讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(人狼相遇)2024屆高三英語寫作專項

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習1——人狼相遇題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目再現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Itwasapeacefulnight.Iwassleepingwithmybrothers,feelingwarmandcomfortable.Mamawassleepingnearby,coveredbysnow.Papawassomewherenearby,watchingoverus.Therewasabrightmoonandwehadallhadagoodmealofvenison(鹿肉)Papahadcaughtearlier.“UncleLouisiscoming”,Papasaid.WelovedUncleLouis.Hewasafunnywolf,andalwayshadinterestingthingstotellusandshowus.Alittlewhilelater,UncleLouisappeared.WedidnotapproachhimwithrespectthewayweapproachedPapa.Weflewathim,jumpedalloverhim,androlledhiminthesnow.UncleLouislaughedandpatteduswithhispaws.Heisblackallover,withyelloweyes,andheisverytall.4續(xù)寫原文“It'sthelongestnightoftheyear”,UncleLouissaid,“Doeseveryonefeelliketakingarunthroughthewoods?Iwanttoshowyousomethingunusual.”Hearingthat,Papawarnedthatitwasdangeroustogonearthatpackofhumanswholivedinthewoods.“Theyarehardlydangerous”,UncleLouislaughed,“Theyaresoclumsyandmakesomuchnoise.Theyarenotabletogetnearus——orevenseeusifwedon'twantthemto.Besides,thisistheirspecialnight.Theyarequitepeacefulandwon'tbebotheringaboutwolves.”“Oh,please,Papa,letusrunthroughthewoodswithUncleLouisandseesomethingunusual!“Weallbegged.“Itisafinenight”,Papasmiled,“Imustadmit,Idofeellikerunning.”5段首句Para1:

Andwewereoff,allofus,headingtowardsthewoods.Para2Westoppedandsatonahillsideandbelowuswasthehumans’place.6Part2題目分析7已知短文內容通過閱讀所給文章可知，文章記敘了作者是一只小狼，一個寧靜的夜晚，Louis叔叔來到了他們家，并提議去樹林里跑一跑，有人提醒他們住在樹林里的人很危險，Louis叔叔告訴他們人類并不是危險，于是他們往樹林走去。8點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點9續(xù)寫建議第一段：第一段開頭是：我們所有人都出發(fā)了，向樹林走去。所以后文應該是講述他們進入樹林后的情況，在爸爸和Louis叔叔的帶領下，作者感到強壯和輕松，仿佛可以永遠奔跑下去。第二段：我們停了下來，坐在山坡上，下面是人類的地盤。本段應該寫他們在山坡上看到的東西，他們聽到人類在木屋里唱歌，溫暖的光線從洞里照射出來。在這個不尋常的夜晚，他們也唱了起來。10Part3范文呈現(xiàn)11范文呈現(xiàn)Andwewereoff,allofus,headingtowardsthewoods.Themoonwashedthewoodsinagentlelight.Thestarstwinkledlikeachild’scuriouseyesblinkingwithanticipation.Thechillingwindsuddenlysentwavesofnervousnesscoursingthroughme.“Arewegoingtomeetthedangeroushumans?”Ifeltmysoundquivering.“Relax.Weareseeingtheunusualthing.”UncleLouissmiled.Withthis,wespedup,thepiercingcrunchofthesnowunderourfeetripplingthroughtheairandsendingthebirdsflutteringamongthetrees.Shortly,abigbonfirecameintoview.12范文呈現(xiàn)Westoppedandsatonahillsideandbelowuswasthehumans'place.Now,notfaraway,aroundthebonfirearedancingmanyhumans,handinhand.Papawarnedusnottostartlethem.Butindulgingintheirhappiness,mybrothercannothelphowling.Suddenly,totalsilencedescendedonthehillside.Allthehumanslookedatusinterror,andsodidus.Mybrother,notknowingwhathappenedatall,imitatedtheirdancingclumsily.Unexpectedly,aroaroflaughterbrokeoutandthenthecelebrationwentonmoreenthusiastically.Thatunusualnight,theharmoniousnoise,Iremembered,wentov