2023新教材高考英語二輪專題復習專題五應(yīng)用文寫作先文體再添彩第二講潤色添彩“洋”氣十足

第二講潤色添彩·“洋”氣十足策略(一)“包裝”讓詞匯高端起來1．求新求變同樣意義的詞語，要根據(jù)語境使用最新學過的而不是小學初中學過的詞匯。如果同樣的意義重復出現(xiàn)，要使用不同的表達方式。如：①[2022·全國甲卷]Itwassetuptoraiseawarenessofprotectingtheoceans,whichplayanimportantpartinglobalecosystem.→Itwassetuptoraiseawarenessofprotectingtheoceans,whichplayacrucialpartinglobalecosystem.②[2022·全國乙卷]ThosewhochoosetoreadEnglishbooksandvisitEnglishlearningwebsitesonlymakeup18%and12%respectively.→ThosewhochoosetoreadEnglishbooksandvisitEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%respectively.③[2021·全國乙卷]WiththewidespreadoftheInternet，moreandmorepeoplebecomeonlinelearners.→WiththewidespreadoftheInternet，anincreasingnumberofpeoplebecomeonlinelearners.2．求準求精寫作時不一定每一句都要有復雜句式，有時準確使用一個單詞就會讓整個句子增色。①[2021·全國乙卷]Inconclusion，weshouldfindawaytostudyonlinebetter.→Inconclusion，weshouldfindawaytostudyonlinemoreefficiently.②[2021·全國甲卷]Iamwaitingforyourearlyreply.→Iamwaitingforyourearlyreplyeagerly/witheagerness.3．短語優(yōu)先恰當使用短語代替單詞，不但可以增加詞數(shù)，還有助于繞開不會表達的單詞，使得行文更加流暢。①[2022·全國乙卷]However,frommypointofview,whatbenefitsstudentsmostisreadingEnglishbooks,foritcanhelpstudentsunderstandEnglishbetter.→However,frommypointofview,whatbenefitsstudentsmostisreadingEnglishbooks,foritcanhelpstudentsgainadeeperunderstandingofEnglish.②[2022·新高考Ⅰ卷]Ibelievethatyourarrivalwillbeimportanttoourshow.→Iholdthefirmbeliefthatyourarrivalwillbeofgreatsignificancetoourshow.③[2022·全國乙卷]Asisshownbythefiguresofthechart,thankstomoderntechnology,manywaysareavailableforstudentstopolishtheirEnglish.→Asisshownbythefiguresofthechart,thankstomoderntechnology,awiderangeofwaysareavailableforstudentstopolishtheirEnglish.◎針對訓練1——升級加黑詞匯①[2022·全國乙卷]ArecentsurveysuggeststhatmoststudentsbeinginterviewedtendtolearnEnglishbylisteningtoEnglishsongs.________________②[2022·遼寧省聯(lián)考二]Tomakeusknowtheimportanceoftheenvironmentprotection,ourschoolheldaspringtreeplantingactivityinthehillnearourschoollastSaturday.________________③[2022·全國甲卷]Countriesshouldteamupwithoneanothertomakepracticalplansregardingoceanprotection.________________④[2022·新高考Ⅰ卷]Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconsidermyapplication.________________⑤[2021·新高考Ⅰ卷]Whenfeelingsad，Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofgoodstories.________________策略(二)“換裝”讓句子新穎起來換用句式時，應(yīng)遵循以下原則：高級但不造作，多變但不離譜，復雜但不晦澀。1．特殊句式，風景獨好(1)運用強調(diào)句：強調(diào)句型的使用是為了突出強調(diào)句子的某一部分，它是一種比較容易掌握的高級表達方式。其構(gòu)成為：①強調(diào)句型基本結(jié)構(gòu)為“It＋is/was＋被強調(diào)部分＋that/who＋句子其他部分”；②借助于助動詞do/does/did對謂語動詞進行強調(diào)?！蜥槍τ柧?——對加黑部分進行強調(diào)①[2022·浙江省五校5月聯(lián)考]Underyourprofessionalguidance,wehavemadesuchrapidprogressinEnglish.→__________________________wehavemadesuchrapidprogressinEnglish.②[2022·邯鄲市一模]Wedidn'tgobacktoschooluntilnoonundertheguidanceofourteachers.→______________________wewentbacktoschoolundertheguidanceofourteachers.③[2022·全國甲卷]Ibelievethatonlywithjoinedeffortscanwehaveabettertomorrow.→I________________thatonlywithjoinedeffortscanwehaveabettertomorrow.(2)運用倒裝句，以示強調(diào)。在寫作中，倒裝句應(yīng)用比較廣泛，涉及的句型也比較多，包括部分倒裝和全部倒裝。常見的有：①“only＋狀語”置于句首時，句子用部分倒裝；②notonly...butalso...句子用部分倒裝；③在so/such...that...結(jié)構(gòu)中，當so/such...位于句首時，其后的句子用部分倒裝；④表方位的副詞或者表地點的介詞短語置于句首且句子的主語是名詞時，句子用全部倒裝。◎針對訓練3——用倒裝句式升級①[2022·全國甲卷]Oceansnotonlyprovideabundantresourcesandfoodforus,buttheyarealsocrucialfortheglobalclimatedevelopment.→__________________________resourcesandfoodforus,buttheyarealsocrucialfortheglobalclimatedevelopment.②[2022·湖南師大附中模擬二]Wecanmakegreatprogressinourprogressonlywhenwepracticelistening,speaking,reading,andwritingEnglishfrequently.→Onlywhenwepracticelistening,speaking,reading,andwritingEnglishfrequently____________________．③[2021·新高考Ⅰ卷讀后續(xù)寫]Theirfatherinstructedthemsopatientlythatthetwinsmadethebreakfastfastandwell.→____________________________thetwinsmadethebreakfastfastandwell.④AnoldtemplewhichdatesbacktoMingDynastystandsatthefootofthemountain.→Atthefootofthemountain________________________，whichdatesbacktoMingDynasty.(3)運用省略句，避免不必要的重復?！蜥槍τ柧?——句型轉(zhuǎn)換①[2022·山東師范大學附中考前打靶]Whenyouprepareforthecompetition,youneedtohavemuchknowledgeaboutChinesestories.→________________________，youneedtohavemuchknowledgeaboutChinesestories.②Ifitispossible，avoidgoingtocrowdedpublicplacessuchascinemas，shoppingmalls,Internetbarsandsoon.→____________________，avoidgoingtocrowdedpublicplacessuchascinemas，shoppingmalls,Internetbarsandsoon.2．三大句式，編排巧妙(1)運用定語從句：◎針對訓練5——句型轉(zhuǎn)換①[2022·山東省德州市高三二模]TheactivitywilltakeplaceonMarchthe23rd,Saturday.TheactivityaimstopromoteChineseculture.→Theactivity,__________________________，willtakeplaceonMarchthe23rd,Saturday.②[2022·武漢市模擬一]Variousactivitieshavebeenheld.Thepurposeofthemwastoraiseourawarenessofcampussafety.→Variousactivitieshavebeenheld,__________________________campussafety.③[2022·青島市高三一模]MyclasswenttoQingyuancommunityat9：00a．m.InQingyuancommunityweweredividedintofivegroupstocarefortheelderlyandtellthemsomehealthknowledge.→MyclasswenttoQingyuancommunityat9：00a．m,____________________________andtellthemsomehealthknowledge.(2)運用名詞性從句：◎針對訓練6——補全句子①[2022·3月福州市質(zhì)量檢測]我十二歲生日，我最想要的是一輛新自行車。Itwasmytwelfthbirthday,and__________________.②[2022·全國甲卷]不可否認，我們將共同努力，對海洋環(huán)境做出巨大貢獻。______________________themarineenvironmentwithjoinedefforts.③[2022·深圳市高三二模]這次經(jīng)歷給我的教訓是，只有勇敢地承擔失敗的全部責任，而不是指責別人，才能取得成功。______________________onlybybravelytakingfullresponsibilityforfailureratherthanblamingotherscanwesucceed.(3)運用狀語從句：◎針對訓練7——補全句子①[2022·山東省淄博市二模]我們首先需要接受自己，因為這有助于我們承認自己的缺點。通過這樣做，當我們遇到失敗時，我們更有可能吸取教訓。Weneedtoacceptourselvesfirstly________________________.Bydoingso,wearemorelikelytolearnthelessons__________________．②[2022·濟南市高三模擬]雖然這是一個非常簡單的任務(wù)，但我很自豪，因為它在維持現(xiàn)場秩序方面發(fā)揮了重要的作用。__________________________，Iwasveryproudofit______________________maintainingtheorderofthescene.3．活用非謂語，讓表達言簡意賅用非謂語動詞整合簡單句、并列句或復合句，提升表達檔次，使句子凝練高端?！蜥槍τ柧?——用非謂語升級句式①[2022·新高考Ⅰ卷]IrepresenttheEnglishprogramofourschool'sradiostation.I'mwritingtoinviteyoutogiveaninterview.→______________ourschool'sradiostation,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutogiveaninterview.②[2022·新高考Ⅰ卷]Theradioprogramwasfoundedin2016.Itaimedtoprovideagoodplatformforthestudentstosharetheirschoollife.→Theradioprogramwasfoundedin2016,____________________________tosharetheirschoollife.③[2021·全國乙卷滿分作文]WhenwearefacedwithallkindsofinformationontheInternet,wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.(用非謂語動詞短語轉(zhuǎn)換)→________________________，wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.4．適時感嘆，必要強調(diào)◎針對訓練9——補全句子①[2020·全國Ⅱ卷滿分作文]________________________(我們玩得多么開心啊)!Notonlydiditgiveusrelaxation，butalsoitgotusclosertonature.②[2021·新高考Ⅰ卷](早餐多么美味??！)____________________________！策略(三)“改裝”讓細節(jié)豐滿起來在英語寫作中，適當增加細節(jié)內(nèi)容，能使習作流暢、豐滿，達到應(yīng)有的表達效果。1．增加同位語或定語從句◎針對訓練10——補全句子①[2022·南京市高考模擬卷一]I'mLiHua,____________________________(來自中國的交換生),andI'mlookingforaroommatetoco-rentaflatduringmystayintheUK.②[2022·濰坊市高三二模]Theydon'thaveenoughtimetoattendtotheoldpeopleintheirfamilies,________________________________(這已經(jīng)成為社會的一個問題).2．列舉具體的實例來補充說明①suchas.../like...將來，我認為我們學?？梢蕴峁┮恍┗顒?。[2022·全國乙卷]Inthefuture,IthinkourschoolcouldprovidesomeactivitiessuchasreadingbookclubsorEnglishcornerstofurtherinspirestudents'interestinlearningEnglish.②forexample/instance如今，我們中的一些人在校園里養(yǎng)成了一些壞習慣。Nowadays,someofushaveformedsomebadhabitsoncampus.Forinstance,somestudentsleavethelightsoninthedaytime;someleavemuchfoodonthetableaftereating.3．添加與所給信息有關(guān)的原因、結(jié)果、條件、讓步、手段、目的等內(nèi)容◎針對訓練11——補全句子①[2022·湖北省新高考協(xié)作體2月聯(lián)考]MyclasswenttoChinaScienceandTechnologyMuseum.→______________________(為了更好地理解歷史課上的“中國古代發(fā)明”),myclasswenttoChinaScienceandTechnologyMuseum.②[2022·全國乙卷]AsfarasIamconcerned,studentsshoulddomorelisteningandspeaking.→AsfarasIamconcerned,studentsshoulddomorelisteningandspeaking______________________(這樣他們就能培養(yǎng)自己的溝通技巧).③[2022·全國甲卷]Wewillmakeadifferencetothemarineenvironment.→__________________________(只要我們盡力),wewillmakeadifferencetothemarineenvironment.④[2022·湘潭市一模]However,manyofusignoretheimportanceofgoodlivinghabits.→However,manyofusignoretheimportanceofgoodlivinghabits____________________(通過吃垃圾食品和熬夜).⑤Iammorethandelightedtosharesomedetailswithyou.→____________________________(知道您對我們的“珍愛生命”活動感興趣),Iammorethandelightedtosharesomedetailswithyou.4．表達感受、評價、愿望、倡議等◎針對訓練12——補全句子①AlthoughIwasverytiredthissummerholiday，IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdid.→AlthoughIwasverytiredthissummerholiday，IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdid______________________(因為我學到了耕種的知識).②Ithinksuchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful.→Ithinksuchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful，__________________________(從中我學到，如果可能的話，我們應(yīng)該幫助有困難的人).③[2022·焦作市第四次模擬]Iholdthefirmbeliefthatitwasthemostunforgettablelunchinmylife.→Iholdthefirmbeliefthatitwasthemostunforgettablelunchinmylife，__________________________(因為它使我享受勞動的樂趣).策略(四)“化裝”讓語篇靚麗起來根據(jù)行文或段落需要，在句與句或段與段之間適當增加過渡詞語，使文章渾然一體。1．表示“首先”的詞語：first/firstly,firstofall,tobegin/startwith等。①Firstofall,wemustmakefulluseofevery45-minutelesson.②Tobeginwith,smokingshouldbebannedinpublicareas.2．表示“其次”的詞語：second/secondly,besides,inaddition,what'smore,furthermore,moreover等。①Secondly,weshouldgetupearlytomemorizeidiomsandusefulexpressions.②What'smore,goodbookscanhelpustodevelopgoodcharacters.③[2022·武漢市五月模擬一]Besides,ourschoolmadeitaroutinetohaveregularfiredrillswherewelearnedtofacefireemergenciescalmly.3．表示“最后”的詞語：last/lastly,lastbutnotleast,mostimportantly等。①Lastbutnotleast,healthisalsoverysignificantforusstudents.②Mostimportantly,readingthosebooksopenedawindowformetoanotherworldandgavemeanewpointofview.4．表示“總之”的詞語：inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,ina/oneword,tosumup,allinall,onthewhole,ingeneral等。Inaword，successisimportant，andsoisfailure，becauseit'sthemotherofsuccess.◎針對訓練13——補全句子①________________(首先),assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensiveeducationalresourcestobroadenthehorizon.②[2021·全國乙卷滿分作文]______________(此外),wecantaketheinitiativeinourstudybyourselveswithouttimeandspacelimit.第二講潤色添彩，“洋”氣十足針對訓練1①themajorityof②raiseourawarenessof③workout④oconsideration/account⑤depressed;imaginative針對訓練2①Itwasunderyourprofessionalguidancethat②Itwasnotuntilnoonthat③dobelieve針對訓練3①Notonlydooceansprovideabundant②canwemakegreatprogressinourprogress③Sopatientlydidtheirfatherinstructthemthat④standsanoldtemple針對訓練4①Whenpreparingfortheco