2023新教材高考英語二輪專題復(fù)習(xí)專題五應(yīng)用文寫作先文體再添彩第二講潤色添彩“洋”氣十足

第二講潤色添彩·“洋”氣十足策略(一)“包裝”讓詞匯高端起來1．求新求變同樣意義的詞語，要根據(jù)語境使用最新學(xué)過的而不是小學(xué)初中學(xué)過的詞匯。如果同樣的意義重復(fù)出現(xiàn)，要使用不同的表達(dá)方式。如：①[2022·全國甲卷]Itwassetuptoraiseawarenessofprotectingtheoceans,whichplayanimportantpartinglobalecosystem.→Itwassetuptoraiseawarenessofprotectingtheoceans,whichplayacrucialpartinglobalecosystem.②[2022·全國乙卷]ThosewhochoosetoreadEnglishbooksandvisitEnglishlearningwebsitesonlymakeup18%and12%respectively.→ThosewhochoosetoreadEnglishbooksandvisitEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%respectively.③[2021·全國乙卷]WiththewidespreadoftheInternet，moreandmorepeoplebecomeonlinelearners.→WiththewidespreadoftheInternet，anincreasingnumberofpeoplebecomeonlinelearners.2．求準(zhǔn)求精寫作時(shí)不一定每一句都要有復(fù)雜句式，有時(shí)準(zhǔn)確使用一個(gè)單詞就會(huì)讓整個(gè)句子增色。①[2021·全國乙卷]Inconclusion，weshouldfindawaytostudyonlinebetter.→Inconclusion，weshouldfindawaytostudyonlinemoreefficiently.②[2021·全國甲卷]Iamwaitingforyourearlyreply.→Iamwaitingforyourearlyreplyeagerly/witheagerness.3．短語優(yōu)先恰當(dāng)使用短語代替單詞，不但可以增加詞數(shù)，還有助于繞開不會(huì)表達(dá)的單詞，使得行文更加流暢。①[2022·全國乙卷]However,frommypointofview,whatbenefitsstudentsmostisreadingEnglishbooks,foritcanhelpstudentsunderstandEnglishbetter.→However,frommypointofview,whatbenefitsstudentsmostisreadingEnglishbooks,foritcanhelpstudentsgainadeeperunderstandingofEnglish.②[2022·新高考Ⅰ卷]Ibelievethatyourarrivalwillbeimportanttoourshow.→Iholdthefirmbeliefthatyourarrivalwillbeofgreatsignificancetoourshow.③[2022·全國乙卷]Asisshownbythefiguresofthechart,thankstomoderntechnology,manywaysareavailableforstudentstopolishtheirEnglish.→Asisshownbythefiguresofthechart,thankstomoderntechnology,awiderangeofwaysareavailableforstudentstopolishtheirEnglish.◎針對訓(xùn)練1——升級(jí)加黑詞匯①[2022·全國乙卷]ArecentsurveysuggeststhatmoststudentsbeinginterviewedtendtolearnEnglishbylisteningtoEnglishsongs.________________②[2022·遼寧省聯(lián)考二]Tomakeusknowtheimportanceoftheenvironmentprotection,ourschoolheldaspringtreeplantingactivityinthehillnearourschoollastSaturday.________________③[2022·全國甲卷]Countriesshouldteamupwithoneanothertomakepracticalplansregardingoceanprotection.________________④[2022·新高考Ⅰ卷]Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconsidermyapplication.________________⑤[2021·新高考Ⅰ卷]Whenfeelingsad，Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofgoodstories.________________策略(二)“換裝”讓句子新穎起來換用句式時(shí)，應(yīng)遵循以下原則：高級(jí)但不造作，多變但不離譜，復(fù)雜但不晦澀。1．特殊句式，風(fēng)景獨(dú)好(1)運(yùn)用強(qiáng)調(diào)句：強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的使用是為了突出強(qiáng)調(diào)句子的某一部分，它是一種比較容易掌握的高級(jí)表達(dá)方式。其構(gòu)成為：①強(qiáng)調(diào)句型基本結(jié)構(gòu)為“It＋is/was＋被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分＋that/who＋句子其他部分”；②借助于助動(dòng)詞do/does/did對謂語動(dòng)詞進(jìn)行強(qiáng)調(diào)?！蜥槍τ?xùn)練2——對加黑部分進(jìn)行強(qiáng)調(diào)①[2022·浙江省五校5月聯(lián)考]Underyourprofessionalguidance,wehavemadesuchrapidprogressinEnglish.→__________________________wehavemadesuchrapidprogressinEnglish.②[2022·邯鄲市一模]Wedidn'tgobacktoschooluntilnoonundertheguidanceofourteachers.→______________________wewentbacktoschoolundertheguidanceofourteachers.③[2022·全國甲卷]Ibelievethatonlywithjoinedeffortscanwehaveabettertomorrow.→I________________thatonlywithjoinedeffortscanwehaveabettertomorrow.(2)運(yùn)用倒裝句，以示強(qiáng)調(diào)。在寫作中，倒裝句應(yīng)用比較廣泛，涉及的句型也比較多，包括部分倒裝和全部倒裝。常見的有：①“only＋狀語”置于句首時(shí)，句子用部分倒裝；②notonly...butalso...句子用部分倒裝；③在so/such...that...結(jié)構(gòu)中，當(dāng)so/such...位于句首時(shí)，其后的句子用部分倒裝；④表方位的副詞或者表地點(diǎn)的介詞短語置于句首且句子的主語是名詞時(shí)，句子用全部倒裝。◎針對訓(xùn)練3——用倒裝句式升級(jí)①[2022·全國甲卷]Oceansnotonlyprovideabundantresourcesandfoodforus,buttheyarealsocrucialfortheglobalclimatedevelopment.→__________________________resourcesandfoodforus,buttheyarealsocrucialfortheglobalclimatedevelopment.②[2022·湖南師大附中模擬二]Wecanmakegreatprogressinourprogressonlywhenwepracticelistening,speaking,reading,andwritingEnglishfrequently.→Onlywhenwepracticelistening,speaking,reading,andwritingEnglishfrequently____________________．③[2021·新高考Ⅰ卷讀后續(xù)寫]Theirfatherinstructedthemsopatientlythatthetwinsmadethebreakfastfastandwell.→____________________________thetwinsmadethebreakfastfastandwell.④AnoldtemplewhichdatesbacktoMingDynastystandsatthefootofthemountain.→Atthefootofthemountain________________________，whichdatesbacktoMingDynasty.(3)運(yùn)用省略句，避免不必要的重復(fù)?！蜥槍τ?xùn)練4——句型轉(zhuǎn)換①[2022·山東師范大學(xué)附中考前打靶]Whenyouprepareforthecompetition,youneedtohavemuchknowledgeaboutChinesestories.→________________________，youneedtohavemuchknowledgeaboutChinesestories.②Ifitispossible，avoidgoingtocrowdedpublicplacessuchascinemas，shoppingmalls,Internetbarsandsoon.→____________________，avoidgoingtocrowdedpublicplacessuchascinemas，shoppingmalls,Internetbarsandsoon.2．三大句式，編排巧妙(1)運(yùn)用定語從句：◎針對訓(xùn)練5——句型轉(zhuǎn)換①[2022·山東省德州市高三二模]TheactivitywilltakeplaceonMarchthe23rd,Saturday.TheactivityaimstopromoteChineseculture.→Theactivity,__________________________，willtakeplaceonMarchthe23rd,Saturday.②[2022·武漢市模擬一]Variousactivitieshavebeenheld.Thepurposeofthemwastoraiseourawarenessofcampussafety.→Variousactivitieshavebeenheld,__________________________campussafety.③[2022·青島市高三一模]MyclasswenttoQingyuancommunityat9：00a．m.InQingyuancommunityweweredividedintofivegroupstocarefortheelderlyandtellthemsomehealthknowledge.→MyclasswenttoQingyuancommunityat9：00a．m,____________________________andtellthemsomehealthknowledge.(2)運(yùn)用名詞性從句：◎針對訓(xùn)練6——補(bǔ)全句子①[2022·3月福州市質(zhì)量檢測]我十二歲生日，我最想要的是一輛新自行車。Itwasmytwelfthbirthday,and__________________.②[2022·全國甲卷]不可否認(rèn)，我們將共同努力，對海洋環(huán)境做出巨大貢獻(xiàn)。______________________themarineenvironmentwithjoinedefforts.③[2022·深圳市高三二模]這次經(jīng)歷給我的教訓(xùn)是，只有勇敢地承擔(dān)失敗的全部責(zé)任，而不是指責(zé)別人，才能取得成功。______________________onlybybravelytakingfullresponsibilityforfailureratherthanblamingotherscanwesucceed.(3)運(yùn)用狀語從句：◎針對訓(xùn)練7——補(bǔ)全句子①[2022·山東省淄博市二模]我們首先需要接受自己，因?yàn)檫@有助于我們承認(rèn)自己的缺點(diǎn)。通過這樣做，當(dāng)我們遇到失敗時(shí)，我們更有可能吸取教訓(xùn)。Weneedtoacceptourselvesfirstly________________________.Bydoingso,wearemorelikelytolearnthelessons__________________．②[2022·濟(jì)南市高三模擬]雖然這是一個(gè)非常簡單的任務(wù)，但我很自豪，因?yàn)樗诰S持現(xiàn)場秩序方面發(fā)揮了重要的作用。__________________________，Iwasveryproudofit______________________maintainingtheorderofthescene.3．活用非謂語，讓表達(dá)言簡意賅用非謂語動(dòng)詞整合簡單句、并列句或復(fù)合句，提升表達(dá)檔次，使句子凝練高端?！蜥槍τ?xùn)練8——用非謂語升級(jí)句式①[2022·新高考Ⅰ卷]IrepresenttheEnglishprogramofourschool'sradiostation.I'mwritingtoinviteyoutogiveaninterview.→______________ourschool'sradiostation,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutogiveaninterview.②[2022·新高考Ⅰ卷]Theradioprogramwasfoundedin2016.Itaimedtoprovideagoodplatformforthestudentstosharetheirschoollife.→Theradioprogramwasfoundedin2016,____________________________tosharetheirschoollife.③[2021·全國乙卷滿分作文]WhenwearefacedwithallkindsofinformationontheInternet,wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.(用非謂語動(dòng)詞短語轉(zhuǎn)換)→________________________，wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.4．適時(shí)感嘆，必要強(qiáng)調(diào)◎針對訓(xùn)練9——補(bǔ)全句子①[2020·全國Ⅱ卷滿分作文]________________________(我們玩得多么開心啊)!Notonlydiditgiveusrelaxation，butalsoitgotusclosertonature.②[2021·新高考Ⅰ卷](早餐多么美味??！)____________________________！策略(三)“改裝”讓細(xì)節(jié)豐滿起來在英語寫作中，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，能使習(xí)作流暢、豐滿，達(dá)到應(yīng)有的表達(dá)效果。1．增加同位語或定語從句◎針對訓(xùn)練10——補(bǔ)全句子①[2022·南京市高考模擬卷一]I'mLiHua,____________________________(來自中國的交換生),andI'mlookingforaroommatetoco-rentaflatduringmystayintheUK.②[2022·濰坊市高三二模]Theydon'thaveenoughtimetoattendtotheoldpeopleintheirfamilies,________________________________(這已經(jīng)成為社會(huì)的一個(gè)問題).2．列舉具體的實(shí)例來補(bǔ)充說明①suchas.../like...將來，我認(rèn)為我們學(xué)校可以提供一些活動(dòng)。[2022·全國乙卷]Inthefuture,IthinkourschoolcouldprovidesomeactivitiessuchasreadingbookclubsorEnglishcornerstofurtherinspirestudents'interestinlearningEnglish.②forexample/instance如今，我們中的一些人在校園里養(yǎng)成了一些壞習(xí)慣。Nowadays,someofushaveformedsomebadhabitsoncampus.Forinstance,somestudentsleavethelightsoninthedaytime;someleavemuchfoodonthetableaftereating.3．添加與所給信息有關(guān)的原因、結(jié)果、條件、讓步、手段、目的等內(nèi)容◎針對訓(xùn)練11——補(bǔ)全句子①[2022·湖北省新高考協(xié)作體2月聯(lián)考]MyclasswenttoChinaScienceandTechnologyMuseum.→______________________(為了更好地理解歷史課上的“中國古代發(fā)明”),myclasswenttoChinaScienceandTechnologyMuseum.②[2022·全國乙卷]AsfarasIamconcerned,studentsshoulddomorelisteningandspeaking.→AsfarasIamconcerned,studentsshoulddomorelisteningandspeaking______________________(這樣他們就能培養(yǎng)自己的溝通技巧).③[2022·全國甲卷]Wewillmakeadifferencetothemarineenvironment.→__________________________(只要我們盡力),wewillmakeadifferencetothemarineenvironment.④[2022·湘潭市一模]However,manyofusignoretheimportanceofgoodlivinghabits.→However,manyofusignoretheimportanceofgoodlivinghabits____________________(通過吃垃圾食品和熬夜).⑤Iammorethandelightedtosharesomedetailswithyou.→____________________________(知道您對我們的“珍愛生命”活動(dòng)感興趣),Iammorethandelightedtosharesomedetailswithyou.4．表達(dá)感受、評價(jià)、愿望、倡議等◎針對訓(xùn)練12——補(bǔ)全句子①AlthoughIwasverytiredthissummerholiday，IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdid.→AlthoughIwasverytiredthissummerholiday，IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdid______________________(因?yàn)槲覍W(xué)到了耕種的知識(shí)).②Ithinksuchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful.→Ithinksuchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful，__________________________(從中我學(xué)到，如果可能的話，我們應(yīng)該幫助有困難的人).③[2022·焦作市第四次模擬]Iholdthefirmbeliefthatitwasthemostunforgettablelunchinmylife.→Iholdthefirmbeliefthatitwasthemostunforgettablelunchinmylife，__________________________(因?yàn)樗刮蚁硎軇趧?dòng)的樂趣).策略(四)“化裝”讓語篇靚麗起來根據(jù)行文或段落需要，在句與句或段與段之間適當(dāng)增加過渡詞語，使文章渾然一體。1．表示“首先”的詞語：first/firstly,firstofall,tobegin/startwith等。①Firstofall,wemustmakefulluseofevery45-minutelesson.②Tobeginwith,smokingshouldbebannedinpublicareas.2．表示“其次”的詞語：second/secondly,besides,inaddition,what'smore,furthermore,moreover等。①Secondly,weshouldgetupearlytomemorizeidiomsandusefulexpressions.②What'smore,goodbookscanhelpustodevelopgoodcharacters.③[2022·武漢市五月模擬一]Besides,ourschoolmadeitaroutinetohaveregularfiredrillswherewelearnedtofacefireemergenciescalmly.3．表示“最后”的詞語：last/lastly,lastbutnotleast,mostimportantly等。①Lastbutnotleast,healthisalsoverysignificantforusstudents.②Mostimportantly,readingthosebooksopenedawindowformetoanotherworldandgavemeane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