探索火星 熱點06 -中考英語高分作文（全國通用版）

備戰(zhàn)2023年中考英語高分作文熱點06探索火星一、材料作文1．由于地球愈來愈擁擠，將來我們有可能移居火星。請根據(jù)要點提示以“LifeonMarsinthefuture”為題，寫一篇短文來描述將來在火星上的生活情況。要點：1.因為火星重力只有地球重力的八分之三，所以人們出去不得不穿特制的靴子以免他們飄浮進(jìn)入太空；2.人們將有更多空間，他們將住在大而舒服的房間里；3.人們能有更多的時間放松，因為機器人做了大部分工作；4.火星上的食物將是藥片的形式，沒有地球上的食物可口；5.火星上沒有學(xué)校，每個學(xué)生將有一臺和星際網(wǎng)絡(luò)相連的電腦，他們將在網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)校和電子老師一起學(xué)習(xí)；6.航天飛機速度很快，但不是很舒服。要求：1.語意連貫，層次清晰，書寫清楚；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名；3.詞數(shù)：90左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。LifeonMarsinthefutureInthefuture,peoplewouldmovetootherplanetsincludingMarsbecausetheEarthisbecomingmoreandmorecrowdedandpolluted.WhatwouldlifeonMarsbelike?Let’sgoandhavealook.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】LifeonMarsinthefutureInthefuture,peoplewouldmovetootherplanetsincludingMarsbecausetheEarthisbecomingmoreandmorecrowdedandpolluted.WhatwouldlifeonMarsbelike?Let’sgoandhavealook.ThegravityonMarsisonlyaboutthree-eighthsofthatontheEarth,sopeoplewouldhavetowearspecialbootstokeepthemselvesfromfloatingoffintospacewhentheygoout.Peoplewouldhavemorespaceandtheywouldliveinbig,comfortablerooms.What’smore,peoplecouldhavemoretimetorelaxbecauserobotswoulddomostofthework.ThefoodonMarswouldbeintheformofpills.ItwouldnotbeastastyasthatontheEarth.TherewouldbenoschoolsonMars.Everystudentwouldhaveacomputerathomeconnectedtoaninterplanetarynetwork.Theywouldstudyatonlineschoolwithe-teachers.Thespacecraftwouldtravelveryfast,butitisnotverycomfortable.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文為說明文，是一篇材料作文。②時態(tài)：本文要用一般現(xiàn)在時。③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]①第一步，開頭已給出，交代了寫作背景和寫作目的：介紹未來火星上的生活。②第二步，介紹火星上的生活，根據(jù)所給要點，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，增加細(xì)節(jié)。[亮點詞匯]①gravity重力②keep…fromdoingsth.阻止……做某事③what’smore另外④intheformof…以……的形式⑤as…as和……一樣[高分句型]①peoplewouldhavetowearspecialbootstokeepthemselvesfromfloatingoffintospacewhentheygoout.(when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句)②peoplecouldhavemoretimetorelaxbecauserobotswoulddomostofthework.(because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句)2．書面表達(dá)目前，地球正面臨著前所未有的危機，人口增多，能源減少，到太空生活成了熱門話題。Daniel和他的同學(xué)討論了在火星上生活的利弊，請根據(jù)討論結(jié)果并加上自己的觀點寫一篇報道。AdvantagesDisadvantagesinterestinggotoonlineschoolsmuchmorespacerobot(doworkforus)thingsarecheapgetillfromlivingtherefarfromEarthnofood,wateroroxygensomedangerousalienseasilyfloatawayLifeonMarsLifeonMarsisdifferentfromthatonEarth.SomestudentsthinkitisbettertoliveonMarsthanonearthbecause______________________________________________________________【參考范文】LifeonMarsLifeonMarsisdifferentfromthatonEarth.SomestudentsthinkitisbettertoliveonMarsthanonearthbecauselivingonMarshassomeadvantages.It’sreallywonderfultoliveonMars.LifeonMarsismoreinterestingandmorecomfortablethanthatonearth.Wecangotoonlineschoolsinsteadofrealones.Wecanalsohavemorespace.Wehaverobotsathomeandtheydoworkforus.ThethingsonMarsarecheap.Buttherearealsosomedisadvantages.Wewillnotbeusedtolivingtheresowemaygetillfromlivingthere.Andit’sveryfarfromtheEarth.Thereisnofood,wateroroxygenonMars.Wewillmeetsomedangerousaliensandit’seasytofloatawayonMars.WhatdoyouthinkoflivingonMars?【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，同學(xué)們討論在火星上生活的利弊。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：LifeonMarsis…….，Somestudentsthink…….，It’sreallywonderfulto…….，Marsis…….，Butthereare……,Whatdoyouthinkofsth?等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了有些同學(xué)認(rèn)為在火星上生活比在地球上更好，接下來介紹有些同學(xué)認(rèn)為在火星上生活有一些弊端，最后引發(fā)思考在火星上生活怎么樣。此處bedifferentfrom,insteadof,athome,beusedtodoingsth,getill,farfrom,floataway,thinkof等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。3．請你用英語寫一個火星生活指南，具體介紹一下火星上的情況。環(huán)

境沒有水，也沒有氧氣，需要戴特制頭盔出

行宇宙飛船，步行時需穿特制靴子貨

幣電子貨幣，存儲在火星銀行娛

樂低重力籃球賽其

他……注意事項：1.火星生活指南須包括所給內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；2.須展開充分想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要逐字翻譯；3.詞數(shù)90左右，火星生活指南的開關(guān)和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。HereisaguidetolivingonMars.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WelcometoMars!【參考范文】：HereisaguidetolivingonMars.OnMars,thereisnowateroroxygen.Sowehavetowearspecialhelmets.Wehavebothwaterandfoodintheformofpills.Isn’tthatinteresting?ButtheyarestrangeandnotastastyasthefoodontheEarth.Weuseelectronicdollarsandthey’restoredintheMarsBank.Wecanshoponline.Wetravelbyspacecraftoronfoot.Butwemustwearspecialbootsbecauseofthelowgravity.Wehavemorespaceandtimetorelax.Low-gravitybasketballgamesarereallyamazing.WelcometoMars!【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點寫一個火星生活指南，要包括環(huán)境、出行、貨幣、娛樂等方面，要展開充分想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要承接已給出的首尾，時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以一、三人稱為主。要在指南中寫清楚在火星生活的各方面信息，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。4．假設(shè)《21世紀(jì)報》向中學(xué)生征稿，主題是關(guān)于未來生活。請你以“LifeonMars”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹一下你想象中的火星生活。內(nèi)容要點：1.交通工具是航天飛機，其速度達(dá)到光速2.隨著科學(xué)的發(fā)展，在火星上植物能生產(chǎn)食物、氧氣和水；3.火星重力只有地球的3/8，人們通過穿特制的靴子來解決火星上重力的問題；4.人們有更多的空間和休閑時間；5.生活的許多方面很美好，但也有一些不利條件，如……注意事項：1.短文須包括所給內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；2.第5要點須用2—3句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)90左右，短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。LifeonMarsInthefuture,ourplanetwillbemoreandmorecrowdedandpolluted.MaybewecanliveonMars.HereisaguidetolivingonMars.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】LifeonMarsInthefuture,ourplanetwillbemoreandmorecrowdedand