-2024屆高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫 我漸漸接納了我的妹妹 講義素材

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Inthespringsun,myauntandIheadedforherflowershop.NormallyIwouldbedelightedtohelpinhershop,butnotrecentlybecauseofRosa.Rosawasmysister,justonemonthold,whowassettledinmyoldbedroom.Fortenyears,thesmallroomwasfullofmytoysandbooks.Butnowitwastransformedintoherbabyroom,decoratedlikeagardenwithpinksandyellows.Myspace,myoldlife,wasgone.“Hereweare!”

Wearrivedattheshop,awaveofcolourandsweetsmellwashingoverme.MyauntsaidIcouldpicksomeflowersforMumandDad.Iusedtolovethis,buttodayIwassoovercomewithtirednessandenvy.WhybothertobringthemflowerswhentheywereenjoyingRosaathomewithoutme?

SilentlyIhelpedmyauntarrangeflowers.

“Yourmumtoldmetherehasn’tbeenmuchshuteyerecentlyforanyofyou.”“Notmuch,sinceRosathealarmclockwas

installed(安裝),”I

complainedwithahugeyawn(哈欠).“Irememberhaving

to

creep(躡手躡腳地走)

aroundlikeaworn-outmousewhenyourmumwasababy.Ispentthefirstmonthshatinghersomuch.”“ButyouandMumseemsoclose,”

Isaid,guiltilyhidingawaymyenvyofRosa.“Nowweare.Butittookmeyearstogrowintotheroleofbigsister.Fewflowersblossom(綻放)overnight,youknow.”

Shepulledmeinforasidehug,glancingupattheclock,andsuggestedItakeawalkoutside.

Behindhershopwasafielddottedwithspringflowers.Steppingintothefield,Ibegantopicklittleflowers.Itwaslikegatheringmychildhoodmemories.IrememberedhowI’dsitwithDad,makingflowerchains,crowning(授予)

eachotherwiththesilliesttitles:QueenofJunkFoodandKingofMess.Mysmilegrewwider.TheshiningyellowflowersremindedmeofthecolorinRosa’sbabyroom.Wassheawake?Iwondered.注意：1.

續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.

請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Para1:SuddenlyIsawtwofamiliarfigureswalkingtowardsme.Para2:Rosawaswideawakeinherbabybasketbesidethepicnicblanket.試題分析:本文是一篇記敘文，主題是人與自我，話題為家庭溫情類。過去“我”有-一個(gè)幸福的童年，但是現(xiàn)在，家里添了--個(gè)小妹妹，的臥室被改成我”妹妹的嬰兒房我”自認(rèn)為受到冷落，失去了生活空間和父母的愛。-一個(gè)春日，我”在姨媽家的花田里采花時(shí)的阿姨提到了她自己作為姐姐的經(jīng)我歷，并解釋了親密關(guān)系的建立需要時(shí)間。該故事告訴我們:家庭幸福離不開個(gè)人角色的承擔(dān)。續(xù)寫文章體現(xiàn)了要承擔(dān)責(zé)任和關(guān)愛家人的道德觀與價(jià)值觀，適合高中生寫作續(xù)寫情節(jié)發(fā)展：-爸爸媽媽來到我身邊，還有Rosa.回想阿姨的話，我想我需要時(shí)間來接納我的小妹妹，成為一名合格的姐姐。我小心翼翼地插花，為爸爸媽媽還有我那可愛的妹妹。-妹妹醒了。她那可愛的神態(tài)將我的心融化了。我溫柔地將她抱起，感受她地溫暖和香氣，當(dāng)我看向她的眼睛，我感覺她比這世上的一切都珍貴。官方范文，

SuddenlyIsawtwofamiliarfigureswalkingtowardsme.

“Lookwho'shere!”mydadexclaimedwithasmile,holdingRosawithababybasket.TheyellowflowersinmyhandseemedtoglowevenbrighterasIgazedatthebeautifullittlegirl,Icouldn'thelprecallingwhatmyaunttoldme.Iknewthatitwouldtaketimeformetoadjusttosharingmyparents’attentionandmyoldroom,butIwasdeterminedtobethebestbigsisterIcouldbe.ThenIcarefullyarrangedtheyellowflowersintoasmallbouquetandhandedittomymomwithasmile.“TheseareforyouandDad,andalsoforRosa,"Isaid,feelingawarmthinmychestthathadbeenmissingearlier.

Rosawaswideawakeinherbabybasketbesidethepicnicblanket.

Herbigblueeyeswereopen,takingintheworldaroundher.AsIwatchedmylittlesister,Icouldn'thelpbutfeelasenseofwonderandamazementathowperfectshewas.Igentlypickedherupandheldherclose,feelingherwarmthandbreathinginthesweetscentofherhair.Iknewthatfromnowon,mylifewouldneverbethesame.Iwouldnolongerbethecenterofattention,andIwouldhavetosharemyparentswiththisbeautifullittlecreature.ButasIlookedintoRosa'seyes,Iknewthatitwasallworthit.Shewasmyfamily,andIlovedhermorethananythingintheworld.參考范文一，

SuddenlyIsawtwofamiliarfigureswalkingtowardsme.

ItturnedouttobeMomandDad,withabigbasketandotherbulkybagshangingontheirarms.“Theydidn’tevenaskmetobehere,”Ithoughtbitterly,feelinglikeanabandonedchild.Outofangerandfrustration,Ihidbehindabigtree,determinedtoseehowcoldtheywouldbe.Momanddadsoonstoppedatagrassyfield,putdowntheirbaggages,tookoutablanket,andproducedmorefruitsandsnacksonebyone.Theytalkedandlaughed,whichmadememorejealous.Suddenly,aloudcrycamefromthebasket.

Rosawaswideawakeinherbabybasketbesidethepicnicblanket.

Momhurriedlystoppedwhatshewasdoing,huggedhergentlyandhummedasongtocomforther,whiledadmadefaces,tryingtomakehersmileagain.ButRosakeptcryingsointenselythatIbegantoworryabouther.BeforeIknewit,Icamefrombehindthetreeandcomforted,“Rosa,I’mhere.”Asifinmagic,Rosastoppedcryingandgiggledatme,whichmadeallofussignwithrelief.ItwasatthatmomentthatIfeltthebondbetweensheandmeandthelovebegantotakerootinme.Itmighttakemealongtime

toacceptherandsharemylifewithherbutIknewIwasontheway.

參考范文二，

SuddenlyIsawtwofamiliarfigureswalkingtowardsme.

Itwasmomanddad,onepushingthestrollerandtheothercarryingalotofpicnicstuff.Onseeingme,theywavedatmehappilyandshoutedwarmly,“Whatasurprise!”Surprisingly,myangerandenvywereimmediatelyputout.IjoggedforwardandpresentedthemproudlytheflowersIhadjustpickedup.“Howbeautifultheyare!Thankyou!”Momsniffedandstrokedmyhairgently.ThenwefoundaplacetosetthepicnicblanketandIwaseagertocheckRosa.

Rosawaswideawakeinherbabybasketbesidethepicnicblanket.

MumhandedmeRosa,andIcouldn’thelpbutmarvelathertinyfingersandcuriouseyes.Thenmomsharedstoriesofmyearlydays,highlightingthechallengestheyfacedandthejoystheyexperienced.Dadadded,withlaughtersburstingfromtimetotime.Immersedinthestories,Ifelthappinessands