讀后續(xù)寫練習寫作講義-高三英語一輪復習

讀后續(xù)寫CleanupthelitteredparkOnahotSeptemberafternoon,PeterandhisfriendIsabelwereontheirwaytothelibrary.WhentheypassedbyTubmanpark,Isabelsuggestedcuttingthroughittogettothelibrary.Astheyenteredthepark,thesightoftheswings(秋千)andthemerrygoroundbroughtbackafloodofmemoriesoftheirchildhoodspentthere.Butnoweverythinglookedsoold,sad,anddirty.Litterlayonthegroundnexttoanoverflowingtrashbin.Therewerestillyoungschoolchildrenplayingtherebuttheyhadtoavoidthetrashthatlitteredtheplayground.Alittleboytoldthemthatthecitytooktheothertrashcansawayandtheremainingonenevergotemptiedoften.Astheyheadedtowardthelibrary,thetwohighschoolstudentswrinkledtheirforehead.Inthelibrary,theyencounteredMrs.Evans,theirkindheartedfifthgradeteacher,retiredyetstillpassionate.Mrs.EvanslistenedasIsabelandPetereagerlyexplainedwhatthey'dseen.Finally,sheremendedthemtogototheCityHalltovoicetheirconcerns.Thenextday,IsabelandPeterwentintothebuildingoftheCityHallbutweremetwithanimpatientofficer.Theywereinformedthatthecitycouldn'thelpwiththeirproblemduetoatightbudget.Discouraged,theyleftandturnedtoMrs.Evansforhelp.Underherguidance,theydecidedtoaskGoGreen,anonprofitorganizationwhosegoalistoprotecttheenvironment,forhelp.“Thisgroupisgoodatraisingmoneyforprojectsjustlikeyours,”saidMrs.Evans.ShepromisedtoarrangethemtopresenttheirideastoGoGreen.Atthis,theirfaces

litup.Twomaintasksremainedahead:

researchingwaystocleanuptheparkandpreparingaconvincingpresentation.AsIsabelwasgoodatresearchingwhilePeteralwayshadatalentforspeaking,theycooperatedquitewell.Isabellearnedfromasciencemagazinethatanewtypeoftrashbincansqueezethetrashdownwithoutbeingemptiedoften,whichsavestime,money,andenergy.Basedonthis,Peterpracticedhispresentationoverandoveragain.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Aweeklater,PeterstoodnervouslyatthebackofthehallwhereGoGreenwasmeeting.Afterthemeeting,IsabelexcitedlytoldPeterthegoodnews.參考范文：100+105Aweeklater,PeterstoodnervouslyatthebackofthehallwhereGoGreenwasmeeting.Butdeterminationandresponsibilitydrovehimon.Afterthehost’sintroduction,Petertookadeepbreathandstepped.Thoughbutterfliesinhisstomach,PetersolemnlystatedwhattheParkwaslikeinhismemoryandhowimportanttheparkwastothemunity.TheninPowerPoint,Petershowedhowthenewtrashbinfunctionedinthepublicareas,wheremanpowerandresourceswerelimited,tryingtoproveitsfeasibility.Attheendofhispresentation,Peterconcluded,“Wecan’taffordtoloseourparadise,andit’sourresponsibilitytoprotectit.”Applauseranthroughthehall.Andthemitteeexchangedtheirthoughts,withanapprovinglookontheirfaces.

Afterthemeeting,IsabelexcitedlytoldPeterthegoodnews.Themitteereachedaconsensusabouttheneedtorestoreandprotectthepark.Theywouldnotonlyfundtheschemeofthenewtrashbinbutorganizevolunteerstoengageinclearupwork.Thenewsspreadrapidly,gettingmorepeopleinvolved.SoonTubmanParkrestoredtoitsformerlook,cleanandtidyagain.Besides,withthenewtrashbinsfurnished,thetroublebotheringthemunityforlongwasresolved.WalkingalongwithPeterandIsabelintherefreshedpark,MrsEvanscouldn’thelpexclaiming,“Itisyourresponsibilityandenthusiasmthatbringbackanewparkandhavepromotedmunity’sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.”試題呈現(xiàn)：Theairwasgettingcooler.Theleaveswerestartingtofallfromthetreesthatlinedthestreets.AsNicolewalkedfromschooltothesmallbakeryshophermotherhadjuststarted,shebuttonedhersweaterandlookedupintothebluesky.Hermotherexpectedhertowalkthethreeblocksfromschool,butshewasalwaysstandingonthestepsofherbakeryshop,wavingandwaitingforNicole.Nicolealwaystoldaboutherdayashermompouredasmallglassofmilk.Afterhersnack,Nicolepletedherhomeworkandthenwasallowedtohelpinthebakery.Recently,hermothertaughtherhowtofrost（給糕餅覆上糖霜）anddecoratecupcakes.Nicolelovedtopipe,orsqueeze,thecolorfulfrostingthroughthepastrytubeontothetopsofminiaturecakes.Shelovedhearingthecustomers’reactionstoherdesigns.ForaslongasNicolecouldremember,shelovedart.Sheimpressedherteacherseveryyearwithwatercolorpaintingsandclaysculptures.Shehadwontheschool’sartcontesttwoyearsinarowandwasworkingonthisyear’sprojectwhenshebegandecoratingcupcakes.Nicolehadneverconsideredbakingtobeanartformuntilnow.Shecouldseehowherintricateandimaginativecreationswereinspiringtohermother’scustomers.Nicolewasstrugglingandhavingadifficulttimethinkingofsomethingoriginalforthisyear’sartcontest.Therulesstatedthattheprojectsimplyhadtobecreatedentirelybythestudent,withoutanyadulthelp.Therewerenorestrictionsonsizeormaterials.注意：1.

續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；2.

請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Asshesatanddecoratedachocolatecupcakewithsmallanimalshapesforachild’sbirthdayparty,Nicolehadanincredibleidea.Onthenightoftheartshow,Nicole’soversizedcupcakebroughtsurprisedlooksfromherfriends,teachers,andthecontestjudges.參考范文：Asshesatanddecoratedachocolatecupcakewithsmallanimalshapesforachild’sbirthdayparty,Nicolehadanincredibleidea."That’sit!"shesaidoutloud.Thenextdayafterschool,sheaskedhermothertoteachherhowtomakethecupcakesandfrosting.Iftherulesstatedthattheentireprojecthadtobemadewithouthelp,shewouldhavetodoitallherself.Nicolespenthoursmeticulouslymeasuringtheingredientsandherfirstbatchofcupcakesturnedoutperfect.

Tocreatetheediblecanvasshewasimagining,Nicolewouldhavetodosomemath.Shedoubledthebatterandmadeonegiantcupcakeinalargeroundpan.Shefrostedhergiantconfectionandthenwenttowork,

transferring

herartworkfromasimplesketchtothefrosting.Onthenightoftheartshow,Nicole’soversizedcupcakebroughtsurprisedlooksfromherfriends,teachers,andthecontestjudges.Nicolebeamedwithprideassheexplainedhercreativeprocess,emphasizingtheharmonyofartandbakinginherproject.Thejudgeswereimpressednotonlybythetechnicalskillbutalsobytheinnovativefusionoftwoseeminglydistinctformsofcreativity.Thearomaofthebakedcupcakeswaftedthroughtheroom,addinganothersensorylayertotheexperience.AfterNicole'sgiantcupcakeearnedherthefirstprize,hermothercutandservedherartproject.Everyoneagreedthatittastedasgoodasitlooked.考場優(yōu)秀作文：22分Asshesatanddecoratedachocolatecupcakewithsmallanimalshapesforachild'sbirthdayparty,Nicolehadanincredibleidea.Whydidn'tshemakeacakeastheentryofthisyear'sartcontest?

Scarcelyhadtheincredibleideajumpedintohermindwhenablastofineffablethrillenvelopedher,drivinghertodepictthesmallanimaloutoftheshape.Lighthearted,

Nicolesharedherideawithmomafterfinishingdecorating

thechocolatecupcake."Whynot?Yourideaiswonderful!"

Mom'sencouragingwordswrappedNicolelikeawarmblanket,strengthening

herdecision.Thewindpickingupandthecolorfulleavesfalling,the

weatherbecamebitterer.Theleavesthestreets

coveringwitnessedthegirlseffortsandthenthethicksnow.Onthenightoftheartshow,Nicole'soversizedcupcakebroughtsurprisedlooksfromherfriends,teachers,andthecontestjudges.Unfoldingbeforethe

wideopenedeyeswasaelaboratelydesignedcupcakewithinvitingfragrance,seemingperfectandawesome.Nicolewontheartcontestwithoutdoubt.Besideherselfwithelation,NicoleembarkedonwavingherhandsuncontrollablyNeverhadshefeltsoproudasifhearingthecustomers'reactionstoherdesigns.Tocelebratethelegendarymoment,Nicolecuttheoversizedcupcakeintotinypiecesanddistributedthemtoeveryone

present.Withthewarmandtastycupcakeinmouth,thebitterwinterseemedtoetoan

end.

Thefragrancedriftedallthewayup

everyone's

noseandintotheirheart.下水作文：101+105Asshesatanddecoratedachocolatecupcakewithsmallanimalshapesforachild’sbirthdayparty,Nicolehadanincredible

idea.

Whynotcreateanoversized

cupcakeforthisyear’sartcontest?

Withtheideainmind,Nicole

dancedherway

tothekitchen

and

camecleanabout

herbrilliantplantohermom,whogaveherathumbsup,smilinglypromisingtoofferinstructionswhennecessary.

Sothereshewas,

spendinghours

experimenting

withdifferent

temperaturestogettheperfectappearanceandtexture.

Then,thepastrytube

flying

inherhand,colorfulfrostingpipedoutsmoothlyjustlikewatercolor.

Shefinallymadeit!Sittingonthetable

washer

intricateand

imaginative

artworka

huge

cupcake,

givingoffatantalizingaroma.Onthenightoftheartshow,Nicole’soversizedcupcakebroughtsurprisedlooksfromherfriends,teachers,andthecontestjudges.

Neverintheirlifehadtheyseensuchahugecupcakewithitsmeticulouslydesignedpatternsandcarefullychosencolors.Itwastrulyanartwork!Needlesstosay,thefirstprizeagainwenttoNicoleathirdtime.Standingunderthespotlightwiththemedalaroundherneckandflowersinherhand,Nicolesmiledheartily,reallygladthatshesuccessfullyintegratedartandcupcakeintoone.Evenonthewaybacktothebakery,shefoundherheartstillracingexcitedly,withtheeagernesstosharethegoodnewswithhermom,whomustbeexpectingherandhergoodnewsonthestepsnow!試題呈現(xiàn)：Istillrememberthedaywhenwedecoratedthehouse,IwastenanditwastwoweeksbeforeChristmas.Iwaslookingforwardtomypresents.SinceI'mtheyoungestinthefamily,allofthefamilymemberswouldgivemeagiftonewayoranother.Sometimesitwasacookieorahugbutitwasalwaysthere.Iwastheonly

centerofattention

anditwasfeelinggood.Myuncles

usuallywouldaskmewhatIwantedbeforeChristmasandthatyearIknewwhatIwanted.Itwas

thespaceship

Isawintheads.Iwasdreamingofopeningabiggiftbox,anditwasthere.ButthatyearitcameinawaythatIwasn'texpecting.ItwastwoweeksbeforeChristmas.Justtwoweeks.Shecouldn'twait.Mydearmothertoldmyfatherthatitwastime,andthenwewenttothehospital.Afteranhour,theytoldmethatIhadasisternow.ButIdidn'twantasister.Iwantedaspaceship.Thenextfewdayswentsofast.Noonewascaringaboutme.EveryonewastalkingaboutherandIknewthatmylife

wasnevergoingtobethesameeveragain.Iwasn'treadytogrowup,tobeabigbrother.Butitjusthappenedinaninstant.OnthedaybeforeChristmas,everyonewasinourhome,talkingonlyaboutmynewbornsister.Myfamilywasbeinghers.Evenmyunclesdidn'taskmeanythingaboutthegift.ShestoleeverythingI'deverhad,mylifeandmypresents.Thinkingaboutthis,Icriedtosleep.Ihadanightmare(噩夢)andwokeupatthemiddleofthenight.Shadowswereallaroundme,andIwasdefenselessandsoweak.Iranintomyparents'bedroombutcouldn'twakeupmypoorparentswhowerejusttoowornout.Iwasstandingneartheirbed,tryingnottocrywhenIsawher.Shewasawakeandlookingatmewithherbigeyesinhersmallbed.注意：1.

續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.

請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Suddenly,shestartedcrying.Afterhavingfortedher,somethingslowlychangedinsideme.參考范文：89+87Suddenly,shestartedcrying.Panickingatfirst,Ithenrealizeditwasjustapassingcar.However,shefeltuneasy—hermouthwideopen,armswaving,andlegskicking.Thinkingshemightbescaredtoo,Iheldoutmyhand,pattingheronthebackwiththeother.Ievenmovedabitclosertoherlittlebed,whisperingmyfavoritesongintoherears,justasmymumdidwhenIgotscared.Surprisingly,sheseemedtounderstandmeandstoppedcrying.Lookingintoherbigeyes,Ibreathedasighofrelief.Afterhavingfortedher,somethingslowlychangedinsideme.Thesenseoflonelinesswasreplacedbytheresponsibilityofbeinganelderbrother.Eventhough

herarrivalinitiallytookoverthecenterofthewholefamily,

shestartedtobeethecenterofmyattentiontoo.Withhercuteroundfaceandsparklingeyes,shealsowonmyloveandcare.Ilookedaroundandfoundmyparentsawake,smilingatme.Withtheshadowofahappyfamilycastonthewindow,Ifeltmylittlesisterw