讀后續(xù)寫愛的傳遞講義-高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Walkingonthestreet,thebittercoldofaDecemberdayinWashington,D.C.wasruiningmymood.ThetemperaturewasbelowzerosoIduckedintothesubwaystation,hopingtogetwarm.走在街上，華盛頓特區(qū)12月的一天的嚴(yán)寒破壞了我的心情。氣溫低于零度，所以我躲進(jìn)地鐵站，希望能暖和一下。

WarmthcametomybodyasIsettledontoabenchwithacupofhotcoffee.NowIwasreadytorelaxanddosomeseriouspeoplewatching.Inoticedahomelessmanseaatednearby.Thepleasantsmellofdeliciousfoodfromthesubwayfoodcourt(美食廣場)wastemptingmetoconsideranearlydinner.Fromthelonginglookinmyneighbor’seyesitwasobviousthathe,too,noticedthegoodsmell.Iwonderedhowlongithadbeensincehehadeatenanything,expectinghewouldapproachmeforahandout(施舍).Butheneverdid.

當(dāng)我坐在長椅上，端著一杯熱咖啡時，溫暖涌上了我的身體。現(xiàn)在我準(zhǔn)備放松一下，做一些嚴(yán)肅的事情觀看。我注意到一個流浪漢在附近游蕩。從地鐵美食廣場傳來的美味可口的氣味(美食廣場)誘惑我考慮早點吃晚飯。從我鄰居渴望的眼神中可以明顯看出，他也注意到了這種好聞的味道。我想知道他有多久沒有吃東西了，期待著他會來找我分發(fā)食物(施舍).但他從來沒有這么做過。Myheadandheartwerebattlingitout:theformertellingmetomindmyownbusiness,andthelatterurgingmetomakeanimmediatetriptothefoodcourtforhim.我的頭腦和心靈都在掙扎：前者告訴我少管閑事，后者敦促我立即為他去美食廣場。

Whilethisinnerdebatewasfierce,awelldressedyoungcouplesuddenlyapproached.“Excuseme,sir,”beganthehusband.“Wejustfinishedeatingandourappetitewasn'tasbigaswethought.Wehatetowastefood.Canyouhelpusoutandputthistogooduse?”Thekindstrangerhandedalargecontainerwithfood.“Thankyou."camethegratefulreply.FeelinggoodaboutwhatIhadseen,butdisappointedbymyownlackofaction,Iobservedmyneighbor’sresponsetohissuddengoodfort正當(dāng)這場內(nèi)心的爭論激烈時，一對衣著考究的年輕夫婦突然走近?！皩Σ黄穑壬?，”丈夫開始說?！拔覀儎偝酝?，食欲并沒有想象中那么大。我們討厭浪費食物。你能幫我們把這個好好利用一下嗎？”好心的陌生人遞給一個裝食物的大容器。“謝謝你?！备屑さ幕卮饋砹恕Ｎ覍λ吹降囊磺懈械胶芎?，但對自己沒有采取行動感到失望，我觀察了鄰居對他突然好運的反應(yīng)。une.

Heliftedthesoup,cuppinghishandsaroundthesteamingbowl.Itwasobviousthathewasgoingtoenjoythismiraclemeal.Heopenedmouthandsuddenly,hestopped.他端起湯，雙手環(huán)抱著熱氣騰騰的碗。很明顯，他將享受這頓神奇的大餐。他張大嘴巴，突然停了下來。

Thereasonforthisunexpectedbehaviorsoonbecameclear.Enteringthehallwasanewarrival,inhisseventies,hatlessandgloveless.Hislightweightjacketwasapoorprotectionagainstcold.Hisfaceandhandswereredanddamaged.Peoplearoundfocusedonhimwithpityandwhisperedatthissadsight.這種出乎意料的行為的原因很快就清楚了。走進(jìn)大廳的是一位七十多歲的新來者，他沒有戴帽子，也沒有戴手套。他那件輕便的夾克御寒能力很差。他的臉和手都紅了，有損傷。周圍的人都憐憫地注視著他，聽到這悲傷的景象輕聲細(xì)語。注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。文章大意；十二月的華盛頓很冷，我躲在地鐵暖和。旁邊的鄰居是一位流浪漢，顯然他和我一樣注意到了旁邊美食廣場的食物傳出來的香味。正猶豫要不要帶他去美食廣場吃頓大餐。這時走來一對老夫婦，他們委婉的表達(dá)自己食量不大，想要鄰居幫他們解決剩下的食物。流浪漢鄰居剛要舉起碗將熱湯喝掉，他注意新來的一位流浪者，他年齡很大，沒戴帽子和手套。情節(jié)續(xù)寫發(fā)展：第一段：我的鄰居很快把他那神奇的飯菜放在一邊，讓老人坐在同一個座位上。他指著飯菜說：“你能幫我嗎？”然后把熱氣騰騰的那杯湯放在陌生人手里?？吹竭@一幕，我非常感動。第二段：我端著熱氣騰騰的湯和三明治走近他們。周圍的人對我報以贊許的微笑?！澳隳軒臀覇?？”我問道?！盀槭裁床荒?？”他開玩笑地補(bǔ)充道。直到那天，我才真正學(xué)會了分享的意義。官方范文：

Myneighborwastheonlyonetakingaction.

Quicklypullingasidehismiraclemeal,myneighborleapedupandguidedtheelderlymantosharetheseat.Numbwithcold,theoldmandidn’texpectedtheinvitation,movingclumsily.Hardlyhadheseatedhimself,myneighbortenderlyputhisdownjacketovertheolderman’sshoulders,

slippinghisarmsintosleeves.Finally,hesaid“Canyouhelpmeout?”pointingtothemealandplacingthesteamingcupofsoupinthestranger’shands.Seeingthis,myheadandheartstoppedbattlingandIhadmydecision.

TearsblurredmyvisionwhenIwenttobuyfoodfromthefoodcourt.

Whatmyneighboursaidexactlyspokemymind.Withregret,Ifeltobligedtodothesame.

Respectfullyandcautiously,Iapproachedthemwithsteamingsoupandsandwich.

Peoplearoundcastanapprovingsmileinmydirection.“Canyouhelpmeout?”Iasked.

“Whynot?”headdedjokingly,“Butonlyifyougohalfwaywithmeonthatsandwich,

whichistoomuchforamanmyage.”Itwasn’tuntilthatdaythatItrulylearnedthemeaningofsharing.IleftthesubwaystationfeelingwarmerthanIhadeverthoughtpossible.參考范文一，

Myneighborwastheonlyonetotakeaction.

Withouthesitation,hegesturedtheoldmantositdownandpresentedhimthestreamingsoup.“Ithinkyoucantakethis,”hesmiled,hisvoicetingedwithpassionandrespect.Takenabackbythesuddenoffer,theoldmanhesitated.“Thankyou,sir.”Hemurmuredandtookthewarmsoup.Atfirst,hejustsippedthesoupbitandbitandsoongulpedthemall.Myneighborjustsatthere,watchingthewholescenesmilingly,butIcouldseethenoveltyofhim.Hewasneedyhimself,butheofferedwhatheonlyhadtoamoreneedyman.

TearsblurredmyvisionwhenIwenttobuyfoodinfoodcourt.

BuyingfoodforthemwastheleastIcoulddo.Deepdown,Iwasashamedofmycowardlinesstoofferhelpactively.NonoonerhadIgotoutfromthecourtthanIdelivered

themtomyneighborandtheoldman.“Ibuytheseforaparty,butnowitiscancelled.Canyoutaketheseforme?”Imadeupanexcuseawkwardly,shyingavoidinghiseyes.Theyjustacceptedithappilyandexpressedgratitudeoverandoveragain.

AsIkeptwalking,thewarmthsceneoftheirkindbehaviorlingeredinmymind,drivingawayallcoldness.

參考范文二，

Myneighborwastheonlyonetakingaction.

Heaskedtheoldmantositdownbesidehim,whostoodtherewithapuzzledlook,shiveringagainthechill.Myneighborjustapproachedhimandhelpedhimsitdown.Thenheextendedthewarmsouptotheoldman.Shockedandhappy,theoldmantookit.Butinsteadoftakingitall,hesaid,“l(fā)et’sgohalfandhalf”.Withanunspokenunderstanding,theysmiledandsippedthesoupseparately.Movedbythescene,Icouldn'tignorethe