高考英語讀后續(xù)寫誤會故事類下雨天誤以為丟了傘課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習誤會故事——下雨天誤以為丟了傘1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Itwasdark,coldandrainingonDecember24.Jameslefthisofficeandwalkedslowlyacrossthestreettotheparkingplace.Hewasverytired.Hetookouthiscarkeyandputdownhisumbrella.Heputthekeyintothelockandturnedit.Nothinghappened.Thedoorwouldnotopen.ThenJamesrealisedthatitwasthewrongcar.Hiscarwasred,butthisonewasdarkblue.“Ohdear!Imusthaveparkedinadifferentplacethismorning,”thoughthe.Puttinguphisumbrella,hesetofftolookforhiscar.Therainpoureddownandtheeveninggotcolderandcolder.Havingwalkedroundallthesidestreets,Jamesdidn’tfindhiscar.Hewasexhaustedandangry.“Someonemusthavestolenmycar,”hethought.“NowIshallhavetogotothepolicestationandreportit.”Thepolicemantherewasveryhelpful.HewrotedownadescriptionofJamescarandthentookhisaddressandtelephonenumber.AsJameswasleaving,thepolicemanwishedhimamerryChristmas.4續(xù)寫原文5段首句Paragraph1：AsJamesopenedthegaragedoor,hespottedsomething,frozeninamazement.Paragraph2：Pleasedtoknowhiscarwasthere,Jamesenteredtheroomwiththepresent.6Part2題目分析7點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點8續(xù)寫思路分析本文以人物為線索展開，講述了主人公James在圣誕節(jié)的時候誤認為自己的車丟了，心情變得沮喪，沒有給家人買圣誕禮物，天下著雨，雨傘也丟了，心情非常糟糕，渾身濕透的回到家里，后來發(fā)現(xiàn)車在車庫里，警察也找到了丟失的傘，心情變好的故事。9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：AsJamesopenedthegaragedoor,hespottedsomething,frozeninamazement.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“詹姆斯打開車庫門，發(fā)現(xiàn)了什么東西，驚訝地僵住了。”可知，第一段可描寫James發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的車在家里，也找到了給妻子的禮物，以及他的心情變化。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Pleasedtoknowhiscarwasthere,Jamesenteredtheroomwiththepresent.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“詹姆斯很高興知道他的車就在那里，他帶著禮物進了房間。”可知，第二段可描寫James愉快地和妻子在一起，警察找到了雨傘，James非常高興，沐浴在圣誕節(jié)溫暖的氣氛中。11續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索找到了車——發(fā)現(xiàn)了小貓——給妻子送禮物——警察找到了雨傘——高興起來12續(xù)寫素材可用詞匯：行為類①沖上樓：rushupstairs/dashupstairs/goupstairshurriedly②.突然想起：strike/occurto/hit情緒類①.高興：overjoyed/verydelighted/extremelyhappy13續(xù)寫素材可用句型：[高分句型1].Hesuddenlyrememberedthatitwouldn’tstartthismorningsohejusttookataxitowork.（運用了that引導賓語從句，so連接并列句式）[高分句型2].Puttingthephonedown,JamesgazedatJessica,joywellingupinsidehim.（運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)）[高分句型3].BathedinthewarmChristmasatmosphere,JameswalkedovertoJessicaandhuggedhertightly.（運用了過去分詞作狀語）14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)AsJamesopenedthegaragedoor,hespottedsomething,frozeninamazement.Insidethegaragewashisredcar.Hesuddenlyrememberedthatitwouldn’tstartthismorningsohejusttookataxitowork.Jameswasoverjoyed.HewasjustabouttorushupstairsandtellJessicathegoodnewswhenheheard,“Meow!Meow!”Helookedinsidethecarandtheresatasmallkittenwithpointedearsandgreeneyes.James’eyesweregluedtothekittenforafewminutesandabrilliantideastruckhim.“ThisisforJessica.”Hepickedthekittenup.16范文呈現(xiàn)Pleasedtoknowhiscarwasthere,Jamesenteredtheroomwiththepresent.“Thisisyourpresent,”saidtoJessicahappily.“Oh,thankyou,darling.I’vealwayswantedakitten,”herfacelitup.Justthenthetelephonerang.Itwasthepoliceman.Jameswastoldthathiscarhadn’tbeenfoundbuthisumbrellawasgotinthepolicestation.Puttingthephonedown,JamesgazedatJessica,joywellingupinsidehim.BathedinthewarmChristmasatmosphere,JameswalkedovertoJessicaandhuggedhertightly.17范文譯文當詹姆斯打開車庫門時，他發(fā)現(xiàn)了什么東西，驚訝地僵住了。車庫里是他的紅色汽車。他突然想起來今天早上還沒開始上班，就打車去上班了。詹姆斯喜出望外。他正要沖上樓告訴杰西卡這個好消息，這時他聽到：“喵！喵！”他看了看車里，坐著一只尖耳朵和綠色眼睛的小貓。詹姆斯的眼睛盯著小貓看了幾分鐘，突然想到了一個絕妙的主意?！斑@是給杰西卡的?！彼研∝埍Я似饋怼?8范文譯文很高興知道他的車在那里，詹姆斯帶著禮物走進了房間?！斑@是你的禮物，”杰西卡高興地說。“哦，謝謝你，親愛的。我一直想要一只小貓，”她的臉亮了起來。就在這時，電話鈴響了