高三英語基礎(chǔ)寫作：投訴信-小區(qū)問題投訴+課件

Problem-solutionwriting假定你是李華，是一名租住在倫敦某小區(qū)的中國留學(xué)生。請你給小區(qū)的物業(yè)經(jīng)理Mr.Brown寫封信，內(nèi)容包括：1.反映小區(qū)里存在的問題：垃圾、噪音、陌生人出入等；2.你的建議。Typeofwriting：Aletterofcomplaint/reflectingproblemsReaderoftheletter:ThepropertymanagerofyourcommunityTone:PoliteTense:SimplepresenttenseStructure:Para1:Writingbackground+purpose(e.g.AsanoverseasstudentfromChina,I’mgladandhonoredtoliveinourcommunity.Butregretfultofindsometerribleproblemsexistinghere,I’mwritingtodrawyourattentiontothem.)Para2:ExistingproblemsInitially,…What’sworse,….Worsestill,…Para3:Suggestion(e.g.Toimprovethesituation,itisadvisabletotakesomeeffectivemeasures.Firstofall,….Inaddition,…Furthermore,…)Para4:Ending(e.g.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivedueattentionto

thematters./Isincerelyhopethemanagementcanbeimprovedandthateveryresidentcanenjoyamorepleasantlivingenvironment.Thankyouforyourtime.)Language:垃圾(U)garbage(AmE)/trash(AmE)/rubbish(BrE)抱怨complain(vi)about&complaint(n.)提出強烈的不滿bring/voice/make/file/lodge/submitone'sbitter/seriouscomplaintabout...臭味anunpleasant/smellysmell搭配的verb：Theairisfilledwith...Therubbishgivesoff/givesout...搭配的adj.：awful/evil/horrible/nasty/offensive/unpleasant難聞的/令人作嘔的噪音noise(U)&noisy(adj.)產(chǎn)生/發(fā)出噪音create/make/generatenoise添加adj.:deafening/loud震耳欲聾的awful/horrible/terrible可怕的/駭人的constant連續(xù)不斷的banging砰砰的buzzing嗡嗡的使我不能入睡preventmefromfallingasleep在午夜atmidnight有陌生人隨意進(jìn)入社區(qū)therearestrangersenteringthecommunityeasily對人身和財產(chǎn)安全造成威脅poseathreattooursafety/thesafetyoftheresidentsandourpossessions影響睡眠質(zhì)量bedeprivedofasoundsleep/goodsleepingqualityhaveanegativeimpacton...Extension:(problem+badinfluence+solution)rubbishrubbishisthrowneverywhere/hereandtheregiveoutanunpleasantsmellpollutetheairandwaterthreatenresidents’healthspreaddiseasesSolutions:mustbesortedmustbetreatedproperlyExtension:(problem+badinfluence+solution)noise:constant,annoying,disturbingnoiseoccursatmidnightmakestudentsunabletoconcentrateonthestudyresidentsaredeprivedofasoundsleepgreatlyinfluenceresidents'sleepingqualitySolutions:laydownrulesandregulationsonitfinethosefordisobeyingtherulesregulation的搭配verb：adopt/bringin/impose/issue/introduceregulation的搭配adj.：safetyregulation安全章程strict/tight/tough嚴(yán)格的official正式的Extension:(problem+badinfluence+solution)strangers:appearinthecommunityoccasionallyenterthecommunitywithoutpermission/casuallyposeathreattothesafetyoftheresidentsandourpossessionssolutions:laydownrulesandregulationsraiseresidents’awarenessofsafetystrengthenmanagementandinspection保安securityguard/force安裝人臉識別系統(tǒng)installafacerecognitionsystem出入證accesscard/permitDearMr.Brown,

作為一名來自中國的留學(xué)生，我很榮幸住在我們社區(qū)。但很抱歉，我發(fā)現(xiàn)這里存在一些嚴(yán)重的問題，特寫信希望得到您關(guān)注。

首先，垃圾被隨處扔在社區(qū)，發(fā)出臭味，有傳播疾病的可能。更糟糕的是，讓人苦惱的噪音在午夜出現(xiàn)，讓我們不能酣睡。還更遭的是，經(jīng)常能見到陌生人隨意出入社區(qū)，這對住戶和財產(chǎn)都造成威脅。

為改善狀況，我建議采取以下措施。第一，規(guī)章制度急切需要被制定來控制上述情況。此外，加強管理和巡查將對保證我們的安全大有幫助。另外，建議張貼相關(guān)的標(biāo)語和海報，以提升住戶維護社區(qū)和諧的意識。

如您能對這些問題給予充分關(guān)注，我會非常感激。感謝您的時間和考慮。

Yours,LiHua作為一名來自中國的留學(xué)生，我很榮幸住在我們社區(qū)。但很抱歉，我發(fā)現(xiàn)這里存在一些嚴(yán)重的問題，特寫信希望得到您關(guān)注。AsanoverseasstudentfromChina,I’mhonoredtoliveinourcommunity.Butregretfultofindsometerribleproblemsexistinghere,I’mwritingtodrawyourattentionto

them.首先，垃圾被隨處扔在社區(qū)，發(fā)出臭味，有傳播疾病的可能。更糟糕的是，讓人苦惱的噪音在午夜出現(xiàn)，讓我們不能酣睡。還更遭的是，經(jīng)常能見到陌生人隨意出入社區(qū)，這對住戶和財產(chǎn)都造成威脅。Initially,rubbishisthrownrandomlyinthecommunitygivingoutanunpleasantsmell,whichhasthepotentialof

spreadingdiseases.What’sworse,disturbing/annoyingnoiseoccursatmidnight,consequentlydeprivingusofasoundsleep.Worsestill,it’snotuncommontoseestrangersenterourcommunityatwill/astheyplease,posingathreattothesafetyoftheresidentsandourpossessions.為改善狀況，我建議采取以下措施。第一，規(guī)章制度急切需要被制定來控制上述情況。此外，加強管理和巡查將對保證我們的安全大有幫助。另外，建議張貼相關(guān)的標(biāo)語和海報，以提升住戶維護社區(qū)和諧的意識。Toimprovethesituation,itisadvisableto

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beputuptoarousetheresidents’awarenessofmaintainingtheharmonyofourcommunity.如您能對這些問題給予充分關(guān)注，我會非常感激。感謝您的時間和考慮。Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivedueattentionto

thematters.Thankyourforyourtimeandconsideration.afterdueconsideration經(jīng)適當(dāng)考慮之後Withallduerespect,Idisagreecompletely.不揣冒昧,實不敢茍同。DearMr.Brown,AsanoverseasstudentfromChina,I’mhonoredtoliveinourcommunity.Butregretfultofindsometerribleproblemsexistinghere,I’mwritingtodrawyourattentiontothem.Initially,rubbishisthrownrandomlyinthecommunitygivingoutanunpleasantsmell,whichhasthepotentialofspreadingdiseases.What’sworse,disturbingnoiseoccursatmidnight,constantlydeprivingusofasoundsleep.Worsestill,it’snotuncommontoseestrangersenterourcommunityastheyplease,posingathreattothesafetyoftheresidentsandourpossessions.Toimprovethesituation,itisadvisabletotakesomeeffectivemeasures.Firstofall,it’surgentthatrules