初中英語寫作九年級市公開課一等獎省課獲獎?wù)n件

ALessonofWriting第1頁Howtowriteacomposition.第2頁Example:ImaginethatyouareLiMing,writeacompositionaboutthechangestakenplaceinyourhometown.

Keypoints:1.Topic（主題）:changes2.who:LiMing3.Where:LiMing’shometown4.tense(時態(tài)):pasttense&presenttense

一般過去時&一般目前時First,considerthetaskcarefully.第3頁LivingconditionCellphonesjobstransportationchangeshousecarsSecond,brainstorm(頭腦風(fēng)暴)educationshopsfoodroadscomputersclothesbuildingworkingtools農(nóng)耕工具reasongovernmentefforts第4頁liveinalowhouseliveinatallbuildingplantcropswiththehelpoffarmanimalsplantcropswiththehelpoffarmmachinesstudyinanoldschoolstudyinamodernschoolLivingconditionWorkingtoolseducation第5頁LivingconditionWorkingtoolseducationchangesBrainstormforthebody(正文)a.

Changesin

livingconditions.b.

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workingtools.C.

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education.第6頁OutlineTitle題目:

ChangesinLiMing’sHometownHeading開頭：Greatchangeshavetakenplacein……Body正文:a.

Changesin

livingconditionsb.

Changesin

workingtoolsC.

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educationConclusion結(jié)尾:Thankstothegovernment’sefforts(努力),LiMing’shometownisbecomingbetterandbetter.Next,drawupanoutline.提綱第7頁Then,writethecomposition.第8頁Finally,checkoverthecomposition.第9頁ChangesinLiMing’sHometown

GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinLiMing’shometownsincethereformandopening-up.

Inthepast,peoplelivedinlowhouses.Thefarmersplantedcropsonlywiththehelpoffarmanimals.Childrenstudiedinoldschools.

Butnow,mostpeopleliveintallbuildings.Thefarmerscanplantcropswiththehelpoffarmmachines.Andchildrenstudyinmodernschools.Thankstothegovernment’sefforts,LiMing’shometownisbecomingbetterandbetter.Onepossibleversion:heading開頭body正文conclusion結(jié)尾第10頁AWritingPracticeWriteyourowncompositionaboutGreatchangesinmyHometown.第11頁以GreatchangesinmyHometown

為題，按下列提醒要求寫一篇80詞左右短文，介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)變化。1、過去生活貧困，房屋老舊陰暗；道路窄交通不便。2、目前住房寬大、明亮；當(dāng)代學(xué)校，孩子可接收良好教育；馬路廣闊，許多人有小車，交通方便；人們生活大為改善。3、將來會愈加富饒和美麗4、我感受是希望記住過去，展望將來是很主要。

也許會用到詞匯：poorandbackward貧窮落后；traffic

交通；

convenient

方便；Thanksto多虧；thecountryandthegovernment國家和政府；takeplace發(fā)生；education教育；modern當(dāng)代；dreamabout憧憬

第12頁Requirement:1.topic:2.who:3.Where:4.Whatchanges：5.Tense時態(tài):First,consideritcarefully.greatchangesI/myselfmyhometownliferoadshousespasttense&presenttense

……第13頁LivingconditiontransportationchangeshouseBrainstorming(頭腦風(fēng)暴)educationroadsbuilding第14頁Example:Outline提綱Title題目:GreatchangesinmyHometownHeading開頭：Body正文:a.Changesin

…b.Changesin

…c.Changesin

…Conclusion結(jié)尾:Next,drawupanoutline.LifeHouseRoadshouselifeeducationtransportation第15頁nowUsedtobe…Once曾經(jīng)pastManyyearsagois/areInthepastAtpresentbeforenowadaystodayWas/wereMakesentences.eg:1.Inthepast,myhometownwaspoor.

2.Myhometownusedtobepoor.Then:Brainstormforthetense(時態(tài))第16頁LivingconditionCellphonestransportationwideroadscleancarsBrainstormforthebody(正文)dirtybetternarrowpoorclothesConvinent方便improveeg:1.Manyyearsago,theroadsinmyhometownwasnarrowanddirty.2.Nowadays,theroadsinmyhometownarewideandclean.3.Today,manyfamilieshavecars.第17頁schoolhouseBrainstormforthebody(正文)第18頁Then,writethecomposition.第19頁以GreatchangesinmyHometown

為題，按下列提醒要求寫一篇80詞左右短文，介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)變化。1、過去生活貧困，房屋老舊陰暗；道路窄交通不便。2、目前住房寬大、明亮；當(dāng)代學(xué)校，孩子可接收良好教育；馬路廣闊，許多人有小車，交通方便；人們生活大為改善。3、將來會愈加富饒和美麗4、我感受是希望記住過去，展望將來是很主要。

也許會用到詞匯：poorandbackward貧窮落后；traffic

交通；

convenient

方便；thanksto多虧；thecountryandthegovernment國家和政府；takeplace發(fā)生；education教育；modern當(dāng)代；dreamabout憧憬

第20頁TheChangesinMyHometownIamLiMing,todayIhaveinterviewedmygrandmother.Shehaslivedinmyhometownformorethanseventyyears.Shehasseenthechangesinmyhometownherself.Inthepast,myhometownwasverysmallandpoor.Theroadswerenarrow.Thepeoplecouldn’tgetenoughfood.Butnow,theroadsweresowide,andtherearemoreandmorekindsoffoodtosatisfypeople’sneeds.Andnow,eachfamilyhastelephones,TVs,computersandsoon.Ithinkmyhometownwillbemoreandmorebeautifulinthefuture!第21頁ChangesinMyHometownMyhometownusedtobeabackwardplace,becauseitwasdeepinthemountains,wheretherewerenonicebuildingsandtheroadsweresonarrowanddirty.Peoplelivedapoorlife.Whileinrecentyears,withthedevelopmentofsociety,myhometownhasbeengreatlychanged.Nowtheroadsaregettingmuchwider.Treesandflowersareplantedonthetwosidesoftheroads.Theycanprovideu