讀后續(xù)寫 誰是誰的超級(jí)英雄 講義 高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)寫作講義試題原題第四部分寫作(共兩節(jié)，滿分40分)第二節(jié)(滿分25分)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Itwas

acold,snowyevening.Tommywasrunning

asfastashe

could,focusedonnothingbuthisdestination-theshoponthestreetcorner.TwoweeksagohesawfigurinesofMarvelsuperheroesontheshelvesandfelthehadtohaveone.He'sbeenwalkingtheneighbor'sdogeversincethentoearnmoneytorealizehislittledream.Hewassoexcitedandhardlynoticingtheworldaroundhim.Maybethat'swhyhetrippedoverthelegsofahomelesswoman,whowassittingonthesidewalk,herbackagainstthewall.Hemurmured(低語)"sorry"andmovedontohisdestination.Onceheenteredtheshop,hewentstraighttotheshelveswithfigurines.Hulk,Thor,CaptainAmerica,IronMan,andmanymore-allofhisadmiredheroes.WithhisheartpoundinglikecrazyhereachedforSpiderman."Youlikethese,truebeliever?"Tommyturnedaround.Anoldmanwasstandingbehindhimwithawidesmileonhisface."Y-yes.…Yes,

they'reawesome!"answeredTommy."They'restrongandfastandhelpotherpeoplealot…"theboylookedatfigurinesinadmiration."IwishIcouldbeasuperherotoo.""Thenbecomeone!"saidtheoldman."How?"Tommyaskedinsurprise."Idon'thaveanysuperpowers.""Andwhywouldyouneedthem?"theoldmansmiled.Seeingtheconfusionontheboy'sface,hesquatted(蹲下)andputhishandsonTommy'sarms."Didyouknow,thatshopkeeperladyovertherehasadisabledhusband?She'sbeenworkinghardandtakingcareofhimforyears.I'veneverheardawordofcomplaintfromher.Andthisperson-"hepointedataredheadman,whojustenteredtheshop."He'safirefighter;he'ssavedcountlesslives.Henevergivesup,nomatterhowdangerousthesituationseemstobe."TheoldmanlookedTommyintheeyesandsmiled."Youdon'tneedasuperpowertobeaheroforsomeoneelse.Thepathofasuperherostartsnotinthemind,notinthemuscles,butintheheart."注意：1.

續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.

請(qǐng)按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。Tommy

loweredhisheadandlookedathisshoesthinkingintensely.____________________________________________________________________

The

homelesswomanwasrightthere,wherehesawherlasttime.________________________________________________________________試題分析1.主要人物:①Tommy:sawfigurinesofMarvelsuperheroesontheshelvesandfelthehadtohaveone②theoldman:③thehomelesswoman:2.視角：第三人稱3.主題：人與社會(huì)/人與自我（如何成為自己希望的superhero），4.前文故事梗概:Tommy喜歡超級(jí)英雄的小人形象。通過給鄰居遛狗，他終于攢夠了錢，在一個(gè)寒冷的下雪的夜晚，飛奔前往之前看到的那家有小人形象銷售的店，撞了坐在路邊流浪女，只是簡單地說了聲對(duì)不起后就離開了。小人形象很吸引人，最終他選了“蜘蛛俠”。聽到有人問他話，轉(zhuǎn)身看到一位老人。當(dāng)老人問他為什么喜歡和說他也可以成為一位超級(jí)英雄的時(shí)候，他感到一臉迷茫。于是，老人就開始以身邊的例子來說明如何成為超級(jí)英雄。Tommy開始有所悟。……5.續(xù)寫安排:第一段:Tommyloweredhisheadandlookedathisshoesthinkingintensely.①（與前一句和前文銜接）Tommy到底在想什么呢②（過渡）接下去，他準(zhǔn)備做什么③（承上啟下）肯定前往homelesswoman那里，想為她做點(diǎn)什么第二段:Thehomelesswomanwasrightthere,wherehesawherlasttime.①（與前一句銜接）怎么跟她交流②（過渡）homelesswoman的回應(yīng)③（收尾）通過此事Tommy對(duì)superhero的感悟下水作文Tommyloweredhisheadandlookedathisshoesthinkingintensely.Thinkingoftheoldman’swords,hebegantowonderwhathecoulddotobeasuperhero,hundredsofthoughtsrunningaroundinhismind.Helpingtheelderlyinthenursinghome?Doingsomethingforthecommunity?Orsomethingelse?…Itseemedtobenowayout.Allofasudden,theslightpaininhisrightfootbroughthimthethoughtthatheshoulddosomethingforthehomelesswoman.Afteraharddecision,heputhisfavoritefigurineSpidermanbacktotheshelf.Abigdreamcameintohisheart.Ahotcoffee,twosandwichesandthegloveinhand,hedashedtoher.(108words)Thehomelesswomanwasrightthere,wherehesawherlasttime.Theheaviersnowhadforcedhertocurltightlyasaball.Approachingher,hebenttoasquatandofferedherwhathehadboughtafterawarmandpolitegreeting.Thehomelesswomanraisedherselfslowlyandthankedhiminalowvoice,shiningtearsofgratituderollingdown.“Youreallydeservethem,Lady!”Itwasthefirsttimeforhimtogetclosetosuchsituations.However,itindeedofferedhimanopportunitytounderstandthemeaningofasuperheroandafurtherthinkingofhowtobeone.Asuperherostartedfromdoingsomethingforthoseinneedwithawillingheart.(106words)參考范文讀后續(xù)寫(滿分25分)Tommyloweredhisheadandlookedathisshoesthinkingintensely.Finally,heraisedhishead."SoIamsupposedto..."hestoppedmid-sentencewhenherealizedthathewasalone.Heturnedhisheadleftandright,buttheoldmanwasnowheretobeseen.Tommysighedheavily-healreadyhadanideaofwhatheshoulddo.Helookedatfigurinesforthelasttimeandmovedtowardsthecounter."Twosandwichesandacupofteaplease,"hesaid.(73words)Thehomelesswomanwasrightthere,wherehesawherlasttime.Tommycamecloserandcarefullygavethewomanhisbuys.Hereyesopenedwideinsurprise,thenfilledwithtears."Thankyou,"shewhispered.Tommybowedhishead,turnedaroundandwentbackhome.Hewasmovingfasterandfasterandfinallyhestartedtorun.

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