【知識(shí)精講精研】高一上學(xué)期英語(yǔ)通知類作文講評(píng)案例課件

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注意事項(xiàng)提醒12341.題目分析2.結(jié)構(gòu)框架3.內(nèi)容4.書寫規(guī)范（一）明確作文類型：求助信、邀請(qǐng)信、申請(qǐng)信、建議信、感謝信、道歉信、告知信、慰問(wèn)信、咨詢信、推薦信、報(bào)道通知一、題目分析通知：以布告的形式貼出，把事情通知給有關(guān)人員。內(nèi)容要齊全，對(duì)象、緣由、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等一定要明確。語(yǔ)言總體要簡(jiǎn)明、條理清晰。根據(jù)通知內(nèi)容決定語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格：學(xué)校會(huì)議通知、社團(tuán)納新......（二）明確作者身份（立場(chǎng)）：我是誰(shuí)？我以什么身份寫？AlwaysLiHua？個(gè)人名義

學(xué)校名義社團(tuán)名義......（三）培養(yǎng)讀者意識(shí)：寫給誰(shuí)？為何寫？（寫什么？）（四）明確題目要求：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)？字?jǐn)?shù)？有無(wú)提示？假定你是李華，你所負(fù)責(zé)的英文俱樂(lè)部現(xiàn)面向高一新生招新。請(qǐng)你在校英文網(wǎng)站上以俱樂(lè)部的名義發(fā)一則通知，內(nèi)容包括：1.招新的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；2.加入俱樂(lè)部的要求；3.歡迎同學(xué)們踴躍參加。注意：寫作詞數(shù)為80詞左右。參考詞匯：招新recruitment二、結(jié)構(gòu)框架結(jié)構(gòu)框架三、內(nèi)容：涵蓋要點(diǎn)、邏輯連貫、語(yǔ)法正確、單詞正確第一段內(nèi)容第1句：活動(dòng)舉辦的緣由（包含承辦人信息）Inorderto/Aimedatdoingsth/Withtheaimofdoingsth.,...為了招募新成員，我校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部決定面向高一新生舉行招募活動(dòng)。Aimedatrecruitingnewmembers,ourEnglishClubhasdecidedtoholdarecruitmentactivityforfreshmeninhighschool.

吸引人們對(duì)...的興趣arouseone’sinterestin...提高人們對(duì)...的意識(shí)raise/increasepeople’sawarenessof...讓你的校園生活多姿多彩makeyourschoollifecolourful/enrichyourschoollife第一段內(nèi)容第2句：活動(dòng)的時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)Theactivitywillbeheldin/on（地點(diǎn)/時(shí)間）Themeetingisscheduled/expected/duetobeheld.......

from8:00amto10:00amonThursday,May3,2019.

...at8:00a.m.nextTuesday.

本次活動(dòng)計(jì)劃于下周日下午三點(diǎn)在演講廳舉辦。Theevent/activityisscheduledtobeheldnextSundayat3p.m.inthelecturehall.

第二段內(nèi)容第3\4\5句：活動(dòng)的要求---俱樂(lè)部要求(銜接句，概括）Thereareseveralrequirementsyouneedtosatisfy/meet.First,youareexpected/encouragedto

dosth./youarenotallowedto...Second,youwouldbetter(not)dosth...

第3句：如果你想要加入我們俱樂(lè)部，你需要遵守我們的規(guī)則。Ifyouwanttojoinourclub,youneedtofollow/obeythefollowingrules.第4句：首先，成員們需要出席會(huì)議并且積極參與俱樂(lè)部活動(dòng)。Tobeginwith,membersareexpectedtoattendmeetingsandtakepartactivelyinclubactivities.第5句：此外，你不允許用漢語(yǔ)與其他成員交流。Inaddition/additionally,youarenotallowedtocommunicatewithothermembersinChinese.第三段內(nèi)容第6句-8句：結(jié)尾，歡迎加入，表示感謝。如果你對(duì)這次活動(dòng)感興趣，或者想擁有一次全新的經(jīng)歷，快點(diǎn)加入我們吧。感謝你的關(guān)注。Ifyouareinterestedinthisactivity,andarewillingtohaveawholenewexperience,pleasedonothesitatetojoinus.

Thankyouforyourattention.It’sverykindofyoutoreadthisnotice.Wewillbegratefulifyoujoinus.Wearelookingforwardtoyourcoming.

NoticeAimedatrecruitingnewmembers,ourEnglishClubhasdecidedtoholdarecruitmentactivityforfreshmeninhighschool.ItisscheduledtobeheldnextSundayat3p.m.inthelecturehall.

Ifyouwanttojoinourclub,youneedtoobeythefollowingrules.Tobeginwith,membersareexpectedtoattendmeetingsandtakepartactivelyinclubactivities.Inaddition,youarenotallowedtocommunicatewithothermembersinChinese.Ifyouareinterestedinthisactivity,andarewillingtohaveawholenewexperience,pleasedonothesitatetojoinus.Wearelookingforwardtoyourcoming.EnglishClubSeptember14th,2023