讀后續(xù)寫+非同尋常的流浪狗Rufus+講義 高三英語二輪復習

試題呈現(xiàn)：Thereoncewasastraydog(流浪狗)namedRufuswhowasthemostamazingdogonKumquat

Street.Hecouldhearaladybugblowingitsnose.

Hecouldseeapillbugeatingablacklicoricecandyat

midnight.

Rufuscouldevensmellacaterpillarthathadn’twasheditsfeet.YouwouldthinkthatRufus,beingsoamazing,wasalsohappy,Buthewasn’t,Yousee,therewasone

thingthatkeptRufusfrombeingadoptedbyhisfavoritehuman.Andthatwas...Rufusbarkedbackward.

Here'swhathesoundedlike:“Wob-

wow!Wob-wow!Fra-fra-fra!Krab-krab!”Rufuscouldstandbeinglaughedatbyeverysquirrelandcatintheneighborhood.Whathecouldn’t

standwasthathisbarkkepthimfromlivingwithJanieJohnson.JanieneverlaughedatRufuswhenhebarked.Morethananythingelse,Rufuswantedtobeherpet.

Hewantedtoplaycatchinheryardeverydayandsleepatthefootofherbedeachnight.ButJanie'sfather,Mr.Johnson,wouldn'thearofit,“What?Adogthatbarksbackward?We'dbethe

laughing

stocksofKumquatStreet!WeJohnsonsdidn'tgetwherewearetodaybyadoptingdogsthatbark

backward.No.Janie.It'soutofthequestion.”“I’msorry,”

JanietoldRufusonemorningastheysatonherfrontporch.“I

keeptellingDaddyhow

greatyouare.Hejustwon'tlisten.”“Krab-krab!”

saidRufus.“Yes,sometimesheisbad-tempered,"saidJanie“I’llkeeptrying,though.Don'tworry.”

ButRufusdidworry.ThateveninghetalkeditoverwithhisfriendBillBulldog.“Idon'tthinkMr.

Johnsonwilleverlikeme,”

Rufussaid,“AslongasIbarkbackward,he'llneverletmeliveinhishome.”

“Haveyoutriedtreatment?”

askedBill.Rufussaid,“I'vetriedeverything.Nothinghelps,

It'sjustthewayIbark.”“You'reagreatdogRoof,Anyonecanseethat,"saidBill.“Itjusttakessomehumanslongertofigure

itout,that'sall,Hey,wanttogowithmetoSuccotashStreet?I'veheardthattheirgarbageisfantastic.”

Rufusyawned,“No,thanks,"hesaid,“I'lltakeanap.”WhenRufuswokeup,itwaslateafternoon.Ashewaslyingthere,hissharpearsheardMr.Johnson

saying,“It'salmostsuppertime.

IsJaniestillroller-skating?WeJohnsonsdidn'tgetwherewearetodayby

beinglateforsupper.”注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右:

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答RufusrandownKumquatStreettolookforJanie.

Atthesightof

JanieandRufus,Mr.

Johnsonranup.文本分析：故事大意：曾經(jīng)有一只流浪狗叫魯弗斯，它是金橘街上最神奇的狗。它能聽到一只瓢蟲擤鼻子的聲音，它能看到一只球潮蟲在午夜吃一根黑色的甘草糖，它甚至能嗅到一只毛毛蟲沒有洗腳。但是，縱使魯弗斯有如此天賦，它也有煩惱：魯弗斯的叫聲永遠是反的——相當于我們正常說“小狗”，用它的方式就成了“狗小”。所以，魯弗斯一叫，經(jīng)常惹得周圍的松鼠、貓咪和黑羽椋鳥嘲笑。只有小女孩珍妮不同，她從不嘲笑它，還想讓它做她的寵物。魯弗斯也非常喜歡珍妮，可珍妮的父親約翰遜先生卻不同意。魯弗斯很沮喪，但也沒有辦法，直到一天，珍妮出去滑旱冰，都快到吃晚飯的時間她還沒有回家，發(fā)生什么意外了嗎？魯弗斯能幫上忙嗎？主要矛盾：本文的流浪狗Rufus有一個美好的愿望----有一個家，和Janie住在一起，一起玩游戲，睡在她床邊；流浪狗Rufus的困難與阻礙：Janie的父親不同意；考生要充分利用這個伏筆，進行逆向創(chuàng)作。即：父親最終會同意的。本文有兩個高光點：①流浪狗Rufus

有一個特別提到的點：Hebarkedbackward.

而且因為這個特點被MrJohnson

拒絕收養(yǎng)。②Mr.Johnson有一句口頭禪，可以反向進行創(chuàng)作，再次利用這個口頭禪，讓收養(yǎng)流浪狗Rufus變得十分地自然。同時文風也可以保持一定的一致性。根據(jù)兩個段首句，可以進行各自段落內(nèi)容的設計；第一段應該是重在描寫流浪狗Rufus

憑一己之力與智慧找到了女孩Janie

，而且用的他獨有的法器：令人難忘的朝后一叫。第二段則是父親被Rufus

與

Janie

之間的深情厚誼感動，最終答應女兒的請求。不要忘記父親有一句口頭禪說了一遍又一遍。下水作文：畫面定格結尾RufusrandownKumquatStreettolookforJanie.

Withhissharpeyes,helookedeverywherealongthestreet,butnotevenasinglesignofJanieandherroller-skatingshoes.Withhissharpnose,hesniffedforanysmellofJanie,butwhatgreetedhimwasnothingbuttheunpleasantsmellofthecaterpillar’sunwashedfeet.Withhissharpears,hecouldonlysensetheladybugblowingitsnose.Withtheeffortsofallthesensesgoinginvain,Rufusdecidedtoturntohisuniqueweapon-barkbackward.Thoughitmeantthathewouldbelaughedatbyhisneighbours,hehopedthatinthiswayhecouldattractJanie’sattentionandfindher.Allhiscouragesummonedup,RufusbarkedbackwardallthewaydownKumquatStreet.ThistimeluckwentwithhimanditwasjustawhilebeforeJanieheardhisbarkandroller-skatedallthewaytohim.Atthesightof

JanieandRufus,Mr.

Johnsonranup.

Thistime,insteadofsaying

“WeJohnsonsdidn'tgetwherewearetodayby...”,heaskedJaniewhathadhappened,concernandaffectionwrittenalloverhisface.Swellingwithpride,JanieexplainedhowshegotlostandhowRufus’suniquebarkledherback.

“Iwouldn’tgetwhereIamnowwithoutRufus’

bark.Dad,please!”

Janiebegged,onehandshakingDad’sandtheotherstrokingRufus’

silkyfur.Touchedbyhislovelydaughter’swords,Dadfelthisheartsoftenedandnoddedinapproval.Andthedog,seemingtounderstandeverything,barkedbackwardmerrily,asifannouncinghisbeingadopted.Together,thethreeheadedbackhome,onestridingforward,oneroller-skatingonward,andonewagginghistailandbarkingbackward-“Wob-wow!Wob-wow!Fra-fra-fra!Krab-krab!”（畫面定格結尾）參考范文：100+133RufusrandownKumquatStreettolookforJanie.

Helistenedfortheclickety-clickofJanie'sskates.Hesniffedforherspecialbubble-gum-and-peachesscent.Helookedforhersky-bluehelmet.Buthedidn’thear,smell,orseeheranywhere.Rufusstartedbakingasloudashecould.“Wob-wow!Wob-wow!Fra-fra-fra!Krab-krab!”Asquirrelgiggledinatree,“I’veneverheardanythingsosillyinmylife!”“Youdon'tevensoundlikeadog!”,yowledacat.Rusfusignoredthemallandkeptonbarking.Soonallyouheardintheneighborhoodwashisbark.Suddenly,JanieskateduptoRufus.“Oh,Rufus,IknewIheardyou!”criedJanie.AtthesightofJanieandRufus,Mr:Johnsonranup.

“Janie,”hesaid.“Whereonearthhaveyoubeen?”Janieexplained,“Itookw