牛津譯林版（2019）選擇性必修 第三冊(cè)Unit 2 Out of this world單元寫(xiě)作深度指導(dǎo)素材

選擇性必修第三冊(cè)Unit2單元寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)與演練Writeastoryofaliens單元寫(xiě)作早知道寫(xiě)作任務(wù)本單元的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是寫(xiě)一個(gè)外星人的故事，講述偶遇外星人的經(jīng)歷屬于想象類(lèi)作文,主要記述遇到外星人的背景,整個(gè)事件的過(guò)程并簡(jiǎn)單發(fā)表一下對(duì)該事件的感想。體裁以記敘文為主。常用表達(dá)(1)事件及過(guò)程①alienn.外星人②creaturen.生物③planetn.行星,地球④mysteriousadj.神秘的⑤intelligentadj.聰明的,智商高的⑥existvi.存在⑦witnessv.&n.目擊,見(jiàn)證;目擊者⑧l(xiāng)andvi.&vt.(使)著陸⑨catchsightof看見(jiàn)(2)感受①u(mài)nforgettableadj.令人難忘的②fantasticadj.奇妙的,極好的該篇書(shū)面表達(dá)要求考生以“偶遇外星人”為主題寫(xiě)一遍記敘文，重點(diǎn)寫(xiě)偶遇外星人的精彩，難忘的時(shí)刻。文章屬于記敘文，主要使用第一人稱(chēng)，一般過(guò)去時(shí)?？忌鷳?yīng)當(dāng)仔細(xì)閱讀題干所列要點(diǎn)，確保寫(xiě)作時(shí)不遺漏；然后在此基礎(chǔ)上合理安排好文章結(jié)構(gòu)。本文可分為三段寫(xiě)作。首段簡(jiǎn)述事件，引入文章主題；第二段詳細(xì)記述過(guò)程（乘坐飛碟；遨游太空；欣賞夜景）；第三段表達(dá)感受。在遣詞造句上，應(yīng)當(dāng)注意使用較復(fù)雜的句型和高級(jí)詞匯，并注意合理使用連接成分，增強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。段落內(nèi)容句子設(shè)計(jì)第一段簡(jiǎn)述事件Iwasdoingsth.whenIcaughtsightof…OutoftheUFOcame…第二段詳細(xì)記述過(guò)程（乘坐飛碟；遨游太空；欣賞夜景Frightenedby…,I…Hardlyhad…seen…when…UFOItflewsofastthat…Sofascinatedwas…by…第三段表達(dá)感受。Whatawonderfulandunforgettableexperienceitwas!…neverforgetthisfantasticexperience.開(kāi)始部分①I(mǎi)washavingsupperwhenIcaughtsightofashiningUFOflyinginthesky.我正在吃晚飯,突然看見(jiàn)一個(gè)發(fā)光的不明飛行物在天空中飛行。②OutoftheUFOcameastrangecreaturewithabigheadandeyes.從不明飛行物里出來(lái)一個(gè)長(zhǎng)著大腦袋和大眼睛的奇怪生物。主體部分①Frightenedbythestrangecreature,IranawayasfastasIcould.我被那個(gè)奇怪的生物嚇壞了,盡可能快地跑開(kāi)了。②Hardlyhadheseenmewhenhesmiledandwalkedtowardme.他一看見(jiàn)我就微笑著向我走來(lái)。③ItflewsofastthatIwasalmostscaredtodeath.它飛得那么快,差點(diǎn)把我嚇?biāo)懒?。④SofascinatedwasIbythebeautifulsceneofspacethatIforgottoreturntotheearth.我被太空美麗的景色迷住了,以至于我忘記了回到地球。結(jié)尾部分①Whatawonderfulandunforgettableexperienceitwas!這是一次多么美好和難忘的經(jīng)歷啊!②I’llneverforgetthisfantasticexperience.我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記這次奇妙的經(jīng)歷。假定你是李華,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇周記,記述你遇到外星人的一次經(jīng)歷。內(nèi)容如下:1.周四晚上遇到一個(gè)外星人(個(gè)子矮、頭和眼睛很大、棕色皮膚);2.乘坐UFO,遨游太空,欣賞夜景;3.你的感受。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。審題1.文體：記敘文。2.時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)3.人稱(chēng)：第一人稱(chēng)為主謀篇第一段：簡(jiǎn)述事件，引入文章主題；第二段：詳細(xì)記述過(guò)程（乘坐飛碟；遨游太空；欣賞夜景）；第三段：表達(dá)感受。遣詞造句【核心詞匯】1．catchsightof看見(jiàn)2．UFO不明飛行物3．landontheground登上陸地4．a(chǎn)lien不明飛行物5．wave揮手【連詞成句】1.我正在做作業(yè)的時(shí)候,突然我看到一個(gè)閃閃發(fā)光的UFO在天空中越來(lái)越近,最終降落在地面上。(bedoing...when...)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.然后一個(gè)長(zhǎng)著大腦袋和大眼睛,棕色皮膚的很矮的外星人從里面出來(lái)了。(with)____________________________________________________________________________________________3.(一句多譯)他一看見(jiàn)我,就向我揮手,邀請(qǐng)我乘UFO去旅行。(1)______________________________________________________________________________________.(assoonas/themoment)

(2)________________________________________________________________________________(on/upondoingsth.)

4.它飛得如此快,以至于我們很快就進(jìn)入了太空。(so...that...倒裝句)____________________________________________________________________________________________5.從UFO向外看,我看到了我們生活的美麗的藍(lán)色地球和其他閃亮的星星在黑暗的空間里轉(zhuǎn)動(dòng)。(分詞作狀語(yǔ);定語(yǔ)從句)____________________________________________________________________________________________6.大概過(guò)了一個(gè)小時(shí),我請(qǐng)求外星人把我送到地球上去。(what)____________________________________________________________________________________________7.這是一次多么精彩和難忘的經(jīng)歷啊!(感嘆句)____________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】1.IwasdoingmyhomeworkwhensuddenlyIcaughtsightofashiningUFOintheskycomingnearerandnearerandeventuallylandedontheground.

2.Thenaveryshortalienwithabigheadandeyesandbrownskincameoutofit.

3.(1)Assoonas/Themomenthesawme,hewavedtomeandinvitedmetogotravellingintheUFO.(assoonas/themoment)

(2)On/Uponseeingme,hewavedtomeandinvitedmetogotravellingintheUFO.(on/upondoingsth.)

4.Sofastdiditflythatwewereinspaceinashorttime.

5.LookingoutoftheUFO,Isawthebeautifulblueearthonwhichweliveandothershiningstarscirclingindarkspace.

6.Afterwhatseemedanhour,Iaskedthealientosendmetotheearth.

7.Whatawonderfulandunforgettableexperienceitwas!

【句式升級(jí)】1.用倒裝句改寫(xiě)句2____________________________________________________________________________________________2.用hardly...when...改寫(xiě)句3__________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】1.Thenoutofitcameaveryshortalienwithabigheadandeyesandbrownskin.

2.HardlyhadheseenmewhenhewavedtomeandinvitedmetogotravellingintheUFO.

組句成篇用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯(lián)想內(nèi)容，組成一篇80詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。OnThursdayevening,IwasdoingmyhomeworkwhensuddenlyIcaughtsightofashiningUFOintheskycomingnearerandnearerandeventuallylandedontheground.Thenoutofitcameaveryshortalienwithabigheadandeyesandbrownskin.HardlyhadheseenmewhenhewavedtomeandinvitedmetogotravellingintheUFOandIagreed.Sofastdiditflythatwewereinspaceinashorttime.LookingoutoftheUFO,Isawthebeautifulblueearthonwhichweliveandothershiningstarscirclingindarkspace.Whatafantasticscene!Afterwhatseemedanhour,Iaskedthealientosendmetotheearth.Whatawonderfulandunforgettableexperienceitwas!A假定你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇周記，記述你在太空探索時(shí)候遇到外星人的一次經(jīng)歷。內(nèi)容如下：1.周四晚上遇到一個(gè)外星人（個(gè)子矮、頭和眼睛很大、棕色皮膚）；2.乘坐UFO，遨游太空，欣賞夜景；3.你的感受。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣賞】

OnThursdayevening,IwasdoingmyhomeworkwhensuddenlyIcaughtsightofashiningUFOintheskycomingnearerandnearerandeventuallylandedontheground.Thenoutofitcameaveryshortalienwithabigheadandeyesandbrownskin.HardlyhadheseenmewhenhewavedtomeandinvitedmetogotravellingintheUFOandIagreed.Sofastdiditflythatwewereinspaceinashorttime.LookingoutoftheUFO,Isawthebeautifulblueearthonwhichweliveandothershiningstarscirclingindarkspace.Whatafantasticscene!Afterwhatseemedanhour,Iaskedthealientosendmetotheearth.Whatawonderfulandunforgettableexperienceitwas!【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于開(kāi)放性作文。要求考生用英語(yǔ)一篇周記，記錄在太空探索時(shí)候遇到外星人的一次經(jīng)歷。【詳解】1.詞匯積累最后：eventually→finally美麗的：beautiful→pretty快地：fast→swiftly難忘的：unforgettable→memorable2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Thenoutofitcameaveryshortalienwithabigheadandeyesandbrownskin.拓展句：Thenoutofitcameaveryshortalien,whohadbigheadandeyesandbrownskin.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】HardlyhadheseenmewhenhewavedtomeandinvitedmetogotravellingintheUFOandIagreed.（運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，部分倒裝句。）【高分句型2】LookingoutoftheUFO,Isawthebeautifulblueearthonwhichweliveandothershiningstarscirclingindarkspace.（運(yùn)用了“介詞on+which”引導(dǎo)限定性定語(yǔ)從句）B（2024山東青島·高二上學(xué)期期中）閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Mrs.White,theEnglishteacher,gavetheclassawritingtask.“Writeaboutyoursummervacation,”shesaid.“Be.ascreativeasyoucan.Butmakesureyouuseproperspellingandgrammar.”ThatnightSamstaredatablanksheetofpaperathisdesk.Whatcouldhewriteabouthisboringsummervacation?He’dactuallybeenhappytogetbacktoschool.Sohewrotewhathewanted.Notanessay(短文)butashortstory,sciencefiction.Itwasaboutadistantplanetthatdidn’thavesummer-itwasspringallthetime.Anditdidn’thavevacationseither.Thealiens(外星人)justworked24hoursaday!Samhandedinthestorysoon.However,laterthatnighthelayawakeuntil3A．m.,thinking.“HowwillMrs.Whitelikemywriting?”Englishwashisfavorite.MaybehewouldaskMrs.Whiteforachancetowriteanotheroneshewanted.Thenextmorning,Samgottoschool,onlytoknowMrs.Whitehadalreadyreadandgradedtheessays.注意：1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.續(xù)寫(xiě)部分的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好。Worriedandnervous,hesawMrs.WhitecameinandtheEnglishclassbegan.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣賞】

Worriedandnervous,hesawMrs.WhitecameinandtheEnglishclassbegan.SamthoughthemightgetanF.However,tohissurprise,Mrs.Whitereadoutloudhisstorytotheclass,andpraisedhimforhiscreativityandoriginality.Shesaidthatshewasimpressedbyhowhehadcombinedsciencefictionwiththetopicofsummervacation.Samfeltlikehewasdreaming.Heneverexpectedhisstorytobesowell-received.Hewasbeamingwithprideandhappiness,andlookedathisclassmates,whowerenoddinginagreement.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文以人物為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，講述了Sam的暑假返校后，老師讓他們寫(xiě)一篇和暑假相關(guān)的文章。Sam沒(méi)有選擇寫(xiě)真實(shí)的暑假經(jīng)歷，反而創(chuàng)作了一篇科幻小說(shuō)。在上交了作業(yè)后，Sam有點(diǎn)后悔，認(rèn)為自己不該寫(xiě)那樣的話(huà)題?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫(xiě)：①由段首句內(nèi)容“他又擔(dān)心又緊張，看到Mrs.White進(jìn)來(lái)了，英語(yǔ)課開(kāi)始了?！笨芍?，本段可描寫(xiě)Sam認(rèn)為自己的等級(jí)會(huì)很低，但結(jié)果卻出乎他的意料，老師表?yè)P(yáng)了他的創(chuàng)新。2.續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索：老師已經(jīng)評(píng)分——Sam認(rèn)為作文可能等級(jí)很低——老師當(dāng)眾讀Sam的文章——表?yè)P(yáng)Sam的創(chuàng)新——Sam的感受3.詞匯激活行為類(lèi)①認(rèn)為：think/believe②.期待：expect/anticipate③.結(jié)合：combine/connect情緒類(lèi)①.讓某人吃驚的是：toone’ssurprise/toone’sastonishment②.表?yè)P(yáng)：praise/commend【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1].Shesaidthatshewasimpressedbyhowhehadcombinedsciencefictionwiththetopicofsummervacation.（運(yùn)用了that和how引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句）[高分句型2].Hewasbeamingwithprideandhappiness,andlookedathisclassmates,whowerenoddinginagreement.（運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）C（2024四川瀘州高二上學(xué)期期末）閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。AWritingTaskThesummervacationwasover,soTimandhisclassmatescamebacktoschoolhappily.Onthefirstdayofschool,MrsGreen,Tim’sEnglishteacher,gavetheclassawritingtask.“Boysandgirls,today’shomeworkistowritesomethinginsomewaythatisrelatedtoyoursummervacation,”shesaid.“Beascreativeasyoucan.But”theteacheradded,“makesureyouuseproperspellingandgrammar.”Thatnight,Timsatathisdeskanddecidedtogoaboutthiswritinghomework.Hestaredattheblanksheetpaperforquiteafewminutes,thinkingwhattowriteabout.Totellthetruth,thistime,hedidn’twanttowriteabouthissummervacationasusual.Whatcouldhewriteabout,exceptadog,awaterpark,avisittohisgrandmawithhisfather,twoweeksofcamp,and…?Boring…He’dactuallybeenhappytogetbacktoschool.Buthemadeuphismindtowritewhathereallywanted.Itwasnotanessay(短文)atallbutashortstory,asciencefiction(科幻小說(shuō)).Itwasaboutadistantplanetthatdidn’thavesummer—itwasspringallthetime.Anditdidn’thavevacationeither.Thealiens(外星人)ontheplanetworked24hoursaday.Theywishedtheyhadvacationsoneday.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1Thenextmorninghehandedinthestory,butlaterthatnighthelayawakeuntilIam,thinking,“WhydidIwritesuchastory?”___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph2Butwhenhegottoclassthefollowingday,whattheteachersaidwasagreatsurprisetohim.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣賞】

Thenextmorninghehandedinthestory,butlaterthatnighthelayawakeuntilIam,thinking,“WhydidIwritesuchastory?”Heworriedthattheteachermightnotlikeitandgivehimalowscore.Hecouldn’thelpbutregretnotwritingaboutsomethingreal.Butheremindedhimselfthathehadfollowedhisheartandhadfunwritingthestory.Thealienshehadimaginedmightbeunrealistic,butthelessontheytaughthimwasnot.Herealizedthattherearealwayspeoplewhoworkhardandhopetohaveabetterlife,justlikethealienshecreated.Hefeltasenseofreliefthathehadwrittendownhisthoughts,anddecidedtokeepwritingstoriesinhisownway.Butwhenhegottoclassthefollowingday,whattheteachersaidwasagreatsurprisetohim.MrsGreenreadoutloudhisstorytotheclass,andpraisedhimforhiscreativityandoriginality.Shesaidthatshewasimpressedbyhowhehadcombinedsciencefictionwiththetopicofsummervacation.Timfeltlikehewasdreaming.Heneverexpectedhisstorytobesowell-received.Hewasbeamingwithprideandhappiness,andlookedathisclassmates,whowerenoddinginagreement.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文以人物為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，講述了Tim的暑假返校后，老師讓他們寫(xiě)一篇和暑假相關(guān)的文章。Tim沒(méi)有選擇寫(xiě)真實(shí)的暑假經(jīng)歷，反而創(chuàng)作了一篇科幻小說(shuō)?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫(xiě)：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“第二天早上，他把故事交了上來(lái)，但那天晚上他躺在床上一直睡不著，一直想：“我為什么要寫(xiě)這樣一個(gè)故事?””可知，第一段可描寫(xiě)Tim輾轉(zhuǎn)反側(cè)，擔(dān)心老師不會(huì)喜歡自己的文章。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“但是當(dāng)他第二天去上課時(shí)，老師說(shuō)的話(huà)讓他大吃一驚。”可知，第二段可描寫(xiě)老師對(duì)他的文章大加贊許。2.續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索：Tim返校后，老師布置了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)——Tim不想寫(xiě)暑假里的經(jīng)歷——Tim決定寫(xiě)出自己想要寫(xiě)的東西——Tim有點(diǎn)擔(dān)心老師不喜歡他的文章——老師非常喜歡Tim的文章3.詞匯激活行為類(lèi)①忍不?。篶an’thelpbutdo/can’thelpdoing②決定：decide/determine/makeupone’smind③稱(chēng)贊：praise/applaud情緒類(lèi)①擔(dān)心的：worried/concerned②幸福：happiness/pleasure/felicity【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Heworriedthattheteachermightnotlikeitandgivehimalowscore.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Hewasbeamingwithprideandhappiness,andlookedathisclassmates,whowerenoddinginagreement.（運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）D根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，通過(guò)合理的想象，以“Meetinganalien”為題寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文，想象一下外星人帶你參觀(guān)的外星科技生活。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)如下：1.遇見(jiàn)外星人并被帶到外星球；2.參觀(guān)了他們的智能化房子；3.房子是如何為人服務(wù)的；4.外星人邀請(qǐng)你留下來(lái)，但你還是選擇回到了地球與家人和朋友團(tuán)聚。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________