陜西省2024八年級英語下冊Unit2I'llhelptocleanupthecityparks寫作能力提升練課件新版人教新目標版

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假如你是李華，上周日你和幾位同學組建了一支志愿者小隊，去一所貧困的鄉(xiāng)村學校做志愿活動。請根據下表內容寫一篇英語短文，介紹你們的志愿活動。時間上周日地點一所貧困的鄉(xiāng)村學校人物你和幾位同學活動打掃學校，修理桌椅，贈送書籍和玩具……要求：1.包含所有提示內容，可適當發(fā)揮；2.語言通順，行文連貫，內容充實；3.詞數：80左右。

［謀篇布局］厘清文章要素，構建文章結構。引出話題——likevolunteer,because,help,make,happy↓描述活動——setup,cleanup,fixup,giveaway,playgames…↓表達愿望——hope,help,allthetime［遣詞造句］就結構圖中的要點和詞語寫出句子。1.上周日我和幾位同學組建了一支小隊，去一所貧困的鄉(xiāng)村學校做志愿活動。LastSunday，severalofmyclassmatesandI

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2.

我們和那些學生一起打掃學校。We

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3.

我們幫助修理了教室里破損的課桌和椅子。Wehelped

(to)fixupthebrokendesksandchairs

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我們向那些學生贈送了書籍和玩具。We

gaveawaybooksandtoys

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5.為了讓他們高興起來，我們還和他們一起做游戲。Inorderto

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played

gameswiththem

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played

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利用連接詞，使句子意思連貫。

本文中，可以使用first，then，afterthat等表順序的詞或短語來介紹我們所做的志愿活動，使文章顯得有層次性。［巧妙銜接］

Ilikedoingvolunteerjobsbecausehelpingothersmakesmehappy.［連句成篇］

LastSunday，severalofmyclassmatesandIsetupateamtovolunteerinapoorvillageschool.First，wecleaneduptheschoolwiththestudents.Thenwehelpedfixupthebrokendesksandchairsintheclassrooms.Afterthat，wegaveawaybooksandtoystothestudents.Inordertocheerthemup，wealsoplayedgameswiththem.

Althoughweweretired，wefelthappytohelpthem.Ihopewecanhelpthemallthetime.

幫助他人，快樂自己。張明和他的同學們經常在周末去村里看望空巢老人。假如你是張明的朋友，請根據提供的信息介紹一下上周日他們一起去看望李奶奶時所做的事情。你對他們的做法有何感想？你是否愿意參加類似的活動？請說明理由。2.和李奶奶一起做飯、吃飯；3.陪李奶奶去村里的廣場散步，給她講學校的事。要點提示：1.幫李奶奶打掃院子、洗衣服；

I’mZhangMing’sfriendandIhaveknownthatheandhisclassmatesalwaysgotovillagestodosomevolunteerwork.

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I’mZhangMing’sfriendandIhaveknownthatheandhisclassmatesalwaysgotovillagestodosomevolunteerwork.

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LastSunday，ZhangMingandhisclassmateswenttoseeGrandmaLi.Theyspent

ahappydaywithher.Inthemorning，theyhelpedGrandmaLicleantheyardanddosomewashing.Theyalsohelpedhercookandhadlunchwithher.Afterlunch，theywentforawalkwithGrandmaLionthesquareofthevillage.Theytoldhersomethinginterestingthathappenedatschool.Theywereallhappy.

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Ithinkwhattheyhavedoneismeaningful.Ialsowanttobeavolunteerlikethem.Iwilldosomethingfortheold.Asweknow，helpingothersishelpingourselves.Itcanalsobringhappinesstous

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