中考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí) 考點(diǎn)詳解+真題練習(xí)專項(xiàng)突破56 書面表達(dá)之咨詢建議類（含解析）

專項(xiàng)56書面表達(dá)之咨詢建議類四步法寫建議類書面表達(dá)四步法寫建議類書面表達(dá)1.首先要知道給出建議的格式：常用書信格式；2.然后寫出提建議的原因；3.最后根據(jù)具體的情況給出明確的建議；4.寫出希望。英語(yǔ)中咨詢建議類作文通常以書信的形式呈現(xiàn)，英語(yǔ)書信類作文的常用表達(dá)：開頭部分：

How

nice

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activity.

I’m

glad

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I’m

pleased

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hear

that

you’re

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thank

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my

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With

best

wishes.

I’m

looking

forward

to

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reply.

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appreciate

it

if

you

could

reply

earlier.

We

should

take

measures

to

control

pollution

in

order

to

save

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world.

We’d

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take

effective

measures

to

prevent

students

from

cheating

on

exams.

The

government

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take

strong

measures

against

drug

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Urgent

measures

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prevent

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For

another

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A（2022·遼寧營(yíng)口·中考真題）假如你是李明，你的朋友Jack給你發(fā)郵件請(qǐng)求你的幫助。請(qǐng)根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容進(jìn)行回復(fù)。要求：①邏輯清晰，內(nèi)容完整，書寫規(guī)范；②回復(fù)內(nèi)容至少包含三條建議；③詞數(shù)：30左右。開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearLiMing,

Ispendallmyweekendsplayingcomputergamesandmymotherisveryangrywithmeaboutit.Iwanttomakeachange.Couldyougivemesomeadvice?

JackDearJack,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopemyadvicecanbehelpfultoyou.LiMing【答案】DearJack,I’mgladtohelpyou.Ithinkyou’dbetterfinishyourhomeworkfirst.Ifyoulike,youcanhelpdohousework.It’sagoodideatodosomeoutdooractivitiesorreadsomebooks.Ihopemyadvicecanbehelpfultoyou.LiMing【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇電子郵件，根據(jù)Jack的郵件內(nèi)容，針對(duì)他的問(wèn)題提出建議。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。注意建議要不少于三條，同時(shí)要看清題目字?jǐn)?shù)要求：詞數(shù)在30左右。寫作時(shí)力求語(yǔ)句通順，無(wú)單詞語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。B（2022·廣西河池·中考真題）今年4月，教育部頒發(fā)了《義務(wù)教育勞動(dòng)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（2022年版）》。從2022年秋季學(xué)期起，多種勞動(dòng)技能將納入中小學(xué)課程，引發(fā)同學(xué)們的熱議和關(guān)注。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容對(duì)即將開設(shè)的勞動(dòng)課（laborclasses）寫一封信給校長(zhǎng)，提出你的想法及建議。1.感覺(jué)非常高興及興奮。從中可以學(xué)到一些勞動(dòng)技能，學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己（learnsomelaborskills,lookafter）。2.希望學(xué)校能提供給每班勞動(dòng)課的場(chǎng)地。每周開課兩節(jié)。由生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富的老師教授同學(xué)們?nèi)绾巫鲲?、種菜……（補(bǔ)充兩個(gè)內(nèi)容）（provide...for,withrichexperience,teach）。3.希望學(xué)校在期末舉行各種勞動(dòng)技能比賽；邀請(qǐng)家長(zhǎng)們參觀并分享勞動(dòng)課成果（attheendof,hold,laborachievements）。寫作要求：1.不得使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名；2.內(nèi)容需包含以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫；3.字跡工整，語(yǔ)言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰；4.詞數(shù)100左右。（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）Dearheadmaster,

MynameisLiHua.I’minClass6,Grade8.Itissaidthatwearegoingtohavelaborclassesnextterm.Allmyclassmatesareinterestedinit.I’mwritingtoyoutosharemyideasaboutthecominglaborclasses.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’sallmyopinions.We’relookingforwardtotheclasses.Thankyou!Yours,LiHua【答案】Dearheadmaster,

MynameisLiHua.I’minClass6,Grade8.Itissaidthatwearegoingtohavelaborclassesnextterm.Allmyclassmatesareinterestedinit.I’mwritingtoyoutosharemyideasaboutthecominglaborclasses.

Ifeelveryhappyandexcited.Ithinkwecanlearnsomelaborskillsandlearntolookafterourselves.Ihopetheschoolcanprovideaplaceforeachclasstowork.Theschoolcanhavetwoclassesaweek.Theteacherswithrichexperienceteachstudentshowtocook,growvegetables,washclothes,cleanthehouseandothersimplehousework.Ialsohopethattheschoolcanholdallkindsoflaborskillscompetitionattheendofthetermandinviteparentstovisitandsharelaborachievements.

That’sallmyopinions.We’relookingforwardtotheclasses.Thankyou!Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于書信類寫作。書信的第一段和第三段已給出，第二段則需要包含題目中所給的三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，缺一不可。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)使用第一人稱書寫；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；在展開寫第二段的時(shí)候需要用到括號(hào)中的所給內(nèi)容，并在第二點(diǎn)中進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展。寫作過(guò)程中需體現(xiàn)詞匯及句式的多樣性，同時(shí)保證敘述過(guò)程條理清晰。C（2022·湖南郴州·中考真題）近段時(shí)間，某中學(xué)不少學(xué)生因感冒不能正常上課，影響了學(xué)習(xí)。為此，學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華準(zhǔn)備利用EnglishBroadcast時(shí)間建議學(xué)生養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣和加強(qiáng)體育鍛煉，以提高身體素質(zhì)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提示，為他準(zhǔn)備一份英語(yǔ)，發(fā)言稿?，F(xiàn)象因感冒不能上課，影響了學(xué)習(xí)建議生活習(xí)慣健康飲食……保證睡眠……加強(qiáng)鍛煉參加體育活動(dòng)……其他……期望……參考詞匯：affectvt.影響要求：（1）短文須包含要點(diǎn)提示中的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）詞數(shù)：80左右（短文開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名。Boysandgirls,WelcometoourEnglishBroadcast!I’mLiHua,thechairmanofStudents’Union.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall!Thanksforyourlistening!【答案】Boysandgirls,WelcometoourEnglishBroadcast!I’mLiHua,thechairmanofStudents’Union.Recentlyquiteafewstudentsinourschoolcouldn’thavelessonsasusualbecausetheyhadacold.Thisaffectedtheirstudies.Inordertomakeyoustronger,I’llgiveyousomeusefuladvice.Firstly,it’simportanttohaveahealthyeatinghabit.Youshouldeatmorevegetablesandfruitbutlessjunkfood.Secondly,you’dbettersleepwell.Don’tstayuplate.Besides,doexerciseeveryday.Youcantakeawalkorrun.Lastly,agoodattitudetowardslifeisalsogoodforyourhealth.I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyouhappierandhealthier!That’sall!Thanksforyourlistening!【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇演講稿。根據(jù)表格提示要點(diǎn)，寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣和加強(qiáng)體育鍛煉的建議，以提高身體素質(zhì)的作文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；人稱以第二人稱為主。寫作時(shí)可分為三段，第一段承接開頭，點(diǎn)明主題；第二段介紹具體的建議；第三段表示感謝。寫作時(shí)可適當(dāng)使用過(guò)渡詞使文章通順，另外確保作文邏輯清晰，無(wú)單詞拼寫和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。D（2022·福建廈門·二模）假設(shè)你是李華，收到了英國(guó)筆友Sam的一封信。信中提到他最近獲得了一筆獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金，并向你咨詢?nèi)绾喂芾磉@筆錢。請(qǐng)結(jié)合下面圖表的信息，給他寫一封80詞左右的回信，談?wù)勀愕慕ㄗh和理由。Wordbank:scholarship獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金

donate捐贈(zèng)要求：1.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.必須包含所提示的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。DearSam,Congratulationsonyourscholarship!__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【答案】DearSam,Congratulationsonyourscholarship!Foryourquestionabouthowtowiselyusethemoney,hereismyadvice.Therearethreewaystomanageit:spending,savingordonating.Whenspendingthemoney,youcouldbuysomethingforyourstudylikebooks.Youcouldalsoconsiderjoiningsportsclubs.Theycanbothhelpwithyourself-improvement.Ifyouwanttosavemoney,takingpublictransportationtogooutisagoodchoice,suchasthebusandthesubway.Andwhynoteatfewersnacks?Theycancertainlycutdownyourcost.What’smore,itisworthwhiletodonatesomeofyourmoneytotheoldorthesick.Weshouldallhelptomaketheworldabetterplace.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于看圖寫作，但寫作時(shí)要按郵件格式寫。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開頭；第二段根據(jù)所給圖片談?wù)勅绾问褂煤凸芾磉@筆錢；第三段按照郵件格式結(jié)尾。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第二人稱來(lái)展開；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，采用多樣的表示“建議”的句型；按照?qǐng)D片提示把管理金錢的方式敘述完整，將所給提示詞用全，并注意連詞的使用；注意寫郵件的格式，保證條理清晰。E（2022·遼寧沈陽(yáng)·一模）假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Tom向你咨詢中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)技藝，請(qǐng)你給他寫封信介紹一下某一個(gè)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)技藝，內(nèi)容包括：1.對(duì)傳統(tǒng)技藝的描述(從Papercutting,Chineseknots,Shadowpuppetplays中任選一個(gè)進(jìn)行描述，也可不選)；2.表述你的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。【注意】1詞數(shù)80-100。開頭、結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)；2.短文須包括所給內(nèi)容信息?？梢赃m當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.作文中不要出現(xiàn)考生和相關(guān)人物的真實(shí)校名和姓名。DearTom,YouaskedmeaboutsomeChinesetraditionalskillsinyourletter.I’mgladtointroduceonenow.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________