xué)生征文，請你通過一次旅行經(jīng)歷，介紹你去過的一個景點，在那兒所做的事情以及你的感受。

提示詞語:theBeihaiPark,goboating,takepictures,interesting

提示問題: ●Wheredidyougo？ ●Whatdidyoudothere？ ●Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip？WritingTask 北京是一座美麗的城市，作為一名北京的中學(xué)生，你一定對Prewrite---How?What?1.明確文章的用途和功能2.標(biāo)注出主題和要點中的關(guān)鍵詞3.確定好每個要點的時態(tài)4.確定好每個要點的人稱Prewrite---How?What?1.明確文章的用

北京是一座美麗的城市，作為一名北京的中學(xué)生，你一定對這里的景點非常熟悉。某英語報紙正在向北京的中學(xué)生征文，請你通過一次旅行經(jīng)歷，介紹你去過的一個景點，在那兒所做的事情以及你的感受。

提示詞語：theBeihaiPark,goboating,takepictures,interesting

提示問題:●Wheredidyougo？ ●Whatdidyoudothere？ ●Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip？審題：用途、主題、要點、時態(tài)、人稱 北京是一座美麗的城市，作為一名北京的中學(xué)生，你一定ThreeparagraphsThreeanswers/ThreetopicsentencesOutlineThreeparagraphsOutlinePara1---Answer1(Topicsentence1)_____________________________Para2---Answer2(Topicsentence2)______________________________Para3---Answer3(Topicsentence3)______________________________OutlineIwenttotheBeihaiParklastweekend.Iwentboatingandtookalotofpictures.Thetripwasveryinterestingbecause...OutlineIwenttotheBeihaiPThreeparagraphsUsesentencepatternsUsetransitionalwordsMakesureyouwritecorrectsentencesDraftThreeparagraphsDraftKeepinmindBasicprinciplesofbeinggoodwriting:honesty,clarity,brevity,andvariety.Beinghonest:Baseyourwritingonthesubject.Beingclear:Don’tpuzzleyourreaders.Beingbrief:Don’twasteyourreaders’time;don’trepeat.Seekingvariety:Varysentencelength/expressions/vocabulary,workonaliveness.KeepinmindBasicprincipleso第一檔：（9~10分）

完全符合題目要求，觀點正確，要點齊全，句式多樣，詞匯豐富，語言準(zhǔn)確，語意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，具有邏輯性。書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。REVISE第一檔：（9~10分）REVISEComestraighttothepoint:IwenttotheBeihaiParklastweekend.Descriptionoftheplace:TheBeihaiParkliesinthecenterofBeijinganditisfamousfortheWhiteTower.Significancecomesfirst:TheBeihaiParkisoneofthemostpopularplacestovisitinBeijing.Quotesandsayings:Asthesayinggoes,“HewhodoesnotreachtheGreatWallisnotatrueman.”REVISE---豐富內(nèi)容Wheredidyougo?Comestraighttothepoint:I*visitoldbuildings/palaces*enjoythebeautifulflowersandgreentrees*takephotos(of…)/climbthehill/themountain*learnaboutChineseculture/goboating*takeawalk/haveapicnicREVISE---豐富內(nèi)容Whatdidyoudothere?*visitoldbuildings/palacesREItwasa/anwonderful/terrific/unforgettabletripbecause...Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip?Ienjoyedthetripverymuchbecause...Thetripwasfullofsurprisesbecause…Ithelpedmelearnmoreabouttheculture.Iwasimpressedwiththebeautifulviewsandtheoldbuildings.“AwalkaboutPariswillprovidelessonsinhistory,beauty,andinthepointofLife.”(ThomasJefferson)REVISE（改進(jìn)）---豐富內(nèi)容Itwasa/anwonderful/terrificFirst,…Then,…Afterthat,…Finally,…Inthemorning…Intheafternoon…REVISE---邏輯清晰、銜接自然First,…REVISE---邏輯清晰、銜接自然萬能句型：notonly…butalso…Itisnecessary/important…(forsb.)todo…spend…doingsth./onsth.help(sb.)dosth./withsth.makesb./sth.do…/makesb./sth.adj.so…that…REVISE

---句型意識很重要萬能句型：REVISE---句型意識很重要Thetripwasinteresting.wasfulloffun wasmeaningfulwasofgreatvaluemadeadifferencetomylife

REVISE---詞匯豐富Thetripwasinteresting.REV

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TheBeihaiParkisoneofthemostpopularplacestovisitinBeijing.Iwenttherewithmyclassmateslastweekendandwehadagreattime. Wearrivedthereearlyinthemorning.Theairwascoolandfresh.Aswewalkedalongthelake,wesawmanypeopledoingexercisesanddancing.WealsotooklotsofpicturesofthebeautifulflowersintheGarden.Thenwecrossedthebridgeandclimbedupthehill.Itwasgreattoenjoytheviewsfromthetop.Intheafternoonwetookaboattourinthelakeandwesanghappilytogether.

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TheBeihaiParkisoneofthemostpopularplacestovisitinBeijing.Iwenttherewithmyclassmateslastweekendandwehadagreattime. Wearrivedthereearlyinthemorning.Theairwascoolandfresh.Aswewalkedalongthelake,wesawmanypeopledoingexercisesanddancing.WealsotooklotsofpicturesofthebeautifulflowersintheGarden.Thenwecrossedthebridgeandclimbedupthehill.Itwasgreattoenjoytheviewsfromthetop.Intheafternoonwetookaboattourinthelakeandwesanghappilytogether.

Itwasawonderfultrip.Weallfeltrelaxedandhappy.I'mlookingforwardtovisitingmorebeautifulplacesinBeijing.Asamplewriting TheBeihaiParkis初三英語中考復(fù)習(xí)課-寫作指導(dǎo)—話題作文-課件整理+學(xué)案-無答案HomeworkFinishthedraft.Reviseyourdraft.Publishyourwritin