專題05 小作文- (2013-2022)高考英語真題分項(xiàng)匯編

專題05作文(2013-2022)高考英語真題分項(xiàng)匯編（全國）2022年(全國甲卷)你校將以六月八日世界海洋日為主題，舉辦英語征文比賽，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.海洋的重要性；2.保護(hù)海洋的倡議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.短文的題目和首句已為你寫好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Whenitcomestoocean,itspollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.WorldOceanDay,fallingonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.Oceanplaysakeyroleinourworld.Notonlydoesoceanofferussufficientfood,butalsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.Thus,itisimperativetoprotectocean.Firstofall,whatwecandoistoplaceimportanceonourdailyactions.Forexample,garbagecan’tbethrownintoocean.What’smore,wecanalsohandoutleafletstocallonmorepeopletoprotecttheocean.Themorepeopleareinvolved,thebettertheoceanenvironmentis.Allinall,itishightimethatwedevotedourselvestoprotectingocean.Toprotectoceanistoprotectourselves.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，就世界海洋日為主題向英文征文比賽投稿，闡述海洋的重要性并提出一些建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累越來越：moreandmore→increasingly重視：placeimportanceon→attachimportanceto重要的：key→significant此外：what’smore→furthermore2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：WorldOceanDay,fallingonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.拓展句：WorldOceanDay,whichfallsonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Notonlydoesoceanofferussufficientfood,butalsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.(運(yùn)用了部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu))[高分句型2]Whenitcomestoocean,itspollutionbecomingmoreandmoreserious.(使用了固定句型)[高分句型3]Firstofall,whatwecandoistoplaceimportanceonourdailyactions.(使用了主語從句)2022年(全國乙卷)72.學(xué)校英文報(bào)正在開展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom為題的討論。請(qǐng)使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.學(xué)習(xí)活動(dòng)狀況描述：2.簡單評(píng)論;3.你的建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.短文的題目和首句已為你寫好?！敬鸢浮縇earningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom

Nowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroominvariousways.

ItcaneasilybeseenthatthepercentageofstudentswhochooselisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmoviesisrespectively65%and50%.However,thosechoosingreadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%.

AsfarasI’mconcerned,itisadisturbingtrend.Forstudents,whatbenefitsmosttotheirstudyisreadingEnglishbooks.Becauseoftheirlackofself-discipline,they’remoreeasilyaddictedtochattingonlineorplayinggames.It’surgentforstudentsthemselvestoimprovetheirself-discipline,andit’salsourgentforparentsandteacherstostrengthentheguidance.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于說明文。要求考生請(qǐng)使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文給學(xué)校英文報(bào)投稿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累選擇：choose→select提高：improve→strengthen各種各樣的：various→diverse就我而言：asfarasI’mconcerned→frommyperspective2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Nowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheClassroominvariousways.拓展句：Nowadays,becausesmartphonesandcomputersarebecomingmoreandmorepopular,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheClassroominvariousways.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】ItcaneasilybeseenthatthepercentageofstudentswhochooselisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmoviesisrespectively65%and50%.(運(yùn)用了it作形式主語，that引導(dǎo)主語從句以及who引導(dǎo)的定語從句)【高分句型2】It'surgentforstudentsthemselvestoimprovetheirself-discipline(運(yùn)用了it作形式主語，toimprovetheirself-discipline為真正的主語)2022年（新高考I卷）假定你是校廣播站英語節(jié)目“TalkandTalk”的負(fù)責(zé)人李華，請(qǐng)給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請(qǐng)她做一次訪談。內(nèi)容包括：1節(jié)目介紹；2.訪談的時(shí)間和話題。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearCaroline,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearCaroline,ThisismyfirsttimethatIhaveinvitedyoutoattendourprogram—TalkandTalk.ItistenyearssinceTalkandTalkwasestablished.Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.IfyouareavailableonthisSunday,ItogetherwiththewholeTalkandTalkstaffamwaitingforyourcoming.I’dappreciateitifyoutakemyinvitationintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，假定你是校廣播站“TalkandTalk”的負(fù)責(zé)人李華，請(qǐng)給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請(qǐng)她做一次訪談?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累建立：establish→setup了不起的：amazing→fabulous幫助：aid→assistance許多：plentyof→alotof2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.拓展句：Youareourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,whoseaidcanhelpusalot.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.(運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.(運(yùn)用了狀語從句的省略)2021（全國乙卷）你校將舉辦英語演講比賽。請(qǐng)你以Besmartonlinelearners1.分析優(yōu)勢與不足；2.提出學(xué)習(xí)建議。注意：100;onepossibleversion:BesmartonlinelearnersNetworklearninghasincreasinglybecomeanimportantmeansforpeopletoacquireknowledgeandsolveproblems.Butbeingsmartonlinelearnershasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Firstofall,assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensiveeducationalresourcestobroadenthehorizon.Besides,Wecantaketheinitiativeinourstudybyourselveswithouttimeandspacelimit.Ofcourse,thesedisadvantagesareasfollows.Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,Wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesandfindaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生以Besmartonlinelearners為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽?！驹斀狻砍浞掷茫簃akefulluseof→makethemostof擴(kuò)寬,豐富：broaden→enrich各種各樣：allkindsof→varietiesof不完美：imperfection→defect句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesandfindaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.拓展句：Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantages，findingaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,Wecan'ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.（非謂語作狀語和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）[高分句型2]Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.（現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）2021年（上海卷）假設(shè)你是中華中學(xué)學(xué)生姚平，最近參加了一項(xiàng)研究性學(xué)習(xí)調(diào)研，課題為＂父母是否以子女為榮＂。通過調(diào)研你校學(xué)生及其父母，結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)雙方對(duì)此問題的看法有差異（數(shù)據(jù)如圖所示）。根據(jù)圖表寫一份報(bào)告，在報(bào)告中，你必須：①描述調(diào)研數(shù)據(jù)；②分析可能導(dǎo)致這一結(jié)果的原因。【答案】參考例文：

Recently，wemadeasurveyaboutwhethertheparentsagreethattheyareproudoftheirchildren．Theresultshowsthat80%ofparentsareproudoftheirchildrenwhileonly60%ofchildrenholdthesameopinion．Accordingtothesurvey，wecanconcludethatthenumberofparentswhoapprovedtheideais20%morethanofchildren．

Thereseemstobetwocausesaswetriedtofigureoutwhatledtothissubtledifference．First，conservativeChineseparentsareneveraccustomedtoconveyingdirectlyhowmuchtheyareproudoftheirchildren．Thistendencytoconcealfeelingshardlyhelpschildrendevelopastrongsenseofself-confidence．Second，thecurrenteducationsystemexcessivelyemphasizesthevalueofacademicperformance，thusforcingchildrentoextensivelybelievethatonlybyachievingexcellentscorescantheymaketheirparentsproud．Thisbiasunfairlyunderminesthesignificanceoftalentsforartandsports，whicheasilyfrustrateschildrenandrendersthemmorelikelytounderestimatethemselves．

Withoutthegenuineencouragementfromparentsandthereversalofexam-orientededucationalmethods，akidwouldneverendupwithapositivegrown-up．【考點(diǎn)】命題作文，提綱作文，圖畫式說明文【解析】【分析】本文屬于圖表作文。要求考生以姚平的身份寫一則報(bào)告，通報(bào)“父母是否以子女為榮”的調(diào)研報(bào)告的內(nèi)容。文章使用第三人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主的時(shí)態(tài)。要點(diǎn)：1.最近參加了一項(xiàng)研究性學(xué)習(xí)調(diào)研，課題為“父母是否以子女為榮”。通過調(diào)研你校學(xué)生及其父母，結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)雙方對(duì)此問題的看法有差異。2.百分之80的父母親以孩子為榮；百分之60的孩子認(rèn)為父母以我為榮。3.分析原因：父母親把全部的精力都放在孩子身上，孩子的成功也證明自己的教育方法是正確的；而現(xiàn)在的孩子因?yàn)槟挲g較小，并沒有很強(qiáng)的責(zé)任感,他們并沒有感受到自己承擔(dān)的義務(wù)和責(zé)任。建議在寫作的時(shí)候添加適當(dāng)?shù)闹V語，如Everycoinhastwosides.提升文采，以增加獲得高分的可能性；穿插使用多種句式，讓文章富有變化.同時(shí)要使用兩到三個(gè)復(fù)合句，并適當(dāng)使用串聯(lián)詞。2021年（天津卷）Chris家，他母親Nancy注意：100；DearNancy,Yours,LiJinDearIamverygladtoreceiveyourE-mail.IamverygratefultoyouandyourfamilyfortakingcareofmeduringmystudytourintheUK.Andwishyouallthebest.NowthatIhavefinishedmyhighschoolstudies,myparentsandIaregoingtotraveltoBeijing.I'mgoing'anmentoseetheflagraisingandclimbtheGreatInaddition,IwanttogotoQinghuaGardentoenjoytheelegantdemeanoroffamousuniversities.IhavedecidedtoregisterforthecomputertherapiddevelopmentoftheInternetthehigh-payingemploymentinITindustryattractsmoreandmorepeopletojointheInternettide.Beforechoosing,consultpeopleengagedinthismajororgototraininginstitutionsforconsultation.Onlywithacleargoal,wewillhavetargetedlearninginthefuture,whichwillbemoreefficient.Yours,LiJin2020年（江蘇卷）請(qǐng)閱讀下面有關(guān)中國題材紀(jì)錄片(documentary)的對(duì)話，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150個(gè)詞左右的文章。SuHua:Hi,LiJiang!DidyouseetheBBCdocumentaryonCCTV9lastweek?LiJiang:YoumeanDuFu:China’sGreatestPoet?Yes,Idid.Fantastic!SuHua:JustthinkanEnglishactorrecitesChinesepoems.LiJiang:Idon’treallyunderstandeverylineherecites,butIbelievehetrulylovesthepoemshimself.SuHua:Right.ItisreportedthatthefilmiswellreceivedoutsideChina.LiJiang:Yeah,It’smyfirsttimetohearChinesestoriestoldbyanEnglishspeaker.SuHua:Infact,documentariesaboutourcountryareplentifulbothathomeandabroad.Thesefilmscanhelpforeignfriendsbetterunderstandthisland-Chineseliterature,geographyhistory,food...LiJiang:Icouldn’tagreemore.【寫作內(nèi)容】1.用約30個(gè)詞概括上述對(duì)話的主要內(nèi)容；2.談?wù)勚袊}材紀(jì)錄片受到外國朋友歡迎的原因(至少兩點(diǎn))。【寫作要求】1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.不必寫標(biāo)題。【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】內(nèi)容完整語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】CCTV9broadcastDuFu:China’sGreatestPoet,adocumentaryproducedbyBBC.Thiswell-madefilmprovidesforeignaudienceswithafreshwayofbetterknowingChina’spastandpresent.DocumentariesaboutChina,producedeitherinChinaorinothercountries,arebecomingincreasinglypopularamongforeigners.Foronething,theoveralldevelopmentoverthepastdecadeshasbeensostrikingthattheyfeeleagertofamiliarizethemselveswithwhatisgoingoninChina.Foranother,Chinaenjoysalonghistoryandrichculture.IthasalwaysbeenanattractionforthosewhoarekeenonanythingthatisChinese.ThesedocumentariespresentasplendidpictureofChinainfrontoftheiraudiences-ithistory,landscape,art,food,oreventraditionalChinesemedicine.Becauseofthesefilms,someforeignershavebeguntothinkofcomingtoChina.Inthisway,theycanformatruepictureofChinathemselves.【解析】【分析】這是一篇讀寫任務(wù)?！驹斀狻康谝徊?審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過審題我們可以確定幾個(gè)方面的信息。要求閱讀中國題材紀(jì)錄片的對(duì)話，寫一篇150個(gè)詞文章。包括兩部分。(一)、用30詞概括對(duì)話內(nèi)容。(二)、談?wù)勚袊}材紀(jì)錄片受到外國朋友歡迎的原因。要求至少兩點(diǎn)原因。第二步:布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為四段。第一段，概括對(duì)話內(nèi)容。第二段和第三段，中國題材紀(jì)錄片受到外國朋友歡迎的原因。第四段，總結(jié)因?yàn)殡娪拔鈬讼雭淼街袊?。第三?確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語:producedby,provide…with,either…or,bekeenon,present,becauseof,inthisway,theoveralldevelopment，sostrikingthat，feeleagertofamiliarizethemselveswith.第四步:確定較為高級(jí)的句子:非謂語動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)adocumentaryproducedbyBBC；定語從句的運(yùn)用:IthasalwaysbeenanattractionforthosewhoarekeenonanythingthatisChinese.第五步:連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行過渡銜接:foronething,foranother.第六步:注意書寫，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦?！军c(diǎn)睛】文章思路清晰，語言規(guī)范，段落整齊，語篇連貫，層次清晰。使用了較為高級(jí)的句式:非謂語動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)adocumentaryproducedbyBBC；定語從句的運(yùn)用:IthasalwaysbeenanattractionforthosewhoarekeenonanythingthatisChinese.狀語從句和賓語從句的運(yùn)用theoveralldevelopmentoverthepastdecadeshasbeensostrikingthattheyfeeleagertofamiliarizethemselveswithwhatisgoingoninChina.這些高級(jí)句式的應(yīng)用提升了寫作的檔次，整個(gè)短文顯示出了作者高水平的英語表達(dá)能力.2020年(全國卷II)上周末，你和同學(xué)參加了一次采摘活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為班級(jí)英語角寫一篇短文，介紹這次活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括:1.農(nóng)場情況；2.采摘過程；3.個(gè)人感受注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.題目已為你寫好。題目:MyWeekend_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyWeekendOrganizedbythestudentunion,agroupofvolunteerswenttoHopeFarmtohelpthefarmerspickpeacheslastweekend.Thefarmissituatedatthefootofamountain,theskyisblueandtheairisfresh.Wewereattractedbythebeautifulscenery.Therearedifferentkindsoffruittreesaswellasavarietyofanimals.Onarriving,wesawredripepeacheshangingonthetree.Usingbasketsandladders,

Wefirstpickedtheonesthatweremostbeautifulincolor,thenthosethatwereripeandsoft.

Icouldn’twaittotakeabite,andthesweetjuicewentdownmythroat.Iwasgratefulforthisopportunitytogetclosetonature.NotonlywouldIbeabletoexperiencefruitpicking,butIcouldalsofeastonthesweetness!【解析】【詳解】第一步：根據(jù)提示可知，上周末，你和同學(xué)參加了一次采摘活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為班級(jí)英語角寫一篇短文，介紹這次活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括：1.農(nóng)場情況；2.采摘過程；3.個(gè)人感受。第二步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：pickpeaches,issituated,beautifulscenery,fruittrees,avarietyofanimals,Usingbasketsandladders,

takeabite,begratefulfor,getclosetonature,feastonthesweetness.第三步：根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。本文用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)。第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接和過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的?！军c(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式，如Organizedbythestudentunion,agroupofvolunteerswenttoHopeFarmtohelpthefarmerspickpeacheslastweekend.和Usingbasketsandladders運(yùn)用了非謂語動(dòng)詞；Wefirstpickedtheonesthatweremostbeautifulincolor,thenthosethatwereripeandsoft.

運(yùn)用了定語從句；NotonlywouldIbeabletoexperiencefruitpicking,butIcouldalsofeastonthesweetness!運(yùn)用了連詞notonly…but…和倒裝句。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。2018年(天津卷)假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的機(jī)器人興趣小組組長李津，你的美國朋友Chris就讀于天津某國際學(xué)校，他曾在機(jī)器人技能競賽中獲獎(jiǎng)．你打算邀請(qǐng)他加入你的團(tuán)隊(duì)，參加即將于7月底在天津舉行的世界青少年機(jī)器人技能競賽．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示代表興趣小組給他寫一封電子郵件．（1）比賽的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；（2）邀請(qǐng)他的原因；（3）訓(xùn)練計(jì)劃將發(fā)送其郵箱，請(qǐng)他提出建議．注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；（3）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．參考詞匯：世界青少年機(jī)器人技能競賽theWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionDearChris，Ihavegoodnewstotellyou．TheWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionistobeheldinTianjinintheendofJuly．Knowingyouusedtowintheprizeintheroboticscompetition，Iamgoingtoinviteyoutoourteamtotakepartinthecompetition．【高分句型一】Notonlyisitagoodopportunitytotestourabilities，wecanalsomakealotoffriendswhosharecommoninterestswithus..【高分句型二】Ithinkyouareboundtojoinus．（介紹比賽的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)以及邀請(qǐng)他的原因；）Inaddition，thetrainingplanwillbesenttoyourmailbox．Pleasetellmeyoursuggestionsaboutit．（訓(xùn)練計(jì)劃將發(fā)送其郵箱，請(qǐng)他提出建議）I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply．Yours，LiJin【考點(diǎn)】R1：提綱類．菁優(yōu)網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有【分析】這是一封邀請(qǐng)信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來時(shí)態(tài)為主．高分句型1．Knowingyouusedtowintheprizeintheroboticscompetition，Iamgoingtoinviteyoutoourteamtotakepartinthecompetition．句子里現(xiàn)在分詞Knowingyouusedtowintheprizeintheroboticscompetition做原因狀語．知道你過去在機(jī)器人競賽中獲獎(jiǎng)，我將邀請(qǐng)你參加我們的比賽．2．Notonlyisitagoodopportunitytotestourabilities，wecanalsomakealotoffriendswhosharecommoninterestswithus．句子里Notonly位于句首，句子isitagoodopportunitytotestourabilities用了部分倒裝．代指先行詞alotoffriends，who引導(dǎo)定語從句sharecommoninterestswithus．這不僅是一個(gè)考驗(yàn)我們能力的好機(jī)會(huì)，我們也可以結(jié)交很多與我們有共同利益的朋友．我想你一定會(huì)加入我們的行列．【解答】DearChris，Ihavegoodnewstotellyou．TheWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionistobeheldinTianjinintheendofJuly．Knowingyouusedtowintheprizeintheroboticscompetition，Iamgoingtoinviteyoutoourteamtotakepartinthecompetition．【高分句型一】Notonlyisitagoodopportunitytotestourabilities，wecanalsomakealotoffriendswhosharecommoninterestswithus..【高分句型二】Ithinkyouareboundtojoinus．（介紹比賽的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)以及邀請(qǐng)他的原因；）Inaddition，thetrainingplanwillbesenttoyourmailbox．Pleasetellmeyoursuggestionsaboutit．（訓(xùn)練計(jì)劃將發(fā)送其郵箱，請(qǐng)他提出建議）I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply．（期盼回復(fù)）Yours，LiJin【點(diǎn)評(píng)】考查提綱類作文雖然書信的開頭結(jié)尾都已給出，考生不必?fù)?dān)心書信的格式問題，但是要寫好此文，需注意三點(diǎn)：一是要詳略得當(dāng)，如自我介紹部分，考生最有話可說，但切忌長篇大論，只需作簡要的介紹即可；二是切忌一對(duì)一的翻譯，要適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié)，要詳略得當(dāng)，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞，以使行文連貫．三是要字斟句酌，增加高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜句式的應(yīng)用，提升作文的檔次．2018年(江蘇卷)81．請(qǐng)閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。[寫作內(nèi)容]1．用約30個(gè)詞概括上述利用排名(ratings)進(jìn)行消費(fèi)的現(xiàn)象；2．談?wù)勀闳绾慰创M(fèi)排名，然后用2－3個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。[寫作要求]1．寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3．不必寫標(biāo)題。[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。[參考范文1]Asamajorchannelofconsumptioninformation，theratingisanefficientsourceofinformationforshoppinginourownconsumption.Interestingly，thesameratingmayhavedifferentinfluencesondifferentconsumers.ItendtoconsultconsumptionratingswhateverIpurchase.Firstly，thehigherratingmeansthehigherqualityoftheproduct，orbetterservice.Basedontheratings，Iboughtmybelovedbackpack，sawinterestingfilmsandtasteddeliciousfoods.Secondly，ratingscansavetimetomakedecisionsinshopping.Forexample，therearehugenumbersofreferencebookswhichIamoftenconfusedtochoosefrom.Inthatcase，itisbothconvenientandeconomicaltobuybooksaccordingtotheratings.Thereisnodoubtthatitisunwisetodependcompletelyontheratingsinconsumption.Theadvantagesanddisadvantagesofratingsareoftencloselyrelated.Itisnecessarytoholdanobjectiveattitudetowardsratings.[參考范文2]Nowadays，mostcommoditiesorservicesareratedthroughcertainchannels.Theseratings，easytoaccess，areplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleincustomers’purchasedecision.However，resultsaresometimesunsatisfactory.Thereisnodenyingthatsuchratingsmightbringconveniencetoconsumers，buttheyareoftenmisleadingandunreliable.Asweallknow，mostoftheratingsarebasedonothers’judgmentontheproductorserviceconcerned.Everyjudgmentcomesfromaspecificneedorauniquepsychologicalstate.Apparently，blindlyfollowingothers’advicewillaffectourownjudgment.Anotherfactshouldnotbeneglectedthatsomeoftheratingsaretheoutcomeofacarefulmanipulationofcompaniesorsellers.Ithasbecomeacommonpracticeforsometopayforgoodratingsontheirproductsorservicessoastoincreasetheirsales.Therefore，weshouldgiveasecondthoughttotheseratingswheneverwegoshopping.2018年（全國I卷）假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國朋友家做客，發(fā)郵件向你詢問有關(guān)習(xí)俗。請(qǐng)你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．到達(dá)時(shí)間；2．合適的禮物；3．餐桌禮儀。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。書面表達(dá)參考范文1：DearTerry,Howiseverythinggoing?IlearnfromyourlastletterthatyouareinvitedtodinneratyourChinesefriend’shome.NowI’mtoowillingtogiveyousomeadvicewithregardtoit.Firstandforemost,youaresupposedtoarriveatyourfriend’shousefiveortenminutesearlier,whichmayleaveagoodimpressiononthehost.Additionally,itisasmartchoicetoprepareanappropriategift,likesouvenirsorspecialtyfromyourowncountry.Itdoesn’tneedtobeexpensivebuttoconveyyoursincerityandgratitude.Whenitcomestotablemanners,thereisabigdifferencebetweenChinaandNewZealand.Whilepeopleinyourcountryeatsilently,Chinesepeople,especiallyclosefriendsaretalkativeattable.Soyoucouldchatwiththemactivelyandcasuallywhenenjoyingthemeal.However,remembernottospeakwithyourmouthfulloffood.Hopefully,thesesuggestionswillbeofsomehelptoyou.AndI’msurethatyouareboundtofitintotheChinesefamily.參考范文2DearTerry,Howareyoudoingthesedays?Ihearyou’vebeeninvitedtodinneratyourChinesefriend’shouse.Hereissomeadviceforyou.Istronglyadviseyoutoarrive5minutesearlier.Youmaytakeagiftwithyou,butitdoesn’thavetobesomethingofgreatvalue.Itmakessensetotakesomefruit.Nowyou’dbetterpracticeusingchopsticksortellyourfriendyouneedaknifeandfork.Asforwhereyoushouldsitatthetable,justlistentoyourfriend.Anddon’tbesurprisedifyouarerepeatedlyaskedtoeatmore,asitisconsideredgoodtablemannersinChina.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua2018年（新課標(biāo)III卷）假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter來信詢問你校學(xué)生體育運(yùn)動(dòng)情況。請(qǐng)給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.學(xué)校的體育場館；2.主要的運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目；3.你喜歡的項(xiàng)目。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右：2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！敬鸢浮緿earPeter,Iamexceedinglydelightedtohearfromyou.Youaskedmeinyourlastletteraboutthephysicalexerciseinourschoolandthefollowinginformationmaygiveyouaroughsketch.Tobeginwith,afabulousnewstadiumhasbeenbuiltup,whichhasbecomethenewlandmarkinourschool.Moreover,withthestadiumsetup,awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld,ofwhichping-pong,footballaswellasrunningcompetitionsenjoygreatpopularity.Asforme,I’mintoxicatedwithbasketballsinceithasbeengivingmestrengthtoconfrontthechallengesinmylife.Allinall,Isincerelyinviteyoutocometoourschoolandseeforyourself.Yours,LiHua【解析】本題作文為提綱式作文，形式依然是書信，即給英國朋友Peter介紹學(xué)校體育運(yùn)動(dòng)情況，屬于學(xué)校生活話題。這一話題貼合學(xué)生生活的實(shí)際，學(xué)生并不陌生，有話可說。2017年（新課標(biāo)I）假定你是李華，正在教你的英國朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語。請(qǐng)你寫封郵件告知下次上課的計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容包括：（1）時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；（2）內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩；（3）課前準(zhǔn)備：簡要了解唐朝的歷史。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考范文DearLeslie,Howareyou?I’mwritingtotellyouaboutyournextChineselesson.We’llstillmeetatmyschool,butnotonSaturdayasusual,sinceI’llhavetoparticipateinasportingactivitythatday.Solet’smakeitthreeo'clockonSundayafternoon.Asyouknow,inordertoacquireagoodknowledgeofChinese,youshouldlearnmoreaboutChinesecultureandhistory.Therefore,thistimeIwillintroduceTangPoetrytoyou,whichisofgreathelpinlearningChinese.IadviseyoutolearnaboutthebriefhistoryoftheTangdynastyinadvance.Itwillsurelyhelpyouinlearningthepoems.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours,LiHua2016年（新課標(biāo)I）假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫好申請(qǐng)書和個(gè)人簡歷（resume）。給外教MrJenkins寫信，請(qǐng)她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，已使行文連貫。【答案】DearMsJenkins,IamLiHua,IamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyplanforthecomingsummervacationandIalsowantyoutodomeafavor.Inordertogetsomepracticalexperience,Iamplanningtotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncapitalcompany.Ihavealreadyfinishedmyapplicationandresume.ButthisisthefirsttimethatIhavewrittenanapplicationandthepersonalsresume,soIdon’tknowiftherearesomethingtopayattentionto.So,I’mwritingyoutheletter,hopingyoucangivemesomehelp.Iwillbeverygratefulifyoucandomethefavor.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.AndI’dbereallythankful.Yours,LiHua【解析】【名師點(diǎn)睛】本文是一篇較為優(yōu)秀的范文。格式正確，要點(diǎn)全面，語言通順流暢，很好地完成了寫作任務(wù)。在本文中開頭提出寫信的目的，然后具體講述自己的困難，再提出請(qǐng)求，最后表達(dá)自己的感激之情。所以在內(nèi)容上邏輯性較強(qiáng)。此外，作者還使用了不定式短語Inordertogetsomepracticalexperience,、現(xiàn)在分詞短語hopingyoucangivemesomehelp、賓語從句iftherearesomethingtopayattentionto等。經(jīng)典句式thisisthefirsttimethatIhavewrittenanapplicationandthepersonalsresume也是文章的亮點(diǎn)所在。2015年（新課標(biāo)）假定你是李華，你校英文報(bào)“外國文化”欄目擬刊登美國節(jié)日風(fēng)俗和中學(xué)生生活的短文。請(qǐng)給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿，要點(diǎn)如下：欄目介紹。稿件內(nèi)容；稿件長度：約400詞匯交稿日期：6月28日前天注意：詞數(shù)100左右；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫的；開頭語已為你寫好。【思路點(diǎn)撥】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于英文書信。題目要求給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿，稿件內(nèi)容為美國節(jié)日風(fēng)俗和中學(xué)生生活?？忌枳屑?xì)閱讀提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息。寫作內(nèi)容要包括以下幾點(diǎn)：1.簡單介紹校英文報(bào)“外國文化”欄目的情況；2.建議彼得介紹美國節(jié)日風(fēng)俗和中學(xué)生生活；3.稿件的要求及交稿時(shí)間。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)，就本文而言應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。【參考范文】Dear_Peter，I'd_like_to_ask_you_to_write_an_article_for_our_school's_English_newspaper.The“ForeignCultures”sectioninournewspaperisverypopularamongusstudents.Itcarriesarticleswrittenbyforeignfriendsabouttheculturesoftheirhomecountries.WouldyoupleasewritesomethingaboutthecultureinyourpartoftheUnitedStates?AndwewouldespeciallywelcomearticlesabouthowAmericansspendtheirholidaysandfestivals,andthelifeofAmericanhighschoolstudents.Youcanwriteanythingrelevantsolongasit'sinterestingandinformative.400wordswouldbefine.CouldwehaveyourarticlebeforeJune28?I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours，LiHua2014年（江蘇卷）Whenwereadnewspapers，weoftencomeacrosssuchEnglishwordsas"AIDS"and"PK．"WhenwewatchTV，wefrequentlyhearwordslike"NBA"or"PM2.5．"Whenwespeak，weautomaticallyusewordslike"OUT"or"Bye﹣bye．"Englishwordsandexpressionslikethesearegettingpopular．Theyhavealreadybecomepartofourdailylanguage．And239EnglishwordshavebeenincludedinthelatestDictionaryofContemporaryChinese．Theinclusionhasstartedaheateddiscussion．AgroupofscholarssignedaletterofcomplaintovertheinclusionoftheseEnglishwords，which，theythink，goesagainstChineselanguagepolicies．TheynotonlyworrythatChineseisborrowinganincreasingnumberofEnglishwordsbutarealsoconcernedthattheinclusionmayhurtthedignityoftheChineselanguage．However，othersareinfavoroftheinclusionbecauseitishardtosaywhetheritwillthreatentheChineselanguage．Theybelievetheselectionismostlyaresultoftheirfunctionanduseindailylife．[寫作內(nèi)容]1．用約30個(gè)單詞寫出上文概要；2．用約120個(gè)單詞發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容包括：（1）支持或反對(duì)漢語詞典收錄英語詞匯；（2）用2﹣3個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的觀點(diǎn)．[寫作要求]1．可以支持文中任一觀點(diǎn)，但必須提供理由或論據(jù)；2．闡述觀點(diǎn)或提供論據(jù)時(shí)，不能直接引用原文語句；3．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；4．不必寫標(biāo)題．[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)．【考點(diǎn)】R5：讀寫任務(wù)作文；S3：議論文．菁優(yōu)網(wǎng)版權(quán)所有【分析】本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這類作文可按照三段式模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點(diǎn)．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句﹣﹣﹣闡述理由．第三段：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱用第一和第三人稱．重要短語：findone'sway（滲入到…），infavorof（支持…），ontherise（上升），onsomeoccasions（在一些場合），insteadof（代替），borrowsthfrom…（從…借…），stopdoingsth（停止做某事），facilitatedailycommunication（促進(jìn)日常交流），soonerorlater（遲早），Chinesetones（聲調(diào)）．take…forgranted（把…當(dāng)成理所當(dāng)然）．【高分句型一】1．it'snotdifficultforthemtounderstandthesewordsinChinesecontexts．此處是由"it"引導(dǎo)的主語從句，"it"作形式主語，結(jié)構(gòu)為"It+be+形容詞+forsbtodosth"．【高分句型二】InEnglish，therearemanywordsborrowedfromLatin，F(xiàn)rench，orevenChinese．此處是由過去分詞短語作后置定語，修飾名詞"words"，可以理解為定語從句"which/thatareborrowedfromLatin"．【高分句型三】2．①it'ssafetoconcludethatitisreasonabletoincludeEnglish②whichfacilitatesdailycommunication．①此處是由"it"引導(dǎo)的主語從句，"it"作形式主語，結(jié)構(gòu)為"It+be+形容詞+forsbtodosth"．②此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞為"English"，"which"在從句中作主語．【解答】支持：Today，more