2024屆高三英語作文復(fù)習(xí)寫作專項讀后續(xù)寫：不愛芭蕾愛拳擊（追逐夢想）講義素材

讀后續(xù)寫：不愛芭蕾愛拳擊題目：BalletwasawayoflifeinKelly’sfamily.HereldersisterSerenawasnowdancingatatopcollege.ThoughKelly’smomalwayswantedhertofollowinhersistersfootstepsandKellyherselfwasgoodatballet,herloveforballethadfadedyearsbeforeandshewaseagerforanewchallenge.Onedayatschool,asKellyleftthedancestudioshewalkedpastthegym,fascinatedbyboxers(拳擊手)traininginsidetheboxingring.Shewasdeeplyimpressedbyhowhardtheyhitandhowfasttheymoved.Infactshedlongbeenattractedtoboxing.Shepulledapieceofpaperfromherbackpack.OnthefamiliarOakwoodHighSchoolClubSign-upSheetwasthephrase:BOXINGCLUBTRYOUT(選拔).ThatwaswhatKellyreallywantedtodo.Sheknewhermomhadhighexpectationsforherwhenitcametoballet.Tiredoftryingtokeepupwithhersister,Kellywasreadytocarveherownpath.Thenextday,shegatheredhercourageandtoldSerenaabouthernewpassion.AtfirstSerenadidn’tunderstandandthoughtshewasjustjoking.ButwhenshesawKellywasserious.shereplied,“YouknowMomwantsyoutobeaballetdancer,right?Besides,boxingisonlyforboys,andyou’resogoodatballet.Leanintoyourstrength,Kelly."“ButthisiswhereIwanttoputmystrength,”Kellyinsisted,“andwhatexactlydoesonlyforboysmean,anyway?Boxingisasportforeveryone!”Gradually,touchedbyherdeterminationandpassionSerenabegantounderstandandsupporther.Kellycouldfeelit.Hersisterwasgoingtorespectherdecisionnomatterwhat.Butthatwasnothingcomparedtothepreparationsforthetryout,whereshewasrequiredtoshowherfootworkandpunching(擊打)abilitieswithothercandidates.Boxingdidn’tcomenaturaltoKelly,butshehadmadeuphermindtostickwithherchoice.Para1：ThenKellybeganhertrainingforthetryout,keepingitasecretfromhermom.Para2：ThefollowingMonday,resultsoftheboxingtryoutwereposted.范文：Para1：ThenKellybeganhertrainingforthetryout,keepingitasecretfromhermom.Everydayafterschool,insteadofpracticingdancing,shetrottedtowardsthegymtolearnthebasicboxingskills,endeavoringtoenhanceherpunchingabilities.Nevertheless,yearsofballetpracticemadeherinitialpunchesnotpowerfulenoughtoknockothersover.Exhaustedasshewas,/Despitethephysicalchallengesandexhaustion,Kellyderived(得到)anunprecedentedsenseofaccomplishmentandcontentmentthatshehadn’tfeltinyears.Asthedayprogressed,finallycamethetryoutday.Ontheboxingring,courageousanddetermined,Kellypunchedheropponenthardandbeathimeventually.每天放學(xué)后，她不再練習(xí)跳舞，而是快步走向體育館學(xué)習(xí)基本的拳擊技巧。然而，多年的芭蕾舞練習(xí)使她一開始的出拳不夠有力，無法擊倒別人。盡管身體上的挑戰(zhàn)和疲憊，Kelly獲得了多年來從未有過的成就感和滿足感。隨著時間的推移，終于到了選拔賽的日子。在拳擊場上，好斗而堅定的凱莉給了對手一拳，最終擊敗了他。筆記： 現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語；“...assbwas,雖然...但是...（克服困難句型）”；銜接下段Para2：ThefollowingMonday,resultsoftheboxingtryoutwereposted.TheinstantKellyspottedhernameonthelist,shefeltamixtureofdelightandthrillsurgingthroughherandallherdedicatedendeavorspaidoff.Dartingtowardshomelikeanarrow,scarcelycouldshewaittosharetheexcitingnewswithSerena,bothofwhomresolvedtorevealthesecrettohermom.LearningthatKellywasadmittedintotheBoxingclub,Momfellsilentforawhileandrepliedinanunexpectedway.“Iamsoproudofyou.Forgivemeforimposingtheballetdreamonyou.Youhavetherighttocarveyourownpathandpursuewhatyoutrulylove.”Hearingthesewords,KellyembracedMomtightlyandaradiantsmilespreadoverherface.當(dāng)凱莉看到自己的名字出現(xiàn)在名單上的那一刻，她感到喜悅和激動涌上全身，她所有的努力都得到了回報。她像箭一樣飛奔回家，迫不及待地想把這個激動人心的消息告訴塞蕾娜，她們倆都決定把這個秘密告訴她媽媽。得知凱利被拳擊俱樂部錄取后，媽媽沉默了一會兒，然后以一種意想不到的方式回答。“我為你感到驕傲。原諒我把芭蕾夢強加給你。你有權(quán)利開辟自己的道路，追求你真正喜歡的東西?！甭牭竭@些話，凱莉緊緊地擁抱了媽媽，臉上洋溢著燦爛的笑容。筆記：theinstant...一....就...;混合情緒句型；迫不及待句型；某人終于理解了對方；動作定格結(jié)尾最終自測：ThenKellybeganhertrainingforthetryout,keepingitasecretfromhermom.每天放學(xué)后，她不再練習(xí)跳舞，而是快步走向體育館學(xué)習(xí)基本的拳擊技巧。然而，多年的芭蕾舞練習(xí)使她一開始的出拳不夠有力，無法擊倒別人。盡管身體上的挑戰(zhàn)和疲憊，Kelly獲得了多年來從未有過的成就感和滿足感。隨著時間的推移，終于到了選拔賽的日子。在拳擊場上，好斗而堅定的凱莉給了對手一拳，最終擊敗了他。ThefollowingMonday,resultsoftheboxingtryoutwer