五年高考英語作文真題匯編（全國卷含2021年6月真題）(二)

五年高考英語作文真題匯編（共17套）

目錄

2021年全國甲卷..................................................................1

2021年全國乙卷..................................................................4

2020年全國一卷..................................................................5

2020年全國二卷..................................................................5

2020年全國三卷..................................................................6

2019年全國卷1.................................................................................................................................8

2019年全國卷II...............................................................................................................................9

2019年全國卷HI............................................................................................................................10

2018年全國卷1...............................................................................................................................11

2018年全國卷II.............................................................................................................................12

2018年全國卷III............................................................................................................................12

2017年全國卷1...............................................................................................................................14

2017年全國卷II.............................................................................................................................16

2017年全國卷III............................................................................................................................18

2016年全國卷I........................................................................................19

2016年全國卷H.............................................................................................................................20

2016年全國卷III............................................................................................................................21

2021年全國甲卷

假定你是李華，你校計劃舉辦介紹中國傳統(tǒng)文化的主題班會，并在英語網(wǎng)站上展示，請

你給外國朋友Chris寫封信，向他了解哪些中國傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國朋友，內(nèi)容如下：

1.闡明寫信事由;

2.征求建議；

3.表達(dá)感謝。

注意:

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearChris,

Yours,

LiHua

Chinesetraditionalcultureincludescalligraphy,Chineseknot,Beijingoperafacialmakeup,

shadowplay,martialarts,terracottawarriorsandhorses,jadecarving,oracleboneinscriptions,

fourtreasuresofthestudy,flute,guzheng,pipa,dragonandphoenixpatterns,paintedpottery,

traditionalChinesepainting,etc.Chinesetraditionalcultureisthefundamentalcreativityofthe

achievementsofChinesecivilization,andistheoverallcombinationofmoralinheritance,various

culturalthoughtsandspiritualconceptsinthenationalhistory.Itismainlycomposedof

Confucianism,BuddhismandTaoism.Traditionalcultureisnotonlyprofoundinthoughtand

profoundincontent.

【參考范文】

DearChris,

Howiseverythinggoingwithyoulately?Aclassmeetingwillbeheldinmyschoolabout

ChinesetraditionalculturalanditwillbedisplayedontheEnglishwebsite.Iamwritingtoask

someadvicefromyouonwhatkindofChineseconventionalculturalattractstheforeignerslike

youmost.

Asweallknow,Chinesetraditionalcultureincludescalligraphy,Chineseknots,martialarts,

Chinesepaintings,ancientpaintedpottery,papercutting,terracottawarriorsandhorsesandsoon.

Besides,Chineseculturalalsoincludesvariousculturalthoughtsandspiritualconceptsinthe

nationalhistory,whichismainlycomposedofConfucianism,BuddhismandTaoism.Howmuch

doyouwanttoknowabouteachpart,andwouldyoupleasetellmewhichpartyouarecurious

about.Whattypeofintroductionwillhelpforeignerstohaveamuchclearerknowledgeoftheir

interestedsection?

Yourpromptreplywillbehighlyappreciatedandthankyouforyourhelp.Youcanalso

collectsometipsfromyourfriendsthere.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

Yours,

LiHua

關(guān)鍵詞匯：

班會：aclassmeeting

書法calligraphy

中國結(jié)Chineseknot

京戲臉譜Beijingoperafacialmakeup

皮影shadowplay

武術(shù)martialarts

兵馬俑terracottawarriorsandhorses

玉雕jadecarving

甲骨文oracleboneinscriptions

文房四寶fourtreasuresofthestudy

笛子flute

古箏guzheng

琵琶pipa

龍鳳紋樣dragonandphoenixpatterns,

彩陶paintedpottery

國畫traditionalChinesepainting

儒、佛、道Confucianism,BuddhismandTaoism

補(bǔ)充信息：

“中國傳統(tǒng)文化有書法、中國結(jié)、京戲臉譜、皮影、武術(shù)、兵馬俑、玉雕、甲骨文、文

房四寶、笛子、古箏、琵琶、龍鳳紋樣、彩陶、國畫等。中華傳統(tǒng)文化，是中華文明成果根

本創(chuàng)造力，是民族歷史上道德傳承、各種文化思想、精神觀念形態(tài)的總體。主要由儒、佛、

道三家文化為主流組成。傳統(tǒng)文化不僅思想深邃圓融，內(nèi)容廣博。“

2021年全國乙卷

你校將舉辦英語演講比賽，請你以Besmartonlinelearner寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽，

內(nèi)容包括：

1.分析優(yōu)勢及不足；

2.提出學(xué)習(xí)建議。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100詞左右；

2.題目和首句以為你寫好。

Besmartonlinelearner

Nowadays,onlinestudyhasbeenwidelyadoptedandspreadincampusamong

teenagers,withitsswiftness,efficiency,aswellaslowcost.However,withan

increasingnumberofstudentsbecomingonlinelearners,howtobeasmartonline

learnertomakefulluseofonlinestudyhasarousedwideattention.HereI'dliketo

callonallofustobesmartonlinelearner.

Comparedwithtraditionalschooling,learningonlinecanhappenanytimeand

anywhere.Andwecanreviewthelessonaccordingourownschedule.However,

onlinestudycanneedmorefocusandself-discipline,andwedon'thaveclassmatesto

discussorhavetheteacher'sinstructioninpersonlikeinphysicalclass.

WhatIcallonhereistosetupatimetableandtrytocombineonlinestudywith

offlinestudy.Inaddition,trytowritedowntheproblemsandconsultedtheteacherin

time.Don'tforgettoreviewtheknowledgeonbooks.Andlimitstudytimeto2hours

atimetoprotecteyes.Finally,lefsbesmartonlinelearnerandmakemoreprogressin

study.Thankyoufbryourlistening!

2020年全國一一卷

你校正在組織英語作文比賽。請以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題，寫一篇短文參賽，內(nèi)

容包括：

1.人物簡介；

2.尊敬和愛戴的原因。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.短文題目和首句已為你寫好。

ThepersonIrespect

Wehavealotofrespectablepeoplearoundus.Theymaybeourteachers,parents

oroneofourelders.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmost.Myfatherisateacher

wholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewill

alsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthis

work.

WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemsoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistento

mepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.Heachievedalotinhis

work,respectedbyhisstudents.So,inmymindmyfatheristhepersonIrespectmostandI

lovehimdeeply.

2020年全國二卷

上周末，你和同學(xué)參加了一次采摘活動。請你為班級英語角寫一篇短文，介紹這次活動,

內(nèi)容包括：

i.農(nóng)場情況；

2.采摘過程；

3.個人感受。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.題目已為你寫好。

題目：MyWeekend

答案

參考范文：

MyWeekend

Lastweekend,wetookpartinapickingactivity.Wedrovefromtheschool,andthe

farmwasabout2kilometersawayfromourschool.Whenwearrivedatthefarm,there

areallkindsofanimals,greenfreshvegetablesandfruittreesinthefarm.Wewere

dividedintotwogroups.Onegroupwasresponsibleforpickingfruits,theotherpacked

upthefruits.Timeflyingquickly,theactivitywasover.Butitwasameaningfulday,

whenwelearnalotformit.Throughthisactivity,weknowhowhardthefarmersareand

howpreciousthefoodis.Weshouldtreasurethefoodplantedbythefarmers.

解析

（1）寫作思路

本文是一篇提綱式的書面表達(dá)，要求介紹自己和同學(xué)上周末參加的一次采摘活動。在介紹農(nóng)

場情況時，可以談?wù)撛撧r(nóng)場的位置、農(nóng)場的采摘品種、是否屬于生態(tài)農(nóng)場等內(nèi)容；在描述采

摘過程時，可以描述采摘的物品、和同學(xué)之間的合作、農(nóng)民的指導(dǎo)等內(nèi)容，時態(tài)應(yīng)當(dāng)以一般

過去時為主；在表達(dá)個人感受時，可以從人與自然的角度或者勞動能力的培養(yǎng)方面入手，時

態(tài)以一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時為主。在寫作時.，可以適當(dāng)增加過渡詞或句子，使文章更加的

連貫流暢。

（2）重點詞匯/句型

a.Theecologicalfarmgrowsawidevarietyoffruitandvegetables.（awidevarietyof各種各樣

的）

b.Theguideshowedusaroundthefarmandexplainedtoushowtopluckthefruitandvegetables.

（showsb.around帶某人參觀）

c.Thefruitandvegetablesweregoodforusbecausetheywereplantedwithorganicfertilizers.（be

goodfor對...有好處）

d.ThecleanairandthefreshfruitmademefeelsorelaxedthatIwantedtopayasecondvisit,

（so...that...如此..以至于....）

2020年全國三卷

假定你是李華，你和同學(xué)根據(jù)英語課文改編了一個短劇。給外教MissEvans寫封郵件,

請她幫忙指導(dǎo)。

郵件內(nèi)容包括：

1.劇情簡介；

2.指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容；

3.商定時間地點。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.結(jié)束語已為你寫好。

答案

DearMissEvans,

Howiseverythinggoing!Iamwritinginsinceritytoaskyouafavorregardinga

playweadaptedaccordingtothetextbook.

We'dliketocombineyourculturewithoursbyadaptingtheclassicnovelThe

SteamboatforashortEnglishplay.Theplayissetonabigstormaftermidnight:onthe

raftdowntherivernavigation,seeingasteamboatthatwassgoingtosink,wesaveda

scaredboy.However,theadaptionisquiteachallenge.HavingwrittentheEnglish

script,wedon'twantanythinginappropriatetospoiltheplay.Sowouldyouplease

sparesometimetoreviewthedraftscriptattachedtothisemailandmakenecessary

changes?Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogive

youmoredetails?

Givenyourbusyschedule,Fdbeveryappreciativeifyouoffertogivesome

professionaladvice.Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestregards!

Yourstruly,

LiHua

解析

(1)寫作思路：

1.體裁：應(yīng)用文

2.時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時，一般過去時和一般將來時。

3.結(jié)構(gòu)：總分總法

4.第一段說明寫這封郵件的目的；第二段詳細(xì)說明英語戲劇的劇情介紹和指導(dǎo)內(nèi)

容細(xì)節(jié)問題；第三段表達(dá)感謝，并期待早日得到回復(fù)。

(2)必備詞匯、短語：

1.insincerity真誠地；

2.accordingto根據(jù)；

3.combine...with...將..與....結(jié)合；

4.adapt改編；

5.attach...to...將..附在....上；

6.itisconvenientforyou你時間方便的時候。

(3)必備句式:

1.定語從句的使用：weseeasteamboatthatisgoingtosink；

2,非謂語動詞作狀語的使用：HavingwrittentheEnglishscript,wedon'twant

anything...；

3.非謂語動詞作定語的使用：…thedraftscriptattachedtothisemail；

4.狀語從句的使用：I'dbeveryappreciativeifyouoffertogivesomeprofessional

advice.

2019年全國卷I

假定你是李華，暑期在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)。得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展覽。請寫一封信申請

做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括：

1.寫信目的；

2.個人優(yōu)勢；

3.能做的事情。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.結(jié)束語已為你寫好。

［參考范文］

DearSir/Madam,

FmLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChina.Learningthatvolunteerstudentsarewantedfora

Chinesepaintingexhibition,Fmwritingtoapplyfortheposition.

IthinkI'mquiteequaltothepostTobeginwith,beingexposedtoEnglishsinceayoungage

enablesmetocommunicatefluentlywithothers.Besides,yearsofbeingmonitormakesmea

brilliantorganizer,whichwillhelpalottokeeptheexhibitioninorder.Additionally,Icanmake

fulluseofmyrelatedknowledgetohelpthevisitorslearnmoreabouttheuniqueChineseart

form.

Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyour

earlyreply.

Yours,

LiHua

2019年全國卷n

假定你是校排球隊隊長李華。請寫封郵件告知你的隊友Chris球隊近期將參加比賽，內(nèi)

容包括：

1.比賽信息；

2.賽前準(zhǔn)備；

3.表達(dá)期待。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Version1

DearChris,

Fmwritingtoletyouknowthatwewillhaveavolleyballmatchnextmonth.The

matchwilltakeplaceinourschoolgymontheafternoonofJuly4th.Wewillplay

againsttheteamfromHongXingHighSchool.Inordertowinthematch,weshouldget

fullypreparedandpracticehard.Sofromtomorrow,weneedtotrainfortwohours

afterschooleveryday.Pleasecometotheschoolgymat6:30pmfromMondayto

Friday.

You'reanexcellentplayer.Withyouontheteam,wearehopefultowinthegame.

Let'stryhardtogether!

Cheers,

LiHua

Version2

DearChris,

AreyouexcitedaboutourcomingvolleyballgameagainstYucaiMiddleSchool

nextFriday?HereI'dliketoinformyouofsomedetailedinformationsothatyoucan

makefullpreparationsforit.

Firstandforemost,thecompetitiontobeheldinourschoolstadiumwillbeginat2

pmandlastfbrroughly3hours.Sosignificantisthegamethatitisrequiredthat

everyoneshouldpresentthemselvespunctually.Further,itisnecessaryforyoutotakea

goodrest,whichwillprovideenoughenergyforyou.Tosumup,Iwishyoucouldlive

uptotheexpectationsofourschool.AndIfirmlybelievehardworkwillpayoff!

Lookingforwardtoourvictory!

Yourstruly,

LiHua

解析

本篇書面表達(dá)是一封告知信。首先要告知寫信目的；然后簡明扼要地告知排球比賽的時間、

地點以及賽前的準(zhǔn)備事項，注意事件信息的三要素：時間、地點、人物，要交代清楚；第三

則要表達(dá)對隊友的期待和鼓勵。

本文內(nèi)容完整，詳略得當(dāng)，并運(yùn)用了高級句式。I'mwilingtoletyouknowthatwewillhavea

volleyballmatchnextmonth.1賓語從句；Inordertowinthematch不定式作目的狀語。文章語

言流暢，上下文轉(zhuǎn)換自然。

2019年全國卷m

假定你是李華，你校將舉辦音樂節(jié)，請寫封郵件邀請你的英國朋友Allen參加，內(nèi)容包

括：

1.時間；

2.活動安排；

3.歡迎他表演節(jié)目。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右：

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearAllen,

YoumusthaveheardoftheupcomingMusicFestivaltobeheldinourschool.

Sinceyoutakemuchinterestinmusic,Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinthe

festivalwithme.

Asscheduled,itwillbeheldontheplaygroundfrom5p.m.to8p.m.next

Sunday.Additionally,sittingonthegrassandenjoyingthetastyfoodanddrinks

providedbysponsors,wewillbefullyabsorbedintheattractiveandfascinating

performances.Furthermore,wealsoexpecttoseeyouonthestagethen.

rdbemorethandelightedifyoucouldcomeandsharethisjoyfulmomentwith

me.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

解析

It'sapleasureformetoinviteyoutoattend…我很榮幸能邀請你參加...

Ithinkitwillbeagoodidca/morebeneficialifyoucould...我認(rèn)為...是個好主意/

有利的。

Thankyouforyourattention.感謝你對此事的關(guān)注。

Ifyou...,youwill...如果你...,你將會....。

Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeanearlyreply.希望盡早得到答復(fù)。

2018年全國卷I

假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國朋友家做客，發(fā)郵件向你詢問有關(guān)習(xí)俗。

請你回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.到達(dá)時間；

2.合適的禮物；

3.餐桌禮儀。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearTerry,

IamdelightedtolearnthatyouwillvisityourChinesefriendinhishousesoon.Accordingto

thequestionsyouraised,I'dliketoofferyouthefollowingadvice.

Firstly,youshouldconfirmthearrivaltimewithhimbeforeyourvisit.It*sbettertoturnup5

minutesinadvance.Besides,Irecommendthatyoushouldbringapropergiftwithyou,whichcan

beaprimewine,aselectedskincareproductorsomepopularhoneyproducedinNewZealand.I

thinkthefamilywillappreciateanyofthemastheyarequitepopularinChina.Mostimportantly,

Chinesetablemannersareverydifferentfromyours.What'sconsideredtobepoliteistakingfood

justpresentedinfrontofyouwithaspoonorchopsticks.Also,don'twoiTyiftheykeepfilling

yourbowlwithvariousfood,becauseitalwaysmeanswelcomeandfriendshipinourculture,

whichyoucanfeelfreetoenjoy.

Ican*twaittoseeyouinChina!Hopeyouhaveapleasanttrip!

Withlove,

LiHua

DearTerry,

Howareyoudoing?Inyourlastletter,youaskedmeaboutbeingaguesttoaChinese

friend'shome.Now,Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails.

Tobeginwith,accordingtoourtradition,youaresupposedtoarriveearly,sothat

youcanhelpthefamilypreparethedinner,whichismeaningfulandinteresting.Besides,

you'dbetterbringsomegifts,likeabookoraChineseknot.What'smore,whenyouare

enjoyingthemeal,youneedtoavoidmakingnoiseswhilechewingfood.

Hopefully,thesesuggestionswouldbehelpfulforyou.Ihavetheconfidencethatyou

willhaveagreattime.

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

2018年全國卷II

你受學(xué)生會委托為校宣傳欄“英語天地”寫一則通知，請大家觀看一部英文短片

GrowingTogether,內(nèi)容包括：

1.短片內(nèi)容：學(xué)校的發(fā)展；

2.放映時間、地點；

3.歡迎對短片提出意見。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Notice

Inordertohaveabetterunderstandingofourschool,anoutstandingEnglishshort

movieaboutourschoolwillbeshowninthelibraryfrom2:30to4:00intheafternoonon

June9th.ItisorganizedbytheStudentUnion.Herearesomerelevantdetailsaboutit.

Tobeginwith,thenameofthemovieisGrowingTogether,whichisaboutthe

developmentofourbelovedschool.Asweallexpect,itwillbenotonlymeaningfulbut

alsointeresting.Whafsmore,everyoneofyouwillbewelcometotakepart(participate)

init,enjoyingthemovie,havingaheateddiscussionafterwardsandgivingyourown

comments.

TheStudentUnion

June8,2018

2018年全國卷in

假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter來信詢問你校學(xué)生體育運(yùn)動情況。請給他回信

內(nèi)容包括：

1.學(xué)校的體育場館；

2.主要的運(yùn)動項目；

3.你喜歡的項目。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右：

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

(1)

DearPeter,

Howareyoudoing?YouaskedmeabouthowourschoolperformsourPEclassesinyour

lastletter,soI'mwritingtosharewithyousomedetails.

Equippedwithtwoplaygroundsaswellasasplendidstadium,ourschooloffersusan

opportunitytodoavarietyofsports.Notonlydowetakevolleyballandbasketballcourses,but

ourschoolalsoholdsallkindsofsportscompetitions.Amongallsports,I'mcrazy

aboutvolleyball.AsfarasI'mconcerned,thereisnothingbetterthanplayingvolleyball,which

contributestouscooperatingwithothers.

Lookingforwardtohearingfromyouagain!

Yours,

LiHua

(2)

DearPeter,

Howareyoudoingthesedays?Ijustreceivedyourletteryesterday,andI'mgladtoknow

you'reinterestedinthesportsactivitiesinourschool.

Ourschoolhasasportsfieldwhichcoversanareaofabouttwosquarekilometers.Wehave

threeindooractivityroomsaswell,locatedintheeastofourcampus.

Ourschooloftenholdsfbotballandbasketballmatches,andplayersfromotherschoolsoften

cometoplayagainstus.

Myfavoritesportisbasketball.PmamemberoftheDragonTeam.What'syourfavorite

sport?

Hopetohearfromyousoon!

Yours,

LiHua

DearPeter,

Iamsodelightedtohavereceivedyourletter.Youaskedmeinyourlastletterabout

themephysicalexerciseinourschoolandthefollowinginformationmaygiveyousome

help.

Tomygreatjoy,afamousnewstadiumhasbeenputup,whichhasbecomethe

landmarkinourschool.Besides,withthestadiumbuilt,awiderangeofsportsactivities

canbecarriedout,ofwhichtabletennis,footballaswellasrunningcompetitionsenjoy

greatpopularity.Iamparticularlyfondofbasketballbecauseithasbeengivingme

strengthtoconfrontthechallengeinmylife.

Finally,Isincerelyinviteyoutovisitourschoolandjoininthesportswebothlike.

Yours,

LiHua

2017年全國卷I

假定你是李華，正在教你的英國朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語。請你寫封郵件告知下次上課的計

劃。內(nèi)容包括：

(1)時間和地點；

(2)內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩；

(3)課前準(zhǔn)備：簡要了解唐朝的歷史。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

范文一：

DearLeslie,

Nextweek,wearegoingtoenjoyournextChineseclass.Thedetailsareas

follows.?

Firstofall,②wellmeetinthereadingroomat3:00p.m.thisSaturdayafternoon.

Whafsmore,FdliketointroducetheTangPoemstoyou.TheTangPoemsarepopular

amongChinesepeopleandattractlotsofforeignersaswell.③Ibelieveyouwilllike

them,too.ToappreciateTangpoemswellcanfurtherimproveyourlanguageskillsand

enhanceyourunderstandingofChinesecultures.?Ofcourse,you'dbettermakesome

preparationsforitinadvance,soIsuggestyoulearnaboutthebriefhistoryoftheTang

Dynasty,whichwillsurelyhelpwithyourlearningofthepoems.⑤

Hopingtohearfromyousoon.

Yours,

LiHua

范文二：

DearLeslie,

HowaboutyourprogressinChinese?HaveyoutakeninallthatItaughtyoulast

time?①ThisFridaywewillmoveontoanewunit,andFmwritingtoinformyouof

somedetails.

ThethemeofthisunitistheTangPoems.AsaChinesesayinggoes,whenone

learns300poemsoftheTangDynastybyheart,oneissuretobeabletowrite

poems.?Theyarewellworthlearningifyouaretobeexposedtothetraditional

Chineseculture.@Beforethelesson,youarerequiredtolearnsomethingaboutthe

TangDynastybecausefamiliaritywiththebackgroundcanenhance

understanding.?WewillhavethelessoninRoom306intheteachingbuildingat3:00

p.m.

Lookingforwardtoyourcoming.?

Yours,

LiHua

范文三：

DearLeslie,

Howareyou?GladtoseeyouhavemadesomeprogressinChineselearningand

I'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutournextlesson.

Thelessonwillbegivenfrom3p.m.to5p.m.ontheaftemoonofnextTuesdayin

theclassroom502.Intheclass,youwillmainlylearnTangpoetry,whichreflects

traditionalChinesecultureandisdeeplylovedbyChinese.Youcanfeelthebeautyof

ChinesebylearningTangPoetry.You'dbettermakefullpreparationsbeforeclassand

haveabriefunderstandingofthehistoryofTangDynasty,whichmakesiteasyforyou

togothroughtheclass.

IfthereisanythingthatIcanhelpyou,pleasedon*thesitatetotellme.Looking

forwardtomeetingyou.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

解析

范文一：

①過渡句總領(lǐng)全文，說明下次學(xué)習(xí)計戈I。

②過渡詞語增加了文章的連貫性，脈絡(luò)清晰，使文章渾然一體，有較強(qiáng)的層次感。

③aswell用得好。正確使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，增強(qiáng)句子間的邏輯性和緊湊性是提分的一個絕招。

④這是個很上檔次的句子。不定式短語作主語不僅展現(xiàn)了作者較強(qiáng)的語言表達(dá)能力，也提高

了文章的檔次。

⑤復(fù)雜句式加分！"hadbetter+動詞原形”是提建議的固定句型，suggest后賓語從句中的虛

擬語氣，which引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句都是本文的亮點。

本篇習(xí)作內(nèi)容要點齊全，布局謀篇合理：段落主題明確，層次分明，非常有條理性。表達(dá)方

式多樣化，長短結(jié)合，錯落有致。固定句型運(yùn)用嫻熟自如，并且語言出彩。多祥的語法結(jié)構(gòu)，

如不定式、虛擬語氣及which引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句，增強(qiáng)了文章的表達(dá)效果。過渡性詞

組firstofall,what'smore,aswell等使文章渾然一體。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,行文連貫。hadbetter句型

更為文章錦上添花。總之，這篇文章無論從遣詞造句還是從語言表達(dá)上來講，都能成為一篇

滿分作文。

范文二：

①本句頗有關(guān)切情懷，符合作者身份，緊扣"正在教你的英國朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語"。

②此句中使用as引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句，以及諺語的恰當(dāng)引用，對文章主題起到了“畫

龍點睛"作用。

③用bewellworthlearning和heexposedto進(jìn)一步闡述學(xué)習(xí)"唐詩"的必要性。適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，

充實文章內(nèi)容。

④用arerequiredto提出作"課前準(zhǔn)備"的要求，用because引導(dǎo)的狀語從句解釋"簡要了解

唐朝的歷史”的原因。

⑤表達(dá)期盼。用省略句和動名詞的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，高級簡練，充分彰顯出作者靈活的語言駕馭能

力，也提升了文章的檔次和品味。

本文不落俗套，沒有完全按提示要點順序撰寫，讀起來令人耳目一新。本篇習(xí)作內(nèi)容切題，

覆蓋了所有要點。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、語言地道。文中長短句交替使用，一氣呵成。用了大量的

高級詞匯，如enhance,takein,bewellworth,beexposedto,berequiredto等。復(fù)合句、省

略句和動名詞的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)充分展示了作者不凡的運(yùn)筆能力，尤其諺語的引用，可以營造一種

文化氛圍，喚起讀者的閱讀情趣，同時也豐富了文章的文化底蘊(yùn)，使文章熠熠生輝?？傊?/p>

本文是一篇內(nèi)容充實、語言優(yōu)美地道的優(yōu)秀作品，值得學(xué)習(xí)借鑒。

2017年全國卷II

假定你是李華，想邀請外教Henry一起參觀中國剪紙(paper-cutting)藝術(shù)展。請給他

寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.展覽時間、地點；

2.展覽內(nèi)容。

注意：

L詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearHenry,

FmLiHua.I'mwritingtoinviteyoutoseetheChinesepaper-cuttingexhibition.Itisa

Chinesefolkartwithalonghistory.

TheexhibitionwillbeheldintheCityMuseum,locatedinthenorthofourcity.Itwillstart

fromJune16thandlastformorethanaweek.It'ssaidthatalargenumberofpaper-cutworksby

expertsthroughoutChinawillbeonshow,andsomeofthemaremadebyfamousartists.The

papercutsareaboutanimals,plants,peopleandotherthings.Visitingthisexhibition,wewillnot

onlyenjoythefolkartworks,butalsolearnalot.

Ifyou'reinterestedintheChinesefolkart,pleasee-mailme.Wecanmakeitanydaytovisit

theexhibition.

Lookforwardtoyourcoming.

Yours,