2021屆高考英語(yǔ)作文高分突破概要寫作（二）課件

作文高分突破概要寫作

22021屆高考英語(yǔ)浙江省新高英語(yǔ)寫作

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ThedevelopmentofgardensSummarywritingprocess:Step1:Readforthemainideaofthewholepassage

Step2:Analyzethestructureofthewholepassage

(What'stherelationshipbetweeneachparagraph?)

Step3:Locate(確定)themainideaofeachparagraph

Keepimportantdetails/LeaveoutunimportantinformationStep4:Writethesummaryinyourownwords(language)請(qǐng)閱讀下面的文章，確定文章的主題及結(jié)構(gòu)：

Themoderngardenhasahistorygoingbackmanythousandsofyears.Earlyhumanswerehuntersandgatherers,travellingfromplacetoplacefollowingthefood(plantsandanimals)accordingtotheseasons.DuringtheNeolithicperiod(over10,000yearsago)thisslowlybegantochange;humansstartedtodomesticatecertainplants,whichmeanttheycouldremaininoneplaceandgrowtheirownfood.Thefirst“garden”,wasavegetable-garden,whereearlyhumanscultivateddifferenttypesofplantsforfood.Gardenstodayarebeautifulplacestogoandrelax,buthavehadmanypurposesovertheyears.Inthepasttheywereplantedtohonourthegods,orusedinreligiousceremoniessuchasfuneralsandweddings.Certaintreeswerealsosacredinsomecultures;TheancientGreeksplantedgrovesfortheirGods,andmanyculturesbelievedgardenswereholy.Theywerealsoawaytoshowthattheirownerswererichorpowerful.Ancientrulerscreatedhugegardenstodisplaytheirwealth.InRomantimesthegardenbecameanextensionofthehouse,representingtheowner'sstatusinsociety,ratherthanaholyplace.SirFrancisBacondescribedgardensas“thepurestofhumanpleasures”.Pleasureandhappinessareideaslinkedwithgardens.TheancientGreeksbelievedgrowingfoodwasajobforthepoor,butgardenswereplacesforenjoymentandcontemplation.TheEnglishwordparadisecomesfromtheancientPersianwordPairidaeza–meaningawalledspace,agarden.ThegardensoftheMiddleEast,describedinTheArabianNights,wereplacesofgreatbeautyandsplendourwherepeopleenjoyedthepleasuresoflife.Asgardenshavedevelopedovertheyears,designandbeautyhavebecomemoreandmoreimportant.Humanshavelearnttocontrolnatureandtodesigngardensprecisely,likeaworkofartorabuilding.TheGardensofVersaillesinFranceareanexcellentexampleof“gardenarchitecture”,everythingissymmetricalandeventhetreesareprunedtofitinwiththedesign.Carefullyplannedornot,gardensarestillbeautifulandrelaxingplacestovisit.Onafinedayyoumightevenfindalittlepartofparadise,ifyoulookhardenough.Mainideaofthewholepassage?

2.Thestructureofthepassage?

ThehistoryanddevelopmentofgardensPara.1:thestartofgardensPara.2,3,4:thedifferentpurposesofgardensovertimePara.5:thedevelopmentofgardendesignsmakinggardensworksofart段落大意及要點(diǎn)分析Para.1

Themoderngardenhasahistorygoingbackmanythousandsofyears.Earlyhumanswerehuntersandgatherers,travellingfromplacetoplacefollowingthefood(plantsandanimals)accordingtotheseasons.DuringtheNeolithicperiod(over10,000yearsago)thisslowlybegantochange;humansstartedtodomesticatecertainplants,whichmeanttheycouldremaininoneplaceandgrowtheirownfood.Thefirst“garden”,wasavegetable-garden,whereearlyhumanscultivateddifferenttypesofplantsforfood.說(shuō)明:紅色劃線部分是本段的主題：花園有幾千年的歷史。藍(lán)色劃線部分是支持主題句的重要信息：起源及原因。Para.1段落大意可概括為：Gardenshavealonghistorystartingfromearlyhumans'growingplantsforfoodinasettledplacethousandsofyearsago.GardenswerefirstcreatedintheNeolithicperiodwhenhumansstartedtodomesticateplantsforfood.Manythousandsofyearsago,humansstartedtogrowplantstoproducefood,creatingthefirstgardens.段落大意及要點(diǎn)分析Para.2,3,4

Gardenstodayarebeautifulplacestogoandrelax,buthavehadmanypurposesovertheyears.Inthepasttheywereplantedtohonourthegods,orusedinreligiousceremoniessuchasfuneralsandweddings.Certaintreeswerealsosacredinsomecultures;TheancientGreeksplantedgrovesfortheirGods,andmanyculturesbelievedgardenswereholy.Theywerealsoawaytoshowthattheirownerswererichorpowerful.Ancientrulerscreatedhugegardenstodisplaytheirwealth.InRomantimesthegardenbecameanextensionofthehouse,representingtheowner'sstatusinsociety,ratherthanaholyplace.SirFrancisBacondescribedgardensas“thepurestofhumanpleasures.”Pleasureandhappinessareideaslinkedwithgardens.TheancientGreeksbelievedgrowingfoodwasajobforthepoor,butgardenswereplacesforenjoymentandcontemplation.TheEnglishwordparadisecomesfromtheancientPersianwordPairidaeza–meaningawalledspace,agarden.ThegardensoftheMiddleEast,describedinTheArabianNights,wereplacesofgreatbeautyandsplendourwherepeopleenjoyedthepleasuresoflife.

①②③說(shuō)明:這三段話的內(nèi)容同屬于一個(gè)主題：從前人們種植花園的目的或功能。紅色劃線部分是主題句，藍(lán)色劃線部分是重要信息：花園的三個(gè)功能。其它內(nèi)容是對(duì)花園三個(gè)功能的解釋，為次要信息。Overhistory,peoplehaveplantedgardensforreligiouspurposes,asasymbolofwealthandstatusaswellasasourceoflifepleasure.

Gardenshaveevolvedovertimefordifferentpurposes,somereligious,somerepresentingtheowners'wealthorstatus,andsomeforrelaxationandpleasure.Sinceancienttimes,gardenshavehaddifferentfunctions,suchasbeingusedforreligiouspurposes,displayingtheirowners'wealthorstatusandofferingpeoplepleasureandrelaxation.Para.2,3,4段落大意可概括為：段落大意及要點(diǎn)分析Para.5

Asgardenshavedevelopedovertheyears,designandbeautyhavebecomemoreandmoreimportant.Humanshavelearnttocontrolnatureandtodesigngardensprecisely,likeaworkofartorabuilding.TheGardensofVersaillesinFranceareanexcellentexampleof“gardenarchitecture”,everythingissymmetricalandeventhetreesareprunedtofitinwiththedesign.Carefullyplannedornot,gardensarestillbeautifulandrelaxingplacestovisit.Onafinedayyoumightevenfindalittlepartofparadise,ifyoulookhardenough.說(shuō)明:紅色劃線部分是該段的主題：花園設(shè)計(jì)的發(fā)展形成了園林建筑，花園發(fā)展成為一種藝術(shù)作品。Withmoreimportanceattachedtothegardendesignanditsbeauty,gardenshavebecomelikeworksofart.

Overtime,peoplehavevaluedgardens'designandbeautymore,makinggardensanartworkforpeopletovisitandenjoy.

Gardenshavegrowntoinclude“gardenarchitecture”aspeoplepaymoreattentiontoitsdesignandbeauty.Para.5段落大意可概括為：完成概要寫作:用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~把每段的要點(diǎn)連接在一起。注意詞數(shù)，不超過(guò)80詞。通讀一遍，看要點(diǎn)之間是否獨(dú)立，內(nèi)容是否連貫，邏輯是否通順。檢查語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)是否準(zhǔn)確，有無(wú)語(yǔ)法、拼寫及標(biāo)點(diǎn)的錯(cuò)誤。Possibleversion1:

GardenswerefirstcreatedintheNeolithicperiodwhenhumansstartedtodomesticateplantsforfood.(要點(diǎn)1)Overhistory,peoplehaveplantedgardensforreligiouspurposes,asasymbolofwealthandstatusaswellasasourceoflifepleasure.(要點(diǎn)2)Withmoreimportanceattachedtothegardendesignanditsbeautyandgardenarchitecturedevelopingaccordingly,gardenshavebecomelikeworksofart.(要點(diǎn)3)(63words)Possibleversion2:Gardenshavealonghistorywiththousandsofyears,startingfromearlyhumans'growingplantsforfoodinasettledplace.(要點(diǎn)1)Sinceancienttimes,gardenshavehaddifferentpurposes,somereligious,somerepresentingtheowners'wealthorstatus,andsomeforrelaxationandpleasure.(要點(diǎn)2)Overtime,peoplehavevaluedgardens'designandbeautymore,makinggardensanartworkforpeopletovisitandenjoy.(要點(diǎn)3)

(66words)Possibleversion3:Manythousandsofyearsago,humansstartedtogrowplantstoproducefood,creatingthefirstgarde