專(zhuān)題04單元寫(xiě)作梳理八年級(jí)英語(yǔ)下學(xué)期期末考點(diǎn)大串講（人教版）

20232024學(xué)年八年級(jí)下期末考點(diǎn)大串講（人教版）專(zhuān)題04單元寫(xiě)作梳理Unit1What’sthematter?【話題分析】本單元的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是會(huì)寫(xiě)針對(duì)健康問(wèn)題提出合理化建議的短文。在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要求同學(xué)們熟悉人體部位的表述，掌握描述人體的不適等健康問(wèn)題。要注意關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)的正確使用，并能夠針對(duì)健康問(wèn)題運(yùn)用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should和shouldn’t提出更加正確、具體和深入的合理化建議。能表達(dá)生活中存在的健康問(wèn)題，并就這些提出建議；能描述意外傷害事故，并給出合理的應(yīng)對(duì)措施。1.能用＂have...＂表達(dá)健康問(wèn)題及意外事故。2.能描述健康問(wèn)題的狀況或意外事故發(fā)生的過(guò)程及病情或受傷的程度。3.能用＂should/shouldn’t＂提建議。4.寫(xiě)作微技能：不同句式的表達(dá)?！镜湫屠}】(2021江蘇宿遷中考真題)公眾健康日（7月7日），旨在倡導(dǎo)“全民健康，快樂(lè)為本”的理念。隨著生活水平的提高，健康越來(lái)越受到重視。你們準(zhǔn)備組織一個(gè)關(guān)于“健康”主題的演講活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容，準(zhǔn)備一篇題為Howtoliveahealthyandhappylife的演講稿。Howtoliveahealthyandhappylife健康包括身體（physical）健康和心理（mental）健康。身體健康1.健康飲食；2.適當(dāng)鍛煉；3.充足睡眠。心理健康1.積極樂(lè)觀；2.與人為善；3.……（至少一點(diǎn)）希望……（至少一點(diǎn)）注意事項(xiàng)：1.詞數(shù)90左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名、人名等信息。HowtoliveahealthyandhappylifeHi,mydearclassmates,Withtheimprovementoflivingconditions,wearepayingmoreandmoreattentiontoourhealth,whichincludesbothphysicalandmentalhealth.Thenhowcanwestudentsliveahealthyandhappylife?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!【高分模板】HowtoliveahealthyandhappylifeHi,mydearandclassmates,Withtheimprovementoflivingconditions,wearepayingmoreandmoreattentiontoourhealth,whichincludesbothphysicalandmentalhealth.Thenhowcanwestudentsliveahealthyandhappylife?Firstly,weshouldkeepourbodieshealthy.Notonlydoweneedtoeathealthyfood,butwealsoneedtoexerciseinaproperwayeveryday.Forexample,wecanrunfor30minuteseverymorningorplaysportsafterschool.Meanwhile,westillneedenoughsleepeveryday.Secondly,mentalhealthisalsoveryimportant.Weneedtoloveourlifeandtrytobeactive.Weneedtogetalongwellwithothersaswell.Whenwe’resad,wecanmunicatewithourparents,teachersandfriendsfrankly.Inaword,Ihopeeveryonecanhaveahealthybodyandmind,andthenwecanhaveahealthyandhappylifeeveryday.That’sall.Thankyou!【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】1.題干解讀：這篇作文要求學(xué)生們以Howtoliveahealthyandhappylife為題寫(xiě)一篇文章，發(fā)表一下自己對(duì)“健康”這一話題的看法。題目中用表格列出了文章應(yīng)包括的內(nèi)容：首先介紹健康的分類(lèi)；然后分別介紹如何保持身體健康和心理健康；最后提出自己的希望。學(xué)生們可以聯(lián)系自己的日常生活，根據(jù)表格中的提示，再增加一些細(xì)節(jié)信息，用正確的英語(yǔ)進(jìn)行表達(dá)。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)、第一人稱為主敘述。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)主語(yǔ)：首先文章要點(diǎn)全面，應(yīng)包括題目中列出的所有要點(diǎn)，并對(duì)心理健康和希望進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)句式結(jié)構(gòu)的特點(diǎn)以及與漢語(yǔ)表達(dá)方式的不同，使用正確的詞匯和句型，以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句和其他句式的使用，提升文章檔次。最后應(yīng)注意上下文的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢?！舅夭姆e累】【常用短語(yǔ)】（一）健康問(wèn)題類(lèi)短語(yǔ)1.牙痛haveatoothache 2.頭痛haveaheadache3.肚子痛haveastomachache 4.背痛haveasoreback5.喉嚨痛haveasorethroat 6.流鼻血haveanosebleed7.感冒haveacold 8.發(fā)燒haveafever9.咳嗽haveacough 10.感到惡心feelsick（二）意外事故短語(yǔ)1.摔倒falldown 2.割傷cutoneself3.撞到頭gethitonthehead 4.膝蓋受傷hurtone’sknee5.背受傷hurtone’sback 6.手臂受傷hurtone’sarm （三）措施短語(yǔ)1.躺下來(lái)休息liedownandrest 2.喝熱的蜂蜜水drinkhotteawithhoney3.看牙醫(yī)gotothedentist 4.拍X光getanXray5.量體溫takeone’stemperature 6.在……敷藥putsomemedicineon.....7.用綁帶包扎putabandageon... 8.在水下沖rununderthewater9.去醫(yī)院gotothehospital 10.休息幾天restforafewdays11.去看醫(yī)生gotoadoctor 12.切除cutoff【常用句子】（一）佳句欣賞與模仿1.Isatinthesamewayfortoolongwithoutmoving.Thebusdriverstoppedthebuswithoutthinkingtwice.（withoutdoingsth沒(méi)有做某事）2.Buttohissurprise,theyallagreedtogowithhim.（toone’ssurprise使……驚訝；出乎……意料）讓我感到驚訝的是，他能獨(dú)自穿越這片森林。3.ThankstoMr.Wangandthepassengers,thedoctorssavedthemanintime.（thanksto多虧；由于；intime及時(shí)）4.Hebandagedhimselfsothathewouldnotlosetoomuchblood.（sothat因此）5.Hisloveformountainclimbingissogreatthathekeptonclimbingmountainsevenafterhisexperience.（so...that...如此……以至于……）6.Aronisusedtotakingrisks.（beusedtodoingsth習(xí)慣于做某事）Unit2I’llhelptocleanupthecityparks.【話題分析】本單元的話題是“提供幫助和做志愿者”，應(yīng)用文體裁居多，該話題屬于中考常考話題之一。主要是敘述自己參與的志愿者活動(dòng)，提供給別人的幫助，包括應(yīng)聘到某處做志愿者，會(huì)做的志愿者活動(dòng)，能為別人或者機(jī)構(gòu)提供的幫助等內(nèi)容。重點(diǎn)考查學(xué)生以下能力：掌握并熟練使用表達(dá)出活動(dòng)的要點(diǎn)；會(huì)寫(xiě)一些簡(jiǎn)單的應(yīng)聘信；清晰表達(dá)自己的能力?！緦?xiě)作步驟】1.總分總結(jié)構(gòu)。短文通常分為三個(gè)部分：總第一部分：開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，引出話題。分第二部分：活動(dòng)內(nèi)容以及提供的幫助?？偂谌糠郑夯顒?dòng)的感受。2.人稱：第一人稱。3.時(shí)態(tài)：一般將來(lái)時(shí)、一般過(guò)去時(shí)。【典型例題】3月5日是學(xué)雷鋒紀(jì)念日，你校師生去敬老院開(kāi)展志愿者活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)通過(guò)郵件將此活動(dòng)情況介紹給Mary。活動(dòng)時(shí)間：3月5日活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)：幸福敬老院(NursingHome)參與人員：志愿者活動(dòng)形式：1.送鮮花、水果和美好的祝福。2.幫老人整理房間、打掃衛(wèi)生……3.陪老人聊天；為老人表演（唱歌、跳舞），讀報(bào)……活動(dòng)感想：此活動(dòng)很有意義，從中學(xué)會(huì)了關(guān)愛(ài)老人、尊重老人……要求：1.要點(diǎn)齊全，條理清晰，語(yǔ)句通順，不要逐字翻譯，須適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.詞數(shù)100字左右。（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）DearMary,ThankyouforyourlastEmail.Letmetellyouwhatwedidon5thMarch.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IfyouhavethechanceinChina,Ihopeyoucanjoinus.LiHua【高分模板】DearMary,ThankyouforyourlastEmail.Letmetellyouwhatwedidon5thMarch.Asamemberofvolunteers,IgotupearlybecauseIwastooexcitedtosleep.Inthemorning,wevolunteersbroughtsomeflowersandfreshfruit.AswearrivedattheHappinessNursingHome,wesentthemourbestwishestoo.Howhappytheywere!Thenwecleanedthewindowsandsweptthefloorforthem.Afterthat,someofusperformedactivitiesforthem,suchassingingsongsanddancing.Someofusreadnewspaperforthem.Someofuschattedwiththem.Whenitwastimeforusvolunteerstoleave,theyweregratefulforourkindness.Fromthismeaningfulactivity,Ifoundthatwearesupposedtocarefortheoldandrespectthem.Inourdailylife,weshouldofferourseatstothemonbuses.Andweshouldtreatourowngrandparentsmorekindly.IfyouhavethechanceinChina,Ihopeyoucanjoinus.LiHua【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于材料作文，也是日記。本文時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)。認(rèn)為閱讀料，認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)列出提綱，短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意語(yǔ)法和單詞拼寫(xiě)。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文符合題目要求，寫(xiě)出了去敬老院開(kāi)展志愿者活動(dòng)過(guò)程，包含了所有要點(diǎn)。本文格式時(shí)態(tài)使用正確，表達(dá)條理清楚連貫，沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，運(yùn)用了合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，文章思路清晰，富有邏輯性。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：（一）短語(yǔ)和連詞的使用：As，because，too…to…，then，after，suchas，when，if等。（二）句型：（1）Asamemberofvolunteers,IgotupearlybecauseIwastooexcitedtosleep.（2）AswearrivedattheHappinessNursingHome,wesentthemourbestwishestoo.（3）Whenitwastimeforusvolunteerstoleave,theyweregratefulforourkindness.(4)Fromthismeaningfulactivity,Ifoundthatwearesupposedtocarefortheoldandrespectthem.等?！舅夭姆e累】helptodo...幫助做.....cleanup打掃cheerup使高興起來(lái)giveoutfood分發(fā)食物teachkids教學(xué)生volunteer志愿者givesomeadvice給出建議makeaplan制定計(jì)劃eupwith想出......workinanoldpeople’shome在敬老院上班helpoutwith想辦法解決lonely孤獨(dú)的carefor照顧decideto決定做giveup放棄attheageof在.....歲時(shí)tryout參加.....選拔trieddoing嘗試做etrue實(shí)現(xiàn)learnsomethingimportant學(xué)到了重要的東西beinterestedin對(duì)......感興趣atthesametime同時(shí)volunteertodo自愿去做.....putup張貼repair修理giveaway捐贈(zèng)thankyoufor...因......而感謝changemylife改變我的生活句型積累：I’dliketohelptocleanupthecityparks.我想去幫忙打掃市里的公園。IcanteachkidstolearnEnglish.我會(huì)教孩子們學(xué)英語(yǔ)。Let’smakesomenotices.咱們做些通知吧。Iwanttobeavolunteerinanoldpeople’shome.我想在敬老院做志愿者。Ilikereadingnewspapertothem.我喜歡讀報(bào)給他們聽(tīng)。Weshouldlistentothemandcareforthem.我們應(yīng)該傾聽(tīng)他們并且照顧他們。Iloveanimalsandwanttobeananimaldoctor.我喜歡小動(dòng)物想成為一名獸醫(yī)。IgetsuchastrongfeelingofsatisfactionwhenIseetheanimalsgetbetterandthelookofjoyontheirowners’faces.我得到強(qiáng)烈的滿足感當(dāng)我看見(jiàn)他們主人臉上的喜悅感。Volunteeringhereisadreametrue.能在這做志愿者，我的夢(mèng)想實(shí)現(xiàn)了。IcandowhatIlovetodoandhelpothersatthesametime.我可以做我喜歡做得去幫助別人。Helpingotherscanbringushappiness.幫助別人能給我們帶來(lái)快樂(lè)。Ithinkwe’dbetter....我覺(jué)得我們最好....InmyfreetimeIliketo...soIthinkI’dbegoodatthisjob.在業(yè)余時(shí)間我喜歡做所以我覺(jué)得我擅長(zhǎng)這項(xiàng)工作。I’mstrongin....我強(qiáng)烈想加入....15.Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerinyourgroup.我想在你們的團(tuán)隊(duì)里做一名志愿者。Unit3Couldyoupleasecleanyourroom？話題分析本單元以＂家務(wù)、雜務(wù)＂為話題，圍繞這一話題，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)掌握情態(tài)動(dòng)詞could表示委婉地請(qǐng)求以及請(qǐng)求許可的用法。以談?wù)摷覄?wù)以及對(duì)家務(wù)喜歡與不喜歡的原因和理由為話題的作文或是請(qǐng)求他人幫忙的電子郵件之類(lèi)的書(shū)面表達(dá)是單元測(cè)試或中考所?？疾榈?。（2023·遼寧朝陽(yáng)·統(tǒng)考中考真題）勞動(dòng)(Labor)能夠使人自信并且可以提升自己。教育部發(fā)布了《義務(wù)教育勞動(dòng)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)(2022年版)》，從2022年秋季開(kāi)始勞動(dòng)課正式成為中小學(xué)的一門(mén)獨(dú)立課程。在你的生活中，你可能已經(jīng)掌握了很多勞動(dòng)技能，比如洗衣、做飯、種花、植樹(shù)、喂養(yǎng)動(dòng)物甚至田間勞作等。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，以“Labormakesmeabetterperson”為題，根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)和要求，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要點(diǎn)：(1)你所擅長(zhǎng)的一項(xiàng)勞動(dòng)技能是什么？(2)這項(xiàng)勞動(dòng)技能給你帶來(lái)什么益處？(3)你還打算學(xué)習(xí)其他什么勞動(dòng)技能？要求：(1)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名或地名。(2)語(yǔ)言通順、意思連貫、書(shū)寫(xiě)工整。(3)詞數(shù)80左右，短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。LabormakesmeabetterpersonAsweallknow,laborplaysanimportantroleinourlives.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文LabormakesmeabetterpersonAsweallknow,laborplaysanimportantroleinourlives.Iamverygoodatcooking.IalwayscookmealsformyparentswhenIamfreeonweekends.IthinkcookingisaveryimportantandnecessarylifeskillbecauseIcandevelopmyindependencebycooking.Icanlearnhowtotakegoodcareofmyselfinsteadofmakingmyparentsworryaboutme.Inthefuture,IwouldliketolearnhowtoplanttreessothatIcanplantmoretreesonthehillandmakemyhometownmorebeautiful.[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，要求以“Labormakesmeabetterperson”為題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹擅長(zhǎng)的一項(xiàng)勞動(dòng)技能是什么；第二步，介紹這項(xiàng)勞動(dòng)技能給你帶來(lái)什么益處；第三步，介紹打算學(xué)習(xí)其他什么勞動(dòng)技能。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①begoodat擅長(zhǎng)②onweekends在周末③takegoodcareof照顧好④Inthefuture在未來(lái)[高分句型]①I(mǎi)thinkcookingisaveryimportantandnecessarylifeskillbecauseIcandevelopmyindependencebycooking.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）②Inthefuture,IwouldliketolearnhowtoplanttreessothatIcanplantmoretreesonthehillandmakemyhometownmorebeautiful.（sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句）【詞匯積累】rubbish垃圾fold折疊sweep打掃

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洗餐具foldtheclothes疊衣服sweepthefloor掃地makeone’sbed整理床鋪cleantheroom打掃房間dohousework/chores做家務(wù)helpsb.dosth.幫助某人做某事takecareof照顧dohouseworkallevening整晚做家務(wù)findthehousecleanandtidy發(fā)現(xiàn)房間干凈又整潔sharethehousework分擔(dān)家務(wù)acleanandfortablehome一個(gè)干凈又舒服的家thereisnoneedforsomebodytodosomething對(duì)于某人來(lái)說(shuō)沒(méi)必要做....developchildren'sindependence養(yǎng)成孩子的獨(dú)立（習(xí)慣）theideaoffairness公平意識(shí)havenoideahowtotakecareofhimself不知道怎樣照料自己it'sfair/unfairforchildrentodosomething對(duì)于孩子來(lái)說(shuō)，做……是公平的/不公平的。afewotherthingsIwantyoutodo我想要你做的另處幾件事情寫(xiě)作此類(lèi)話題作文的常用表達(dá)有：Itistheparents'jobtoprovideacleanandfortableenvironmentathomefortheirchildren.在家給孩子們提供一個(gè)干凈而舒服的環(huán)境是家長(zhǎng)們的工作。2.Itisimportantforchildrentolearnhowtodochoresandhelptheirparentswithhousework.對(duì)于孩子們來(lái)說(shuō)，學(xué)會(huì)怎樣做家務(wù)和幫助父母親做家務(wù)是很重要的。3.Sincetheyliveinonehousewiththeirparents,theyshouldknowthateveryoneshoulddotheirpartinkeepingitcleanandtidy.既然他們和他們的父母生活在同一房子里，他們就應(yīng)該明白每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該做他們份內(nèi)之事，以保持房子的干凈與整潔。4.Theearlierkidslearntobeindependent,thebetteritisfortheirfuture.孩子們?cè)皆绐?dú)立，對(duì)他們的未來(lái)就更好。5.Playingputergamesisawasteoftimeandenergy.打電腦游戲是浪費(fèi)時(shí)間和精力。6.Doingchorescandevelopchildren’sindependence.做家務(wù)能夠培養(yǎng)孩子們的獨(dú)立能力。7．Wecan'tdependonourparentstoomuch.我們不能過(guò)多地依賴我們的父母。8.Themorethechildrendothechores，theearliertheywilllearntobeindependent.孩子們做的家務(wù)越多，就會(huì)越早地學(xué)會(huì)獨(dú)立。9.Ithelpschildrentounderstandtheideaoffairness.這幫助孩子們理解公平的含義。1.Studentshavenotimetodothehousework.孩子們沒(méi)有時(shí)間做家務(wù)?！糸_(kāi)頭句①I(mǎi)tiseveryone’sdutytodochores.②Ithinkitisnecessaryforustodohousework.③Nowmanystudentsaretoolazytodohouseworkathome.④Ithinkweshouldhelpparentsdosomehousework.◆中間句①I(mǎi)swepttheflooratfirstandtookouttherubbish.②Weshouldfinishourhomeworkindependentlyandmakeastudyplancarefully.③What’smore，Ialsocookedsomeporridge.④Third，doinghouseworkcanrelaxourselves.⑤Ioftenhelpmyparentswithmuchhousework,suchascleaningtherooms,takingouttherubbishanddoingthedishes.◆結(jié)尾句①I(mǎi)believeifwecandothesethings，wewillbemoreindependent.②Ithinkit’sourdutytosharehouseworktokeepthehousecleanandtidy.◆諺語(yǔ)積累1.Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。2.Easiersaidthandone.說(shuō)起來(lái)容易做起來(lái)難。Unit4Whydon’tyoutalktoyourparents？話題分析本單元的話題是“煩惱(Problems)”,該話題是中考?？荚掝}之一，主要是描述自己或他人的煩惱，并給出相應(yīng)的建議或看法。本單元主要是青少年學(xué)生在成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中遇到的一些問(wèn)題或煩惱，包括與父母、同學(xué)之間的問(wèn)題，并涉及處理這些問(wèn)題或煩惱的方法。該話題貼近學(xué)生生活，與學(xué)生的日常學(xué)習(xí)活動(dòng)息息相關(guān)。該話題先訴說(shuō)問(wèn)題或煩惱，然后說(shuō)說(shuō)解決該問(wèn)題或煩惱的方法，最后再表達(dá)一下自己的感想。如何寫(xiě)好這類(lèi)文章，主要需要掌握以下表達(dá)和句型句式:常用詞匯單詞problem,pressure,advice,suggestion,happiness,pare,understand,municate,teenager,argue,happy,hobby,suppose,support,spend,activity,短語(yǔ)growup,goodluck,getonwellwith,dealwith,bekindto,municatewith,joinin,arguewith,inone'sopinion,paresb.with,talkabout,understandeachother常用句型句式?Mybiggestproblemis..?Aswearegrowingup,wefindit.tomunicatewith.?Nowsometeenagershaveahardtimeinmunicatingwiththeirparents.?IwouldliketotalkaboutmyproblemsandhowIdealwiththem.?Therewassomethingwrongbetweenus.Idon'tknowwhattodo.?Ihopeyoucan..?Yousaidyouhadmanyproblemsinstudyingmath.?Onlyinthiswaycanwegetalongwellwith.?Ithinkitisveryimportantforus..?Keeptryingandyouwillsoonlearnitbetter.Ibelievewewillbeahappyfamilyforever.?Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.?Ifyoufollowthesesuggestions,youcangetonwellwithyourparents.（2023·遼寧鞍山·統(tǒng)考中考真題）眼睛是心靈的窗戶。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近為近視感到困擾。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格的提示信息給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，說(shuō)明他近視的原因并提出建議。要求：（1）不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、人名等相關(guān)信息。（2）根據(jù)中文和英文提示，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（3）內(nèi)容完整、意思連貫、符合邏輯、書(shū)寫(xiě)整齊。（4）詞數(shù)：80~100詞。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。近視原因長(zhǎng)時(shí)間使用電子產(chǎn)品；讀書(shū)時(shí)間過(guò)長(zhǎng)。建議控制使用電子產(chǎn)品時(shí)間；養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣（如飲食、做眼保健操）……希望……參考詞匯：視力eyesight；近視myopia；電子產(chǎn)品electronicdeviceDearMike,Howisitgoingwithyou?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing【答案】例文：DearMike,Howisitgoingwithyou?I’msorrytolearnthatyoureyesightisgettingweaker.Ithinkyoumayuseelectronicproductsforalongtime,whichisbadforyoureyesight.Andreadingbooksfortoolongmaycausemyopia.Butdon’tworry.I’dliketosharewithyousomewaysofprotectingeyesight.Atfirst,youshouldcontrolthetimeyouspendonelectronicproducts.Youcandomoreoutdooractivities.What’smore,youshoulddevelopsomegoodhabits.Youshouldeatmorevegetablesandfruit.Theyaregoodforyourhealth.Besides,doingeyeexercisesplaysanimportantroleinrelaxingyourtiredeyes.Lastly,youshouldhaveyoureyesexaminedeverytermtomakesureyoureyesstayhealthy.Ihopeyou’llfindmywayshelpful.Yours,LiPing【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：根據(jù)提示信息給對(duì)方一些建議，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，引出話題，介紹對(duì)方近視的原因；第二步，針對(duì)朋友的問(wèn)題給出相應(yīng)的建議；第三步，表達(dá)自己的希望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①wouldliketodosth.想要做某事②begoodfor對(duì)……有好處③playanimportantrolein在……中起重要作用[高分句型]①I(mǎi)thinkyoumayuseelectronicproductsforalongtime,whichisbadforyoureyesight.(which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)②doingeyeexercisesplaysanimportantroleinrelaxingyourtiredeyes.(動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ))Unit5Whatwereyoudoingwhentherainstormcame？【話題分析】本單元以＂談?wù)撨^(guò)去正在發(fā)生的事情＂為話題，講述了大事件發(fā)生時(shí)人們正在進(jìn)行的各種活動(dòng)。具體到書(shū)面表達(dá)中，要求同學(xué)們會(huì)對(duì)過(guò)去正在發(fā)生的事情進(jìn)行描述，在寫(xiě)這類(lèi)短文時(shí)，要運(yùn)用相應(yīng)的過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，如一般過(guò)去時(shí)或過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)等。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：①明確中心思想，無(wú)論是看圖寫(xiě)作，還是情景描寫(xiě)，都要圍繞文章中心展開(kāi)；②要注意記敘文的幾個(gè)要素，即把時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件、起因、經(jīng)過(guò)、結(jié)果等交代清楚；③要合理安排好寫(xiě)作的順序；④敘述事件時(shí)語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，把文章寫(xiě)得生動(dòng)、詳實(shí)?！镜湫屠}】某英文網(wǎng)站的＂StudentLife＂欄目正在向中學(xué)生征文，標(biāo)題為＂AtimewhenImadesomeonehappy＂，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英文稿件，內(nèi)容需包括以下要點(diǎn)：1.Whowasthepersonyoumadehappy?2.Whenwasit?3.Whatdidyousayordo?4.Whydiditmakehim/herhappy?5.Howdidyoufeelatthatmoment?注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右（題目不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)可能透考生真實(shí)身份的任何信息。AtimewhenImadesomeonehappy________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【高分模板】Lastsummer,thoughitwashot,IvolunteeredtoteachchildrenEnglishinruralarea.WhenIarrivedthere,Icouldn'tadjusttotheweatherandlifestyle.However,astimewentby,IfoundmyselfquitehappywhenIsawthestudentsIwasteachingmadegreatprogress.Inordertoteachthem,Ihadtokeeponlearningaswell.Asaresult,myEnglishimprovedalot.Also,Imadefriendswithsomeofmystudents.Wearestillkeepingintouchbyletternow.Inaword,notonlydidIhelpthoseinneed,butalsoImyselflearnalotthatsummer.IfIhaveanotherchancetodovolunteerwork,Iamreadytogo.【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】【素材積累】（一）動(dòng)作類(lèi)短語(yǔ)1.步行回家walkhome 2.去上班gotowork3.入睡fallasleep 4.下大雨rainheavily5.洗熱水澡takeahotshower 6.發(fā)出響聲gooff7.接pickup 8.逐漸變?nèi)鮠iedown9.確認(rèn)；確信makesure（二）時(shí)間類(lèi)短語(yǔ)1.當(dāng)暴風(fēng)雨來(lái)的時(shí)候atthetimeoftherainstorm2.在那個(gè)時(shí)候atthattime3.在地震時(shí)atthetimeoftheearthquake（三）其他短語(yǔ)1.沉默地insilence 2.做某事有困難havetroubledoingsth3.一團(tuán)糟inamess 4.首先；起初atfirst句子積累（一）佳句欣賞與模仿1.IwassoscaredthatIcouldhardlythinkclearlyafterthat.【so...that...如此……以至于……】在臺(tái)風(fēng)來(lái)臨時(shí)，我如此地害怕以至于待在床上一動(dòng)不動(dòng)。Atthetimeofthetyphoon,IwassoscaredthatIstayedinbedwithoutmoving.2.IhadtroublethinkingclearlyafterthatbecauseIwasveryafraid.【havetroubledoingsth在……方面有困難】由于雨下得非常大，我走路回家相當(dāng)困難。Ihadtroublewalkinghomebecauseitrainedheavily.3.Ben’sdadwasputtingpiecesofwoodoverthewindowswhilehismomwasmakingsuretheflashlightsandradiowereworking.【while當(dāng)……時(shí)候，連接兩個(gè)同時(shí)發(fā)生的動(dòng)作】我爸爸正在關(guān)窗戶時(shí)，我媽媽在掃地。Whilemydadwasclosingthewindows,mymomwassweepingthefloor.4.Althoughthestormbrokemanythingsapart,itbroughtfamiliesandneighborsclosertogether.【although雖然；盡管】盡管他累了，但他還是繼續(xù)工作。Althoughhewastired,hewentonworking.（二）用when與while連接兩個(gè)句子when是一個(gè)從屬連詞，它引導(dǎo)的是一個(gè)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，when后通常用短暫性動(dòng)詞；while后通常用持續(xù)性動(dòng)詞，因此它所引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句中，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞常用進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)。1.Iwasdoingmyhomework.TyphoonSanmeicame.(while)TyphoonSanmeicamewhileIwasdoingmyhomework.2.Myfriend,LiBing,wasmakinghiswayhome.TyphoonSanmeicame.(when)Myfriend,LiBing,wasmakinghiswayhomewhenTyphoonSanmeicame.（2022·廣西桂林·統(tǒng)考中考真題）看圖作文：自從2021年黨中央頒布“雙減”政策以來(lái)，孩子們的課余生活變得豐富多彩了。請(qǐng)看下面這張照片，這是大明一家在公園里度周末時(shí)照的。假如你是照片中畫(huà)畫(huà)的男孩大明（Daming），請(qǐng)以“AHappyFamilyDay”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，準(zhǔn)備在班里作文課上展示。寫(xiě)作要求：1.短文要包含照片中的主要內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，增加一些細(xì)節(jié)，寫(xiě)成一篇連貫、通順的文章；2.文章80詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名。參考詞匯：FamilymembersActivitiesgrandma,dad,mum,Daming,brother,sistertakepictures/photos照相paint/drawapicture畫(huà)畫(huà)sitonthegrassland坐在草地上drink/havetea喝茶rideabike騎自行車(chē)readabook看書(shū)playwith(toys/apet...)玩（玩具/寵物……）AHappyFamilyDayHi,everyone.I’mDaming.Ifeelhappybecausewehavelesshomeworknow.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AHappyFamilyDayHi,everyone.I’mDaming.Ifeelhappybecausewehavelesshomeworknow.SoIwenttotheparkwithmyfamilylastSunday.Look!Thisisapictureofmyfamilyinthepark.Myfatherwastakingpictures.Mymotherwasreading.Mygrandpaandgrandmaweresittingonthegrassanddrinkingtea.Thelittleboywhowasdrawingisme.Mybrotherwasridingabike.Mysisterwasplayingwithhertoys.Weenjoyedourselvesinthepark.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為看圖作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)和過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，要求根據(jù)圖片，結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖。借用“簡(jiǎn)單介紹周末活動(dòng)”來(lái)引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。要分別介紹每位家庭成員做了什么；第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)“玩得很開(kāi)心”的感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①apictureof一張……的照片②sitonthegrass坐在草地上③enjoyedourselves玩得開(kāi)心[高分句型]①I(mǎi)feelhappybecausewehavelesshomeworknow.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）②Thelittleboywhowasdrawingisme.（who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）Unit6Anoldmantriedtomovethemountains.【話題分析】本單元話題是“傳統(tǒng)經(jīng)典故事”，要求同學(xué)們會(huì)縮寫(xiě)一個(gè)經(jīng)典故事。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，首先要把故事的主要角色寫(xiě)出來(lái)，其次簡(jiǎn)單介紹故事發(fā)展的過(guò)程，最后寫(xiě)出故事的結(jié)局或蘊(yùn)含的道理。注意描述故事應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)?！緦?xiě)作步驟】1.總分總結(jié)構(gòu)。短文通常分為三個(gè)部分：總第一部分：開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，引出話題。分第二部分：活動(dòng)內(nèi)容以及提供的幫助。總——第三部分：活動(dòng)的感受。2.人稱：第一人稱。3.時(shí)態(tài)：一般將來(lái)時(shí)、一般過(guò)去時(shí)?！镜湫屠}】同學(xué)們，在我國(guó)古代有很多經(jīng)典的童話故事，如：愚公移山、精衛(wèi)填海、女?huà)z補(bǔ)天等等。你一定也聽(tīng)說(shuō)過(guò)《后羿射日》的故事吧！假定現(xiàn)在一群美國(guó)小朋友來(lái)到你們學(xué)校做客，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇小短文，把《后羿射日》的故事講給美國(guó)小朋友聽(tīng)聽(tīng)。要點(diǎn)：1.從前，天上突然出現(xiàn)十個(gè)太陽(yáng)。天氣太熱了，許多莊稼都干死了。人們不能像往常一樣生活。2.后羿擅長(zhǎng)射箭，天帝命令他懲罰太陽(yáng)。為了拯救地球上的人，他決定射下九個(gè)太陽(yáng)。3.后羿登上了一座大山，在那里射下九個(gè)太陽(yáng)，最后一個(gè)太陽(yáng)害怕了，承諾繼續(xù)為大地和萬(wàn)物貢獻(xiàn)光和熱。要求：1.要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)句通順，不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.詞數(shù)80詞左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。參考詞匯：莊稼crop；懲罰punish；為……服務(wù)/做貢獻(xiàn)serve；箭arrow；天帝GodHi,boysandgirls!TodayI’lltellyouastorynamedHouYiShootstheSuns.Onceuponatime,____________________________________________________________________________________________ThisisthetraditionalChinesestoryHouYiShootstheSuns.Doyoulikeit?【高分模板】Hi,boysandgirls!TodayI’lltellyouastorynamedHouYiShootstheSuns.Onceuponatime,thereweretensunsintheskysuddenly.Itwassohotonearththatnocropscouldgrow.Peoplehadahardlife.AyoungmannamedHouYiwasgoodatshooting.Godaskedhimtopunishthesuns.Tosavethepeopleonearth,hedecidedtoshootdownninesuns.HouYiclimbedamountainandshotdownninesunsfromthere.Finally,thelastsunwasafraidandpromisedtocontinuetogivelightandheattotheearthandallthings.ThisisthetraditionalChinesestoryHouYiShootstheSuns.Doyoulikeit?【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示寫(xiě)一篇短文講述《后羿射日》的故事。要求要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要以第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)?？煞譃槿问綄?xiě)作：第一段引用已給出開(kāi)頭；第二段介紹具體的故事內(nèi)容；第三段用已給出的結(jié)尾。要做到無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤?！舅夭姆e累】①Onceuponatime，therewasaveryoldman.從前，有一個(gè)老人。②YuGongfoundagoodwaytosolvehisproblem.愚公找到了一個(gè)解決問(wèn)題的好方法。③YuGongkepttryinganddidn'tgiveup.愚公繼續(xù)嘗試，從不放棄。④SunWukongcanmake72changestohisshapeandsize，turninghimselfintodifferentanimalsandobjects.孫悟空能夠在形狀和大小上72變，把他自己變成不同的動(dòng)物和物體。⑤Sometimeshecanmakethesticksosmallthathecankeepitinhisear.有時(shí)他能把金箍棒變得很小，以至于可以放進(jìn)他的耳朵里。①Thestoryistryingtoshowusthatanythingispossibleifyouworkhard！這個(gè)故事盡全力向我們展示了如果你努力了，什么事情都是有可能的。②Thisstoryremindsusthatyoucanneverknowwhat'spossibleunlessyoutrytomakeithappen.這個(gè)故事提醒我們除非你盡力使它發(fā)生，否則你就不會(huì)知道什么是可能。③WesternchildrenbecameinterestedinreadingthisstorybecausethecleverMonkeyKingkeepsfightingtohelptheweakandnevergivesup.西方國(guó)家的孩子對(duì)讀這個(gè)故事很感興趣，是因?yàn)楹锿鯙閹椭跽咭恢睉?zhàn)斗著，從不放棄。【小試身手】假設(shè)你是思考，你的美國(guó)筆友Lucy來(lái)信想了解曹沖稱象的故事。請(qǐng)根據(jù)如下圖片及要點(diǎn)提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封80詞以上的回信給她。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.回信目的；2.故事簡(jiǎn)介；3.故事給你的啟示。注意：1.信中不允許出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關(guān)的真實(shí)姓名和校名等信息。2.信的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3.參考詞匯：scalen.稱；calculatev.計(jì)算DearLucy,Ilearnfromyourletterthat…____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路導(dǎo)航】本文要求給美國(guó)筆友回信，給她講述曹沖稱象的故事，要求寫(xiě)出回信的目的，結(jié)合圖片提示簡(jiǎn)介故事并要寫(xiě)出故事給人的啟示。回信的目的和故事的啟示用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，故事簡(jiǎn)介用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。故事按動(dòng)作先后順序進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，用第三人稱形式。學(xué)&科網(wǎng)【佳作展示】DearLucy,IlearnfromyourletterthatyouareveryinterestedinthestoryofCaoChongweighedtheelephant.Letmetellyou.OncesomebodysentCaoChong’sfather,CaoCao,anelephantandhewantedtoknowitsweight,buttherewasnothingbigenoughtoweighit.CaoChongtoldhisfatherhecouldweightheelephantifhehadabigboatandalotofheavystones.CaoCaowasverysurprised,buthestillorderedhismentogeteverythingready.Whentheyledtheelephantdownintotheboat,thewatercameup,thenCaoChongmarkedthewaterline.Thentheydrovetheelephantontothebankandputtheheavystonesintheboatuntilthewatercameuptothesameline.Atlast,CaoChongtoldthementoweighthestones.Inthisway,heweighedtheelephant.IthinkCaoChongisveryclever.Ifwethinkhardbeforedoingthings,wecandothembetter.Yours,ThoughtUnit7What’sthehighestmountainintheworld？???1.話題分析本單元以“保護(hù)動(dòng)物和大自然”為核心話題,談?wù)摯笞匀患氨Ｗo(hù)野生動(dòng)物。該話題取材廣泛,主要以瀕危動(dòng)物保護(hù)、環(huán)境保護(hù)等為談?wù)搩?nèi)容?！癋acts&Reasons&Ways”三步法談?wù)摫Ｗo(hù)自然和動(dòng)物。Facts：介紹自然、地理或珍稀動(dòng)物的特點(diǎn)及現(xiàn)狀；Reasons：分析問(wèn)題產(chǎn)生的原因；Ways：提出解決問(wèn)題的方法；表明自己的觀點(diǎn)和態(tài)度。3.典例分析1．近來(lái)全球環(huán)境問(wèn)題引起了人們對(duì)環(huán)境保護(hù)以及動(dòng)物保護(hù)的思考。作為一名中學(xué)生，我們也可以為此做一些事。假如你是ZhangBing，想申請(qǐng)加入動(dòng)物保護(hù)協(xié)會(huì)，請(qǐng)用英文寫(xiě)一封加入?yún)f(xié)會(huì)的申請(qǐng)信，要點(diǎn)如下表：NameZhangBingGrade8EmailSchoolHuaiwenMiddleSchoolFreetime周末Reasonsforprotectinganimals1.有些人不明白保護(hù)動(dòng)物的重要性；2.有些人砍伐大量的樹(shù)木，……（結(jié)果）3.獵人們?yōu)榱隋X(qián)而捕殺動(dòng)物，……Waystoprotectanimals采取措施保護(hù)動(dòng)物：1.應(yīng)該保護(hù)環(huán)境，為動(dòng)物們提供一個(gè)良好的生活空間；2.建議身邊人不要購(gòu)買(mǎi)動(dòng)物皮毛做成的衣服。3.……（自由發(fā)揮12句話）要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100左右（信的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）DearChairperson,IwouldliketojointheAnimalProtectionSociety.First,letmeintroducemyself.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,ZhangBing【答案】例文：DearChairperson,IwouldliketojointheAnimalProtectionSociety.First,letmeintroducemyself.IamaGrade8studentatHuaiwenMiddleSchool.Now,somepeopledon’tunderstandtheimportanceofprotectinganimals.Theycutplentyoftreesforfarmsandbuildings.Thisleadtolessandlessspaceforanimals.Hunterskillthemjustfortheirfurandfun.Ithinkitisimportantforpeopletoprotectanimalsbecauseanimalsareourfriends.Weshoulddosomethingtoprotecttheenvironment.Sowecanprovideagoodplaceforanimalstolive.Weshouldnotbuyclothesthataremadeoffur.Moreover,ourgovernmentshouldmadelawstopreventpeoplefromkillinganimals.Icantakepartinactivitiesatweekends.IwillbehappyifIcanbeamemberofAnimalProtectionSociety.Youcanemailmeat8360922@qq.Yourssincerely,ZhangBing【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文為一篇應(yīng)用文，為書(shū)信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提