2024屆高考英語二輪專題復(fù)習(xí)與測(cè)試專題五應(yīng)用文寫作第一課寫作模板與實(shí)戰(zhàn)展示Ⅰ

專題五應(yīng)用文寫作一、題型解讀1.應(yīng)用文寫作主要考查學(xué)生英語語言實(shí)際應(yīng)用能力，測(cè)試學(xué)生在實(shí)際生活情景下運(yùn)用英語傳達(dá)信息、表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的能力，題目側(cè)重英語語言的交際性和實(shí)用性。2.文體包括書信（郵件）、新聞報(bào)道、日記、通知、發(fā)言（演講）稿、倡議書、海報(bào)、說明書、網(wǎng)絡(luò)發(fā)帖等。但近幾年高考進(jìn)一步拓展寫作文體，更新試題呈現(xiàn)形式，設(shè)置更加貼近現(xiàn)實(shí)生活的英語交際任務(wù)情境，增強(qiáng)試題的開放性和靈活性。3.詞數(shù)為80左右，滿分15分。應(yīng)用文通常給出提綱式要點(diǎn)，話題常與學(xué)生的校園生活息息相關(guān)。二、命題透視卷名體裁主題語境素養(yǎng)話題2023·全國(guó)甲卷征文稿人與社會(huì)用英語講中國(guó)故事的征文活動(dòng)投稿2023·全國(guó)乙卷征文稿人與自我描述自己學(xué)習(xí)一項(xiàng)新技能的體驗(yàn)和感受的投稿2023·新課標(biāo)Ⅰ卷建議信人與自我對(duì)外教分組安排的意見和建議命題預(yù)測(cè)本題型的考查除了強(qiáng)調(diào)基礎(chǔ)性外，還將進(jìn)一步增強(qiáng)開放性和靈活性。1.融入中華文化、堅(jiān)定“四個(gè)自信”。命題寫作話題以文化類居多，通過講述中國(guó)故事倡導(dǎo)傳承中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生堅(jiān)定“四個(gè)自信”。2.落實(shí)五育并舉、深化體美勞教育引導(dǎo)。命題形式以活動(dòng)介紹為主，如農(nóng)場(chǎng)活動(dòng)、校園活動(dòng)、跑步活動(dòng)等，情景真實(shí)，貼近學(xué)生生活，加大對(duì)體育運(yùn)動(dòng)與健康意識(shí)、審美情趣和勞動(dòng)精神等的考查。3.關(guān)注社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)，與時(shí)俱進(jìn)，傳播正能量，倡導(dǎo)和諧人際關(guān)系和科學(xué)探索精神。4.借助英語的工具性，拓展國(guó)際視野，助推人類命運(yùn)共同體建設(shè)和跨文化交流。三、賦分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（一）應(yīng)用文評(píng)分細(xì)則1.本題總分為15分，分五個(gè)檔次進(jìn)行評(píng)分。2.評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)主要從內(nèi)容組織、詞匯語法和篇章結(jié)構(gòu)三個(gè)方面考慮。具體為：（1）對(duì)于內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的覆蓋情況以及表述的清楚程度與合理性。（2）使用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性、恰當(dāng)性和多樣性。（3）上下文的銜接和全文的連貫性。3.評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)作答的整體情況初步確定所屬檔次，然后以相應(yīng)檔次的要求來綜合衡量確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。4.評(píng)分注意事項(xiàng)。（1）詞數(shù)少于60或多于100的，從總分中減去2分。（2）單詞拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是寫作規(guī)范的重要方面，評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮，英美不同的拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。書寫較差，以至影響交際的，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。（二）各檔次的給分范圍和要求檔次描述第五檔（13～15分）——覆蓋所有的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)清楚，合理?！獞?yīng)用了豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，有少許錯(cuò)誤，但完全不影響理解。——有效使用語句銜接手段，全文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，意義連貫，完全達(dá)到預(yù)期的寫作目的第四檔（9～12分）——覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)清晰。——應(yīng)用了豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，有些許錯(cuò)誤?！行У厥褂昧苏Z句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊第三檔（7～9分）——雖漏掉了一些內(nèi)容，但覆蓋了主要內(nèi)容。——應(yīng)用了一定的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，有一些錯(cuò)誤?！獞?yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的語句間的連接成分，使全文內(nèi)容連貫第二檔（4～6分）——漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容，寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容。——應(yīng)用了豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，有很多錯(cuò)誤。——只使用了很少語句間的連接成分第一檔（1～3分）——明顯漏掉主要內(nèi)容，寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容，原因可能是未理解試題要求。——應(yīng)用了無關(guān)的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，有太多錯(cuò)誤，嚴(yán)重影響理解?！獩]有銜接，全文意義松散，不連貫，完全未達(dá)到預(yù)期的寫作目的零檔（0分）——未作答或內(nèi)容太少，或所寫內(nèi)容與題目要求完全無關(guān)一、案例現(xiàn)場(chǎng)“冤屈的”四檔作文（得分9分）“體面的”五檔作文（得分14分）DearTom，Iamverydelightedtohearfromyou.Youaskedmeaboutthephysicalexerciseinourschoolandthefollowinginformationmayhelpyouknowmoreaboutit.Tobeginwith，anewstadiumhasbeenbuiltup，andithasbecomethenewlandmarkinourschool.Moreover，withthestadiumsetup，manykindsofsportseventsareabletobeheld，ofwhichPingpong，footballandrunningcompetitionsareverypopular.Asforme，I'minterestedinbasketball.Isincerelyinviteyoutocometoourschoolandseeforyourself.Yours，LiHuaDearTom，Iammorethandelightedtohearfromyou.Youaskedmeaboutthephysicalexerciseinourschooland，Ithink，thefollowinginformationmayhelpyouhaveabetterunderstandingofit.Tobeginwith，anewstadiumhasbeenbuiltup，whichhasbecomethenewlandmarkinourschool.Moreover，thestadiumsetup，awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld，ofwhichPingpong，footballaswellasrunningcompetitionsenjoygreatpopularity.Asforme，I'minterestedinbasketball.Isincerelyinviteyoutocometoourschoolandseeforyourself.Yours，LiHua專家點(diǎn)評(píng)1.左欄作文用詞準(zhǔn)確，分段合理，且使用了with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)和ofwhich引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句等，是一篇相當(dāng)不錯(cuò)的作文。2.右欄升級(jí)后的作文，語言更地道、更自然流暢，可謂妙筆生花，技高一籌。（1）詞匯的提升有五處，特別是haveabetterunderstandingof、awiderangeof及enjoygreatpopularity的使用會(huì)令閱卷老師贊嘆作者深厚的語言功底，同時(shí)也提升了得分檔次。（2）句式的提升有三處，插入語Ⅰthink，which引導(dǎo)的定語從句，以及獨(dú)立主格thestadiumsetup的使用，都恰到好處，相對(duì)于左欄的作文有了大幅度的提升二、策略大營(yíng)策略（一）“包裝”讓詞匯高端起來1.用詞無重復(fù)原則——求雅變異寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)盡量避免重復(fù)使用相同的詞語。恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂猛x詞（組）不僅可以體現(xiàn)雅致的文彩，還有利于增強(qiáng)段落的統(tǒng)一性和連貫性。例如：（1）oldpeople→theelderly/seniorcitizens老人（2）awaytodosth.→anapproachtodoingsth.做某事的方法（3）allkindsof→avarietyof/various/awiderangeof各種各樣的（4）finish→accomplish完成（5）hard/difficult→tough/challenging困難的（6）different→various不同的（7）free→available有空的（8）sorry→upset難過的（9）glad→pleased/delighted/cheerful/joyful高興的（10）inspire→spark激發(fā)，鼓舞（11）bebusywith→beabsorbedin/beoccupiedwith/beengagedin忙于[針對(duì)訓(xùn)練1]同義詞替換。1.Inordertoenrichstudents'after-schoollife，anexhibitionofstudents'traditionalChinesepaintingsisbeingheldbyourschool，whichinspiresagrowinglovefortraditionalart.→Inordertoenrichstudents'after-schoollife，anexhibitionofstudents'traditionalChinesepaintingsisbeingheldbyourschool，whichagrowinglovefortraditionalart.（2021·浙江卷滿分作文）2.DuetoCOVID-19，itisdifficultforfarmerstoselltheirproduce，makingthemveryhopeless.→DuetoCOVID-19，itisforfarmerstoselltheirproduce，makingthemveryhopeless.答案：1.sparks2.tough/challenging2.詞義具體化原則——生動(dòng)貼切寫作中盡量避免使用意義廣泛、模棱兩可的詞，而要根據(jù)語境使用具體生動(dòng)的詞。[針對(duì)訓(xùn)練2]補(bǔ)全句子。1.ListeningtosongsandwatchingmoviesaregoodforimprovingtheirspokenEnglish.→ListeningtosongsandwatchingmoviesimprovingtheirspokenEnglish.（2022·全國(guó)乙卷作文）2.Ialsogotadeeperimpressionfortherolethatplantsplayedinkeepingthebalanceofourecosystem.→Ialsofortherolethatplantsplayedinmaintainingthebalanceofourecosystem（2023·浙江卷）答案：1.arebeneficialto2.gainedagreaterappreciation3.高年級(jí)詞匯優(yōu)先原則——新穎高級(jí)為了表現(xiàn)自己的語言功底，吸引閱卷老師的眼球，應(yīng)盡量使用高年級(jí)階段學(xué)到的詞匯，而不用低年級(jí)階段學(xué)到的詞匯。[針對(duì)訓(xùn)練3]同義詞替換。1.Wearesupposedtoadoptaproperwaytoprotectusfromtheterriblevirus.→Wearesupposedtoadopt________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________usfromtheterriblevirus.2.ThereisallkindsoflocaloperasaroundChina，suchasBeijingOperaandKunOpera.→ThereislocaloperasaroundChina，suchasBeijingOperaandKunOpera.答案：1.anappropriateapproachtoprotecting2.awiderangeof4.短語優(yōu)先原則——湊詞增色用短語代替單詞不僅會(huì)給文章增加亮點(diǎn)，而且用短語湊詞數(shù)也是一個(gè)很好的選擇。（1）形容詞變短語的方法（of＋同根名詞）。veryimportant/useful/valuable/beneficial/helpful→ofvital/greatimportance/use/value/benefit/help（2）動(dòng)詞變短語的方法——替換升級(jí)。動(dòng)詞對(duì)應(yīng)短語know/realizebeawareof/befamiliarwithunderstandfigureout/makesenseofshouldbesupposedtousemakeuseof/takeadvantageofconsidertake...intoaccount/considerationbecomingbeapproaching/bearoundthecornermasterhaveagoodcommandof動(dòng)詞對(duì)應(yīng)短語thankexpressone'ssinceregratitudetorepresentonbehalfofsucceedmakeit/achieveone'sgoalshelpdosb.afavourvalueattachimportancetovisitpayavisittolikebefondof/beinterestedin/becrazyabout/beaddictedto（3）副詞變短語的方法——同義短語替換。副詞對(duì)應(yīng)短語verymorethanproperlyinplacequicklywithoutdelayactuallyasamatteroffactpossiblywheneverpossible[針對(duì)訓(xùn)練4]詞匯升級(jí)。1.ImasterEnglish，whichenablesmetocommunicatewithforeignfriendswell.→I________________________________________________________________________English，whichenablesmetocommunicatewithforeignfriendswell.2.So，itishightimethatwedidallwecantoaffectthesustainabledevelopmentofoceansgreatly.→So，itishightimethatwedidallwecantothesustainabledevelopmentofoceans.（2022·全國(guó)甲卷作文）3.IfallintolovewithEnglish.→I________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________English.（2023·新課標(biāo)Ⅰ卷）1.haveagoodcommandof2.makeahugedifferenceto3.amfondof/aminterestedin/amcrazyabout/amaddictedto策略（二）“換裝”讓句子新穎起來換用句式時(shí)，應(yīng)遵循以下原則：高級(jí)但不造作，多變但不離譜，復(fù)雜但不晦澀。1.特殊句式，風(fēng)景獨(dú)好（1）運(yùn)用強(qiáng)調(diào)句：強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的使用是為了突出強(qiáng)調(diào)句子的某一部分，它是一種比較容易掌握的高級(jí)表達(dá)方式。其構(gòu)成為：①?gòu)?qiáng)調(diào)句型基本結(jié)構(gòu)為“It＋is/was＋被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分＋that/who＋句子其他部分”。②借助于助動(dòng)詞do/does/did對(duì)謂語動(dòng)詞進(jìn)行強(qiáng)調(diào)。[針對(duì)訓(xùn)練5]對(duì)加黑部分進(jìn)行強(qiáng)調(diào)。1.Inmymemory，Youthaccompaniesmethroughmywholehighschool.→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2021·新高考Ⅰ卷滿分作文）2.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.IexpectYouthcanpublishmoreclassicworksandhaveapromisingfuture.→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2021·新高考Ⅰ卷滿分作文）答案：1.Inmymemory，itisYouththataccompaniesmethroughmywholehighschool.2.Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.3.IdoexpectYouthcanpublishmoreclassicworksandhaveapromisingfuture.（2）運(yùn)用倒裝句，以示強(qiáng)調(diào)。在寫作中，倒裝句應(yīng)用比較廣泛，涉及的句型也比較多，包括部分倒裝和全部倒裝。常見的有：①“only＋狀語”置于句首時(shí)，句子用部分倒裝。②none、neither、nor、not、never、hardly、little、seldom等否定詞以及atnotime、bynomeans等短語置于句首時(shí)，句子用部分倒裝。③在so/such...that...結(jié)構(gòu)中，當(dāng)so/such...位于句首時(shí)，其后的句子用部分倒裝。④as、though引起的倒裝句。⑤表方位的副詞或者表地點(diǎn)的介詞短語置于句首且句子的主語是名詞時(shí)，句子用全部倒裝。⑥notonly位于句首，后接句子時(shí)，要求采用部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)，即將該句中謂語的一部分如助動(dòng)詞或情態(tài)動(dòng)詞或系動(dòng)詞倒裝至主語之前。[針對(duì)訓(xùn)練6]句型轉(zhuǎn)換。1.Oceanpollutioncanbedramaticallyhighlightedwitheveryone'sinvolvement.（用only＋介詞短語引起倒裝）.→Onlywitheveryone'sinvolvement______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.（2022·全國(guó)甲卷作文）2.Eachpaircanhaveagoodmatchandeffectivelycommunicatewitheachotherinthisway.→Onlyinthiswayagoodmatchandeffectivelycommunicatewitheachother.（2023·新課標(biāo)Ⅰ卷）3.Moreover，itwillnotonlyimproveourEnglishcommunicationskills，butitwillalsobuildourconfidence.→Moreover，ourEnglishcommunicationskills，butitwillalsobuildourconfidence.（2023·新課標(biāo)Ⅰ卷）4.AnoldtemplewhichdatesbacktoMingDynastystandsatthefootofthemountain.→Atthefootofthemountain________________________________________________________________________，whichdatesbacktoMingDynasty.5.Throughtheexhibition，youcannotonlyadmirewonderfulpictures，butalsounderstandtheartoftraditionalChinesepaintingbetter.→Throughtheexhibition，notonly，butalsounderstandtheartoftraditionalChinesepaintingbetter.（2021·浙江卷滿分作文）答案：1.canoceanpollutionbedramaticallyhighlighted2.caneachpairhave3.notonlywillitimprove4.standsanoldtemple5.canyouadmirewonderfulpictures（3）運(yùn)用省略句，避免不必要的重復(fù)。[針對(duì)訓(xùn)練7]句型轉(zhuǎn)換。1.WhenIfeeldepressed，Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.→________________________________________________________________________，Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.（2021·新高考Ⅰ卷滿分作文）2.Ifitispossible，avoidgoingtocrowdedpublicplacessuchascinemas，shoppingmalls，Internetbarsandsoon.→，avoidgoingtocrowdedpublicplacessuchascinemas，shoppingmalls，Internetbarsandsoon.答案：1.Whenfeelingdepressed2.Ifpossible2.三大句式，編排巧妙（1）運(yùn)用定語從句。[針對(duì)訓(xùn)練8]句型轉(zhuǎn)換。1.WeallknowthatChinesefoodhasbecomeincreasinglypopulararoundtheworld.（用as進(jìn)行轉(zhuǎn)換）→________________________________________________________________________，Chinesefoodhasbecomeincreasinglypopulararoundtheworld.2.Withthefireheating，theboilingoilsuddenlysplashedoutofthehotpan，anditscaredmealot.→Withthefireheating，theboilingoilsuddenlysplashedoutofthehotpan，Ｗ.（2023·全國(guó)乙卷）答案：1.Asisknowntousall2.whichscaredmealot（2）運(yùn)用名詞性從句。[針對(duì)訓(xùn)練9]補(bǔ)全句子。1.________________________________________________________________________（令他吃驚的）isthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.2.Ihavejustfound________________________________________________________________________（我那天下午得參加一個(gè)重要會(huì)議）.3.Wordcame________________________________________________________________________（我們學(xué)校打算舉行一次班會(huì)）whosetopicisrelatedtoChinesetraditionalcustoms.（2021·全國(guó)甲卷滿分作文）答案：1.Whatsurpriseshim2.thatIhavetoattendanimportantmeetingthatafternoon3.thatourschoolisgoingtoholdaclassmeeting（3）運(yùn)用狀語從句。[針對(duì)訓(xùn)練10]補(bǔ)全句子。1.Ifnot，pleaseletmeknow（以便我們做出調(diào)整）accordinglytosuityourschedule.（2022·新高考Ⅰ卷）2.________________________________________________________________________（盡管我被拒絕了），Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement，whichgivesmeconfidencetobeawriter.（2021·新高考Ⅰ卷滿分作文）答案：1.sothat/inorderthatwecanmakeadjustments2.Refusedas/thoughIwas/Although/Though/WhileIwasrefused3.活用非謂語，讓表達(dá)言簡(jiǎn)意賅用非謂語動(dòng)詞整合簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句或復(fù)合句，提升表達(dá)檔次，使句子凝練高端。[針對(duì)訓(xùn)練11]句型轉(zhuǎn)換。1.Astheoceanpollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreserious，June8thisofficiallynamedbytheUnitedNationsastheWorldOceansDay，whichisaimedatraisingpeople'sawarenessofoceanconservation.→________________________________________________________________________，June8thisofficiallynamedbytheUnitedNationsastheWorldOceansDay，whichisaimedatraisingpeople'sawarenessofoceanconservation.（2022·全國(guó)甲卷作文）2.Lastweekend，Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activitythatwasorganisedbyourStudents'Union.（用非謂語動(dòng)詞短語轉(zhuǎn)換）→Lastweekend，Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activityＷ.（2023·浙江卷）3.WhenwearefacedwithallkindsofinformationontheInternet，wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse，whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.（用非謂語動(dòng)詞短語轉(zhuǎn)換）→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________，wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse，whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.（2021·全國(guó)乙卷滿分作文）4.Ontheotherhand，onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections，whichmakesitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.→Ontheotherhand，onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.（2021·全國(guó)乙卷滿分作文）答案：1.WiththeoceanpollutionbecomingmoreandmoreanisedbyourStudents'Union3.FacedwithallkindsofinformationontheInternet4.makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected4.適時(shí)感嘆，必要強(qiáng)調(diào)[針對(duì)訓(xùn)練12]補(bǔ)全句子。________________________________________________________________________（我們玩得多么開心?。?！Notonlydiditgiveusrelaxation，butalsoitgotusclosertonature.答案：Whatawonderfultimewehad5.it句式表達(dá)技高一籌（1）Itis/was＋形容詞/名詞＋that...It'snecessary/important/naturalthatsb.（should）do....某人做……是必要的/重要的/自然的Itislikelythat...有可能……Itis（high/about）timethat＋主語＋did/shoulddo...該是……的時(shí)候了Itis/wasnosurprise/wonderthat...……不足為奇Itisapitythat...遺憾的是……（2）Itis/was＋過去分詞＋that...Itiswidelybelieved/acknowledgedthat...人們普遍相信/認(rèn)為……Itisknownthat...（＝Whatisknownisthat.../Asweallknow，...）眾所周知……Itisstronglyrecommendedthat...強(qiáng)烈建議……Itisreported/said/hopedthat...據(jù)報(bào)道/據(jù)說/人們希望……Itisthought/consideredthat...……被認(rèn)為……，大家認(rèn)為……（3）It＋be＋名詞＋（of/forsb）todosth.It'sagreathonourforsbtodosth.對(duì)某人來說做某事是一件非常榮幸的事情It'smygreatprivilegetodosth.做某事是我的莫大榮幸（4）動(dòng)詞＋it＋其他。I'dappreciateitif...如果……我將感激不盡sb.hate（s）/dislike（s）/love（s）/like（s）itwhen...某人討厭/喜歡……（5）it的其他相關(guān)句型：Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...毫無疑問/不言而喻……Ittakes（sb.）sometime/energytodosth.做某事花費(fèi)了（某人）一些時(shí)間/精力Itisnouse/gooddoingsth.做某事沒有用處/好處Whenitcomesto...當(dāng)談到……Assb.put（s）it...正如某人所說的那樣……Ithasbeen＋時(shí)間段＋since...自從……有多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間了eq\b\lc\\rc\}(\a\vs4\al\co1(Ithappens/happenedthat...,sb.happen（s）/happenedtodo...))eq\a\vs4\al(偶然……；,某人碰巧……)Itoccursto/hits/strikessb.that...某人突然想到……Itseems/appearsthat...看起來似乎……（6）主語＋think/believe/feel/make/find＋it＋形容詞/名詞＋（of/forsb.＋）todosth.[針對(duì)訓(xùn)練13]補(bǔ)全句子/句型轉(zhuǎn)換。1.________________________________________________________________________（眾所周知），morethantwo-thirdsoftheEarth'ssurfaceiscoveredbywater.（2022·全國(guó)甲卷作文）2.I________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________traditionalChineseculture.我認(rèn)為這是進(jìn)一步了解中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的一個(gè)很好的機(jī)會(huì)。3.Itisimportantthateveryone________________________________________________________________________inanewenvironment.在新的環(huán)境中學(xué)會(huì)和他人相處對(duì)每個(gè)人都是重要的。4.ItisknownthattheGreatWallisoneoftheSevenWondersoftheAncientWorld，whichislocatedinNorthChina.→theGreatWallisoneoftheSevenWondersoftheAncientWorld，whichislocatedinNorthChina.（主語從句）→，theGreatWallisoneoftheSevenWondersoftheAncientWorld，whichislocatedinNorthChina.（非限制性定語從句）答案：1.Asweallknow2.consideritawonderfulopportunitytofurtherunderstand3.shouldlearntogetalongwellwithothers4.WhatisknownisthatAsweallknow策略（三）“改裝”讓細(xì)節(jié)豐滿起來在英語寫作中，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，能使習(xí)作流暢、豐滿，達(dá)到應(yīng)有的表達(dá)效果。1.增加同位語或定語從句[針對(duì)訓(xùn)練14]補(bǔ)全句子。1.I'mLiHua，________________________________________________________________________（一個(gè)參加交流項(xiàng)目的中國(guó)學(xué)生），andI'mstudyinginthisschool.2.Tobeginwith，thethemeoftheshowisEnvironmentProtection，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（這不僅有意義，而且有趣）.答案：1.aChinesestudentonanexchangeprogramme2.whichwillbenotonlymeaningfulbutalsointeresting2.列舉具體的實(shí)例來補(bǔ)充說明[針對(duì)訓(xùn)練15]補(bǔ)全句子。1.I'llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（和他們聊天，做一些家務(wù)）.2.Inthepasttwoweeks，wehavehadtheculturalcommunicationinmanyaspects，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（例如生活、學(xué)習(xí)、體育、文學(xué)、藝術(shù)等）。答案：1.chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework2.suchaslife，study，sports，literature，artsandsoon3.添加與所給信息有關(guān)的原因、結(jié)果、條件、讓步、手段、目的等內(nèi)容[針對(duì)訓(xùn)練16]補(bǔ)全句子。1.Iammorethandelightedtosharesomedetailswithyou.→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（知道您對(duì)我們的“珍愛生命”活動(dòng)感興趣），Iammorethandelightedtosharesomedetailswithyou.2.I'mplanningtotakeaparttimejobinaforeigncompany.→________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（為了獲得一些實(shí)踐經(jīng)驗(yàn)），I'mplanningtotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncompany.答案：1.KnowingthatyouareinterestedinourCherishLifeactivity2.Inordertogetsomepracticalexperience4.內(nèi)容適當(dāng)具體化[針對(duì)訓(xùn)練17]補(bǔ)全句子。1.I'mgoingtodosomeshoppinginthesupermarket.→I'mgoingtodosomeshopping________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（在超市里，直到下午5點(diǎn)才能回來）.2.TheactivitywillbeheldinClassroom501.→Theactivitywillbeheld________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（4月11日的上午9時(shí)至10時(shí)）inClassroom501.答案：1.inthesupermarketandwon'tbebackuntil5o'clockintheafternoon2.from9a.m.to10a.m.on11April5.表達(dá)感受、評(píng)價(jià)、愿望、倡議等[針對(duì)訓(xùn)練18]補(bǔ)全句子。1.Ithinkitisagoodchancetoappreciatelocaloperas，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（這肯定能幫助你了解更多的中國(guó)文化）.2.Wecansetoutearly________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（這樣我們就可以有更多的時(shí)間來閱讀和選擇書了）.答案：1.whichwillsurelyhelpyoulearnmoreaboutChineseculture2.sothatwecanhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks策略（四）“化裝”讓語篇靚麗起來根據(jù)行文或段落需要，在句與句或段與段之間適當(dāng)增加過渡詞語，使文章渾然一體。1.表示“首先”的詞語如first/firstly，firstofall，tobegin/startwith等。①Firstofall，wemustmakefulluseofevery45-minutelesson.②Tobeginwith，smokingshouldbebannedinpublicareas.2.表示“其次”的詞語如second/secondly，besides，inaddition，what'smore，furthermore，moreover等。①Secondly，weshouldgetupearlytomemorizeidiomsandusefulexpressions.②What'smore，goodbookscanhelpustodevelopgoodcharacters.③Inaddition，doctorsarehighlyrespectedinChinaandingreatdemand，especiallyhighlyqualifiedprofessionals.3.表示“最后”的詞語如last/lastly，lastbutnotleast，mostimportantly等。①Lastbutnotleast，healthisalsoverysignificantforusstudents.②Mostimportantly，readingthosebooksopenedawindowformetoanotherworldandgavemeanewpointofview.4.表示“總之”的詞語如inshort，inbrief，inconclusion，ina/oneword，tosumup，allinall，onthewhole，ingeneral等。Inaword，successisimportant，andsoisfailure，becauseit'sthemotherofsuccess.[針對(duì)訓(xùn)練19]補(bǔ)全句子。1.（首先），Ibroketheeggsandstirredthemevenlyundertheguidanceofmymother，andthenIwashedthetomatoesandslicedthem.（2023·全國(guó)乙卷）2.（而且），12%ofthestudentschoosetovisitEnglish-learningwebsiteswhenenhancingEnglishskill.（2022·全國(guó)乙卷作文）答案：1.Atfirst2.What'smore第一課寫作模板與實(shí)戰(zhàn)展示（Ⅰ）（活動(dòng)介紹/新聞報(bào)道、演講/發(fā)言稿、通知與倡議書）（一）萬能內(nèi)化模板1.活動(dòng)介紹/新聞報(bào)道2.演講（發(fā)言）稿ACross-CountryRunningRaceInorderto（目的），（事件）.（人物）participatedintherace，amongwhomthirtyweregirls.Participantssetout（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)）.________________________________________________________________________（活動(dòng)意義）________________________________________________________________________（注意事項(xiàng)）.Goodafternoon.Fellowstudents/Distinguishedguests/HonourableJudges！Mynameis，from（自我介紹）.Mytopictodayis（提出演講主題）.Everybodyknowsthat（意義）.Unfortunately，mostpeople（反面）becauseit'seasilyto（原因分析）.Forexample，（事實(shí)或現(xiàn)象列舉），inwhich（后果）.Besides，（進(jìn)一步闡述理由）.Solet's（再次點(diǎn)題）.That'sall.Thankyouforyourlistening/attention.3.通知4.倡議書NoticeInorderto（目的），an（活動(dòng)）willbeheld（地點(diǎn)和時(shí)間）.Theactivityis（詳細(xì)信息），whichwillbeveryinteresting/meaningful/significant.Attheendoftheactivity，（人物）will（具體事例）.What'smore，you'resupposedto（要求）.Allthestudentsofourclassareexpectedtobepresentontime.（日期）（單位）（對(duì)象），It's（表示榮幸）andgivemyspeech.Mynameis（自我介紹）.Thetopicofmyspeechis（提出倡議主題）.Tobeginwith，manypeoplesuggestthat（倡議具體內(nèi)容）.Firstly，Ｗ.Secondly，Ｗ.Thirdly，（話題或現(xiàn)象列舉）.WhatIwanttostressisthat（重申主題）.Foronething，Ｗ.Foranother，Ｗ.Besides，（原因或重要性列舉）.Inaword，（總結(jié)）.（二）四步解題示范[典例]你受學(xué)生會(huì)委托為校宣傳欄“英語天地”寫一則通知，請(qǐng)大家觀看一部英文短片GrowingTogether，內(nèi)容包括：1.短片內(nèi)容：學(xué)校的發(fā)展；2.放映時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；3.歡迎對(duì)短片提出意見。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[寫作示范]第一步：三審定題，列綱謀篇定題謀篇體裁書面通知第一段目的和主要內(nèi)容人稱第三人稱第二段短片名字與內(nèi)容；目的與意義；放映時(shí)間與地點(diǎn)；相關(guān)要求時(shí)態(tài)一般將來時(shí)第三段結(jié)束套語：提希望第二步：斟詞酌句，鎖住要點(diǎn)單詞attention，interesting，outstanding，development，own，beloved，meaningful，confidence短語remember/note，opinion/comment，takepartin/joinin/participatein，heateddiscussion，giveacomment，haveagreattime，holdthebelief句型三大從句，非謂語動(dòng)詞第三步：詞句升級(jí)，升華助篇詞匯提升方法：普通→高級(jí)示例：interesting→someinformation→own→remember→opinion→believe→句子整合方法：簡(jiǎn)單→復(fù)雜，主動(dòng)→被動(dòng)示例：1.ThenameofthemovieisGrowingTogether.Itisaboutthedevelopmentofourownschool.→ThenameofthemovieisGrowingTogether，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.（用定語從句改寫）2.Everybody，youwillbewelcometotakepartinit.Pleaseenjoythemovie.Thenyoushouldhaveaheateddiscussionandgiveyourownopinions.→Everyoneofyouwillbewelcometotakepartinit，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________afterwardsand________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.（用動(dòng)詞-ing形式改寫）答案：outstandingrelevantmenthave/holdthebeliefthat...1.whichisaboutthedevelopmentofourbelovedschool2.enjoyingthemovie，havingaheateddiscussiongivingyourowncomments第四步：銜接潤(rùn)色，完美成篇銜接詞：tobeginwith，besides，what'smore，afterwards，hopefully________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：NoticeBoysandgirls，Recently，anoutstandingmoviewillbeshowninourcampus.Herearesomerelevantdetailsaboutit.Tobeginwith，thenameofthemovieisGrowingTogether，whichisaboutthedevelopmentofourbelovedschool.Besides，pleasenotethatitwillbeshowninthelibraryfrom2：00to4：00p.m.on9June.What'smore，everyoneofyouwillbewelcometotakepartinit，enjoyingthemovie，havingaheateddiscussionafterwardsandgivingyourowncomments.Ihavethebeliefthatyouwillhaveagreattimethen.TheStudents'UnionWriting1（2023·湛江市普高二模）假定你是李華，請(qǐng)給你校外教Anna寫一封郵件，邀請(qǐng)她主持下個(gè)月的英語演講比賽，內(nèi)容包括：1.比賽的地點(diǎn)、時(shí)間等；2.她需要做的事。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearAnna，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua【參考答案】DearAnna，IamwritingthislettertoaskifyouarewillingtobethehostoftheEnglishspeechcontest.Thecontestisscheduledtobeheldintheschoollecturecentreonthesecondweekendofnextmonth.Youareexpectedtogivebothanopeningspeechandaclosingone，andmakesomebriefcommentsonthespeakers.Andofcourse，youneedtointroduceourjudgesbriefly.I'dappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyinvitation.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestwishestoyou.Yours，LiHuaWriting2（2023·大灣區(qū)普高聯(lián)考）五一勞動(dòng)節(jié)快到了，學(xué)校開展了“我?guī)透改缸黾覄?wù)”的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為校報(bào)英文專欄寫一篇短文，介紹該活動(dòng)的情況，要點(diǎn)包括：1.活動(dòng)目的；2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；3.你的感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。HelpingMyParentsDoHousework________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】HelpingMyparentsDoHouseworkWiththeapproachoftheMayDayInternationalLaborDay，ourschoollaunchedanactivityof“HelpingParentsDoHousework”，aimingtocultivateasenseofresponsibilityandgratitudeinstudents.Theactivityinvolvedstudentstakingonvariouschoressuchascleaning，cooking，andlaundry，thusgivingparentssomewell-deservedrest.Throughouttheweek，studentswereencouragedtosharetheirexperiencesandinsightsinclass，promotingdiscussionandreflection.Personally，Ifindthisactivitybotheducatio