高考真題2021年6月浙江卷寫作讀后續(xù)寫“我的工資”課件-高考英語作文復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

讀后續(xù)寫(2021年6月浙江卷)“我”的工資試題再現(xiàn)閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4.續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph1:Thepaydayarrivedatlast._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.__________________________________________________________________________________________試題再現(xiàn)Thekeyelements(要素)ofastoryastorywhowhatwhenwherewhyhow一、深度解讀語篇Who?What?When?Where?Thekeyelements(要素)ofastoryastorywhowhatwhenwherewhyhowMydad,I,aneighboringfarmerworkinthefarmfieldthesummerbeforemyeighthgradeaneighboringfarmer'sfield,ItwasnotfairthatIhadtocontributemymoney.athomeHe____________________myworldofschoolactivities.Mydadisa_____manandheonlyhadan_______gradeeducation.Hestartedtoworkfromage____andhismoneywasspenttopay______

_________.Hethoughtthatajob’sabigstepto____________.

HewasgladthatIcouldearnmoneyand_________tothehousehold.quieteighth14familydidn’tunderstandexpensesgrowingupcontributeMyDad1.Opening2.Buildup5.EndingMydadandIdidn’t____________eachother.understandIspentmy_________________beforetheeighthgradeworkinginmyneighbor's______andlookedforwardto________.summervacationfieldthepay3.Climax4.ResolutionMyfatherpraisedmesinceIcouldworkforthefamily.Hearingthat,Ifelt_______notbeingabletousemyown_________andlostthe___________inmorework.unfairmoneyinterestThepaydayarrivedatlast.HowwouldIcopewithmydepressioncausedbymydad’swords?Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.WouldIunderstandmydadfinally?二、細(xì)讀首句，構(gòu)思框架兩段首句定一框Para.1:Thepaydayarrivedatlast.

Para.2:Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.從第一段首句和第二段首句預(yù)測(cè)：Whichwordsorphrasesshouldbefocusedoninthegivensentence?

HowdidIfeelwhenIgotpaymentfrommywork?

HowdidIplanthemoneyatfirst?Whatdidhisfathersay?happyunhappydidn’tunderstand二框二首正能量Whichwordsorphrasesshouldbefocusedoninthegivensentence?WhatdidIseeandunderstand?WhatdidIrealizeanddecidetodo?What’stheendofthestory?Para.2:Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.從第二段首句和正能量結(jié)局預(yù)測(cè)：understandrealizesupport根據(jù)括號(hào)中的提示，補(bǔ)出范文缺失的部分，并關(guān)注哪些語言回答了“首句精研”的問題。

Thepaydayarrivedatlast._________________________________________

(雖然我口袋里一共有100美元，我還是帶著沉重的心情回家了。讓步狀語從句和with結(jié)構(gòu)).______________________________________________

(我多希望用這些錢買一雙自己想要很久的新運(yùn)動(dòng)鞋。感嘆句和省略that的定語從句).Notmuchwassaidoverdinner.However,beforeIwenttobedthatnight,_______________________(然而，晚上睡覺前，我無意中聽到從父母房間傳來的談話。時(shí)間狀語從句和非謂語動(dòng)詞作后置定語).“Samcandowithoutapersonalfootballcoach.Ourbudgetisreallytightthismonth,”saidmymom.“Don’tworry.Ijustneedtodosomeextradriving.Aprofessionalcanhelphimmakegreatprogressinfootball.Youknowtheboy’sfuturedream,”saidmydad.范文賞析根據(jù)括號(hào)中的提示，補(bǔ)出范文缺失的部分，并關(guān)注哪些語言回答了“首句精研”的問題。

Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout._________________(一直誤會(huì)爸爸的人是我。強(qiáng)調(diào)句),nottheotherwayaround.Thenextmorning,IhandedDadmyhard-earnedcash.Itonlyseemedfair.Buthejusttooksomeofit.“That’lldofornowandthanksforhelpingwiththefamilyexpenses,son.Youarereallygrowingup,”hesaid.Afterthetalk,Iwentstraightbacktothefarmerandtooktheextrawork.范文賞析WhatdidIfeelwhenIgotthepay?Whatmademeunderstandmy

parents’worries?

Thepaydayarrivedatlast.

Itwasmewhohadmisunderstoodmydadallthetime,nottheotherwayaround.Thenextmorning,IhandedDadmyhard-earnedcash.Itonlyseemedfair.Buthejusttooksomeofit.“That’lldofornowandthanksforhelpingwiththefamilyexpenses,son.Youarereallygrowingup,”hesaid.Afterthetalk,Iwentstraightbacktothefarmerandtooktheextrawork.Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.WhatdidIfeelwhenIgotthepay?Whatmademeunderstandmy

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