2025版高考英語(yǔ)一輪總復(fù)習(xí)第一部分應(yīng)用文寫作第一章書信第三講求助信咨詢

文體(四)慰問信慰問信是向失敗者、生病者、不幸者、愁苦者或遇到災(zāi)難的人表示安慰或同情的信件。此類書信感情要真摯、盡量以樂觀的口吻來(lái)減輕對(duì)方的煩惱和痛苦，并鼓勵(lì)對(duì)方對(duì)日后的生活和學(xué)習(xí)充滿信心。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為：1．吸引眼球開頭句①I'msorrythatyouarehavingsuchahard/toughtimeatthemoment.Nearlyeveryonemayhaveoneoftheseperiodswheneverythingseemstobegoingwrong.得知你目前身處困境，我很難過(guò)。幾乎每個(gè)人都可能有這樣一個(gè)時(shí)期，一切似乎都出了問題。②IjustcannottellyouhowsorryIwastolearnofyourunhappy...得知了你不幸的……你不知道我有多難過(guò)。③IfeltverysorryindeedwhenIwasinformedof...當(dāng)我得知……我真的感到很難過(guò)。④Iwasshockedtolearnofthenewsthat...聽到……的消息，我很震驚。⑤Ijustcan'texpresshowsorryIwastoknowyouraccident.當(dāng)我得知你發(fā)生事故時(shí)，我無(wú)法表達(dá)我是多么難過(guò)。2．亮點(diǎn)出彩篇中句①Idohopeyouaregettingsomerelieffromthepain.我真心希望能減輕你的痛苦。②Iwasdeeplyconcerned/worriedwhenIlearnedthat...當(dāng)我聽說(shuō)……時(shí)，我非常擔(dān)心。③Suchproblemisnotuncommonamong...在……中這樣的問題并非罕見。④Keepingadiaryisalsoagoodchoice.記日記也是一個(gè)不錯(cuò)的選擇。⑤Exercisingregularlyisoneofthemostimportantwaystohelpyoustayawayfromcatchinganyinfections.經(jīng)常鍛煉是幫助你避免任何感染的最重要手段之一。3．韻味無(wú)窮結(jié)尾句①IwishthereweresomethingIcouldsayordotoeaseyour...我希望我能說(shuō)些或做些什么來(lái)減輕你的……②Pleasedon'thesitatetotellmeifthereisanythingIcando.如果我能做些什么，請(qǐng)直接告訴我。③Rememberwewon'tbefarawaywhenyouneedanyhelp!記住，當(dāng)你需要任何幫助時(shí)，我們就在你身邊?、躆ayyougetridofyourtroublessoon.愿你早日擺脫煩惱。Dear,Learningyouareupsetabout(說(shuō)明不幸：如生病、考試不理想、比賽失利等),Ifeelverysorry.Actually,(給予安慰).Therefore,there'snoneedtobeupset/worried.Astohowto(如何處理)，I'dliketoofferyousomesuggestions.Tobeginwith，(第一個(gè)建議)，as(說(shuō)明該建議的好處)．Additionally,itisagoodchoice/ideato(第二個(gè)建議).Lastbutnotleast，(第三個(gè)建議).Ihopemysuggestionswillbeofbenefittoyou.Mayyougetridofyourtroublessoon.Yours，LiHua假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Amy不幸染上傳染病，正在醫(yī)院接受隔離治療。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給她寫一封慰問信，內(nèi)容包括：1．表示同情；2．給予安慰；3．表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。【滿分范文】DearAmy，Itisshockingtolearnyouwereinfectedwithaninfectiousdiseaseandarebeingtreatedinhospital.However,itisunnecessarytoworryaboutthedisease，whichcanbecuredinashorttime.AsfarasIknow,medicalexpertshavebeensenttoyourhospital,thusenablingmorepatientstoreceivetimelyandeffectivetreatment.Anyway,youcandonothingbutcooperatewiththedoctorsandkeepapositiveattitude.Don'thesitatetocontactmeifyouneedanyhelp.Ihopeyouwillrecoversoon.Yours，LiHua【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】1．文章開門見山說(shuō)明自己對(duì)Amy不幸染上傳染病感到震驚；然后給予安慰；最后表達(dá)祝愿。2．范文通過(guò)使用高級(jí)詞匯(wereinfectedwith,timely,donothingbutcooperatewith,hesitate,contact)、定語(yǔ)從句(whichcanbecuredinashorttime)、動(dòng)詞-ing短語(yǔ)(thusenablingmorepatientstoreceivetimelyandeffectivetreatment)作結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)，豐富了句式，增強(qiáng)了語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)效果。假定你是李華，得知你班外教老師James不幸發(fā)生車禍，左腿受傷住院。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封信表示慰問，內(nèi)容包括：1．給予安慰；2．雖不能打籃球，但可以彈奏樂器或看書；由Mr.Lee代課；3．表示祝愿。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹緿earMr.James，Itisshockingtolearnyouinjuredyourleftleginthecaraccidentandthatyouhadtobetreatedinhospital.Iknowyoumustbeverysadatthemoment,asyouwillhavetogiveupplayingbasketballandcan'tgiveuslessons.However,misfortunemayproveablessingindisguise.Anyway,therearemanymoreinterestingthingstododuringt