專題10 應(yīng)用文之建議信 2024年高考英語考前沖刺必背作文(模板、素材、分類押題范文)(新高考專用)

專題10應(yīng)用文之建議信寫作要點(diǎn)寫作要點(diǎn)寫作結(jié)構(gòu)寫作結(jié)構(gòu)第一段：寫信原因+寫信目的1.I'msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublefittinginyournewschool.Suchproblemsarequitenormal.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpfultoyou.很遺憾聽說你在適應(yīng)新學(xué)校方面有困難。這樣的問題是很正常的?？赡芟旅娴慕ㄗh會對你有一些幫助。2.Learning/Hearingthatyouhavedifficultyindealingwiththerelationshipwithyourparents,I'dliketogiveyousomeadvice.得知/聽說你在處理與父母的關(guān)系上有困難，我想要給你一些建議。3.I'mmorethangladtoreceiveyourletteraskingmehowtolearnChinese.Thefollowingaresomesuggestionsforyou.很高興收到你就如何學(xué)習(xí)漢語向我征求建議的來信。以下是給你的一些建議。4.YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtohowtolearnChinesewell,andIwilltrytooffersomepracticalsuggestionshere.你向我征求關(guān)于如何學(xué)好漢語的建議，那么我就在這里給出一些實用的建議。5.I'mwritinginreplytoyourlastletteronhowtospeakEnglishfluentlyandaccurately.我寫信是來回復(fù)你在上封信中提到的如何準(zhǔn)確流利地說英語的問題。6.I'mwritingtoyoutopresentwhatIthinkonthefurtherimprovementofourhotelsoastoattractmoreclients（顧客）.我給你寫信是想說明一下我對于進(jìn)一步改善我們旅館的一些想法，以吸引更多顧客。第二段：給出具體的建議及理由1.Tobeginwith/Firstandforemost,youaresupposedtodo你應(yīng)該做…2.You'dbetterdosth.你最好做……/Youmayaswelldosth.你不妨做…3.Lastbutnotleast,whynotdosth?最后，為什么不……？4.Personally/AsfarasI'mconcerned/Frommypointofview,itwouldbeawisechoice/goodideaifyoureadabookorlistentomusic.Bydoingthis,youwillcalmyourselfdown.在我看來，看書或聽音樂將會是明智的選擇/不錯的主意。通過這樣做，你會使自己平靜下來。5.There'snoneedforyoutobesoworriedandnervous,andit'snecessaryforyoutoconsultsomebooksconcerningthetraditionalChineseculture.你沒必要如此擔(dān)心和緊張，你有必要查閱一些關(guān)于中國傳統(tǒng)文化的書籍。6.Anothersuggestionisthatyoushouldwearaprotectivemasktopreventyourselffromgettinginfectedifyougooutdoors.另一個建議是，你應(yīng)該戴上防護(hù)口罩，以防外出時被感染。7.Inaddition,Istronglysuggest/advisethatyoushouldmakeuseoftimetomasterthepresentsubjects.此外,我強(qiáng)烈建議你利用時間掌握現(xiàn)在的科目。8.IfIwereyou/WereIyou,Iwouldworkoutregularlyinordertokeephealthy.如果我是你，我會經(jīng)常鍛煉以保持健康。第三段：希望采納建議+表達(dá)美好祝愿1.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/beneficial/practical.Feelfreetocontactmeifyouhaveanyquestions.我希望你會認(rèn)為這些建議有幫助/有益/可行。如果你有任何問題，請隨時和我聯(lián)系。2.Isincerelyhopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:wherethereisawill,thereisaway.我真誠地希望這些建議會對你有用。記?。河兄菊呤戮钩伞?.Ihopemysuggestionscanmakeadifferencetoyou.Bestwishesandgoodluck!希望我的建議能對你有影響。4.Ihopeyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.Iamsureyouwillhaveapleasantonlinelearningexperience.希望你能考慮我的建議。我相信你會有一個愉快的網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷。5.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.如果你能考慮我的建議，我將不勝感激。寫作模板寫作模板Dear

________,Iwasgladtoreceiveyourletter

askingformyadviceon

_________(別人求助內(nèi)容).Herearemysuggestions.

/

Youhaveaskedmeformyadvice

withregardto__________,andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestionshere.Togetstarted,youhadbetter_________(建議一).

Besides,it’sagoodideato_________(建議二).

Lastbutnotleast,Ithinkthemostefficientwayisto_________(建議三).With

allthefactors

takenintoconsideration,I’msureyouwill_________(成功解決問題).

/

Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.

Goodluckwith

your__________(祝愿)Bestwishes,LiJin寫作素材寫作素材Writing1:2023?新高考I&II卷假定你是李華，外教Ryan準(zhǔn)備將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組，讓大家課后練習(xí)口語，你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在問題。請你給外教寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括；1.

說明問題；2.

提出建議注意:

1.

寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右：

2.

請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.Ithinkit’snotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇是應(yīng)用文寫作，要求考生給外教寫一封郵件，告訴他將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組，讓大家課后練習(xí)口語，你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在問題?！驹斀狻?.

詞匯積累首先：tobeginwith→firstofall提高：improve→progress建議：suggestion→advice選擇：choose

→

select2句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.拓展句：Mysuggestionisthatwearesupposedtogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）[高分句型2]Besides,Studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.（運(yùn)用了省略句和who引導(dǎo)定語從句）Writing2:2023?安徽省、云南省、吉林省、黑龍江省四省聯(lián)考卷你剛觀看了你校與英國一所友好學(xué)校聯(lián)合在線上舉辦的音樂會。請在線上留言板上寫一則評論，內(nèi)容包括：1.

音樂會特點(diǎn)；2.

觀看感受；3.

意見建議。注意：1.

寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.

請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Thisonlineconcertisabsolutelyfantastic.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Thisonlineconcertis

absolutelyfantastic.Theperformersfromthetwoschoolshavedonetheirbestin

entertainingtheaudiencewith

onesongafteranother.Theirperformancesare

undoubtedly

of

highquality,whichmakestheconcertalmostnodifferentfromaliveone.Ienjoyedeverysecondoftheconcertandwas

particularly

attractedwhentheboysandgirlsfromBritainstartedtosingthetraditionalChinesesong“LiangZhu”.Theyperformedthesonginaway

that

touchedmyheartandgavemeafeelingof

connection.Ihopetherewillbemore

opportunities

inthefutureforusChinesestudentsandourinternationalfriendstolearnaboutandfromeachother.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于開放作文。要求考生就學(xué)校與英國一所友好學(xué)校聯(lián)合在線上舉辦的音樂會，在線上留言板上寫一則評論。【詳解】1.詞匯積累確定無疑地：undoubtedly→withoutdoubt尤其地：particularly→

especially感動：touch→

move希望：hope→

expect2.句式拓展同義句原句：Theirperformancesareundoubtedlyofhighquality,whichmakestheconcertalmostnodifferentfromaliveone.拓展句：Thereisnodoubtthattheirperformancesareofhighquality,whichmakestheconcertalmostnodifferentfromaliveone.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Theirperformancesareundoubtedlyofhighquality,whichmakestheconcertalmostnodifferentfromaliveone.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】IenjoyedeverysecondoftheconcertandwasparticularlyattractedwhentheboysandgirlsfromBritainstartedtosingthetraditionalChinesesong“LiangZhu”.

（運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）押題范文押題范文1.(2024年湖北省八市高三3月聯(lián)考)假定你是李華，你的筆友Jack因高三學(xué)習(xí)壓力增大，總為一些小事對家長或同學(xué)發(fā)脾氣，為此他很懊惱，希望得到你的幫助。請你回復(fù)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示理解；2.提出建議。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearJack,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Lihua【答案】DearJack,Ilearn

thattheincreasingacademicpressureisbecoming

aheadacheforyou.

Actually,itisnotuncommon

forseniorthreestudents

ofyour

age

toloseyourtemperwithparentsandclassmates.

Sojust

takeiteasyandherecomesmyadvice.Italwayscomesfirstto

doexercise,suchasrunning,climbing,playingbasketball,

andthelike,sothatyoucanrelieveyourselfbothphysicallyandmentally.Balancingyourworkandplay

toguaranteeyourstudyefficiencyisalsopreferable,Equallyimportantisto

communicatewithyourparentsandfriendstogaintheirunderstandingandsupport.Ihopemyadviceis

ofsome

helptoyou.Lookingforwardtoyour

breakingfreefromyourbother.

Yours

sincerely，LiHua1.應(yīng)用文寫作前三步驟：（1）審題判定文體為建議信；（2）因兩人是筆友關(guān)系，故李華身份不必交代；（3）因文本主體部分為就如何緩解學(xué)習(xí)壓力提出具體建議，故本文總體時態(tài)定調(diào)為一般現(xiàn)在時。2.本文的亮點(diǎn)：（1）academicpressure學(xué)業(yè)壓力；（2）becomeaheadacheforsb對某人來說是一件頭疼的事情；（3）itisnotuncommonforsbtodosth雙重否定表達(dá)肯定意義=itiscommonforsbtodosth；（4）takeiteasy放輕松；（5）herecomesmyadvice運(yùn)用完全倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)；（6）italwayscomesfirsttodosth做某事總是排在首位的；（7）andthelike等等=andsoon；（8）balanceyourworkandplay勞逸結(jié)合；（9）...isalsopreferable某事也是更好的；（10）Equallyimportantistodosth表語形容詞置于句首產(chǎn)生完全倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)；（11）isofgreathelptosb對某事而言有所幫助；（12）breakfreefromyourbother擺脫困擾。2.(2023年全國高考英語真題北京卷)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國好友Jim正在策劃一次以“綠色北京”為主題的社團(tuán)活動。他發(fā)來郵件詢問你的建議。請你用英文給他回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：1.活動形式；2.活動內(nèi)容。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJim,Iamgladtolearnthatyouareplanningaclubactivitythemedwith"GreenBeijing".Herearemysuggestions.Italwayscomesfirstto

inviteacelebratedexpertforalectureonenvironmentalprotection.Toact,afterall,weshouldthinkfirst.ActivitieslikegarbagepickingandwasteclassificationinfamousscenicspotsinBeijingarealsopreferable,whichwillpromotetheecologicalconceptofhealthandenvironmentalprotectiontotouristswithpracticalactions.PluswhynotchoosegreentravelsothatyoucancontributetoBeijing'senvironmentalprotection?Ihopemyadviceishelpfultoyou.Yours,LiHua1.應(yīng)用文寫作前三步驟：（1）審題判定文體為建議信；（2）因兩人相識，故李華身份不必交代；（3）因文本主體部分為建議的具體內(nèi)容，故本文總體時態(tài)定調(diào)為一般現(xiàn)在時。2.本文的亮點(diǎn)：（1）Italwayscomesfirsttodosth做某事是首要的；（2）celebrated形容詞，意為“著名的”；（3）...arealsopreferable也是更好的；（4）Plus此外；（5）contributeto對...做出貢獻(xiàn)。3.(2024年河南省普通高中畢業(yè)班高考適應(yīng)性測試)假如你是李華，你校計劃舉行以“FlyYourDream”為主題的英語周活動?，F(xiàn)就活動的內(nèi)容、形式征集建議，請你給負(fù)責(zé)本次活動的外教Chris寫一封信，提出你的想法。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下形式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearChris,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearChris,Iamgladtolearnthatourschoolisscheduledto

holdanEnglishweekactivity

of"FlyingYourDreams".Thisactivity,Ibelieve,

willbeofextraordinarysignificance.And

herecomesmyproposal.Themedwith

"dream",itwouldbepreferableto

focusonthediversityinvariousformsofthebigevent.Onthetopofmylistare

stageactivities,rangingfrom

painting

andspeechcontests,totheEnglishsongperformance.Flyingkitesisanotheralternative.Everyindividualcanmakeakite

withadreamonitandflytheirdreams.Notonlywillitstimulatethestudents'interest,itwillalsoimprove

theirhands-onability,killingtwobirdswithonestone.Ihopemysuggestionsare

ofsomehelpand

wishthiseventacompletesuccess!Yours,LiHua1.應(yīng)用文寫作前三步驟：（1）審題判定文體為建議信；（2）因兩人是師生關(guān)系，故李華身份不必交代；（3）因文本主體部分為就英語周活動的內(nèi)容和形式提出具體建議，故本文總體時態(tài)定調(diào)為一般將來時。2.本文的亮點(diǎn)：（1）bescheduledtodosth計劃做某事；（2）beofextraordinarysignificance意義非凡；（3）herecomesmyproposal運(yùn)用完全倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)；（4）themedwith以...為主題；（5）itwouldbepreferabletodosth做某事是更好的；（6）Onthetopofmylistare...介賓短語置于句首產(chǎn)生完全倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)；（7）rangingfrom...to...表達(dá)形式多樣性的結(jié)構(gòu)；（8）anotheralternative另一個選擇；（9）Notonlywillit...否定詞置于句首產(chǎn)生部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)；（10）stimulateone'sinterest激發(fā)興趣；（11）killingtwobirdswithonestone分詞短語作結(jié)果狀語，意為“一石二鳥，一箭雙雕”；（12）ofsomehelp有所幫助。4.(2023屆重慶市高三第一次聯(lián)合診斷檢測·康德卷)假定你是李華，美國“漢語橋（ChineseBridge）”網(wǎng)上冬令營組織方正在網(wǎng)上征集活動內(nèi)容，歡迎網(wǎng)友獻(xiàn)計獻(xiàn)策。請你給組織方寫一封建議信，內(nèi)容包括：1.你建議的活動（至少兩項）；2.你的理由；3.你的希望。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dearcommitteemembers,I'mgladtoknowthatyouareseekingfortheeventsofChineseBridgeonlinewintercamp.Herecomesmyadvice

asaguideline.Musicknowsnoborders.

Italwayscomesfirstto

holdaninstrumentconcert,inwhichstudentscanplaysomefamiliarChineseclassicalfolkmusic,whichcanfurther

stimulatestudents'interestinlearningChineseandhelpthem

feeltheweightofhistory

oftraditionalChinesemusic.AChinesestoryspeechcontestisalsopreferable,sincethereare

awealthofclassicmythsandlegendsinChina.Theseactivities,I’mconvinced,willdefinitelybringthestudentsaculturalfeast.Iwouldappreciateitif

youcouldtakemysuggestionintoconsideration.Ihopethewintercampwillbeagreatsuccess!Yours,LiHua1.應(yīng)用文寫作前三步驟：（1）審題判定文體為建議信；（2）因文本開頭已給出，故李華身份不必交代；（3）因文本主體部分為提出并說明原因，故本文總體時態(tài)定調(diào)為一般現(xiàn)在時。2.本文的亮點(diǎn)：（1）Herecomesmyadvice運(yùn)用完全倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)；（2）Musicknowsnoborders音樂無國界；（3）Italwayscomesfirsttodosth首先要做某事；（4）stimulateone'sinterestin激發(fā)某人的興趣；（5）feeltheweightofhistory感受歷史的厚重感；（6）...isalsopreferable也是更可取的；（7）awealthof豐富多彩的，很多的；（8）I'mconvinced我相信，文中用作插入語；（9）definitely明確地；（10）bringsbaculturalfeast帶給某人一場文化盛宴；（11）Iwouldappreciateitif如果...我將不勝感激；（12）takesthintoconsideration把某事考慮在內(nèi)。5.(浙江省紹興市2024屆高三一?？荚?假定你是李華，你的英國筆友David剛升入高中，但因一時無法適應(yīng)新的校園生活而焦慮，寫信向你傾訴他的煩惱。請你給他回復(fù)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.分析可能的原因；2.給出合理的建議。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearDavid,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________