2023學(xué)年完整公開(kāi)課版Task 優(yōu)秀

作文講評(píng)課蕪湖市第二中學(xué)張德芝

“Mydreamcommunity”Let’sexaminethetopicagain:自主學(xué)習(xí)討論：一重新審題：Examinethetopicagain,andsolvetheproblemsbelowafterdiscussion.1.Style(體裁):______2.Tense(時(shí)態(tài)):___________3.Person(人稱):___________4.Structure:(結(jié)構(gòu)):___________首先，體裁---說(shuō)明文，題型---提綱作文:要點(diǎn)齊全，條理清晰。第二，時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第三：人稱---第一，三人稱----注意主謂一致問(wèn)題。第三，文章結(jié)構(gòu):要完整緊湊，語(yǔ)言要簡(jiǎn)練---思維導(dǎo)圖:三段：1.概況：環(huán)境和設(shè)施。2.社區(qū)的鄰居和志愿者，3.表達(dá)自己住在這樣社區(qū)的感受。這樣下來(lái)文章結(jié)構(gòu)就比較完整，條理比較清晰。錯(cuò)誤診斷：1）拼寫錯(cuò)誤2）名詞單復(fù)數(shù)3）短語(yǔ)搭配錯(cuò)誤4）主謂一致5）詞性誤用6）句子結(jié)構(gòu)運(yùn)用問(wèn)題，特別是“有”字表達(dá)7）句子不完整，如缺少謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。8）句子首字母大寫問(wèn)題9)卷面涂畫，字跡不清10）要點(diǎn)不全，詞數(shù)不夠。主謂一致卷面涂畫，字跡不清要點(diǎn)不全，詞數(shù)不夠Let’stranslate:e.g.里面有許多樹和花。也有花園，運(yùn)動(dòng)場(chǎng)，游泳池

1.Therearemanytreesandflowersinit.Italsohasgardens,communityplaygroundsandswimmingpools.

2.里面也有種有許多樹和花的花園。2.Therearealsobeautifulgardenswithlotsoftreesandflowersinit.合作學(xué)習(xí)Pairwork:Pleaseworkinpairsandhaveatalkaboutthemistakesinsentencesinthehandoutandcorrectthem.Let’scorrect:合作探究workingroupsof4:1)Correctthemistakesinyourwritingbyyourselves2)exchangeyourwritingwithyourpartners.Trytocorrectthemistakesinhis/herwriting.3)writedownsomegoodsentencesfromyourpartners'writingsinyournotebook.4)showusthegoodsentences幻燈片16wConsolidationwriting:Writeabout“Mydreamschool”Homework:Writeabout“Mydreamschool”Showtime!MydreamcommunityMydreamcommunityisverybigbuttherearen’tmanyfamiliesinit.Manytreesandflowersgrowthere.Theymakethecommunityverybeautiful.Thereisalsoagarden,aplaygroundandevenaswimmingpoolinit.Peoplecangoswimminginitinsummer.Ilikemyneighborsbecausetheyarekindandfriendly.Theyarealwaysreadydohelppeopleinneed.Someofthemarevolunteers.Theyhavemanykindsofskillsandtheyuseth