讀后續(xù)寫夜行的啟示一次出租車之旅與生命的對(duì)話講義浙江省慈溪市高一下學(xué)期期末測(cè)試英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。TherewasatimeinmylifetwentyyearsagowhenIwasdrivingataxitoearnaliving.Iencounteredpeoplewhoselivesamazedme,mademelaughandmademeweep.ButnoneofthoselivestouchedmemorethanthatofawomanIpickeduplateonawarmAugustnight.Thatnight,Iwascalledat2:00amtopicksomeoneup.WhenIarrived,thebuildingwaspletelydarkexceptforonelightinawindow.Inthiscase,manyotherdriverswouldjusthonk(按喇叭)onceortwice,waitashortminute,thendriveaway.ButIalwayswenttothedoortofindthepassenger.Itmight,Ireasoned,besomeonewhoneededmyassistance.lwalkedtothedoorandknocked,“Justaminute,"answeredaweakandelderlyvoice.Afteralongwaitthedooropened.Asmallwomaninher80sstoodbeforeme.Byhersidewasasmallsuitcase.“'Wouldyoucarrymybagouttothecar?"shesaid.Itookhersuitcaseandgavehermyarm.Wewalkedslowlytothestreet.Shekeptthankingmeformykindness.“'It'snothing,”’Itoldher.“ItrytotreatmypassengershowIwantmymothertreated.”“You'resuchagoodboy,"shesaid.Whenwegotinthetaxi,shegavemeanaddress.Thensheasked,“Couldyoudrivethroughthedowntown?”“It'snottheshortestway”,lanswered.“Idon’tmind,"shesaid.“I‘minnohurry.I'monmywaytoahospice(臨終安養(yǎng)院).”Isawhereyesshiningwithtears.“Idon'thaveanyfamilyleft,shecontinued.“Thedoctorsayslshouldgothere.HesaysIdon'thaveverylong.”Iquietlyturnedoffthemeter(計(jì)程器).“Whatroaddoyouwantmetotake?”Iasked.(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Forthenexttwohours,wedrovethroughthecity.______________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Ididnotpickupanymorepassengersthatday,drivingaimlessly,lostinthought.___________________________________________________________________________文章梗概：這篇文章講述了一個(gè)出租車司機(jī)在二十年前一個(gè)溫暖的八月夜晚，接到了一個(gè)特別的乘客——一位年邁的女士。她請(qǐng)求司機(jī)帶她穿過市中心，前往臨終安養(yǎng)院。在旅途中，她分享了自己生命中的重要地點(diǎn)和回憶，包括她的童年、家庭和愛。司機(jī)被她的故事深深觸動(dòng)，決定關(guān)閉計(jì)程器，免費(fèi)送她一程。這次經(jīng)歷讓司機(jī)深刻體會(huì)到了人與人之間的聯(lián)系，以及珍惜每一刻的重要性。文章通過一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的夜晚旅程，展現(xiàn)了人生經(jīng)歷的豐富性和生命的脆弱性。伏筆及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)：第一段：夜晚的城市之旅與回憶（設(shè)置伏筆）伏筆：特殊乘客

描述司機(jī)遇到的年邁女士，她請(qǐng)求司機(jī)帶她穿過城市，前往臨終安養(yǎng)院。伏筆：城市地標(biāo)

女士指引司機(jī)經(jīng)過對(duì)她有特殊意義的地方，這些地方成為她回憶的觸發(fā)點(diǎn)。伏筆：情感聯(lián)系

司機(jī)通過聆聽女士的故事，與她建立了情感上的聯(lián)系。伏筆：生命反思

女士的故事讓司機(jī)開始反思生命的意義和人與人之間的聯(lián)系。伏筆：計(jì)程器關(guān)閉

司機(jī)決定關(guān)閉計(jì)程器，免費(fèi)送女士，體現(xiàn)了他的同情和尊重。第二段：深刻的感悟與夜的沉思（回應(yīng)伏筆）回應(yīng)：漫無目的的駕駛

司機(jī)在送完女士后，沒有再接乘客，而是在城市中漫無目的地駕駛，體現(xiàn)了他對(duì)剛才經(jīng)歷的深思?；貞?yīng)：情感影響

司機(jī)反思這次經(jīng)歷對(duì)他情感上的影響，以及他對(duì)生命和人際關(guān)系的新理解?；貞?yīng)：角色轉(zhuǎn)變

司機(jī)意識(shí)到自己不僅僅是一個(gè)出租車司機(jī)，而是成為了他人生命故事的一部分。回應(yīng)：同情與尊重

司機(jī)對(duì)女士的同情和尊重加深，他感激自己能夠成為她生命最后旅程中的一個(gè)小部分。回應(yīng)：生命價(jià)值

司機(jī)被這次經(jīng)歷所觸動(dòng)，認(rèn)識(shí)到珍惜生活中的每一刻和每一次與人相遇的重要性。通過這樣的提綱，可以確保故事中的伏筆得到恰當(dāng)?shù)幕貞?yīng)，使續(xù)寫部分與原文內(nèi)容緊密相連，形成一個(gè)完整的敘事弧線。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)：第一段：夜晚的城市之旅與回憶描述司機(jī)和年邁女士在城市中的穿行，她指引著路線，經(jīng)過她生命中的重要地標(biāo)。女士分享與每個(gè)地方相關(guān)的故事，如童年的家、孩子們的公園、孫子們的野餐地點(diǎn)。司機(jī)聆聽著，感受到女士對(duì)過去美好時(shí)光的懷念和對(duì)親人的思念。強(qiáng)調(diào)這次不同尋常的出租車之旅，不僅是在城市中穿行，更是在女士的記憶中漫步。司機(jī)意識(shí)到這次旅程的特殊意義，它超越了簡(jiǎn)單的交通服務(wù)，成為了一次心靈的交流。第二段：深刻的感悟與夜的沉思描述司機(jī)在送完女士后，沒有再接其他乘客，而是在城市中漫無目的地駕駛，沉浸在深思中。反思這次經(jīng)歷給他帶來的影響，包括對(duì)人生、死亡和人與人之間關(guān)系的深刻理解。思考司機(jī)如何通過這次經(jīng)歷改變了對(duì)工作的看法，從一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的出租車司機(jī)變成了一個(gè)生命故事的傾聽者和參與者。強(qiáng)調(diào)司機(jī)對(duì)那位女士的同情和尊重，以及他對(duì)自己能夠提供幫助和安慰的感激。總結(jié)司機(jī)如何被這次經(jīng)歷所觸動(dòng)，以及它如何提醒他珍惜生活中的每一刻和每一次與人的相遇讀后續(xù)寫參考范文:Possibleversion:Forthenexttwohourswedrovethroughthecity,Theoldladyshowedmethebuildingwhereshehadonceworked,Wedrovethroughtheneighborhoodwheresheandherhusbandhadlivedbefore.Sometimessheaskedmetojustslowdowninfrontofaparticularbuildingandshewouldsitstaringintothedarkness,sayingnothing.Asthesunwasrising,shesuddenlysaid,“I'mtired.Let'sgonow,"Wedroveinsilencetothehospice.“Howmuchdoloweyou?"sheasked.“Nothing.”Ireplied,Withouthesitation,Ileanedforwardandgaveherahug.Shehuggedmetightly.“Yougaveanoldwomanalittlemomentofjoy,"shesaid.“Thankyou.”Ididnotpickupanymorepassengersthatday,drivingaimlessly,lostinthought.Whatifthatwomanhadgottenanangrydriver,oronewhowasimpatienttoendhisshift?WhatifIhadrefusedtotaketherun,orhadhonkedonce,thendrivenaway?Wealwaysthinkthatourlivesaredeterminedbygreatmoments.Butgreatmomentsoftencatchusunawares,WhenthatwomanhuggedmeandsaidthatIhadbroughtheramomentofjoy,IbelievethatIhadpossiblybeenplacedonearthforthepurposeofprovidingherwiththatlastride,IdonotthinkthatIhaveeverdoneanythinginmylifethatwasanymoreimportant.下水文1Paragraph1:Forthenexttwohours,wedrovethroughthecity.Thewomanpointedoutvariousplacesthatweresignificantinherlife,fromherchildhoodhometothechurchwhereshehadmarried.Witheachlocation,shesharedamemory,hervoicecarryingamixofnostalgiaandsorrow.Wepassedunderthesoftglowofstreetlightsandthroughthequietofthenight,thecity'susualhustleandbustlereplacedbyaserenestillness.Ilistened,entrancedbyherstories,feelingasthoughIwaswitnessingalifeunfoldingbeforeme.Herreflectionsonlove,loss,andthepassageoftimewereapoignantreminderofthefragilityoflife.Paragraph2:Ididnotpickupanymorepassengersthatday,drivingaimlessly,lostinthought.Thewoman'sjourneytothehospiceandhercandidsharingofherlifehadleftaprofoundimpactonme.Itwasasiftheboundariesbetweendriverandpassengerhaddissolved,andIhadbeeapartofhernarrative.Iponderedonthevalueofhumanconnectionsandtheimportanceofcherishingeverymomentwehave.Thatnight,asimpletaxiridehadturnedintoaheartfeltvoyage,notjustthroughthecitystreets,butthroughthetapestryofalifewelllived.Itwasareminderthatsometimes,themostmeaningfuljourneysarenotmeasuredbydistance,butbythedepthofhumanexperiencetheyenpass.下水文2Paragraph1:Forthenexttwohours,wedrovethroughthecity.Theoldwomanwasmyonlypassenger,andherstoriesbecamethecity'snightwhispers.Sheshowedmeherfavoritebakery,nowclosed,wheresheusedtobuypastriesforherchildren.Wepassedtheparkwhereshetookhergrandkidsforpicnics,thebenchstillthere,weatheredbutwaiting.Hereyesglistenedwitheachmemory,andIfoundmyselfguidingthetaxinotjustthroughstreets,butthroughherlife'slandscape.Thecity,usuallya