T8聯(lián)考應(yīng)用文+考試作弊問(wèn)題+分析觀點(diǎn)建議+講義 高三英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)

T8聯(lián)考應(yīng)用文假定你是李華,在外教課期末考試中發(fā)現(xiàn)有人作弊,你認(rèn)為這會(huì)影響考試公平。請(qǐng)你給外教John寫--封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.情況描述;2.你的看法;3.你的請(qǐng)求。

思路

首段：

描述情況中段：看法+請(qǐng)求

尾段：感謝

例文1+解析DearJohn,

Disappointingasthenewsis,Iregarditasa

necessity

tobehonestwithyou.Someonecheatedinthefinalexambyusingelectronicdevice.

（不同于以非謂結(jié)構(gòu)表達(dá)背景+目的的寫法，換種方式寫首段，使用倒裝句式）

Frommyperspective,suchbehaviorseverelyaffectsthefairnessofexam

whichshouldbemaintained

byeverystudent.What’smore,

noonewoulddeny

thefact

that

honestyistheprimaryrequirementforeveryoneattendinganexam.Therefore,

whatIsuggestis

to

exert

relevantpunishmentasawarningtootherssoastopreventthe

occurrence

ofsimilarcasesinthefutureexams.

（看法：影響公平，這是題目已給的，可以再補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn)，例如誠(chéng)實(shí)是考試的基本要求，使用定從

同從；接著利用主從來(lái)寫請(qǐng)求，也可以理解為建議）

Yourattentiononthisissueandconsiderationofmysuggestionwouldbesincerelyappreciated.（最后感謝

使用被動(dòng)）Yours,LiHua默寫版：DearJohn,

______________________________________________盡管這消息令人失望，但我認(rèn)為有必要對(duì)你說(shuō)實(shí)話.Someonecheatedinthefinalexambyusingelectronicdevice.

__________________________________________________________在我看來(lái)，這種行為嚴(yán)重影響了每個(gè)學(xué)生都應(yīng)該維護(hù)的考試公平性.What’smore,

noonewoulddeny

thefact

that

honestyistheprimaryrequirementforeveryoneattendinganexam.______________________________________因此，我建議采取相關(guān)懲罰措施，以警告他人，防止在未來(lái)的考試中發(fā)生類似情況.

Yourattentiononthisissueandconsiderationofmysuggestionwouldbesincerelyappreciated.Yours,LiHua例文2DearJohn,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.I'mLi

Hua,oneofyourstudents,andIamwritingto

report

anincidentofcheatingthatIwitnessed

duringthefinalexam.Regrettably,Inoticedseveralstudents

engageindishonestbehaviorduringtheexam,

suchasexchanginganswersandusingelectronic

devices.Inmyopinion,thesecheatingbehavior

hasthepotentialtoimpacttheoverallfairness

oftheexam.Therefore,Ikindlyrequestthatyoulookintothismatterandreconsiderthe

scoresalreadygiven.Thankyouforyourattentiontothismatter.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua默寫版：DearJohn,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.I'mLi

Hua,oneofyourstudents,and________________________________________________________________我寫信報(bào)告我在期末考試中目睹的一起作弊事件.Regrettably,Inoticedseveralstudents

engageindishonestbehaviorduringtheexam,

suchasexchanginganswersandusingelectronic

devices._________________________________________________________________在我看來(lái)，這些作弊行為有可能影響考試的整體公平性.Therefore,Ikindlyrequestthatyoulookintothismatterandreconsiderthe

scoresalreadygiven.___________________________________感謝您對(duì)此事的關(guān)注.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua分析：戰(zhàn)略——方向：人與自我（校園話題——熱點(diǎn)：學(xué)生作弊現(xiàn)象）戰(zhàn)術(shù)——內(nèi)容：1.情況描述（題設(shè)漢譯英）；2.個(gè)人看法（不建議過(guò)度展開(kāi)，從道德層面入手）；3.表示請(qǐng)求（作為收尾最佳）有用表達(dá)積累：1

exchangednotesand

referredto

materials

regardlessof

others’eyes.2

thisbehavior

isboundto

poseagreatthreatto(對(duì).....有危害)thefairnessoftheexam.3

Cheatingnotonly

disturbhoneststudents’attitudeandmentalstate

,butitalso

goesagainsttheprinciplesoffairness.4

Inlightofthis,Ikindlyrequestthat

appropriatemeasuresbetaken

to

addresstheissueofcheating.5makespeechesabouthowtobeanhonestperson6takemycomplaintintoconsideration7seesomeonecheatingintheexam8theybroketheruleofschool9lookintothematter10preventsuchathingfromhappening11honestyplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife12raisetheawarenessoftheimportanceofhonesty13setstrictrulesintheschool14Afterthinkingtwice,15gethighmarksthroughcheating16makecombinedeffortstoavoidcheating17maketheexamfairandmeaningful18honest-dishonest19takeexamsseriously20Thestudentswhocheatedintheexamshouldbepunished.21

Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell22

reportanincidentofcheating23

dishonestbehaviorduringtheexam24witnessanincidentofcheating

下水文1DearJohn,Iam

LiHua,oneofyourstudents.Iamwritingthise-mail

totellyouadisappointingnewsthatthereweresomestudentscheatingduringthefinalexamination.

Someofthem

lookedupnewwordsstealthily/secretly

byusing

electronicdevices.

Butothers

evencopiedtheanswersopenly/inpublic.

Frommy

perspective,cheatingisadishonest/shamefulbehavior,

whichwill

notonly

break

the

fairn