Unit3Writing課件-高中英語人教選擇性必修第二冊

PeriodSix

Writing—Adescriptiveessayaboutone’sdietLearningAims(學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo))1.Learnhowtodescribeone’sdiet.2.Practicewritingone.(重點(diǎn)難點(diǎn))01寫作技巧本單元的寫作目標(biāo)是寫一篇描述性文章。描述性文章就是把人物、事件、景觀或環(huán)境等用生動的語言描繪出來。這類文章的開頭應(yīng)對所描述的人物、事件、地點(diǎn)、環(huán)境等有一個簡明的介紹，語言需精煉，淺嘗輒止，不能過度發(fā)揮。主體部分是文章最重要的一部分，主要是分析問題，或是對如何解決該問題進(jìn)行描述，有時題目已給出，按要求適當(dāng)拓展即可。如沒有，則需認(rèn)真思考，并注意所提出方案的可行性、邏輯性?？砂磿r間或事件的主次進(jìn)行描述。最后對文章進(jìn)行總結(jié)，如對未來進(jìn)行展望應(yīng)該積極向上。無論是描述人物、事件還是地點(diǎn)、環(huán)境，都要詳略得當(dāng)，重點(diǎn)突出。6.Whentalkingabouthowtosolvethisproblem，differentpeoplehavedifferentideas.AsfarasIamconcerned，weshould...7.Still，Ishouldimprovemyeatinghabitsby...8.Allinall/Inshort/Inconclusion/Inaword/Asissaid/Asisstatedabove，Ifirmlybelieve...02寫作實(shí)踐假如你是李華，你的朋友王力目前正因體重暴增而苦惱不已，來信向你咨詢關(guān)于健康飲食的問題。請你給他寫一封回信，介紹一下你的飲食習(xí)慣。內(nèi)容包括：1.很少吃甜食和垃圾食品；2.飲食中蔬菜、水果居多，有少量肉、蛋和奶制品；3.一日三餐有規(guī)律。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。第一步審題謀篇[審題]寫作要求是寫一篇描述性文章。寫作時應(yīng)注意下面三點(diǎn)：1.確定文體：這是一篇應(yīng)用文，向朋友描述自己的飲食習(xí)慣。2.主體時態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。3.主體人稱：人稱應(yīng)該以第一人稱為主。[謀篇]第一段：應(yīng)開門見山，引入話題。第二段：闡述理由，給出建議。第三段：總結(jié)全文，發(fā)出希望。第二步遣詞造句[核心詞匯]1.消息傳來說

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____________wordcamethat...frommypointofviewbeassociatedwithconsistinconsumeconsistofquantitiesofcontributeto9.不管；不顧

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______________regardlessofinotherwords[連詞成句]1.消息傳來說你最近一直在增重。________________________________________________________2.這使你沮喪。________________________________________________________3.在我看來，你的不健康飲食與你的問題有密切聯(lián)系。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wordcamethatyouhavebeengainingweightrecently.Thismakesyoudepressed.Frommypointofview，yourunhealthydietiscloselyassociatedwithyourproblem.4.對于我來說，我的健康在于均衡飲食。_______________________________________________________5.我的飲食由大量的水果和綠色蔬菜組成。_______________________________________________________6.最根本的是，我的確有一貫的飲食習(xí)慣，不管是假期還是周末。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________7.以上是我健康飲食的訣竅。_______________________________________________________Asforme，myhealthconsistsinabalanceddiet.Mydietconsistsofquantitiesoffruitandgreenvegetables.Mostfundamentally，Idohaveconsistenteatinghabits，regardlessofholidaysorweekends.Theabovearethetricksofmyhealthydiet.8.換句話說，有健康飲食，你可以解決你的體重問題。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inotherwords，youcansolveyourweightproblembyhavingabalanceddiet.第三步句式升級1.將句1和句2合并為非限制性定語從句______________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.將句10改成強(qiáng)調(diào)句型______________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wordcamethatyouhavebeengainingweightrecently，whichmakesyoudepressed.Inotherwords，itisonlybyhavingabalanceddietthatyoucansolveyourweightproblem.第四步組句成篇用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯(lián)想內(nèi)容，組成一篇100詞左右的英語短文。[參考范文]DearWangLi，___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wordcamethatyouhavebeengainingweightrecently，whichmakesyoudepressed.Frommypointofview，yourunhealthydietiscloselyassociatedwithyourproblem.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Asforme，myhealthconsistsinabalanceddiet.Firstly，Irarelyconsumedessertsandjunkfood.Furthermore，mydietconsistsofquantitiesoffruitandgreenvegetables.Amodestquantityofdairyproductsalsocontributetomyhealth.Mostfundamentally，Idohaveconsistenteatinghabits，regardlessofholidaysorweekends._________________________________________________________________________________________________________