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JohnflewtotheU.S.fromhishometownofGlasgow,Scotlandwhenhewas19yearsold.HeheadedtoCaliforniaforasemesterstudyingabroad.Itwashisfirsttimetravelingoverseasbyhimself,andhewasalittlenervous.約翰19歲時從家鄉(xiāng)蘇格蘭格拉斯哥飛往美國。他前往加利福尼亞州留學一個學期。這是他第一次獨自出國旅行，他有點緊張。Luckily,hemetayoungIrishcouplealongtheway.TheyweregoingtoVeniceBeach,whichwasn’tfarfromJohn’sfinaldestinationofNewportBeach.Theydecidedtomakethefinallegofthejourneytogether.Therewasjustoneproblem:NoneofthemknewhowtogettoeithercityfromLosAngeles.幸運的是，一路上他遇到了一對年輕的愛爾蘭夫婦。他們要去威尼斯海灘，那里離約翰的最終目的地紐波特海灘不遠。他們決定一起走最后一程。只有一個問題：他們都不知道如何從洛杉磯到達這兩個城市。“Ithinkwemaytakethreeorfour,maybeevenfivedifferentbusjourneys,possiblygoingindifferentdirectionseachtime,”Johnsaid.Eachtimetheyaskedbusdriversfordirections,they’dendupmoreconfused.約翰說：“我認為我們可能會乘坐三到四次，甚至五次不同的巴士，每次都可能朝不同的方向行駛?！?。每次他們向公交車司機問路時，他們都會更加困惑。Theyweregettingmoreandmoreupset.Theyhadn’tpackedmuchfoodorwater,justnotverypreparedineveryrespect.It’snotjustthattheywerekindoftiredandhungry.Therewascertainlyalevelofanxietygrowingintheirmindsaswell.他們越來越沮喪。他們沒有裝太多的食物和水，只是在各個方面都沒有做好準備。這不僅僅是因為他們有點累和餓。當然，他們的心里也有一定程度的焦慮。Eventuallytheydecidedtofindamap.Theyboughtoneatagasstationandstoodoutside,tryingtomakesenseofit.“Itcouldn’tbemoreobviousthatwehavegotlost,”Johnsaid,laughinghelplessly.最終他們決定找一張地圖。他們在加油站買了一輛，站在外面，試圖弄清楚?！拔覀兠月妨?，這再明顯不過了，”約翰無奈地笑著說。Forabout15minutes,thegroupstoodoutsideexaminingthemap.Theywereonthevergeofgivingupwhenayoungwomanapproachedthem.ShewaswearingaT-shirtthatsaid“Needhelp?”在大約15分鐘的時間里，這群人站在外面查看地圖。當一位年輕女子走近他們時，他們正處于放棄的邊緣。她穿著一件T恤，上面寫著“需要幫助嗎？”“I’mnotapersonoffaith,”Johnsaidtothecouple.“ButIadmitthatatpresentIdohaveasenseof,well,hasthispersonbeensentfromheaven?”Theyoungwomanjustlookedatthemandsaid,“Doyouguysneedanyhelp?”ThethreetiredtravelerstoldherhowtheyhadgottenlostonthewaytoVeniceBeach.Pointingtoabluecarinwhichsatamiddle-agedwoman,theyoungwomanreplied,“MaybemymumandIcanhelpyou.”

“我不是一個有信仰的人，”約翰對這對夫婦說?！暗页姓J，目前我確實有一種感覺，嗯，這個人是從天堂來的嗎？”年輕的女人看著他們說：“你們需要幫助嗎？”三個疲憊的旅行者告訴她，他們是如何在去威尼斯海灘的路上迷路的。年輕女子指著一輛藍色的車，車上坐著一位中年婦女，回答說：“也許我和媽媽能幫你。”

注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數應為150左右。2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。TheyexpectedtheyoungwomancouldtellthemhowtogettoVeniceBeachbutinsteadsheofferedsomethingevenbetter.ThenextmorningtheyoungwomanhelpedJohnmapoutaridetoNewportBeach.Onepossibleversion:

TheyexpectedtheyoungwomancouldtellthemhowtogettoVeniceBeachbutinsteadsheofferedsomethingevenbetter.“Whydon’tyoujustgetinthecar?MymotherandIwilltakeyou,”theyoungwomanreplied.Relievedandgrateful,Johnandhisnewfriendsgotintothewoman’scar.Onthejourney,theyoungwomandiscoveredthatJohnwasgoingtotraveltoNewportBeach.“Well,don’tworry,IwillhelpyoucoordinateyourtriptoNewportBeachtomorrow,”theyoungwomansuggested.NotonlydidtheydropofftheIrishcoupleinVeniceBeach,theyalsoprovidedaccommodationsforJohn.

ThenextmorningtheyoungwomanhelpedJohnmapoutaridetoNewportBeach.TheyoungwomanhadarrangedeverythingforJohn,whichmadehimreallygrateful.Johnwasawarethathowunusualthatlevelofgenerositywas,farbeyondhisexpectation.Hewantedtopaymoneyforwhattheyhaddoneforhim,butwasrefused.TheyjusttoldJohntopassthiskindnessontowhoeverneededhelp.JohnmadehiswaytoNewportBeach,feelingwarminhisheartandhewouldn’tfeelnervousbecauseheknewtherewouldalwaysbesomeonewhowaswillingtogiveahelpinghand.

作文范例一

Withawarmsmile,sheoffered,“HowaboutIgiveyoualiftandI’lltakeyouhalfway.”relievedandgrateful,Johnandthecoupleexpressedthousandsofthankstothem.Theyoungwomanprovedtobemorethanjusthelpful.Theyexchanged

jokesandadventuresalltheway,makingthejourneymorelikeanadventurethanatrouble.Itseemedasifinablinktheyarrivedattheyoungwoman’shome.Unexpectedly,theyinvitedthemtostayupandhadagreattimetogether.

Staringatthedetailedmap,Johnwasoverwhelmedwithgratitude.Whatakindwomanandwhatanangel.Theyexchangedcontactinformationwiththeyoungwoman,promisingtomeetagaininthefuture.Withthespecificinstruction,Johnandhiscompanionsmadeittotheirdestinationseparately.Notonlyweretheygratefulforthesafearrivalbutalsofortheunexpectedfriendship.Fromthenon,whenJohnrecalledtheunforgettableexperience,hecouldn’thelpbutfeelthatsometimes,whenyouwerelostandinneed,ahelpinghandappeared.Angeldidexist.

作文范例二

“HowaboutIgiveyouaride?Thebusishardtotakehere.”theyoungwomanbeamed,sayinginagentletone.Johncouldn’tbemoregratefulandexcited.Atfirst,Johnandthecouplewerealittleshy,butsoontheywereoverwhelmedbythegirl’sjokesandwarmth.Nervousnessgavewaytohappinessandtheybegantothinktheirpreviousmisfortunewasablessingindisguise.Whennightfell,thegirlreachedherhomeandinvitedthemtostayinherhouseforanight.

Lookingatthemapwithdetailedroutesandintroduction,Johnwasseizedwithgratitude.“You’remyangelandIcouldn’tbelievewhatwouldhavehappenedtouswithoutyou.”