讀寫任務(wù)之 寫好主題句

讀寫任務(wù)---寫好主題句Tomanypeopleeventheword“work〞soundsunpleasant,notnecessarilybecausetheyarelazy.Thesameman,whodislikeshisjobinthefactoryorevenintheoffice,mayworkhardattheweekend,paintingthehouseordiggingthegarden.Whatisthereason,then?Inmostcases,itisbecausethesepeoplesimplydonotenjoythejobtheyaredoing.Itdoesnotgivethemanyrealsatisfaction.Itmaybequiteeasy,likemakingupwoodenboxes,butitisveryboring.Veryoftentheyaredoingajobwhichisjustasmallpartofamuchlargerone,suchasattachingadoorhandletoacar.Buttheparttheyplayinactuallymakingthecarissosmallthattheycanneversay:Ihavemadesomething!Yetinmodernsocietysomebodyhastodoordinaryjobssuchascleaningstreetsbecausethisisthewaysocietyisorganized.Nomatterhowordinaryajobis,itplaysapartinsocietyandthereforedeservesourduerespect.Societycannotfunctionasingledaywithoutthe“dullandboring〞jobs.

[寫作內(nèi)容]1.以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。2.以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀銓?duì)平凡工作的想法，內(nèi)容包括〔1〕描述清潔工工作的艱辛；〔2〕假設(shè)沒(méi)有清潔工，環(huán)境會(huì)變得如何？〔3〕你對(duì)平凡的工作的看法1There

is

no

doubt

that

what

a

cleaner

does

is

harder

compared

with

any

other

jobs

in

the

society.

On

one

hand

,

they

must

get

up

in

the

early

morning

every

day

to

clean

the

street

while

we

are

sill

in

the

sweet

sleeping

dreams

.

On

the

other

hand,

they

also

suffer

from

less

respect

and

lower

pay

,

working

all

day

on

streets

no

matter

it

is

sun

shines

strongly

or

snowheavily.2Nobody

could

imagine

what

an

bad

environment

we

would

live

in

if

there

were

no

cleaners

.

Wherever

we

go

,

there

is

rubbish.

Maybe

we

would

soon

be

drowned

in

the

mountain

of

rubbish.

Even

worse,

if

there

wee

no

change

about

that,

diseases

would

spread

at

a

very

quick

speed.

Is

there

anything

that

can

be

worse

than

this

!

3From

the

above

,

I

can

draw

the

conclusion

safely

that

even

the

smallest

and

the

most

ordinary

job,such

as

cleaning

the

street

is

also

the

necessary

part

to

keep

the

society

going

smoothly.

Consequently,

those

who

do

those

most

insignificant

jobs

should

get

respect

as

much

as

those

being

engineers

or

teachers.Findoutthetopicsentenceofeachparagraph范文

In

the

passage

,

the

author

mainly

stressed

the

importance

of

small

and

ordinary

work

,

such

as

cleaning

the

street

because

of

their

essentiality

for

the

organization

of

the

society

,and

thinks

those

doing

such

jobs

should

be

respected

greatly.

There

is

no

doubt

that

what

a

cleaner

does

is

harder

compared

with

any

other

jobs

in

the

society.

On

one

hand

,

they

must

get

up

in

the

early

morning

every

day

to

clean

the

street

while

we

are

sill

in

the

sweet

sleeping

dreams

.

On

the

other

hand,

they

also

suffer

from

less

respect

and

lower

pay

,

working

all

day

on

the

street

no

matter

it

is

sun

shines

strongly

or

snow,

wind

heavily.

Nobody

could

imagine

what

an

bad

environment

we

would

live

in

if

there

were

no

cleaners

in

the

city.

Wherever

we

go

,

there

is

rubbish.

Maybe

we

would

soon

be

drowned

in

the

mountain

of

rubbish.

Even

worse,

if

there

wee

no

change

about

that,

diseases

would

spread

at

a

very

quick

speed.

Is

there

anything

that

can

be

worse

than

this

!

From

the

above

,

I

can

draw

the

conclusion

safely

that

even

the

smallest

and

the

most

ordinary

job,such

as

cleaning

the

street

is

also

the

necessary

part

to

keep

the

society

going

smoothly.

Consequently,

those

who

do

those

most

insignificant

jobs

should

get

respect

as

much

as

those

being

engineers

or

teachers.(要點(diǎn)1主題句)(要點(diǎn)2主題句)(要點(diǎn)3主題句)寫好主題句的重要性寫作（滿分20分）分值評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)18-20包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題明確，內(nèi)容豐富。詞匯豐富，用詞得當(dāng)。能有效運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)，而且沒(méi)有（或極少）語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性較好。寫作時(shí)，要讓壓力山大的閱卷老師不用刻意尋找而能一眼就看到文章中的要點(diǎn)。最好是在每段的開頭就點(diǎn)題，并且要緊靠主題句加以拓展修飾潤(rùn)色，以到達(dá)畫龍點(diǎn)睛的效果。Howtowritean

atopicsentence?

.直接答復(fù)要點(diǎn)Model:假設(shè)你處在那些動(dòng)物的處境,你會(huì)有什么反響？直接答復(fù)：假設(shè)我是野生動(dòng)物園離里的動(dòng)物，當(dāng)游客一直與我拍照，我會(huì)不開心?！?021廣東高考讀寫任務(wù)要點(diǎn)2〕

IfIwereananimalinthewildlifepark,Iwouldfeelunhappywhenpeoplekeeptakingphotos

withme.(subjunctivemood)

你理想中的大學(xué)生活是什么樣的？寫作要點(diǎn)是詢問(wèn)考生的看法時(shí)，對(duì)提問(wèn)直接作出答復(fù)。Asforme,theidealcollegelifeiswonderful/relaxing.模式1主題句的7種模式及穩(wěn)固練習(xí)即學(xué)即練11.假設(shè)沒(méi)有清潔工，環(huán)境會(huì)變得如何？〔13年廣東高考讀寫任務(wù)要點(diǎn)2〕2.上文使你想起哪位對(duì)你幫助最大的老師？〔12年廣東高考讀寫任務(wù)要點(diǎn)1〕

ThispassageremindsmeofmyChineseteacher,Mr.Li,whohelpedmealot.

Nobodycouldimaginewhatanbadenvironmentwewouldliveiniftherewerenocleaners.(subjunctivemood)說(shuō)明立場(chǎng)Model:你認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該禁止游客和動(dòng)物拍照。(2021年廣東高考讀寫任務(wù)要點(diǎn)3)

Ibelievethattakingphotoswithanimalsshouldbebanned.明確表示對(duì)某觀點(diǎn)支持、或反對(duì)；或說(shuō)明對(duì)某事物的看法。模式2.表示支持或贊同：表示反對(duì)或不贊同：你對(duì)用金錢鼓勵(lì)孩子學(xué)習(xí)的看法。(2021年廣東高考讀寫任務(wù)要點(diǎn)1)Idisagreewiththeideathatpeopleusemoneytoencouragekidstogetgoodmarks.Idon’tliketheideaof

encouragingkidswithcashjustbecausetheyhavegotgoodmarks.Iagreewiththeideaofusingmoneytoencouragekidstogetgoodmarks.

Idisagreewiththeideathat…Iamopposedtotheideaof…Idisapproveoftheideathat…Insomeway,Iagreewith…but…Whatthewritersaidsoundsreasonable,but…

Theexpressionsofsupportingandobjecting

Iagreewiththestatement/ideathat…Iaminfavorof…IappreciatethatIapproveoftheideathat…Ibelievethat…Iagreewithwhatthewritersaid/says.表示支持或贊同的句型：表示反對(duì)或不贊同的句型：1.寫作要點(diǎn)：對(duì)作者寫感謝信這種習(xí)慣的看法。明示觀點(diǎn)：如：我高度贊揚(yáng)作者寫感謝信的習(xí)慣。Ithinkhighlyoftheauthor’shabitofwritingthank-youletters.2.寫作要點(diǎn)：你怎樣看待老師對(duì)學(xué)生的影響？〔12年廣東高考讀寫任務(wù)要點(diǎn)3〕擺明觀點(diǎn)：如：我認(rèn)為，一個(gè)好老師在學(xué)生的成長(zhǎng)中起著重要作用。譯成英文：Frommyownexperience,Icansafelydrawaconclusionthatagoodteacherplaysareallyimportantroleinstudents’lives.即學(xué)即練2重述要點(diǎn)

Thereisnodoubtthatwhatacleanerdoesishardercomparedwithanyotherjobsinthesociety.不直接答復(fù)寫作要點(diǎn)，而是翻譯要點(diǎn)作為段落主題句。模式3.例1：描述清潔工工作的艱辛?！?3年廣東高考讀寫任務(wù)要點(diǎn)1〕

例2：在生活中諒解他人有何重要意義.Fromthestory,Ilearnthatunderstandingandforgivingothersplaysanimportantroleinourlife.1.要點(diǎn)：建設(shè)綠色校園的重要性。2.要點(diǎn)：中學(xué)生活和大學(xué)生活的差異.即學(xué)即練3

Asweallknow,thecollegelifeiswidelydifferentfromthemiddleschoolone.Thereisnodoubtthatitisveryimportanttobuildagreencampus.總述原因

Thereasonsforthisareobvious/various……forthereasonsasfollowsThereasonwhy…isthat…模式4.人們?cè)趨⒂^動(dòng)物園時(shí)為什么喜歡和動(dòng)物拍照(2021年廣東高考)重述：人們?cè)趨⒂^動(dòng)物園時(shí)是喜歡和動(dòng)物拍照.Whenpeoplearevisitingazoo,theyliketotakephotoswithanimalsforthereasonsasfollow.First,….Secondly,….Thirdly,……的原因顯而易見(jiàn)…的原因有多種…的原因如下句型提示2.

這起事故發(fā)生的原因有哪些？Therearethreereasonswhy

theaccidenttookplace.

First,….Secondly,….Thirdly,…

1.你支持青少年應(yīng)該與父母分享秘密的理由是什么？

Ithinkthatteenagers

shouldsharetheirsecretswiththeirparentsforthereasonsasfollows.即學(xué)即練4穩(wěn)固練習(xí):根據(jù)給出的寫作要點(diǎn)寫出主題句。[說(shuō)明立場(chǎng)][答復(fù)要點(diǎn)][總述原因]

[重述要點(diǎn)]

1.你認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該穿校服。2.你認(rèn)為好老師應(yīng)該具有什么樣的好品質(zhì)。3.簡(jiǎn)述你支持拆(teardown)舊圖書館的理由。4.分析學(xué)生之間存在競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的利弊。1.你認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該穿校服上學(xué)。

Iagreewiththerequirementthatstudentsshouldwearschooluniformonthecampus.[說(shuō)明立場(chǎng)]2.你認(rèn)為好老師應(yīng)該具有什么樣的好品質(zhì)。

Idisagreewiththeideaofwearingschooluniformsatschool.AsfarasIamconcerned,agoodteachershouldtreathisstudentsfairlyaswellasmakeclasseslivelyandinteresting.3.簡(jiǎn)述你支持拆舊圖書館的理由。4.分析學(xué)生之間存在競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的利弊。Isupporttearingdowntheoldlibraryforthefollowingreasons.ThereasonswhyIsupporttearingdowntheoldlibraryarevarious.Asweallknow,competitionamongstudentshasadvantagesaswellasdisadvantages.直接答復(fù)要點(diǎn)段落主題句的模式Conclusion說(shuō)明立場(chǎng)重述要點(diǎn)總述原因

引出建議、方法、措施、步驟

引出經(jīng)歷說(shuō)出感受corretnessaccuracyAvoidmitakestensevoicespelling引出經(jīng)歷

常用句型：Itremindsmeofmyownexperiencewhen…Itremindsmeofthetimewhen…Itremindsmeofanaccidentwhichhappenedseveraldaysago.Afterreadingthestoryabove,Irecalltheexperienceofmyfriendwho…Thestoryaboveremindsmeofoneofmyexperiences.用來(lái)引出記敘文的具體事例。模式5.要點(diǎn)：講述一次你〔或你朋友〕想家的經(jīng)歷。(11年高考)Thestoryremindsmeofmysimilarexperienceofbeinghomesick.要點(diǎn)：描述你或你的朋友在此災(zāi)難發(fā)生時(shí)的一次經(jīng)歷。(14年惠二調(diào))Itremindsmeofmyexperienceduringthe

typhoonwhichhitmyhometownseveraldaysago.

1.寫作要點(diǎn)：表達(dá)一次你寬恕他人或被寬恕的經(jīng)歷；Itremindsmeofmysimilarexperienceofbeingforgivenbyafriend.

即學(xué)即練52.寫作要點(diǎn)：表達(dá)你學(xué)英語(yǔ)的經(jīng)歷。TakemypersonalexperienceoflearningEnglishforexample.常用句型：●

Weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasurestosolvetheproblem.●

Weshouldtryourbesttoovercomethedifficulties.●

Weshouldsolvetheproblemsthatwearefacedwith.●

Itisnecessarythatproperactionshouldbetakentoendthephenomenon.●

Iwouldliketosharesomeadvice/suggestionson.......引出措施、方法、步驟、建議等模式6.如何才能獲得快樂(lè)？Iwouldliketosharesomeadvice/suggestionsonhowtomakeourselveshappy.2021年讀寫任務(wù):你的父母〔或其他親人〕是如何鼓勵(lì)你學(xué)習(xí)的；

Myparentsoftenadoptsomeeffectiveways

toencouragemetostudyhard.2021年讀寫任務(wù):(3)你認(rèn)為政府怎樣才能更好地解決住房問(wèn)題。說(shuō)說(shuō)人們對(duì)環(huán)境保護(hù)所采取的措施。

AsfarasIamconcerned,

thegovernmentshouldtakeactiontosolvethehousingproblem.即學(xué)即練6

Luckily,peoplearetakingmoreandmoremeasurestoprotecttheenvironment.

說(shuō)出感受

(07年高考題)以約120個(gè)詞表達(dá)你對(duì)父親的感恩，并包括如下要點(diǎn)：(1)讀信后的感受；模式7.

(08年高考題)以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀憷硐氲拇髮W(xué)生活，內(nèi)容包括：

(1)

對(duì)中學(xué)生活的感受；

IwasdeeplymovedafterIreadyourletter.Asforme,themiddleschoollifeishardbutmeaningfulandcolourfulaswell.relaxed〔放松的〕moved(感動(dòng)的)happy,pleased,glad,delighted〔快樂(lè)的〕angry，annoyed〔生氣的〕nervous〔緊張的〕unhappy，sad〔不開心的〕disappointed〔失望的〕grateful,thankful〔感謝的〕worried，anxious〔擔(dān)憂的，焦慮的〕upset〔煩心的，不安的〕frustrated〔沮喪的〕surprised,amazed，astonished〔驚訝的〕confident〔自信十足的〕proud〔自豪的〕encouraged，inspired〔受鼓舞的〕frightened,scared,afraid〔害怕的〕lonely(孤獨(dú)的)determined〔下定決心的〕hopeful〔充滿希望的〕hopeless〔毫無(wú)希望的〕homesick〔想家的〕關(guān)于感受的形容詞寫作要點(diǎn)：你讀這篇演講稿的感受。如：讀完這篇講稿，我為中國(guó)人感到自豪。

Afterreadingthisspeech,IfeltreallyproudoftheChinesepeople.寫作要點(diǎn)：你讀完這個(gè)故事的感受。如:這個(gè)故事使我深受啟發(fā)。Iwasdeeplyinspiredbysuchastory.即學(xué)即練7直接答復(fù)要點(diǎn)段落主題句的模式Conclusion說(shuō)明立場(chǎng)重述要點(diǎn)總述原因引出建議、方法、措施、步驟引出經(jīng)歷說(shuō)出感受穩(wěn)固練習(xí):根據(jù)給出的要點(diǎn)寫出主題句。1.你認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該穿校服上學(xué)。

2.這個(gè)故事使我想起了自己一年前參加英語(yǔ)演講比賽的經(jīng)歷。4.你認(rèn)為好老師應(yīng)該具有什么樣的好品質(zhì)。5.簡(jiǎn)述你支持拆舊圖書館的理由。6.分析學(xué)生之間存在競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的利弊。[說(shuō)明立場(chǎng)][引出經(jīng)歷]

[引出建議、方法、措施、步驟][答復(fù)要點(diǎn)][總述原因]

[重述要點(diǎn)]

1.你認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該穿校服上學(xué)。

2.這個(gè)故事使我想起了自己一年前參加英語(yǔ)演講比賽的經(jīng)歷。3.應(yīng)該采取措施解決醫(yī)療問(wèn)題。4.你認(rèn)為好老師應(yīng)該具有什么樣的好品質(zhì)。5.簡(jiǎn)述你支持拆舊圖書館的理由。6.分析學(xué)生之間存在競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的利弊。

7.讀完這篇講稿，我真的對(duì)那個(gè)學(xué)生的感到羞愧。[說(shuō)出感受

]

8.如何才能獲得幸福？9.交通事故發(fā)生的原因有哪些？10.你對(duì)用金錢鼓勵(lì)孩子做家務(wù)的看法。11.假設(shè)你在事故現(xiàn)場(chǎng),你會(huì)不會(huì)幫助那位受傷的老太太？12：對(duì)作者用英語(yǔ)寫日記這種習(xí)慣的看法。13.舉例說(shuō)明在生活中諒解他人有何重要意義.14.說(shuō)說(shuō)人們對(duì)節(jié)約資源所采取的措施。15.你認(rèn)為家長(zhǎng)應(yīng)該如何對(duì)待孩子的錯(cuò)誤。1.你認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該穿校服上學(xué)。

Iagreewiththerequirementthatstudentsshouldwearschooluniformonthecampus.

2.這個(gè)故事使我想起了自己一年前參加英語(yǔ)演講比賽的經(jīng)歷。ThestoryremindsmeofmyownexperiencewhenItookpartinanEnglishspeakingcompetitiononeyearago.

[說(shuō)明立場(chǎng)]

[引出經(jīng)歷]

3.應(yīng)該采取措施解決醫(yī)療問(wèn)題。

Weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasurestosolvethemedicalproblem

.4.你認(rèn)為好老師應(yīng)該具有什么樣的好品質(zhì)。Inmyeyes,agoodteachershouldtreathisstudentsfairlyaswellasmaketheclasslivelyandinteresting.[引出建議、方法、措施、步驟等][答復(fù)要點(diǎn)]5.簡(jiǎn)述你支持拆舊圖書館的理由。6.分析學(xué)生之間存在競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的利弊。Isupporttearingdowntheoldlibraryforthefollowingreasons.Asweallknow,competitionamongstudentshasadvantagesaswellasdisadvantages.

[總述原因]

[重述要點(diǎn)]

7.讀完這篇講稿，我真的對(duì)那個(gè)學(xué)生的感到羞愧。Afterreadingthisspeech,Ifeltreallysorryforthestudent.[說(shuō)出感受]

8.Weshouldfindsomeeffectivewaystomakeourselveslivehappily.9.Thereasonswhytrafficaccidentstakeplacearevarious.First,….Next,…Finally,…10.Iagreewiththeideaofusingmoneytoencouragekidstodohousework.Idisagreewiththeideathatpeopleusemoneytoencouragekidstodohousework.8.如何才能獲得幸福？9.交通事故發(fā)生的原因有哪些？10.你對(duì)用金錢鼓勵(lì)孩子做家務(wù)的看法。。11.IfIhadbeenatthespotoftheaccident,Iwouldhavehelpedtheinjuredoldlady.12.Ithinkhighlyoftheauthor’shabitofkeeping