2023年全國高考1卷讀后續(xù)寫-我的英文寫作之路講義高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

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WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacherencouragedmetoenterforawritingcontest.IdidnotlovewritingandmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicasanoralreport—aoneactplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.

Noonelaughedharderthanhe.

So,whytodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Andifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”

IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.Thestorywouldestraightfromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantnotion/idea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.

Whatdidthehorsethink,asheripped/gotthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere’sfabled/imaginaryhorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Withadictionary.Ienlisted/askedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.IcheckedoutahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.

WhenIhandedinthefinishedessay,myteacherreadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.Andnoname.Entriesareanonymous（匿名的）.”Iwroteitagain.Andagainandagain.IfIdidn’twin,Ididn’tcare.Paragraph1:WhenIalmostforgotthecontest,thenewscame.Paragraph2:Iwenttotheteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.寫作指導(dǎo)TheFive

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MountainWhenWhenIwasinmiddleschool.WhoMysocialstudiesteacherandI.WhyMyteacherencouragedmetoenterawritingcontestWhatWhenIfinallyfinishedmyessay,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.Myteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.MyteachersaidhelovedmystoryandencouragedmeIchosethesubjectandbegantowritepolishedmyessayagainandagain.Afewweekslater.whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.弱點(diǎn)X抗?fàn)?角色轉(zhuǎn)變沖突?轉(zhuǎn)變?>主旨?P1:續(xù)寫思路Whatwasthenews?DidIwinthepetition?HowdidIfeelwhenhearingthenews?Whathappenedontheawardpresentation?P2:續(xù)寫思路WhydidIgototheteacher'soffice?WhatwouldIsaytomyteacher?Whatwouldmyteachersaytome?Whatisthether?下水文1

Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,

thereethenews."Congratulations!youwonthefirstprizeinthewritingcontest."mydeskmaterushedtomudeskwitheyesglisteningexcitement.Uponhearingthisamazingnews,Iwasstuckdumbwithsurprise.ThethunderousapplauseandheartfeltblessingsfrommyfellowstudentsfirmedwhatIheared

tobetrue.Finallycamethebigday!

Withprizecupinonehandandawardandcertificateinotherhand,awaveofgratitudetomyteacherrosefromthebottomofmyheart.

Intheabsenceof

without

myteacher'sinspiration,Icantmakesucharemarkableachievement.

Iwenttomyteacher'sofficeaftertheawardpresentation."Unbelievable!Imadeit！

Iexclaimed，pleasedbeyounddescription.

HegrinnedfromeartoearasIshowedhimthetrophy.

“AswhatIsaidifyouarewillingtoapplyyourselfintowritingyou'lleventuallymake

it!"Wheneverlooking

backonthisincident.Ifeelextremelygratefultohim.

JustlikeRevere'shorse,nomatter

howdifficultthechallengesIfaced

were,Ialways

keptgoingandnevergiveup!下水文2

A

fewweekslater.whenIalmostforgetthe

contest,

thereethenews.AssoonasI

walkedintotheclassroom.IwasinformedthatIhadwonthefirstprizeandanawardpresentationwouldbeheldinthreedays.Hearingthis

greatnews,Iwasstuckdumbwithsurpriseandthenwildwithjoy.Finallyethebigday

!whenIwasreallyonthestageondawardedthefirstprize,my

eyesshinedwithpuredelightandpride.MyclassmatesandsociolteachersatunderthestageandcheeredwarmIy.

I

wenttomy

teacher'sofficeoftertheawardpresentation.

ThenIwentuptohimandsaidsincerely"IneverthoughtIcouldactuallydoitand

nowIseemtofallinlovewithwriting.""Congrotulations!

"herepliedseriously"I

Knowhowtalentedyouareandhowhardyou'veworkedtomanageit.Youareboundtobesuccessfulsoonerondlaterinmyeyes.

Sincethen,

hiswordsjustlikealighthouseinthemist,wouldalways

lightinmysky.下水文3

Afewweekslater,whenIalmost

forgetthecontest,therecamethenews.ItwasexhilaratedtolearnthatIhadgainedthefirstprizeandanawardceremonywouldbeheldinthreedays.Immediately,thunderousapplauseresoundedfromtheclassmates,

Istunnedbythenews.

While

gavingmyacceptancespeech,Iwas

seemlyontheninecloud.

Isteppedontothepodiumwithatroubledheartanddeliveredmymostsincerewords.

Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresention.AssoonasIwalkedintotheteacher'soffice,thevoiceofcongratuationsfrommy

teacherrangout.Hardworks

alwayspayoff,I'mgladtoseethefruitsofyourhardwork.Iboweddeeplytotheteacherwithgratitude"Ifitweren'tforyourtrust,IbelieveIwouldn'thavehadsuchasuccessfuloute!”Wordsfailedto

conveymygratitudetohim.

Itwashewhomademerealizenothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.下水文4

Afewweekslater,whenIolmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenewsMy

classmatescongratulatedmethatIwonthesecondprizeatthewritingcontest,mydeskmaterushedtomydeskwitheyesglistening

excitementandMyjowdroppedtotheflooratthattime.Finallycamethebigday!Whenmy

headmasterannouncedthatIwonthesecondprize,myheartpounding

widelyinmy

chest.TherewasastormofapplcusewhenIwentontheplotform.Ilookedatmyprise

andsmiledwithrelief.

Iwenttomyteacher'sofficeafterawardpresentationWithouthesitation，Iexclaimed,"Unbelievable!Imadeit!Myteachersaid:"Youdidagoodjob!AswhatIsaid,ifyou'rewillingtoapplyyourselfintowriting,you'lleventuallydoit!Ithinkyoulikethehorsethatinyourstory!Anditleadyoutowontheprize.Keepgoingandyouwillwonthefirstprizenexttime!”

OnlythendidIrealizedthatitwaspersistencethatcanconquerwhateverdifficultiescameintheway!

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Afewweekslater,

whenIalmostforgetthecontest,therecamethenews.ItwasexhilaratedtolearnthatIhadgainedthefirstprize.Ifeltmyheartracingandmy

bloodrushing.Attheawardceremony，Imountedthestageagainstwidecheersandthunderousapplauswhenmynamewasannounced.Joywaswellingupandsurgingthroughtmyheart.Iheldtrophyandcanhardlywaittosharethedelightwithmyteacher.

Iwenttomyteachers'officeaftertheawardpresentation.“Iwonthefirstprize!”Ishowedmycertificatetohim.

Helookedatthetrophy,withhislips

curvinga

smile."Congratulations!"hesaid,"

Itisyoureffortsthatcountmost.”

Fromthenon，IbegantoburymyselfinEnglishaswellasEnglishwriting,forever

gratefultomyteacher

whoalwaysheldroseswitheverlastingfragrance.下水文6

Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.

Whentheresultswereannounced

that

myessayonRevere'shorsewonthefirstprize

andaceremonywouldbeheldintwodays,cheersrangthroughtheentireclass.Iwaspletelytakenabackbythenews,myheartracingandmymi