2024屆高考英語復習2024年高一3月青桐鳴聯(lián)考讀后續(xù)寫-別問我魚在哪 講義素材

續(xù)寫題目：別問我魚在哪（自我成長主題-誠實和責任）【下面除提供續(xù)寫題目外、還提供（一）方便教師讀題的情節(jié)梗概（二）檢測學生是否讀懂的「預設情節(jié)填空」，（三）在講范文前引導學生思考續(xù)寫方向的「問題及答案」，（四）續(xù)寫思路概述，（五）TCEE獨家范文】Jaydenwasheadingtotheplacehe’dcallhomeforthenextweek:CampMassomet.BeingawayfromhomeforthefirsttimewashardforJayden.Ontopofthat,JaydenwasaskedtojointhesamepatrolwithakidtheycalledBigQuinn,whoalwaysseemedtobeunhappy,especiallyinthemorning.Jaydentriedhardtoavoidupsettinghim.Onthefourthnight,someoftheolderguyscamebackfromthelake,laughingexcitedly.BigQuinnwasatthecenterofthepack,holdingsomethingabovehishead.Itwasafish,thebiggestJaydenhadeverseen.BigQuinnwassmilingfromeartoear,andJaydenrealizeditwasthefirsttimehe’dseenhimwearasmile.KidsinJayden’spatrolwasexcitedtotasteBigQuinn’sfish.Eveningcame.Jaydenbegantosetoutthepapercupsaroundthetable.Jaydendidn’tfeellikewalkingallthewayaroundthetabletosetoutthelastfewcups.Sohespreadouthisbodyacrossthetabletoputthecupsinplace.Butwhenhepulledhisarmback,heoverturnedtheplateholdingBigQuinn’sfish,whichwascutintothinpiecesandcoveredinfoil,knockingitoffthetable.Jaydenwatchedinfearasitfellontothedustyground.Frightened,withoutasecondthought,hekickedthefishunderthetableandcovereditupwithdirt.ThenJaydensettheplatebackonthetable,thefoilstillintheshapeofafishthatwasn’tthere.ThenBigQuinncameandpickeduptheplate.Henoticedsomethingunusual.Heopenedthefoil.“HEYY!”heshouted.“Where’smyFISH?”Hewasn’tsmilinganymore.Afterdinner,itrainedhard.Everythingonthegroundwaswashedawayintheheavyrain.Jayden’seyeswenttotheareaunderhispatrol’spicnictable.Thefishwasgone.BigQuinnwoundneverknowwhathedid.Para1:Jaydencouldn’tfallasleepthatnight.Para2:Jaydendecidedtomakethingsrightbeforeleavingthecamp.前文情節(jié)梗概Jayden前往名為CampMassomet的營地，準備度過接下來的一周。第一次離家讓他感到不適，更糟糕的是，他還被迫與總是顯得不悅的BigQuinn同組。Jayden努力避免激怒他。在第四天晚上，BigQuinn捕到了一條Jayden從未見過的大魚，這讓他難得地露出了笑容，也讓同組的孩子們都期待著品嘗這條魚。然而，當Jayden在擺放紙杯時不慎打翻了裝有魚片的盤子，他驚恐之下將魚踢到桌子下并用泥土掩蓋。雖然Jayden將盤子恢復原狀，但BigQuinn很快發(fā)現(xiàn)了異常，并憤怒地發(fā)現(xiàn)魚不見了。晚飯后，一場大雨將地面的一切沖刷干凈，Jayden看到桌子下的魚也不見了，這讓他松了一口氣，因為BigQuinn永遠不會知道他做了什么。預設情節(jié)填空Jayden,acamperatCampMassomet,struggledwithhomesicknessandabad-temperedpatrolmate,BigQuinn.Onthefourthnight,BigQuinncaughtahugefish,muchtoeveryone'sexcitement.However,Jaydenaccidentallyknockedovertheplateholdingthefishwhilesettingthetable,panicked,andhidtheevidence.BigQuinn'sangeratfindingthefishmissingwasshort-livedasaheavyrainwashedawayalltraces,leavingJaydenrelievedbutguilty.（紅色部分可挖空讓學生填寫）（三）續(xù)寫思路引導Para1:Jaydencouldn’tfallasleepthatnight.Para2:Jaydendecidedtomakethingsrightbeforeleavingthecamp.銜接：Q:Whycouldn’tJaydenfallasleep?A:BecausehewasdeeplytroubledbywhathadhappenedwithBigQuinn’sfish.Hefeltamixofguiltandscare.銜接：Q:WhatdidJaydendecidetodotomakethingsright?A:JaydendecidedtoconfesstoBigQuinnwhathadhappenedtothefish.過渡：￡動作￡心理￡語言￡感情過渡：￡動作￡心理￡語言￡感情銜接：Q:WhydidJaydendecidetomakethingsrighteventually?A:Becauseheknewhehadtofacetheconsequencesofhisactionsandhewasoverwhelmedbyguilt.銜接：Q:WhatlessondidJaydenlearnfromthisexperience?A:Helearnedavaluablelessoninhonestyandresponsibility.（四）續(xù)寫思路概述Para1:Jaydencouldn’tfallasleepthatnight.Para2:Jaydendecidedtomakethingsrightbeforeleavingthecamp.銜接：R動作￡心理￡語言￡感情(1)Jayden無法入睡的表現(xiàn)和原因。銜接：R動作￡心理￡語言￡感情(1)Jayden道歉，。過渡：￡動作R心理￡語言R感情(2)Jayden腦海中一直浮現(xiàn)事情細節(jié)。(3)Jayden知道錯了，但是害怕Quinn。過渡：￡動作￡心理R語言R感情(2)Quinn接受道歉，而且沒生氣，反而夸贊他。(3)Jayden如釋重負。銜接：￡動作￡心理￡語言R感情(4)Jayden的內(nèi)疚戰(zhàn)勝了害怕。銜接：￡動作R心理￡語言￡感情(4)Jayden學到重要一課，完成蛻變。

（五）TCEE獨家范文Para1:Jaydencouldn’tfallasleepthatnight.Hetossedandturnedrestlessly,thesheetstanglingaroundhislegsashismindrefusedtosettle.Guiltweighedheavyonhisconscience,andheknewhehadbetrayedhisownprinciples.TheimageofBigQuinn’sshockedfacewhenhediscoveredthemissingfishplayedonrepeatinJayden’smind./HismindreplayedtheincidentwithBigQuinn’sfishagainandagain.Heknewhehadtofaceuptohismistake,butthethoughtofBigQuinn’ssternexpressionfilledhimwithdread.However,hisguiltprovedstrongerthanhisfear,andhewasdeterminedtodowhateverittooktorighthiswrong.他不安地翻來覆去，床單纏在他的腿上，因為他的心不肯安定下來。內(nèi)疚沉重地壓在他的良心上，他知道自己背叛了自己的原則。大奎因發(fā)現(xiàn)丟失的魚時震驚的表情在杰登的腦海中反復出現(xiàn)。/他的腦海里一遍又一遍地回放著大奎因的魚的事件。他知道他必須勇敢地面對自己的錯誤，但一想到比格·奎因嚴厲的表情，他就充滿了恐懼。然而，他的罪惡感比他的恐懼更強烈，他決心不惜一切代價糾正自己的錯誤。Para2:Jaydendecidedtomakethingsrightbeforeleavingthecamp.Thenextmorning,hegatheredhiscourageandapproachedBigQuinn.Jaydentookadeepbreathandconfessedeverything,hisvoicetremblingslightlywithnervesandremorse.Tohissurprise,insteadofanger,BigQuinn’sexpressionsoftened.“Itwasanaccident,”BigQuinnsaid.“Andyou’rebraveenoughtoadmitit.”Jaydenfeltaweightliftoffhisshoulders,withawaveofreliefwashingoverhim.Hehadlearnedavaluablelessoninbraveryandresponsibility.Andashepackeduphi