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閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Thefourmountainclimberswerestillbreathingheavilyastheylookedoutintothedistance.Theviewsfromthetopofthemountainwerebreathtaking.Inalldirections,valleys,forestsandothermountainswerelaidoutbeforethem.Theycouldevenseethesmallwoodenhousesofthevillagewheretheyhadspentthenightandtheroutetheyhadtakentoreachthetopofthissmallbutdangerousmountain.Laughingloudly,theyweresurprisedattheircourageinclimbingsuchasteepandrockymountainslope.Filledwithanenormoussenseofachievement,thefouryoungclimberspattedeachotherontheback.

Astheotherthreecontinuedtoenjoytheviews,Jason,theleaderofthegroup,staredatthehorizonwithatroubledlookonhisface.

“Whatisit,Jason?”Sofia,theyoungestofthegroup,asked.

“Thosedarkcloudsinthedistancemeanaheavystormisfastontheway,”Jasonreplied.Herememberedthevillagershadwarnedhimoftheunpredictableweatherconditionsontopofthemountainandthataterriblestormcouldappearfromnowhere.

“Butit'ssowarmandsunnyhere.Idon'tthinkthestormiscomingthisway,”Sofiasaid,moreinhopethanexpectation.

However,Jasonfearedtheworstandknewonlytoowellwhatwouldhappenifthestormcaughtthemintheopen.Headdressedthegroupinacalmbutserioustone,“Ifthestormhitsus,thetemperaturewillfalldramatically.Therainandmistwillmakeitdifficultforustoseewherewearegoingandwecouldeasilygetlostorfalloffacliff.Thewindwilltakeourstrength,soweneedtogetmovingfast.”

Thefourmountainclimberspackeduptheirfacilitiesandimmediatelystartedbackdownthemountain.Unfortunately,despitetheirbestefforts,thestormwasuponthemsoonerthanexpected.Thewindscreamedintheirears,thedrivingrainstung(刺痛)theireyesandthemistmadeitimpossibleforthemtoseeclearly.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Withitgettingdark,Jasondecidedthatitwasjusttoodangeroustocontinue.

____________Finally,thestormshowedsignsofstoppingandtheclimbersdecidedtocontinuetheirwaydownthemountain._______________________________________________________________第一步

:揣測文脈，按需分配，細化問題，完成閉環(huán)一

1.依據(jù)兩句話，鎖定閉環(huán)一。既給的文章(350詞部分)后面所給的兩句話(斜體句)之間形成的閉環(huán)。

2.分析一段問題，揣測文脈。一段問題：避難，如何躲過暴風(fēng)雨？天色變黑了，杰森決定不能再繼續(xù)下山了，不然太危險。◎他們看到了什么？◎他們想到了什么？◎他們表露了什么？◎他們說了什么？◎他們做了什么？最后，暴風(fēng)雨看來就要停下來了。爬山者們決定下山。3.按需分配，細化恰當問題。既然是避難，以躲過暴風(fēng)雨，我們遴選出"他們做了什么?"繼而通過追問，細化做了什么：什么時候做?在哪做?怎么做?做得結(jié)果如何?

第二步:深拓情節(jié)，尋讀具象，升華主題，完成閉環(huán)二1.分析二段問題，深拓情節(jié)。二段問題：暴風(fēng)雨后，體力不支，如何下山？2.尋讀問題解決關(guān)鍵，選定具象。前文中提到的關(guān)鍵詞：village,villager.◎村民們做了什么？◎回到村莊時大家感覺是什么？尋讀問題解決關(guān)鍵，選定具象。前文中提到的關(guān)鍵詞：village,villager.4.關(guān)聯(lián)具象，凸顯大愛。自然無情，村民有愛。#凝練一下模板，就是2句話：01遴選主要問題，細化主要問題02尋讀文章具象，升華情節(jié)主題大家不妨對照正確答案，來細細體會，一學(xué)就會哦！

Withitgettingdark,Jasondecidedthatitwasjusttoodangeroustocontinue.

He

gathered

thegroupintheshelterofalargerock,wherehe

noticed

thattheotherthreewerefrightenedandlookingtohimforawayout.Pushedbyresponsibilityandpressureofleadership,Jason,

shoutingagainst

thewind,

explained

thatthesafestthingforthemomentwas

takingshelterfromthepouringrain.Theyhadexpectedthatthestormwouldpassverysoon.However,as

darknesssettledover

them,

theshowersweptin.Howtimedragged!

Finally,thestormshowedsignsofstoppingandtheclimbersdecidedtocontinuetheirwaydownthemountain.

Unbearably

coldandhungry,they

felttheirwaydownwardwithgreatdifficulty,eagerforamiracle.Suddenly,somethingcaughtJason'seye.Wasitaflashoflight?Thereitwasagain…andanother!Inresponse,Jasonimmediatelyflashedhistorch,exclaiming,“Overhere!Wearehere!”Hiscompanionsjoinedin.

Rescueeventuallyarrived.Seeingtheclimbers,all

thesearchingvillagers

breathedasighofreliefandlovinglyhelpedthem

returntothevillage.Yousee,

weatherchangesbutloveremains.語言積累：marvel感到驚奇stee