讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)不同主題分析-樂(lè)于助人(與人為善)

高三英語(yǔ)新題型讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)不同主題分析--樂(lè)于助人板塊一--例文（與人為善）“Hurry,Marcus!”Milliecalledtoherbrother.Marcuscaughtupjustastheschoolbusarrived.Thedoorsopenedandtheygottheirfirstlookatthenewbusdriver,Mr.Cross.Therewasnosmileonhisface.Hejustnoddedatthemastheyclimbedthesteps.Milliewonderedifheeversmiled.“Imissourolddriver,”shewhispered.Thebustraveledtwomoreblocks,thenstoppedinfrontofahousewithnooneinsight.“Hey,wedon’tusuallystophere,”whisperedMillie.Mr.Crossopenedthebusdoors.Milliewaitedtoseewhowouldgeton,butnobodydid.Still,Mr.Crossnoddedhishead,thewayhehadwhensheandMarcusboardedthebus.Thenheclosedthedoors.“Didyouseethat?”Milliesaid.“Hejustopenedthedoorsandnoddedatsomeone,butnobodygoton!”Marcusagreed.“Thatwasstrange.”Thebuscontinuedontheroute,andtheusualkidsgoton.Mr.Crossnoddedateachone.Duringschoolthatday,Milliekeptthinkingbacktowhathadhappenedthatmorning.Itdidn'tmakesense.Attheendoftheday,whensheandMarcusgotonthebustogohome,Marcussaid,“IthinkIfigureditout.Heprobablystoppedtopickupaghostkid!”“Aghostkid?”Milliegulped(倒吸氣).“MaybeMr.Crosscanseeghosts,”Marcussaid.“No,”saidMillie.“That’ssilly.”Butastheyrodehome,Milliethoughtaboutit.Whatelsecoulditbe?Whyelsewouldheopenthedoors?Thenexttwodays,thesamethinghappened.Thebusstoppedandthedoorsopened.Smileless,Mr.Crossnodded,andthedoorsclosed.Milliebegantopanic.ThistimeshedecidedMarcuswasright.“Whoisthisghostkid?Whatifhe’ssittingnexttous?”Theygatheredcouragetofindoutthetruth.OnFridaymorning,thebusstoppedatthathouseagain.Theirheartsraced.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右:2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡相應(yīng)位置作答。WhenMr.Crossopenedthedoorsandnoddedtonobody,theywentforwardtohim._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hearingthestory,inrelief,theydecidedtovisitthehouseandseewhatcanbedone._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】WhenMr.Crossopenedthedoorsandnoddedtonobody,theywentforwardtohim.Milliesaid,“Excuseme,Mr.Cross,whogetsonatthisstopeverymorning?”Mr.Crossreplied,“Iamafraidthattherearesomemisunderstandingsbetweenus.Ihaveanoldfriendwholivesintheoldhouseattheendofthisblock.Everydayatthistime,shewillwaveatmeinfrontofthehouse.Icanalsoseeherinthedistanceandknowthatsheishealthyandsafe.IamsotallthatIhavetonodmyheadtolookoutside.”Hearingthestory,inrelief,theydecidedtovisitthehouseandseewhatcanbedone.Asapproachingthehouse,theysawanoldwomansittingonachairwithadognexttoher.Theyintroducedthemselvestothisoldwoman.Fromthenon,theyoftencametohelptheoldwomanwithsomehouseworkonweekends.WiththegeneroushelpofMillieandMarcus,theoldwomannolongerfeltlonely.Sheoftentoldthemsomeoldstoriesandtheybecamegoodfriends.【解析】【分析】這是一篇記敘文。米莉和她的弟弟馬庫(kù)斯乘坐的校車(chē)換了司機(jī)，新司機(jī)開(kāi)車(chē)每次過(guò)兩個(gè)街區(qū)都會(huì)停下來(lái)，并沒(méi)有任何人上車(chē)，司機(jī)都會(huì)點(diǎn)一下頭。米莉和馬庫(kù)斯既害怕又納悶。終于有一天，他們決心弄清楚這件事情?！驹斀狻勘酒獣?shū)面表達(dá)是讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)。通過(guò)閱讀所給文章可知，米莉和她的弟弟乘坐的校車(chē)換了司機(jī)，新司機(jī)叫克羅斯，他們覺(jué)得新司機(jī)很陌生，臉上沒(méi)有笑容。更令他們害怕的是，校車(chē)每次過(guò)兩個(gè)街區(qū)，克羅斯先生就會(huì)把車(chē)停下來(lái)，并沒(méi)有任何人上車(chē)，但是司機(jī)都會(huì)點(diǎn)一下頭。他們很詫異，弟弟馬庫(kù)斯猜測(cè)說(shuō)，克羅斯先生在那一站接上來(lái)的是“鬼孩子”，米莉并不這么想，但是也很害怕。接下來(lái)的幾天都是這樣，他們?nèi)滩蛔×?。終于有一天，他們鼓起勇氣，決心把這個(gè)事情弄明白。續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，第一段開(kāi)頭是：當(dāng)克羅斯先生打開(kāi)門(mén)，對(duì)著無(wú)人的地方點(diǎn)頭示意時(shí)，他們向他走去……因此，接下來(lái)應(yīng)該續(xù)寫(xiě)，司機(jī)克羅斯先生是怎樣把這個(gè)事情跟米莉姐弟解釋清楚的。原來(lái)是一場(chǎng)誤會(huì)，克羅斯先生有一位老朋友就住在這附近，這位老朋友是個(gè)老婦人，年齡大了，自己孤獨(dú)的住在這里。每次到車(chē)到這的時(shí)候，老婦人都會(huì)出來(lái)和他揮揮手，他也能從遠(yuǎn)處看看她，看到老朋友是健康的、安全的，他就放心了。第二段開(kāi)頭是：聽(tīng)到這個(gè)故事，他們松了一口氣，決定去這個(gè)房子看看能做些什么……本段續(xù)寫(xiě)他們認(rèn)識(shí)了住在房子里的老婦人，并且經(jīng)常在周末的時(shí)候來(lái)幫助老人做家務(wù)，他們也成了很好的朋友?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文描寫(xiě)詳略得當(dāng)，使用了高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子。如：waveat，infrontof，inthedistance，nolonger等高級(jí)詞匯；定語(yǔ)從句Ihaveanoldfriendwholivesintheoldhouseattheendofthisblock；結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句IamsotallthatIhavetonodmyheadtolookoutside；運(yùn)用了Withthegeneroushelpof...的with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)等高級(jí)句式。版塊二讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)精彩詞句集錦表人物日?；顒?dòng)常常發(fā)生的事：afrequentoccurrence費(fèi)時(shí)的：time-consuming讓某人記憶猶新：remainfreshinone’smemory一件身心有益的事情:anenchantingmentalandphysicalbusiness

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