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專題02語篇的連貫性課中講解sectiononecontentcoherence1.Thewritingintentionofthecontinuationpartshouldbeconsistentwiththatofthewritingmaterials.2.Theimportanceofthecohesionbetweenthegivensentenceofeachparagraphandthecontinuationpartshouldbeattached.3.Thecohesionbetweenthetwocontinuationparagraphsshouldalsobepaidattentionto.e.g.Almostwithoutthinking,Ibentandgaveherahug.Sheheldontometightly.Beforethewomanleft,Isaidtoher,“Mymothertreated
everyonekindly,sheisagreatperson,butshepassedawayyearsago.youarelikemymother,”thewomansaid,“thankyou.Ifyouwanttovisitme,I’lltellyoumystory.”Thenthewomanleft.
Afteralongpause,I
drovethetaxi
togohome.Thenextday,Iwas
onmyway
tovisither.
Theoldwomantoldmethatsheusedtobeamillionaire.Shebecameimmersedinmakingmoney.Shewastheownerofa
particularbuilding
wesawlastnight.Butsheneglectedher
family.Heronlysondiedoneyearagobecauseofcancer.Shesoldeverythingtosavehim,butfailed.Howsad!Atlast,theoldwomansaidtome,“Lifeisshort,butpleasebe
innohurry.
Thougheveryonehastoearnmoneyto
makealiving,alwaysrememberthatfamilyisthemostimportantthingtoyou,”I
saidnothing
butnoddedhard.
1.Thethemeofthecontinuationpart,whichistreasuringyourfamily,correspondtothatofthewritingmaterials.Inaddition,theplotinthesecondparagraphcentersaroundthekeyword“particularbuilding”,aclueinthematerialthatisonlybrieflymentionedandneedsfurtherexplanation.2.Thegivensentencesarewellconnectedwiththecontinuationpart.Forexample,inparagraphone,thegivensentence“Almostwithoutthinking,Ibentandgaveherahug.”isfollowedby“Sheheldontometightly.”“Hug”and“holdontome”showsthecohesionbetweenactions.3.Infirstparagraph,“I’lltellyoumystory”isasuspenseplacedbythewriter,whichiswellexplainedbytheplotafterthesentence“Theoldwomantoldmethatsheusedtobeamillionaire.”inthesecondparagraph.sectiontwosentencecoherence強(qiáng)調(diào)still,indeed,apparently,oddlyenough,ofcourse,afterall,significantly,interestingly,also,aboveall,surely,certainly,undoubtedly,inanycase,anyway,aboveall,infact,especially,obviously,clearly比較like,similarly,likewise,inthesameway,inthesamemanner,equally對比bycontrast,onthecontrary,while,whereas,ontheotherhand,unlike,instead,but,conversely,differentfrom,however,nevertheless,otherwise,whereas,unlike,yet,incontrast列舉forexample,forinstance,suchas,take...forexample,except(for),toillustrate時間later,next,then,finally,atlast,eventually,meanwhile,fromnowon,atthesametime,forthetimebeing,intheend,immediately,inthemeantime,inthemeanwhile,recently,soon,nowandthen,during,nowadays,since,lately,assoonas,afterwards,temporarily,earlier,now,afterawhile順序first,second,third,then,finally,tobeginwith,firstofall,inthefirstplace,last,next,aboveall,lastbutnottheleast,firstandmostimportant可能probably,perhaps解釋inotherwords,infact,asamatteroffact,thatis,namely,insimplerterms遞進(jìn)Whatismore,inaddition,and,besides,also,furthermore,too,moreover,furthermore,aswellas,additionally,again讓步although,afterall,inspiteof...,despite,evenif,eventhough,though,admittedly,whatevermayhappen轉(zhuǎn)折however,ratherthan,insteadof,but,yet,ontheotherhand,unfortunately,whereas原因forthisreason,dueto,thanksto,because,becauseof,as,since,owingto結(jié)果asaresult,thus,hence,so,therefore,accordingly,consequently,asaconsequence總結(jié)onthewhole,inconclusion,inaword,tosumup,inbrief,insummary,toconclude,tosummarize,inshort.其他mostly,occasionally,currently,naturally,mainly,exactly,evidently,frankly,monly,forthispurpose,toalargeextent,formostofus,inmanycases,inthiscasesectionthreelanguagecoherenceThelanguagecoherenceisshowinthefouraspects:word,sentence,grammarandfiguresofspeech.e.g.OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.Butnomorehelicoptercameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Amidthedreadfuldarkness,strangesoundsofwildbeastswereheard.“Ifitweren'tforthatstupidquarrel,Iwouldn'tbetrappedhere,”shethoughttoherself,regretfultearscloudinghereyes.Surroundedbythefearandtiredness,Janefeltexhaustedandfinallyslidintosleep.“Tom,isthatyou?“shemurmured.“Tom,help!”Inherdream,shesawamanextendinghisarmstowardsheratadistance.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Afterawashing,Janecontinuedtoforceherwayahead.Intheboundlesssearch,shefounditimpossibletofindawayout,whichthrewherintodesperation.Fortunately,ahelicopterflewoverheadjustatthatmoment.InnotimedidJanerushtotherockandclimbontoit.Shewavedheryellowblousemadlytothepassinghelicopter.Tohergreatjoy,thistime,thehelicopterspottedher.ThemomentJanewasreunitedwithherhusband,hertearscloudedhervision.Theyhuggedeachothertightlyinthewarmlightofthesettingsun.Whatdothetwoarticleshaveinmonconcerningwords,sentencesandgrammar?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________sectionfourstructurecoherenceThestructurecoherencecanbeshownintheechobetweenparagraphs,orbetweencontinuationpartandthetheme,etc.e.g.Butnomorehelicoptercameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Amidthedreadfuldarkness,strangesoundsofwildbeastswereheard.“Ifitweren'tforthatstupidquarrel,Iwouldn'tbetrappedhere,”shethoughttoherself,regretfultearscloudinghereyes.Surroundedbythefearandtiredness,Janefeltexhaustedandfinallyslidintosleep.“Tom,isthatyou?“shemurmured.“Tom,help!”Inherdream,shesawamanextendinghisarmstowardsheratadistance.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Afterawashing,Janecontinuedtoforceherwayahead.Intheboundlesssearch,shefounditimpossibletofindawayout,whichthrewherintodesperation.Fortunately,ahelicopterflewoverheadjustatthatmoment.InnotimedidJanerushtotherockandclimbontoit.Shewavedheryellowblousemadlytothepassinghelicopter.Tohergreatjoy,thistime,thehelicopterspottedher.ThemomentJanewasreunitedwithherhusband,hertearscloudedhervision.Theyhuggedeachothertightlyinthewarmlightofthesettingsun.e.g.Ihadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusement,allbecauseofmymotherloving,sweet,yetabsentmindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeightyearoldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgoodbyetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwewouldeverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecksMomhadforgotten.DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:“Youstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookout(放哨)whileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:“Honey,wherearethekids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh…Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquite.”Wewereneveractuallyleftinastrangecity,butwewerenotabouttotakeanychance.Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn’twefindahousewithalikelylookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections(反對).Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorstep,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldisasniceassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.Paragraph1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrandnewtentwehadbroughtwithus.Paragraph2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.學(xué)生習(xí)作:Thenextdaywerememberthebrannewtentwehadbroughtwithus.“We’renotgoingtostayinhotelsanymore.”Momsuddenlysaid,withafirmtone,“Orourtentwouldbeofnouse.”Withallourobjectionsinvain,wefinallystoppedonthefrontdoorstepofahousewithabigbackyard.Tooursurprise,itwasamuchbetterexperiencethanwehadimagined.DavidandIhadagreattimetryingallthecampingequipmentandmomwaschattinghappilywiththekindfamily.Thoughwedidn’thavethetoolsforcookingsincemomissoforgetful,westillhaveagoodmealastheretrulywassomeonewhowasasniceasmomwas.Wedrovethroughseveralstatesan
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