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寫(xiě)作技巧點(diǎn)撥系列（七）短文寫(xiě)作之應(yīng)用文(書(shū)信、電子郵件)1/16(·新課標(biāo)全國(guó)卷Ⅰ)假定你是李華。請(qǐng)你給筆友Peter寫(xiě)封信,告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開(kāi)會(huì),帶去他想要那幅中國(guó)畫(huà),同時(shí)問(wèn)詢(xún)他是否能夠接機(jī)。信中還需說(shuō)明:李明:高個(gè)子,戴眼鏡航班號(hào):CA985抵達(dá):8月6日早晨11:30注意:1.詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右;2.能夠適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。2/16DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua3/16【審題——抓準(zhǔn)信息·快速推斷】項(xiàng)目結(jié)論體裁_______________話題_________________時(shí)態(tài)___________為主;其次為普通將來(lái)時(shí)、現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)人稱(chēng)_________應(yīng)用文——書(shū)信問(wèn)詢(xún)是否能夠接機(jī)普通現(xiàn)在時(shí)第三人稱(chēng)4/16【定點(diǎn)——把握關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)，遣詞造句】第1段:寫(xiě)信目標(biāo)之一——參會(huì);捎畫(huà)【信息】叔叔參會(huì),捎去中國(guó)畫(huà)【點(diǎn)撥】準(zhǔn)確了解并利用該部分時(shí)態(tài);能把幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句子連成靚句。5/16【利用】(1)體驗(yàn)“極優(yōu)作文”中“時(shí)態(tài)多樣性”①我叔叔李明要到你城市開(kāi)會(huì)。(go)MyuncleLiMing_________yourcityforaconference.②你以前要中國(guó)畫(huà)。(ask)You__________fortheChinesepaintingbefore.③我要他給你帶去中國(guó)畫(huà)。(ask)I__________himtobringyoutheChinesepainting.isgoingtohaveaskedhaveasked6/16(2)打造“極優(yōu)作文”中高級(jí)句型先用定語(yǔ)從句連接②、③;然后用and和①連接。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________MyuncleLiMingisgoingtoyourcityforaconference,andI’veaskedhimtobringyoutheChinesepaintingyouhaveaskedforbefore.7/16第2段:寫(xiě)信目標(biāo)之二——要求接機(jī)【信息】叔叔第一次去Peter所在城市,請(qǐng)求接機(jī)并帶到旅館?！军c(diǎn)撥】體會(huì)地道英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言,尤其是請(qǐng)求他人幫助時(shí)委婉表示。8/16【利用】(1)我想讓你幫個(gè)忙。I__________youtodomeafavor.(2)你能到機(jī)場(chǎng)接我叔叔并把他帶到賓館嗎?因?yàn)檫@是他第一次去你所在城市。______you______meetmyuncleattheairport,andtakehimtohishotelsincethisishisfirstvisittoyourcity?(3)提前謝謝你。Thankyou__________.

wouldlikeWouldpleaseinadvance9/16第3段:信息介紹【信息】航班班次、抵達(dá)時(shí)間;人物外貌特點(diǎn)及衣著等。10/16【利用】普通表示:(1)Hisflightnumber__CA985.(2)It____arriveat11:30am,August6.(3)Myuncle__tall.(4)He_________glasses.(5)He_______inabluejacket.

iswillisiswearingwillbe11/16高級(jí)表示:(6)用非限制性定語(yǔ)從句連接(1)(2)。____________________________________________________________(7)以(5)為主句,把(3)(4)改成形容詞、分詞短語(yǔ)作后置定語(yǔ)句子。__________________________________________________HisflightnumberisCA985,whichwillarriveat11:30am,August6.Myuncle,tallandwearingglasses,willbeinabluejacket.12/16【注意事項(xiàng)】本文是一篇電子郵件,與書(shū)信格式相同。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意:第一步謀篇布局,先引出話題;第二步潤(rùn)色句子,用恰當(dāng)句式、時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行高級(jí)表示;第三步注意適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使文章過(guò)渡自然,渾然一體。

13/16【成篇——銜接過(guò)渡，連句成篇】DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?I’mwritingtotellyouthatmyuncleLiMingisgoingtoyourcityforaconference,andI’veaskedhimtobringyoutheChinesepaintingyouhaveaskedforbefore.Also,I’dlikeyoutodomeafavor.Wouldyoupleasemeetmyuncleattheairportandtakehimtohishotelsincethisishisfirstvisittoyourcity?Thankyouinadvance.14/16HisflightnumberisCA985,whichwillarriveat11: