08經(jīng)典思維模式視角下的高考讀后續(xù)寫·操練篇6：鄭州一模卷 導(dǎo)學(xué)案 高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)寫作專項(xiàng)

經(jīng)典思維模式視角下的高考讀后續(xù)寫操練篇6：鄭州市一模2024年Itwasmyfirstlongrace-amarathon.Thewindandtherainchilled冷卻metotheboneandthesunwasyet尚（未）outtowarmuptheair.Thestartinggunwouldgooffanysecond.Iwasready.Iwas28andinthebestshape狀況ofmylife.Atleast,Ithoughtlwas.Iranallthetimeandhadalreadyrunseveralraces.Butnoneofthemwas26.2miles.ThefarthestIhadrunbeforewasonly15miles.Still不過,IwasyoungandoverconfidentandIknewIcoulddoit.Thegunwentoffandtheracestarted.Iwasexcitedandtheweatherbecamethefurthestthingfrommymind,Ijustconcentratedonholdingmyownpositionamongtheotherrunners.Ihadnorealfinishinggoalinmind,butwhenIsettledintomypace節(jié)奏,Isoonworkedeasilybreak4hours.Withinafewmilepastanelderlyrunner,Hemusthavebeenover70yearsoldandIwassurprisedhewasevenintherace.Iwasevenmoresurprisedthathewasstillaheadofme.Hekepttothesideoftheroad,hisoldlegsmovingoneinfrontoftheother,slowlybutstably堅(jiān)固地.Ipassedhimwithoutgivinghimasecondglanceorawordofencouragement.Ikeptmovingandhadcome15miles.Iwasatapacetobeat4hours.Thensomethingstrangehappened,Istartedtogettired,Mygoalof4hourssoongotpushedbackto4:10.Then4:20.Finally,ataboutthe20-milemark記號,Icouldn'trunanymore.Ihadtowalk.ImovedtothesideoftheroadandwithdifficultyIwalkedalong.Ineededasecondwind滿血復(fù)活,butitwasn'tcoming.Therainwasback.TherewasnothingIcoulddoaboutitbutconcentrateonputtingonefootinfrontoftheother一步一個腳印.Thentheelderlymanpassedme.Helookedthesameashehadearlier,runningatthesamespeed.Ashepassed,helookedatmeandsmiled,"Onlyafewmoremilestogo.Don'tgiveupnow!"Thinkingofbeingbeatenbyanelderlyman,Imovedon.AsIsaid,Iwasyoungandproud,andthislittlesetback挫折didn'tmatter要緊muchtome.Ipushedasidethepainandfatigue疲勞,focusingononefootinfrontoftheother.Therainpoured傾倒down,butIbarely幾乎不noticedit,Mygoalshifted改變fromatimedfinishtosimplycrossingthatfinishline.AndasIpickedupmypacetocrossthefinishline200metresaway離開,Icouldseetheelderlyrunner'sbackinthedistance遠(yuǎn)方,buthoweverhardItried,hestillstayed保持justoutofmyreach.Hestillranslowlybutstably.HecrossedthefinishlineaheadofmeandIwassoontofollow.lneverhadsuchmixedemotions.Itookprideinfinishingmyfirstmarathon,butIwasangrywithmyselfforbeingbeatenbytheeldlyman.Beyond超出myimagination,theeldlymansmiledandcongratulatedme,"youngman,youmadeit!"Notuntil直到…才…thendidIrealizealthoughIdidn'tachievemyoriginal最初的goalandwasevenbeatenbya70-year-oldrunner,Ibeatmyself-mydoubts懷疑,myfatigue,myfearoffailure.Ihopetobelikehim,slowlybutstablyandgivebeginnersheartfeltencouragementinmy70`s.目標(biāo)驅(qū)動續(xù)寫首句：想到，繼續(xù)前進(jìn)他通過終點(diǎn)我不久也到達(dá)。邏輯要求想到，繼續(xù)前進(jìn)沒追上他通過終點(diǎn)我不久也到達(dá)。信息回應(yīng)年輕，下雨，老人的跑步方式，鼓勵目標(biāo)過程想到，繼續(xù)前進(jìn)--補(bǔ)敘認(rèn)知反應(yīng)，基于年輕下雨，引發(fā)認(rèn)知反應(yīng)--沒追上，基于跑步方式--他通過終點(diǎn)我不久也到達(dá)--我的認(rèn)知反應(yīng)認(rèn)知提高的反應(yīng)，基于鼓勵結(jié)尾。想到，繼續(xù)前進(jìn)--補(bǔ)敘我的反應(yīng)認(rèn)知反應(yīng)+行為+細(xì)化信念 下雨--我的反應(yīng)信息回應(yīng)，場景轉(zhuǎn)換+認(rèn)知反應(yīng) 沒追上鋪墊--追不上--跑步方式（原因）場景轉(zhuǎn)換+描述+回應(yīng) 我不久也到達(dá)--我的認(rèn)知反應(yīng) 鼓勵--我的認(rèn)知反應(yīng)