新教材人教版英語學(xué)案UNIT4HISTORYANDTRADITIONS表達(dá)作文巧升格

介紹一個地方描述一個漂亮或者特殊的地方總體上屬于介紹事物的說明文。它的要點內(nèi)容可包括：地理位置、面積、人口、氣候狀況、著名的地方以及與眾不同之處等。時態(tài)應(yīng)以現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱以第三人稱為主。[基本框架]1．開頭：介紹該地方的基本信息(位置、面積等)；2．主體：描述該地方的一些具體信息(著名的地方、與眾不同之處)；3．結(jié)尾：作者對此地點的感受或總結(jié)陳述以吸引讀者去旅游。[常用詞塊]1....lies/islocated/issituated＋地點狀語某地位于……2....is/lies＋數(shù)詞＋metresabovesealevel某地海拔為多少米3....issurroundedby...……周圍被……環(huán)繞4....bevery/quite/extremelycold/hot/warm/dry/humid/sunny/rainy/mild...alltheyearround某地氣候終年寒冷/炎熱/溫暖/干燥/濕熱/日光充足/多雨/溫和……5....isrichin...，like/suchas...……盛產(chǎn)/富于……像/例如……6....isfamous/well-knownfor...……以……著名7....hasa(long)historyof...……有……年的(悠久的)歷史8....dates/goesbackto...……可追溯到……[常用語句]★精彩開頭1．Itislocated/liesin...，withanareaof...某地坐落在……面積約……2．Itcoversanareaof...，withahistoryof...某地面積約……有……年的歷史。3....，locatedin...andcoveringanareaof...，isoneofChina'smostfamousscenicspots.……位于……面積約……是中國最負(fù)盛名的風(fēng)景觀光地之一。4．Thehistoryof...datesbackto...……的歷史可以追溯到……5．Ithasbecomethemostpopulartouristattractionsince...從……開始，某地已成為最受歡迎的旅游勝地?！镎募丫?．Therearemanyplacesofinterest，suchas...有許多旅游勝地，例如……2．Youcanenjoy...，whichhasahighreputationbothathomeandabroad.你可以暢游某地，它已享譽(yù)海內(nèi)外。3．With...，...is/areattractingmoreandmoretourists.因為……，……正吸引著越來越多的游客。4．Aninterestingfeatureof...is...……一個吸引人的風(fēng)景特色是……5．Withitspleasantclimate，richnaturalresourcesandbeautifulscenery，...isoneofChina'smajortouristcities.因其宜人的氣候、富饒的自然資源和美麗的自然風(fēng)光，……是中國最負(fù)盛名的旅游城市。6．Atripalong...willenableyoutogettoknow...沿著……旅游，會讓你逐漸了解……★余味結(jié)尾1....iswellworthvisiting.……非常值得一游。2....isaplaceyouhavetovisitandtheextraordinaryviewwillmakeyouunwillingtoleave.……是一個讓人怦然心動的地方，它那令人驚奇的風(fēng)景會讓你留戀忘返。假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國筆友Linda今年暑假要來你所在的城市杭州旅游。請根據(jù)以下提示，給她寫一封電子郵件，介紹一下杭州的基本情況。1．地理位置：中國的東南部，面臨東海；2．名勝之地：西湖；3．休閑：劃船、漫步、在草坪上野餐；4．變化：高樓大廈。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：草坪lawnDearLinda，Iamverygladtoknowthatyouwillcometomycity—Hangzhouthissummervacation.NowI'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutit.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LookingforwardtoyourvisitingHangzhousoon.Yours，LiHua[學(xué)生習(xí)作]DearLinda，Iamverygladtoknowthatyouwillcometomycity—Hangzhouthissummervacation.NowI'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutit.①HangzhouliesinthesoutheastofChinaanditfacestheEastChinaSea.ItismostfamousforthebeautifulWestLake，whichhasalonghistorywithalovestory.Duringholidaysoronweekends，peoplelikegoingboatingonthelake，walkinginthewoodsorsittingonthelawntohaveapicnic.GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinHangzhouduringthepastfewyearseq\s\up10(②)andplentyoftallbuildingshavegoneup.③Thelandscapeisverystrikingandlotsoftouristsfromathomeandabroadcometovisititeveryyear.LookingforwardtoyourvisitingHangzhousoon.Yours，LiHua點評：1.①句可改為含有v.-ing結(jié)構(gòu)的句子；2.②處可改為with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)；3.③句可變換為so...that...句型。[升格作文]DearLinda，Iamverygladtoknowthatyouwillcometomycity—Hangzhouthissummervacation.NowI'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutit.HangzhouliesinthesoutheastofChina，facingtheEastChinaSea.ItismostfamousforthebeautifulWestLake，whichhasalonghistorywithalovestory.Duringholidaysoronweekends，peoplelikegoingboatingonthelake，walkinginthewoodsorsittingonthelawntohaveapicnic.GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinHangzhouduringthepastfewyears，withplentyoftallbuildingsgoingup.Thelandscapeissostrikingthatlotsoftouristsfromathomeandabroadcometovisititeveryyear.LookingforwardtoyourvisitingHangzhousoon.Yours，LiHua假定你是英國學(xué)生Harry，有一位中國筆友LiHua想了解一下你的家鄉(xiāng)愛丁堡，請你根據(jù)提示回復(fù)一封電子郵件。愛丁堡蘇格蘭(Scotland)的首府，政治和文化中心人口約50萬面積260平方千米(squarekilometres)地理位置蘇格蘭的東南部交通公共交通十分便利天氣氣候溫和(mildclimate)旅游最受歡迎的旅游城市之一；古老建筑眾多注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearLiHua，TodayI'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutEdinburghwhichyouaskedaboutinthelaste-mail.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwouldbehappytoguideyouaroundourcityifyouwouldarrangeavisithere.Yoursfaithfully，Harry[參考范文]DearLiHua，TodayI'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutEdinburghwhichyouaskedaboutinthelaste-mail.Edinburgh，locatedinthesoutheastofScotland，isthecapitalofScotlandaswellasitspoliticalandculturalcentre.Itcoversanareaof260squarekilometreswithasmallpopulationofaboutfivehundredthousand.Inthecity,youcaneasilygetwhereveryou