讀后續(xù)寫專題有關(guān)俗語的運(yùn)用3課件-高考英語作文復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Mymother’sgiftAdandelion(蒲公英)inmydictionaryalwaysremindsmeofmylunchtimeswithmymother.WhenIwasinthethirdgrade,Iwaspickedtobetheprincessintheschoolplay,andforweeksmymotherhadpainstakingly(費(fèi)力地)practisedmylineswithme.ButnomatterhoweasilyIdeliveredthemathome,assoonasIsteppedonstage,everyworddisappearedfrommyhead.Finally,myteachertookmeaside.Sheexplainedthatshehadwrittenanarrator’sparttotheplay,andaskedmetoswitchroles.Ididn’ttellmymotherwhathadhappenedwhenIwenthomeforlunchthatday.Butshesensedmyunease,andinsteadofsuggestingwepracticemylines,sheaskedifIwantedtowalkintheyard.Itwasalovelyspringdayandtheroseleaveswereturninggreen.Wecouldseeyellowdandelionspoppingthroughthegrassinbunches,asifapainterhadtouchedourlandscapewithalittlebitofgold.Iwatchedmymothercasuallybenddownbyoneofthedandelions.“IthinkI’mgoingtodigupalltheseweeds,”shesaid,suddenlypullingaflowerupbyitsroots.“Fromnowon,we’llhaveonlyrosesinthisgarden.”“ButIlikedandelions,”Iprotested.“Allflowersarebeautiful—evendandelions.”Mymotherlookedatmeseriously.“Yes,everyflowergivespleasureinitsownway,doesn’tit?”sheaskedthoughtfully.Inodded,pleasedthatIhadwonherover.“Andthatistrueofpeopletoo,”sheadded.“Noteveryonecanbeaprincess,butthereisnoshameinthat.”Relievedthatshehadguessedmypain,IstartedtocryasItoldherwhathadhappened.“Butyouwillbeabeautifulnarrator,”shesaid,remindingmeofhowmuchIlovedtoreadstoriesaloudtoher.“Thenarrator’spartisasimportantasthepartofaprincess.”O(jiān)verthenextfewweeks,withherconstantencouragement,Ilearnedtotakeprideintherole.LunchtimeswerespentreadingovermylinesandtalkingaboutwhatIwouldwear.注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Backstageonthenightoftheperformance,Ifeltnervous.

____________________________________________Aftertheplay,ItookhometheflowerIhadplacedinthepocket.

____________________________________________二、續(xù)寫情節(jié)構(gòu)思（一）充分理解兩段續(xù)寫的首句，結(jié)合前文，合理構(gòu)思每段2個(gè)情節(jié)。1.由第一段首句Backstageonthenightoftheperformance,Ifeltnervous.（演出當(dāng)晚的后臺(tái)，我感到很緊張。）可知，第一段可描寫作者是如何克服緊張以及完美完成表演的，即續(xù)寫線索：感到緊張——發(fā)現(xiàn)蒲公英——恢復(fù)平靜——完成演出。2.由第二段首句Aftertheplay,ItookhometheflowerIhadplacedinthepocket.（演出結(jié)束后，我把放在口袋里的花帶回家。）可知，第二段可描寫作者把花收藏起來，對(duì)母親心存感激。即續(xù)寫線索保存蒲公英——感謝母親。（二）充分理解前文，注意“伏筆”情節(jié)，在續(xù)寫中呼應(yīng)；劃出前文的好詞佳句，適切用于續(xù)寫。1.Adandelion(蒲公英)inmydictionaryalwaysremindsmeofmylunchtimeswithmymother.在我的字典里的一朵蒲公英讓我時(shí)時(shí)想起和媽媽在一起的午餐時(shí)間。2.Andforweeksmymotherhadpainstakinglypracticedmylineswithme.媽媽煞費(fèi)苦心地給我練習(xí)臺(tái)詞。2.ButnomatterhoweasilyIdeliveredthemathome,assoonasIsteppedonstage,everyworddisappearedfrommyhead.但是，不管在家里怎么背得滾瓜爛熟，只要一上舞臺(tái)，我的腦子里就成了一片空白。3.Butshesensedmyunease.

但是，她感覺到我的不舒服。三、文末點(diǎn)題句文末（通常是結(jié)尾句，但視具體行文，可能在接近結(jié)尾處）為點(diǎn)題句，升華故事蘊(yùn)含的正能量意義，比如本文主題是“Everyflowergivespleasureinitsownway.(每朵花以自己的方式給人帶來愉悅。)”

或“Thenarrator’spartisasimportantasthepartofaprincess.(敘述者角色和公主角色一樣重要。)”或“母親的持續(xù)鼓勵(lì)幫助孩子樹立信心?！盉ackstageonthenightoftheperformance,

Ifeltnervous.

I

struggledtomemorize

thewordsintheplay

painstakingly.Suddenly,Ifeltthattherewassomethinginmypocket.Takingitoutofmypocket,Ifoundthat

itwasadandelion.Immediately,Mother'sencouragementoccuredtome.I

saidtomyself,

“I'vepractisedforalongtimetobewellprepared.Icandoit!”Takingadeepbreath,Ibegantoplay,confident.Theplaywasperformedsmoothlyandsuccessfullyandtheaudiencebrokeintoastormofapplause.

BackstagestoodI,hearingtheapplauseandheldingbackmy

exciting

tears.Aftertheplay,Itookhometheflower1hadplacedinthepocket.

ThesecondI

arrivedhome,I

rantomymotherandhuggedhertightlywithtearswellingupinmyeyes.

“I'vemadeit!”

Icriedout.Abigsmileappearing

onherface,shesqueezed

meinherarms,saying.

“It'stheresultofyourtirelesseffort!

Youarethemostdistinguishednarrator!”Itwasmymotherthattaught

metheimportanceofconfidenceinaspecialway.Theroseleavesturngreenandfall.

Adandelion

inmydictionary

alwaysreminds

meofbeingconfident,

whichismymother'sgift

for

methatIwilltreasureforever.

Backstageonthenightoftheperformance,Ifeltnervous.

Myheartbegantoraceandmymindwentblank.Icould

feelmypulsepoundinginmytemplesandmypalmssweating

likecrazy.WhenIfeltalmost

fainted,myteachercameovertome."Yourmotheraskedmeto

givethistoyou."shesaid,passingmeadandelion.WhenIsawit,Iknewmymomwasoutthere.

Mymother'sencouragementand

guide

floodedintomymindimmediately.Itookadeepbreathandcalmeddown.Whenthe

play

started,Iquicklyenteredastateofmind.Iputthe

dandelioninto

mypocketand

performedwonderfullyasa

narrator.Aftertheplay,Itookhometheflower1hadplacedinthepockel.

Mymother

received

thedandelionand

putitinthe

dictionary.

Then

mymotherkeptpraisingmysuccessfulrole.Duringthemeal,mymothersmiledandsaid,"Althoughweareas

inconspicuous

asdandelions,wewillalso

bloomourownuniquebeauty.Afterthat,Ioftenlookbackonourlunchtimestogether,underthesoftsunshine.The

dandelionthatrepresented

mymother'seducationhasalwaysbeenwellkeptinthe

dictionary.Forthis,Iamforevergratefultomymother,because

thesmileonherfaceandhergentlenesshavecultivatedabraveandconfidentpersonlikeme.

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