讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)我最終學(xué)會(huì)做一個(gè)合格的大姐姐寫(xiě)作講義高三英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)原文中文翻譯Inthespringsun,myauntandIheadedforherflowershop.NormallyIwouldbedelightedtohelpinhershop,butnotrecentlybecauseofRosa.Rosawasmysister,justonemonthold,whowassettledinmyoldbedroom.Fortenyears,thesmallroomwasfullofmytoysandbooks.Butnowitwastransformedintoherbabyroom,decoratedlikeagardenwithpinksandyellows.

Myspace,myoldlife,wasgone.春光明媚，我和大姨向她的花店走去。通常情況下，我很愿意幫她打理花店，但最近因?yàn)镽osa的原因，我不再那么想去了。Rosa是我只有一個(gè)月大的妹妹，現(xiàn)在她住在我以前的房間里。十年來(lái)，這個(gè)小房間里滿是我的玩具和書(shū)。但現(xiàn)在，它已經(jīng)變成了她的嬰兒房，裝飾得像個(gè)花園，粉色和黃色的裝飾品點(diǎn)綴其中。我的空間，我的舊生活，儼然不再。"Hereweare!"Wearrivedattheshop,awaveofcolourandsweetsmellwashingover

auntsaidIcouldpicksomeflowersforMumandDad.Iusedtolovethis,buttodayIwassooverewithtirednessandenvy.（二胎，家里老大會(huì)吃醋？）WhybothertobringthemflowerswhentheywereenjoyingRosaathomewithoutme?"我們到了！"我們到了花店，滿眼都是五顏六色的話，撲鼻而來(lái)的是花的芬芳。大姨說(shuō)我可以為媽媽和爸爸挑些花。我曾經(jīng)很喜歡這個(gè)，但今天我卻被疲憊和嫉妒所淹沒(méi)。當(dāng)他們把愛(ài)都給了Rosa的時(shí)候，我為什么還要費(fèi)盡心思給他們送花呢？SilentlyIhelpedmyauntarrangeflowers."Yourmumtoldmetherehasn'tbeenmuchshuteyerecentlyforanyofyou.""Notmuch,sinceRosathealarmclockwasinstalled(安裝)."Iplainedwithahugeyawn(哈欠).我默默地幫大姨擺花。"你媽媽告訴我，你們最近都沒(méi)怎么睡覺(jué)。""自從有了Rosa，她隨時(shí)會(huì)醒來(lái)哭鬧，導(dǎo)致我們確實(shí)沒(méi)怎么睡。"我打著哈欠抱怨道。"Irememberhavingtocreep(躡手躡腳地走)aroundlikeawornoutmousewhenyourmumwasababy.Ispentthefirstmonthshatinghersomuch.""ButyouandMumseemsoclose,"Isaid,guiltilyhidingawaymyenvyofRosa."我記得當(dāng)你媽媽還是個(gè)嬰兒的時(shí)候，我要像一只疲憊的老鼠那樣躡手躡腳地走。我度過(guò)了最初的幾個(gè)月，都在極度討厭她。""但是你和媽媽看起來(lái)很親近，"我說(shuō)，內(nèi)疚地隱藏起對(duì)Rosa的嫉妒。"Nowweare.Butittookmeyearstogrowintotheroleofbigsister.Fewflowersblossom(綻放)overnight,youknow."Shepulledmeinforasidehug,glancingupattheclock,andsuggestedItakeawalkoutside."現(xiàn)在我們確實(shí)很親近。但是我花了好幾年的時(shí)間才適應(yīng)大姐姐的角色。你知道，很少有花能在一夜之間綻放。"她把我拉過(guò)來(lái)側(cè)抱一下，看了一眼鐘，建議我出去走走。Behindhershopwasafielddottedwithspringflowers.Steppingintothefield,Ibegantopicklittleflowers.Itwaslikegatheringmychildhoodmemories.IrememberedhowI'dsitwithDad,makingflowerchains,crowning(授予)eachotherwiththesilliesttitles:QueenofJunkFoodandKingofMess.Mysmilegrewwider.Theshining

yellowflowers

remindedmeofthecolorinRosa'sbabyroom.Wassheawake?Iwondered.在她的花店后面是田地,地里生長(zhǎng)著一些花（迎春花？)。我踏進(jìn)田地，開(kāi)始采摘小花。這就像重拾我的童年記憶。我記得我曾經(jīng)和爸爸一起坐著，串起花鏈，授予對(duì)方傻傻的頭銜：垃圾食品女王和邋遢大王。我笑地很開(kāi)心。那些閃亮的黃色花朵讓我想起了Rosa的嬰兒房里的顏色。她醒著嗎？我在想。續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段：SuddenlyIsawtwofamiliarfigureswalkingtowardsme.

續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段：Rosawaswideawakeinherbabybasketbesidethepicnicblanket.突然，我看到兩個(gè)熟悉的身影向我走來(lái)。Rosa在野餐毯子旁邊的嬰兒籃中醒著。主要內(nèi)容：妹妹Rosa的出生不僅霸占了我的房間，還有爸爸媽媽的陪伴，我非常嫉妒我妹妹。阿姨通過(guò)親身經(jīng)歷告訴我，需要時(shí)間才能成長(zhǎng)成一位大姐姐。Problem:

我如何消除對(duì)Rosa的嫉妒，并學(xué)會(huì)接受和喜愛(ài)她。文本特點(diǎn)話題為親情類，學(xué)生較為熟悉，矛盾沖突明顯。文本中較多環(huán)境、動(dòng)作和情緒等細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)。學(xué)生習(xí)作問(wèn)題1.

難以讀懂原文，理解原文情節(jié)2.

沒(méi)有很好抓住原文矛盾沖突3.

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Behindhershopwasafielddottedwithspringflowers.Steppingintothefield,Ibegantopicklittleflowers.Itwaslikegatheringmychildhoodmemories.IrememberedhowI'dsitwithDad,makingflowerchains,crowning(授予)eachotherwiththesilliesttitles:QueenofJunkFoodandKingofMess.Mysmilegrewwider.TheshiningyellowflowersremindedmeofthecolorinRosa's

babyroom.Wassheawake?Iwondered.她的店鋪后面是一片春花盛開(kāi)的田野。走進(jìn)田野，我開(kāi)始摘小花。這就像收集我的童年記憶。我記得我是如何和爸爸坐在一起，做花鏈，授予彼此擁有最愚蠢的頭銜：垃圾食品女王和混亂之王。我的笑容越來(lái)越燦爛。閃閃發(fā)光的黃色花朵讓我想起了羅莎嬰兒房里的顏色。她醒著嗎？我想知道。進(jìn)展:Then,whathappened?IheadedforflowershopwithauntIhelpedmyauntarrangeflowersauntsuggestedItakeawalkoutsideIbegantopicklittleflowerswonderedRosawasawakeConflicts:IenviedRosabecausemyoldroomwastransformedintoherbabyroom,andmumanddadwereenjoyingRosaathomewithoutme.Solutions:Ilearnedfromaunt'swordsandlearnedtobeabigsister.Theme:Lovebetweenfamilies語(yǔ)言積累：Readforlanguage環(huán)境描寫(xiě)B(tài)utnowitwastransformedintoherbabyroom,decoratedlikeagirl’sroomwithpinksandyellows.Wearrivedattheshop,awaveofcolourandsweetsmellwashingoverme.Behindhershopwasafielddottedwithspringflowers.Steppingintothefield,Ibegantopicklittleflowers.Itwaslikegatheringmy.TheshiningyellowflowersremindedmeofthecolorinRosa'sbabyroom.動(dòng)作、心理和話語(yǔ)描寫(xiě)Iusedtolovethis,buttodayIwassooverewithtirednessandenvy."Notmuch,sinceRosathealarmclockwasinstalled(安裝).Iplainedwithahugeyawn(哈欠)."ButyouandMumseemsoclose,"Isaid,guiltilyhidingawaymyenvyofRosa.Nowweare.Butittookmeyearstogrowintotheroleofbigsister.Fewflowersblossom(綻)overnight,youknow."Shepulledmeinforasidehug,glancingupattheclock,andsuggestedItakeawalkoutside.Mysmilegrewwider.參考范文：SuddenlyIsawtwofamiliarfigureswalkingtowardsme.Itwasmyparents

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babybasket.

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flowerbasket.IfeltatuginmychestasIsawthem,realizinghowmuchI'dmissedtheirpany.

Theyweresmiling,lookingalittlewearybutfullofadorationforthetinybeingthathadturnedourlivesupsidedown.

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thoughIwasconsumedwithjealousyjustmomentsago,seeingthemapproach,

Ifeltarushofmixedemotions—resentmentandexpectation.Rosawaswideawakeinherbabybasketbesidethepicnicblanket.

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glancedaroundthesurroundingswithcuriosity.

Whenshecaughtsightofme,shestared

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sharingmylifewithmylittlesisterwouldnotbeasbad