利弊分析型作文

Advantage&disadvantage這種題型往往要求先說明一下某一事物或社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，再對(duì)比事物本身的利弊，有時(shí)也會(huì)單從一個(gè)角度（利或弊）出發(fā)，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度（或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A(yù)測）

１．說明事物現(xiàn)狀

２．事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)（或一方面）

３．你對(duì)現(xiàn)狀（或前景）的看法

說明利弊題型利弊分析型作文第一段：導(dǎo)言+優(yōu)點(diǎn)。簡述事物或現(xiàn)象并列舉說明其優(yōu)點(diǎn)。第二段：列舉說明其弊端（注意以表轉(zhuǎn)折的過渡詞引導(dǎo)）。第三段：簡要評(píng)論利弊關(guān)系或簡述個(gè)人體會(huì)。結(jié)構(gòu)模式利弊分析型作文ModelI

Nowadaysmanypeopleprefer

A

becauseithasasignificantroleinourdailylife.Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.First----(Ａ的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之一).Besides---（Ａ的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之二）.

Buteverycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat----(Ａ的第一個(gè)缺點(diǎn))．Tomakemattersworse,---(Ａ的第二個(gè)缺點(diǎn))．

Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoverweighthenegativeones.Therefore,Iwouldliketo--(我的看法)．

(FromthecomparisonbetweenthesepositiveandnegativeeffectsofA,weshouldtakeitreasonablyanddoitaccordingtothecircumstanceswearein.Onlybythisway,---(對(duì)前景的預(yù)測）

Nowadays,thereisawidespreadconcernover（theissuethat）作文題目.Infact,therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesin__題目議題.Generallyspeaking,itiswidelybelievedthereareseveralpositiveaspectsasfollows.Firstly,優(yōu)點(diǎn)一.Andsecondly優(yōu)點(diǎn)二.

Justasapopularsayinggoes,“everycoinhastwosides”,討論議題isnoexception,andinanotherword,itstillhasnegativeaspects.Tobeginwith,缺點(diǎn)一.

Inaddition,缺點(diǎn)二_.Tosumup,weshouldtrytobringtheadvantagesof討論議題intofullplay,andreducethedisadvantagestotheminimumatthesametime.Inthatcase,wewilldefinitelymakeabetteruseofthe討論議題.

ModelIIPositiveandNegativeAspectsofComputers屬于該模塊的四級(jí)真題：本題型的寫作重點(diǎn)在:“advantages&disadvantages”，即利弊論述。

請(qǐng)看范文：

ThePositiveandNegativeaspectsofComputers利弊分析型作文ThePositiveandNegativeaspectsofComputers

Itisgenerallyacceptedthatcomputersbenefithumanbeingsinmanyways.Computersarebeingusedwidelyintheworldtodayforthesimplestreasonthattheyarefarefficientthanhumanbeings.Computershavemuchbettermemoriesandcanstorehugeamountsofinformation,andtheycandocalculationsinafractionofthetimetakenbyahumanmathematician.Infact,computerscandomanyofthethingswedo.

Theycanpaywages,reserveseatsonaplane,controlmachinesinfactories,etc.NowadaysThePositiveandNegativeEffectsofComputers(1)itisveryconvenientandeconomicaltodoanythingontheinternet.Theglobewillbelikeanofficeorhome.Thisistheunprecedentedcharmofthecomputer.Inshort,computershavebeenmakingthewholeworldmuchmoreadvancedandcivilizedthaneverbefore.However,computershavebeencreatingmanyproblems.Firstly,virusesarisefrequently,bringinggreattroublestomanypeople.Secondly,somecomputer“experts”makehugeamountofmoneybycheatingacomputersystem,andtheyareverydifficulttocatch.Whatismore,somepeopletransmitpornographicinformationorpicturesontheInternet,whichisharmfultoyoungpeople.Despitetheirdisadvantages,computershavebroughtusfarmorebenefitsthantroubles.ThePositiveandNegativeEffectsofComputers(2)Usefulexpressions:1．Theadvantagefaroutweighthedisadvantages.2．TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofB.3．AmaybepreferabletoB,butAsuffersfromthedisadvantagesthat...4．Itisreasonabletomaintainthat...butitwouldbefoolishtoclaimthat...5．Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.6．Likeanythingelse,ithasitsfaults.7．AandBhasseveralpointsincommon.8．AbearssomeresemblancestoB.9．However,thesameisnotapplicabletoB.10.AandBdifferinseveralways.11.Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.12.Peopleusedtothink...,butthingsaredifferentnow.13.ThesameistrueofB.14.WonderingasAis,ithasitsdrawbacks.15.ItistruethatA...,butthechieffaults(obviousdefects)are...08.06四級(jí)考試作文題目：Recreationalactivities提綱1.娛樂活動(dòng)多種多樣2.娛樂活動(dòng)可能使人們受益，也可能有危害性3.作為大學(xué)生我的看法此次作文難度適中，沿襲了往年的?？碱}型—argumentation型，討論某一主題的利弊。本次題目recreationalactivities涵蓋面寬，因此考生可以把話題縮小到某一個(gè)范圍，對(duì)于大學(xué)生而言，對(duì)于網(wǎng)絡(luò)上的娛樂活動(dòng)可能更有話可說，所以可以把這個(gè)很泛的話題限制在網(wǎng)絡(luò)娛樂活動(dòng)。而對(duì)于網(wǎng)上活動(dòng)的利弊想必同學(xué)們都可以說出一二，好處比如能夠開闊眼界、增長知識(shí)，弊端就是很容易上癮，影響學(xué)習(xí)生活；而個(gè)人的看法就是用其精華棄其糟粕，即利用其好處，對(duì)不好的地方避而遠(yuǎn)之。Sample1:RecreationalActivities21stcenturyhasbroughtwithitanunprecedentedvarietyofrecreationalactivitiesrangingfromtraditionaloutdooractivitiessuchasplayingballgamestoallkindsofonlineones,thelatterofwhichisagreatappealtotheyounggeneration.SoI’dliketonarrowmytopicdowntoonlinerecreationalactivities.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatvariousactivitiesbroughtbymoderntechnologyhavegreatlybroadenedourhorizonandbroughtmuchexcitementtous.WithaccesstotheInternet,youcangettoknowpeoplefromanycountryintheworldandyoucantalkwiththem,playgameswiththem---atemptationveryhardtoresist,andevenseethemviawebcam.Thedisadvantage,however,isthatanyonewholacksself-controlwouldveryeasilygetlostandbecomeaddictedtotheonlineworld,whichinturnmightseriouslyaffecttheirlife,workandinterpersonalrelationships.Asacollegestudent,Ithinkwhatreallymattersistomakebetterchoiceandexertmorediscipline.We’dbettertakeadvantageofgoodonlinerecreationalactivitiestoenrichourlivesandbroadenthescopeofknowledge.Whenitcomestothoseaddictive,time-consumingandlessmeaningfulactivities,Ithinktostayawayfromthemisawisedecision.Sample2:RecreationalActivitiesIntheeraofinformationandtechnology,thereareallkindsofrecreationalactivities.Somepeoplethinkthoserecreationalactivitiesaregreatandnecessary,becausetheycanhelppeoplerelaxfromthehardworkandstudy.Someoftheactivities,suchashiking,jogging,canhelppeoplerelaxphysically;whilesomeofthem,suchassurfingtheInternet,canhelppeoplerelaxmentally.However,somepeoplethinkthatsomanykindsofrecreationalactivitiesmayhaveabadeffectonourlives.Somepeoplemaynotresistsometemptationsfromthoseactivities,andindulgethemselvesinthoseactivities.Atlasttheyareluredawayfromtheirstudyortheirwork.Inmyopinion,weshouldpaymoreattentiontotheadvantagesofvariousrecreationalactivitiesandmakethemostofthem.Meanwhile,weshouldlearnhowtousethoseactivitiespositively,andmakethemahelpfultoolforourdevelopment.Sample3:RecreationalActivities

Withthedevelopmentoflivingstandard,peoplespendmoretimeonvariousformsofrecreationalactivities.Peoplecandosports,singkaraoke,godancing,gotothemovies,playvideogamesoronlinegames,orsurftheInternet.Recreationalactivitiesaregoodtopeople’shealth,bothphysicallyandmentally.Sportsanddancingcankeeppeoplefit.Singingkaraoke,playingvideogamesoronlinegamescansatisfypeople’simagination.SurfingtheInternetcanbringpeoplealotofinformationandknowledge.However,recreationalactivitiesmightbeharmfulifpeopleareaddicted.Spendingtoomuchtimeonrecreationalactivitieswillseriouslyinfluencepeople’snormallives,especiallyworkandstudy.Therefore,peoplewillbenefitfromrecreationalactivitiesonlyiftheytakepartinthemproperly.In-classpractice:上網(wǎng)（surftheInternet)已成為越來越多人生活的一部分，請(qǐng)談?wù)勆暇W(wǎng)的利弊

SurftheInternetWiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,internetplaysamoreandmoreimportantroleinourlife.Therearealotofadvantagesusinginternet,amongwhichthefollowingarethemostobviousinmymind.First,Theconvenienceinternetbringingtousisself-evident.Wecaneasilygetaccesstovariouskindsofinformationandknowwhat’sgoingonaroundtheworldstayingathome.Second,internetmakesourlifemorecolorfulandwonderful.Wecanwatchmovie,TV,andplaygamesaswelike.Ithelpsustorelaxwheneverweneedto.Third,internetistime-savingandenergy-saving.Wedon’thavetospendsomuchtimeinthelibraryormarketasweusedtodo;neitherdowehavetosearchfrompilesofbookstofindoutapieceofinformationweneed—wehandittointernet.Buteverycoinhastwosides:thereisnoexceptionforinternet.Moreandmorepeopletakeadvantageofinternettocheatothers,andcybercrimeisincreasingrapidly.Besides,manypeopleareaddictedtointernet,resultingingreatharm.Yetwecan’tgowithoutinternet.Thenweshouldmakegooduseofitandtrytoavoiditssideeffects.OwningaPrivateCar

1.目前，有越來越多的人擁有私家車；

2.擁有私家車的利與弊；3.結(jié)論。

Practice:PrivateCars寫成4段的首段寫法：1.Inrecentyears,withfasteconomicgrowth,privatecarshaveappearedinmanyfamiliesinChina.People'sattitudetowardprivatecarsvarieswidely.2.Withtheincreaseinthegeneralstandardofliving,someordinaryChinesefamiliesbegintoaffordaprivatecar.Yet,people'sopinionsofprivatecarsvaryfrompersontoperson/publicattitudetowarditvariesgreatly/widely./isquiteofthecontrary./differssharply.3.Inrecentfewyears,thephenomenon/issue/problemofowningaprivatecarhasbeenbroughttopublicattention/inthelimelight.People'sviewson/opinionsofowingaprivatecarvarywidely..寫成3段的首段寫法：Withthedevelopmentofmodernsociety/scienceandtechnology,/Withtheimprovementofpeople'slivingstandard,moreandmorepeoplecanownprivatecars.carsareenteringordinaryfamilies.thegrowingnumberofpeople/peopleineverincreasingnumberscanhaveaccesstoprivatecars.(此句是引言)支持段的主題句：Somepeopleclaimthat/Asispointedoutthat/Itisgenerallybelievedthat/Itiswidelyacceptedthat,therearesomeadvantagesofowningaprivatecar.Thereisnodoubtthatprivatecarsbenefitpeoplehugely.支持段的分論點(diǎn)：①方便First,privatecarsprovidepeoplewiththemostconvenientformoftransportation.②舒適Second,itiscomfortableforpeopletotravelin,especiallyinchangeableweather/rainingdays/sandstorm.③炫耀Third,onlyaprivatecarcanshowaperson'ssocialstatus/achievement/success/prosperityinhisorhercareer.否定段的主題句：①However(Nonetheless/Nevertheless/But),therearesomedisadvantagesofowingaprivatecar/Everycoinhastwosides.②Whileenjoyingtheconveniencethatprivatecarsbringus,weshouldnotignoretheproblemtheycreate/produce/introduce/make.③Despite/Inspiteof/Foralltheadvantages,theybringstheirowndisadvantages/problems/negativeeffects④Likeanythingelse,privatecarsalsohavetheirownweakness/limits.⑤However,privatecarsarenotwithoutshortcomings/faults.⑥Yetotherspeakoftheproblemsprivatecarshavebrought.Theycomplainthat......⑦However,privatecarsmayalsobringwithitproblemsoursocietyhadnotpreviouslyfaced.⑧Despitetheincreaseinefficiencyandconveniencegeneratedbyprivatecars,thechangestheybringcouldverywellleadtopotentiallyadverseconsequences否定段的分論點(diǎn)：①占有空間Ontheonehand,privatecarstakeup/occupytoomuchspace.②交通事故Ontheotherhand,adrivershouldbecareful/cautiouswhiledriving,otherwise,caraccidentsaremorelikelytohappen.③污染環(huán)境What'smore/Inaddition,privatecarsgiveoff/discharge/releaseCOwhichpollutetheenvironment/air.注意：所謂上義詞是指抽象、概括和籠統(tǒng)的，就是比較superordinate的詞；而下義詞就是具體的東西，即subordinate的東西。第四段（總結(jié)段）的寫法：①Despiteallthedisadvantagesmentionedabove,Istillthinkthattheadvantagesoutweigh/aregreaterthanthedisadvantages.Asfortheaboveproblem,I'msuretheywillbesettledbythescientistsinthefuture/Itisonlyamatteroftimefortheproblemstobesolved.②Unquestionably,thechallengeofprivatecarsmeansweallshouldconsiderhowwecancontrolthem,sothattheywillnotcontrolus.③Whethertheprivatecarsareablessingoracurseisadifficultquestiontoanswer,yetthedesireforthecomfortandindependenceaprivatecarcanbringwillnotbeelminated.④Anyway/Anyhow/Inanycase,whethertheeffectisgoodorbad,onethingiscertain:privatecarshavechangedandwillcontinuetochangethewayofourtransportation,ourleisureandourlife.Sample1:Nowadays，therearemoreandmorepeopleowningprivatecars.Ontheonehand，somewealthypeoplewhoeitherarethebossoftheprivatecompanyorthewhite-collarmanagersinbigcompanieshavetheirprivatecars.Ontheotherhand，someyoungpeoplewhoarefuture-mindedbuyprivatecarsaheadoftheirincomebyloansfrombanks.

Isitagoodorbadthingtohaveaprivatecar?Justasacoinhastwosides，sotherearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesofhavingaprivatecar.Sofarasitsadvantagesareconcerned，therearetwoexamplesforthis.First，itplaysaveryimportantpartinprovidingitsownerwithconvenience，enablingtheownertogowherehewantstoquicklyandeasily.Second，itcanhelpitsownertosavealotoftimewhichmaybewastedbywaitingforothervehicles.However，italsohasitsdisadvantages.Foronething，itwillhaveanegativeeffectonboththecrowdedtrafficsystemandtheenvironmentinthelongrun.Foranother，itplacesburdenonthepublicutilityinprovidingmoreparkinglots.

Inshort，owningaprivatecarhasbothitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Itisadvisablethatweshouldpaymuchattentiontotheenvironmentalprotectionbynothavingaprivatecarifwehavelittleornopracticaluseoftheprivatecar.

Sample2:WiththefantasticspurbothinindustryandineconomyinChina,thenumberofpeoplewhoownprivatecarsisontherise.Somepeoplehaveboughtcarsoftheirown,andothersareplanningtobuycars.Buttherehavebeentwoquitedifferentviewsonthisphenomenon.Someclaimthattherearemanyadvantagesbroughtaboutbycars.First,theautomobileindustryprovidesjobsforcountlessworkersandstrongsupportforotherindustries.Second,ifconditionspermit,owningacarcanmakeusworkmoreefficiently.Finally,lifewillbecomemoreconvenient.Acarallowsonetomovefreelyandwithacarthereisnoneedtowaitforthebusinthecoldorundertheburningsun.However,othersstronglyobjecttotheincreaseindevelopingprivatecars.Theyholdthatautomobileswillgiverisetoaseriesofproblems.Inthef