英語(yǔ)新教材導(dǎo)學(xué)人教必修第一冊(cè)講義Unit3SectionⅦReadingforWriting-有關(guān)身心健康的比較說(shuō)明文Word版含答案

SectionⅦReadingforWriting——有關(guān)身心健康的比較說(shuō)明文本單元的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是讀一篇關(guān)于健康的文章后，寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)身心健康的比較說(shuō)明文。Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)LearningtowriteafterthemodelGOINGPOSITIVEIalwayswantedtolookliketheslimgirlsonTVeventhoughIknewthatitwasimpossible.IworriedaboutmyweightandtriedeverynewdietIreadaboutonline.Itriedno-fat，low-fat，5：2，onlybananas，nobananas—Ialmostwentbananas，too.ThenIreadanarticlethatsaidinsteadofasking“AmIfat？”Ishouldbeasking“AmIfit？”Ihadnoideaalettercouldmakesuchadifference!OnceIstartedthinkingaboutfitnessratherthanweight，thingsbegantochange.Insteadofsaying“Iwanttolosethreekilos”，Iwouldsay“Iwanttoruntwokilometresineightminutes”or“Iwanttobeabletodo30push-ups”.RatherthancuttingoutthefoodsIenjoyed，Iaddedhealthyfoodstomymeals.Icouldstillhaveaburgernowandthen，butIwouldaddasaladoranapple.Finally，Istoppedparingmyselfwithactressesandmodelsandlookingforthingsthatwerewrongwithmyfaceorbody.Instead，ImadealistofthethingsIlikedaboutmyself.Bybeingpositiveaboutmyselfandmybody，Ibecamebothhappierandhealthier.(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①healthy/fitadj.健康的②unhealthy/unfitadj.不健康的③greenfood綠色食品④healthyfood/diet健康飲食⑤unhealthyeatinghabit不健康的飲食習(xí)慣⑥goodlivinghabits良好的生活習(xí)慣⑦overweight/fatadj.肥胖的⑧buildupone’sbody強(qiáng)身健體⑨enoughsleep充足的睡眠⑩takeexercise進(jìn)行運(yùn)動(dòng)?loseweight減肥?begoodfor/dogoodto對(duì)……有益處?goonadiet節(jié)食?forma...eatinghabit養(yǎng)成一個(gè)……的飲食習(xí)慣?beingood/poorhealth身體健康/不健康?begood/badforone’shealth/eyes對(duì)某人的健康/視力有益/害Ⅱ.While-writing寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的短文，介紹你自己是如何平衡學(xué)習(xí)和休息的。內(nèi)容包括：1.以前無(wú)法平衡學(xué)習(xí)和休息；2.現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)做到二者平衡；3.你的做法。Step1Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Paragraph1：Icouldn’tbalancerestandstudybefore.Paragraph2：Howtobalancerestandstudy.Paragraph3：Icanbalancerestandstudynow.Step2Listthewords，phrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①tiredadj.勞累的②realizev.認(rèn)識(shí)到；意識(shí)到③balancerestandstudy平衡休息和學(xué)習(xí)④bebusywith忙于⑤havearest休息一下⑥asaresult結(jié)果⑦fallill生病⑧allthetime一直⑨playbasketball打籃球⑩fallbehind落后2.Sentences①我經(jīng)常忙于學(xué)習(xí)，因此沒(méi)有時(shí)間休息。(so)Iwasoftenbusywithmystudy，soIhadnotimetohavearest.②不是整天學(xué)習(xí)，而是我開(kāi)始抽時(shí)間休息。(ratherthan)Ratherthanstudyingallthetime，Ibegantosparesometimetohavearest.③我不是整天做作業(yè)，而是一天打一個(gè)小時(shí)籃球。(insteadof)Insteadofdoingmyhomeworkalltheday，Iwenttoplaybasketballforanhouraday.Step3Draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwords.eq\x(so，ratherthan，insteadof，instead)Twoyearsago，Icouldn’tbalancerestandstudy.Iwasoftenbusywithmystudy，soIhadnotimetohavearest.Asaresult，Ioftenfelttiredandstressed.AtlastIfellillandhadtostayinhospitalfor3weeks.AfterIrecoveredfromillness，Ibegantothinkaboutmyproblems.Igottorealizetheimportanceofbalancingrestandstudy.Ratherthanstudyingallthetime，Ibegantosparesometimetohavearest.Insteadofdoingmyhomeworkalltheday，Iwenttoplaybasketballforanhouraday.Finally，Igottobalancerestandstudy.Ibecamequitehealthy.Ididn’tfallbehind;instead，Istudiedbetterthanbefore.Ⅲ.Post-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourpassagewithyourpartner，andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Doesthewriterexplainwhyhe/shechanged/wantedtochange?□2.Doesthewritertellhowthechangeshaveimprovedorwillimprovehis/herlife?□3.Isthetextwell-organised?□4.Doesthewriterusewordsandexpressionstoshowsimilaritiesanddifferences?□5.Arethereanygrammarorspellingerrors?□6.Doesthewriterusecorrectpunctuation?寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)Thepast：Iworriedaboutmyweightandtriedeverynewdiet.Thechanges：Ifocusedonfitnessratherthandietandweight.Thepresent：IbecamepositiveandIbecamebothhappierandhealthier.常用詞匯like，so，too，still，similarly，similarto，thesame(...as...)，inmon(with)，both...and...，instead，than，however/but/though，differentfrom，ratherthan，insteadof，thedifferenceis...亮點(diǎn)表達(dá)1.Takingexerciseiscloselyrelatedtohealth.運(yùn)動(dòng)與健康息息相關(guān)。2.Weshouldgetintothehabitofkeepinggoodhours.我們應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成早睡早起的習(xí)慣。3.Smokinghasagreatinfluenceonourhealth.抽煙對(duì)我們的健康有很大的影響。4.Accordingtoarecentsurvey，fourmillionpeopledieeachyearfromdiseaseslinkedtosmoking.依照最近的一項(xiàng)調(diào)查，每年有4000000人死于與吸煙有關(guān)的疾病。5.Unlessyoukeepabalanceddiet，youwillputonweight.除非你保持均衡的飲食，否則將會(huì)增加體重。6.Earlytobedandearlytorise，makesamanhealthy，wealthyandwise.早睡早起會(huì)使人健康、富有和聰明。7.Thewalldependsonthefoundation，andthebodydependsonexercise.墻靠基礎(chǔ)堅(jiān)