2024屆浙江省臺州市高三二模英語讀后續(xù)寫-初來炸的新手避免犯同樣的錯誤講義

2024屆浙江省臺州市高三二模英語讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Istoodintherestaurantkitchen,myeyeswide,armshangingawkwardly,readytoworkbutunsureofwhattodo.“Youwillbetrainedfirst,”

mymanagerAaronsaid,“anddo

remembertocheckeverydetail!”

Withthesewords,hewalkedaway.我站在餐廳的廚房里，睜大眼睛，笨拙地垂著手臂，準(zhǔn)備工作，但不確定該做什么。“你會先接受培訓(xùn)，”我的經(jīng)理亞倫說，“記住檢查每一個細(xì)節(jié)！”說完，他走開了。Aworkmatethrewmeadishbrushandsaid,“Let'sgetstarted.”

Heintroducedmetothebasicsofwashingdishesanddemonstratedtheprocess.Thiswasthebeginningofmypart-timejob,anewstagewhereIwasbotheagertolearnandanxiousaboutthechallenges

ahead.一位同事扔給我一把洗碗刷，說：“我們開始吧。”他向我介紹了洗碗的基本知識，并演示了這個過程。這是我兼職工作的開始，在這個新階段，我既渴望學(xué)習(xí)，又對未來的挑戰(zhàn)感到焦慮。OnaFridaynight,Aaronswiftlyenteredthekitchen.“Whohasjustbused（收拾）thebackrighttable?”

heshouted,hisvoicesharpwithurgency.Myhands,slipperywithbubblesfromthebowlIwaswashing,nearlyletitslipthroughmyfingers.Iwanted

tosayIwasguilty,butAaron'scoldstaredidn'tpromiseahappyrewardfortheguywhoadmitted.Finally,amixoffearandmyownconsciencepushedtheresponseoutofmymouth.一個星期五的晚上，亞倫迅速走進(jìn)廚房?！罢l剛剛坐公共汽車(收拾）右邊后面的桌子？”他喊道，聲音急促而尖銳。我的手被洗碗里的氣泡弄得很滑，差點從手指間溜走。我本想說我有罪，但亞倫冷酷的眼神并不能保證給那個承認(rèn)的人一個愉快的獎勵。最后，恐懼和我自己的良心交織在一起，把我的反應(yīng)從嘴里說了出來。“Idid,Aaron.”“我做到了，亞倫?！薄癢hatwereyouthinking?Getbackouthereandlookatwhatyoumissed!”

Hiswordsforcedmeforward.Igrabbedarag（抹布）andfollowedhimouttotabletwenty-two.Aswemadeourwaythroughtherestaurant,hesaidsomethingaboutrags,butIdidn'thearclearly

withotherconversationsgoingonaroundus.“你在想什么？回到這里，看看你錯過了什么！”他的話迫使我向前走。我抓了塊抹布(抹布）跟著他走到二十二號桌。當(dāng)我們穿過餐廳時，他說了一些關(guān)于抹布的話，但我聽不清我們周圍正在進(jìn)行的其他對話。Iquicklyrealizedthetrueissuewasthemessbeneaththetable.Anearlyfullcupofbeerhadtippedover,creatingasmalllakeonthefloor.Itwasasignificantmistakeonmypart.“Takecareofit!”

Aarontunedandstormedofftothefrontoftherestaurant.我很快意識到真正的問題是桌子下面一團糟。一杯幾乎滿了的啤酒倒了，在地板上形成了一個小湖。這是我的一個重大錯誤?！氨Ｖ兀　眮唫愓{(diào)整了一下，怒氣沖沖地走到餐廳前面。Idroppeddowntocleanupthebeer.Thatwaswhenanotherproblemoccurred.Ihadbroughtonlyonerag.Onealreadywetrag.Itdidnothingbutincreasethesizeofthelake.“Morerags,”

Ithought.Immediately,Irushedintothekitchenandhurriedlygrabbedfive

dryrags,hopingAaronwouldn'tnoticemybriefabsence.我倒下來清理啤酒。那是另一個問題發(fā)生的時候。我只帶了一塊抹布。一塊已經(jīng)濕了的抹布。它什么也沒做，只是增加了湖面的大小?！案嗟钠撇?，”我想。我立刻沖進(jìn)廚房，匆匆抓了五塊干抹布，希望亞倫不會注意到我短暫的缺席。注意：1.

續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；2.

請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。IhadjustrushedoutwhenIfoundAaronstandinginmyway.Aftercleaningupthemess,IreflectedonAaron'swords.主題文章的主題是關(guān)于個人的成長，特別是在面對挑戰(zhàn)、犯錯和解決問題時的適應(yīng)與學(xué)習(xí)過程。它強調(diào)了勇氣、責(zé)任感、學(xué)習(xí)適應(yīng)能力和解決問題的能力對于職業(yè)發(fā)展的重要性，并展示了通過這些經(jīng)歷獲得的個人成長和成就感。伏筆：1.細(xì)節(jié)檢查的強調(diào):"dorememberto強調(diào)了細(xì)節(jié)的重要性2.濕抹布的使用:主人公在洗碗時手上滑滑泡沫。這個細(xì)節(jié)在后來清理啤酒灑落時做鋪墊，濕滑的地面，反而讓情況要得更糟糕。主人公的緊張狀態(tài)，由于是新手，缺乏經(jīng)驗，在面對詢問時，更加手足無措，緊張之下讓手中的碗滑落。忙碌的周五夜晚Aron語氣中的緊迫感主人公內(nèi)心的沖突Iwanted

tosayIwasguilty,butAaron'scoldstaredidn'tpromiseahappyrewardfortheguywhoadmitted.下水文：IhadjustrushedoutwhenIfoundAaronstandinginmyway.

Hissternlooksuggestedhewasabouttocommentonmyearlierabsence,buttomyrelief,hesimplymovedaside,allowingmetorectifymymistake.Withthefreshragsinhand,Igottowork,soppingupthespilledbeerandmoppingtheflooruntilitwasasgoodasnew.Despitetheinitialpanic,Imanagedtocleanthemessthoroughly,andthissmallvictoryhelpedrestoreabitofmyshakenconfidence.Aftercleaningupthemess,IreflectedonAaron’swords.

Theywereharshbutfair.Itwasafast-pacedenvironmentandattentiontodetailwasparamount;thisslip-upservedasastarkreminder.Overtime,Ibecamemoremeticulousinmyduties,double-checkingeverytaskbeforeconsideringitcomplete.Inthesubsequentweeks,InoticedashiftinmyrelationshipwithmycolleaguesandevenwithAaron.Theysawmycommitmenttolearningfrommymistakesandrecognizedmydedicationtothejob.Astheweeksturnedintomonths,theawkwarduncertaintyIhadfeltonthatfirstdaywasreplacedbyasenseofbelongingandcompetence.Thiswasnotjustanotherpart-timejob;itwasalessoninresponsibilityandpersonalgrowth,alessonIwouldcarrywithmeintothefuture.參考范文：Ihadjustrushedoutwhen1foundAaronstandinginmyway.“What'sup?"heaskedsharply,hiseyesfixedonme.Feelingtheweightofmymistake.Istammerednervously,.“1needdryrags..t..clean"Uponhearingthis.Aaronletoutaheavysigh.“Youshouldhavecheckedeverydetail,"heremarked,ahintofdisappointmentinhisvoice.“Thisjobisn'tjustaboutreacting,it'salsoaboutbeingcareful.Now,gocleanthatup!"Avoidinghisgaze,Idashedtowardstabletwenty-two.Withanamplesupplyofrags,Ithrewmyselfintothetask,tirelesslymopping,scrubbing,andwiping.Aftercleaningupthemess,IreflectedonAaron'swords.Theyweresharpbutabsolutelyright.Myinexperienceandinitialanxietyinthisnewjobhadledmetooverlookcrucialdetails,andIshouldhavebeenmoremindfulofmywork.Takingadeepbreath,Ireturnedtomyduties,bearingAaron'swordsinmind.Witheverydishwashedandeverytablecleared.,Imadesuretodouble-checkmywork.EverythingwentwellandsoonIrealizedthiscarefulnesswouldnotjustapplytocleaning:,itwouldinfluenceeveryaspectofmyjob,preparingmeembrace