【課件】讀后續(xù)寫公開課課件-2025屆高三英語專項復習

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FreetalkHaveyoueverdreamedadreamthatturnedouttobeareality?Who(character)Where(place)When(time)What(event)Why(reason)How(solution)I;Becki;“she”

alongthehighway;athomelatenightIfoundBeckihadn'tcomehome.ThecarhadcometoanunexpectedlystoppedBeckiacceptedhelpfromawomanMainidea:Becki'scarbrokedownonthewayhomeatnightandsomeoneofferedheraride.While-reading

Task1:ReadformainideasettingincitingincidentRisingactionClimaxFallingactionResolutionDenouementWhile-reading

Task2:Readforplot

Thedarknesswasgatheringasshewobbled(顫顫巍巍)

inhighheelsalongthesideofthehighway.Thecarhadcometoanunexpectedstop,andlikeanormalteenagershedidtheonlythingshecouldthinkof...getoutandwalk.Itwascoldandlate,andhomewasfaraway.Thiscouldbealongnight.Ifonlysomeonewouldstopandofferheraride.Sheprayedforhelpanddraggedherselfforward.Thelightsofatruckshonefrombehindasitapproached.“Maybehewillstop,”shehoped.Thebrakelightsflashedonasitstopped.Nextinstant,thecabdooropened.Awordlessinvitationwasextendedandsheunderstood.Withouthesitationthegirlclimbedupintotheseatandclosedthedoor.Slowlythetruckpulledbackontotheroadanddisappearedintothenight,nevertobeseenagain.

Thedarknesswasgatheringasshewobbled(顫顫巍巍)

inhighheelsalongthesideofthehighway.Thecarhadcometoanunexpectedstop,

andlikeanormalteenagershedidtheonlythingshecouldthinkof...getoutandwalk.Itwascoldandlate,andhomewasfaraway.Thiscouldbealongnight.Ifonlysomeonewouldstopandofferheraride.Sheprayedforhelpanddraggedherselfforward.Thelightsofatruckshonefrombehindasitapproached.“Maybehewillstop,”shehoped.Thebrakelightsflashedonasitstopped.Nextinstant,thecabdooropened.Awordlessinvitationwasextendedandsheunderstood.Withouthesitationthegirlclimbedupintotheseatandclosedthedoor.Slowlythetruckpulledbackontotheroadanddisappearedintothenight,nevertobeseenagain.Exposition

Thedarknesswasgatheringasshewobbled(顫顫巍巍)in

highheelsalongthesideofthehighway.Thecarhadcometoanunexpectedstop,andlikeanormalteenagershedidtheonlythingshecouldthinkof...getoutandwalk.Itwascoldandlate,andhomewasfaraway.Thiscouldbealongnight.Ifonlysomeonewouldstopandofferheraride.Sheprayedforhelpanddraggedherselfforward.Thelightsofatruckshonefrombehindasitapproached.“Maybehewillstop,”shehoped.Thebrakelightsflashedonasitstopped.Nextinstant,thecabdooropened.Awordlessinvitationwasextendedandsheunderstood.Withouthesitationthegirlclimbedupintotheseatandclosedthedoor.Slowlythetruckpulledbackontotheroadanddisappearedintothenight,nevertobeseenagain.incitingincidentrisingaction1.Userhetoricaldevicestohookreaders.

Thedarknesswasgatheringasshewobbled(顫顫巍巍)inhighheelsalongthesideofthehighway.Thecarhadcometoanunexpectedstop,andlikeanormalteenagershedidtheonlythingshecouldthinkof...getoutandwalk.

Itwascoldandlate,andhomewasfaraway.Thiscouldbealongnight.Ifonlysomeonewouldstopandofferheraride.Sheprayedforhelpanddraggedherselfforward.

Thelightsofatruckshonefrombehindasitapproached.“Maybehewillstop,”shehoped.Thebrakelightsflashedonasitstopped.Nextinstant,thecabdooropened.Awordlessinvitationwasextendedandsheunderstood.Withouthesitationthegirlclimbedupintotheseatandclosedthedoor.Slowlythetruckpulledbackontotheroadanddisappearedintothenight,nevertobeseenagain.2.Usestrongverbstoshowfeelingsanddevelopthestory3.Useinnerspeechto

illustratefeelingsandrevealcluesWhile-reading

Task2:Readforplot

Iwokeupinacoldsweat,alarmed.Wasthatadreamorwasitavision?Itwasunbelievablyreal,andthegirlwasmydaughter!Ijumpedfrommybedandrantoherroom.Herbedwasempty.Istoodinhorrortryingtothinkwhyshehadnotcomehome.Asthementalfogbegantolift,Irememberedshewasvisitingherfriendthatevening.Perhapsshestayedthereforthenight.Itwas1:30a.m,butIracedtothephoneanddialedanumber.“Hello?”Thevoicewasheavywithsleep.“Hey.Sorrytowakeyou.Beckididn'tcomehometonightandIwaswonderingifshestayedatyourplace?”

“No,shelefthereafewhoursago.Sheshouldhavebeenhomeatleastbymidnight!”Thevoiceontheotherendbegantoreflectmyownpanic.Overthenextforty-fiveminutesIalternatedbetweenlyinginprayandpacingthefloorinanxiety.At2:15a.m.lightsappearedasacarturnedupourlongdriveway.Icouldtellimmediatelythatitwasnotmydaughter'scar.

Iwokeupinacoldsweat,alarmed.Wasthatadreamorwasitavision?Itwasunbelievablyreal,andthegirlwasmydaughter!Ijumpedfrommybedandrantoherroom.Herbedwasempty.Istoodinhorrortryingtothinkwhyshehadnotcomehome.Asthementalfogbegantolift,Irememberedshewasvisitingherfriendthatevening.Perhapsshestayedthereforthenight.Itwas1:30a.m,butIracedtothephoneanddialedanumber.“Hello?”Thevoicewasheavywithsleep.“Hey.Sorrytowakeyou.Beckididn'tcomehometonightandIwaswonderingifshestayedatyourplace?”“No,shelefthereafewhoursago.Sheshouldhavebeenhomeatleastbymidnight!”

Thevoiceontheotherendbegantoreflectmyownpanic.Overthenextforty-fiveminutesIalternatedbetweenlyinginprayandpacingthefloorinanxiety.At2:15a.m.lightsappearedasacarturnedupourlongdriveway.Icouldtellimmediatelythatitwasnotmydaughter'scar.risingaction

Iwokeupinacoldsweat,alarmed.Wasthatadreamorwasitavision?Itwasunbelievablyreal,andthegirlwasmydaughter!Ijumpedfrommybedandrantoherroom.Herbedwasempty.Istoodinhorrortryingtothinkwhyshehadnotcomehome.Asthementalfogbegantolift,Irememberedshewasvisitingherfriendthatevening.Perhapsshestayedthereforthenight.Itwas1:30a.m,butIracedtothephoneanddialedanumber.“Hello?”Thevoicewasheavywithsleep.“Hey.Sorrytowakeyou.Beckididn'tcomehometonightandIwaswonderingifshestayedatyourplace?”“No,shelefthereafewhoursago.Sheshouldhavebeenhomeatleastbymidnight!”

Thevoiceontheotherendbegantoreflectmyownpanic.Overthenextforty-fiveminutesIalternatedbetweenlyinginprayandpacingthefloorinanxiety.At2:15a.m.lightsappearedasacarturnedupourlongdriveway.Icouldtellimmediatelythatitwasnotmydaughter'scar.2.UsestrongverbstoshowfeelingsanddevelopthestoryIwokeupinacoldsweat,alarmed.Wasthatadreamorwasitavision?Itwasunbelievablyreal,andthegirlwasmydaughter!Ijumpedfrommybedandrantoherroom.Herbedwasempty.Istoodinhorrortryingtothinkwhyshehadnotcomehome.Asthementalfogbegantolift,Irememberedshewasvisitingherfriendthatevening.Perhapsshestayedthereforthenight.Itwas1:30a.m,butIracedtothephoneanddialedanumber.

“Hello?”Thevoicewasheavywithsleep.

“Hey.Sorrytowakeyou.Beckididn'tcomehometonightandIwaswonderingifshestayedatyourplace?”

“No,shelefthereafewhoursago.Sheshouldhavebeenhomeatleastbymidnight!”Thevoiceontheotherendbegantoreflectmyownpanic.Overthenextforty-fiveminutesIalternatedbetweenlyinginprayandpacingthefloorinanxiety.At2:15a.m.lightsappearedasacarturnedupourlongdriveway.Icouldtellimmediatelythatitwasnotmydaughter'scar.4.Usedialoguesto

threadeventsWhile-reading

Task2:ReadforplotParagraph1:Myfacepressedagainstthewindowandfoundithardtobreathe.Paragraph2:“Mom,shegavemearidehome.”Beckisaid.climaxdenouementfallingactionWhile-reading

Task2:Readforplot...thecabdooropened.Awordlessinvitationwasextendedandsheunderstood.Withouthesitationthegirlclimbedupintotheseatandclosedthedoor...Whatdifficultiesdidsheface?Paragraph2:“Mom,shegavemearidehome.”Beckisaid....shewobbledinhighheelsalongthesideofthehighway...itwascoldandlate,andhomewasfaraway.darkenedandcoldsurroundings;uncomfortableshoes;longdistancedangerWhathelpdidsheget?Whoofferedherhelp?While-reading

Task3:ReadforcluesInwritingthearticle,thewriterintendsto________todescribeaterribleexperiencetopresentreaderswithgoodandeviltohighlightanactofkindnesstoshowamother'sselflessloveIt'swisetoextendastorywithabrightandpositivetheme.While-reading

Task4:Readforwritingpupose意圖tohighlightanactofkindness劃線詞CharacterSettingActionMood段首句Paragraph1:Myfacepressedagainstthewindowandfoundithardtobreathe.Paragraph2:“Mom,shegavemearidehome.”Beckisaid.WhatdidIseeinsidethecar?WhatdidIdoseeingBecki'sreturn?WhohelpedBecki?WhatdidBeckiexplainherbeinglateforhome?HowdidIreactafterhearingtheexplanation?daughterhighheels,highway,home,night,ride,dream,midnight,carpraypanicWhile-reading

Task5:ReadforpredictionsettingincitingincidentRisingactionClimaxFallingactionResolutionDenouementBecki'scarbrokedownNightapproaching,shewalkedalongthehighwayinhighheels.Itwascoldandlateandshewasdraggingforwardwhenacarstoppedandshegotin.Meanwhile,Imadeabaddream.AcarappearedandIwaitedtoseethe“visitors”.BeckireturnedhomesafeandsoundBeckitoldmeawomandroveherhomescepticalhorrifiedpanickyanxiousrelievedgratefulWhile-reading

Task5:ReadforpredictionParagraph1:Myfacepressedagainstthewindowandfoundithardtobreathe.Paragraph2:“Mom,shegavemearidehome.”Beckisaid.Event:BeckireturnedhomesafeandsoundFeelings:anxiousrelievedEvent:BeckitoldmeawomandroveherhomeFeeling:gratefulWhile-reading

Task6:ReadforwritingHowtodescribeaperson'sanxiety?1.UserhetoricaldevicestoshowanxietyAdeepsenseofanxietyfloodedoverme.Fullofanxiety,Ifeltlikesittingonpinsandneedles.

如坐針氈ThethoughtofwhatmighthavehappenedtoBeckisentshiversdownmyspine.

讓我脊背發(fā)涼

Adeepsenseofanxietyaroseinmyheartandquicklyoverwhelmedme.心底涌現(xiàn)出深深的焦慮感,并迅速將我淹沒Thesenseofanxietygotincreasinglystrongerwitheachpassingminute.Ifelttooanxiousthatmyheartalmostjumpedoutofmythroat.SimilePersonificationExaggerationExaggeration焦慮感漸增Exaggeration焦慮感淹沒了我Exaggeration“協(xié)同效應”Mybrainwaslikeascribble.Simile腦子亂作一團2.Usestrong/vividverbstoshowanxietyIpokedmyheadoutofthewindow,castingananxiousglanceatthecar.

渾身打顫

跺腳踱步哭下跪心跳加快甩門飛奔嘆氣看情緒崩潰焦慮的表現(xiàn)Anxious,Ishiveredineverylimb./Ishookwithfear.Istampedmyfootinanxiety.Ibeganpacingtheroom./Ipacedbackandforthintheroom.Iwasclosetotears./Ibegantosobbitterly.Iwasalmostonthevergeofbreakingdown.Anxious,Ifelltomyknees.Withheartbeatinghard/racing,Isteadiedmyeye(凝神看).Flingingopenthedoor,Iranoutside.Idarted/trotted/gallopedoutside./Irushedoutinhaste.Isighingheavily,wonderingwhattodonext.3.Useinnerspeechtoshowanxiety“Whathappened?WheredidmydearBeckigo?”mymindwasinchaos.大腦一片混亂“Whatifmydaughterwasinjured?Whatifshemetabadguy?”worrycreptintomymind.爬上心頭“Whatifthedreamwastrue?”thethoughthitmelikeabucketofcoldwater.(像被潑了一盆冷水)Idarenotthinkaboutitanylonger.“WhatshouldIdo—oh!Ishouldn'thavelethergotomeetherfriendalone.”Iwasfilledwithregret.“God,pleasebringmydearBeckihomesafely.”Iprayed....Howtodescribeaperson'srelief?Useinanimatesubject(無靈主語)Apairofhighheelsappeared.Itwasmydaughter!Ibreathedasighofrelief.看見我女兒，我松了口氣。聽到熟悉的聲音，我如釋重負地喘了口氣。Suddenlyafamiliarvoicecameintomyears.ItwasBecki.Igaspedinrelief.Useinversion(倒裝)我女兒穿著她的高跟鞋(從車里)出來了。Outsteppedmypreciousdaughterinherhighheels.Thecarpulledinfrontofthehouse,and

outofitemergedmypreciousdaughter.Howtodescribeaperson'sgratitude?1.Useemphaticstructure是她在我晚上獨自一人無助地在公路上走的時候向我伸出了援手。ItwasshewhoextendedahelpinghandwhenIwaswalkingaloneonthehighwayhopelessly.2.Usethesubjunctivemood沒有她的幫助我不可能穿著高跟鞋走到家。Butfor/Withoutherhelp,Iwouldhavenevermadeithomeinmyhighheels.Hadn'tshehelpedme,Iwouldhavenevermadeithomeinmyhighheels.Possibleversion：MyfacepressedagainstthewindowandIfoundithardtobreathe.Thecarpulledinfrontofthehouse,andoutofitemergedmypreciousdaughter,makingherwayupthesteps.Tearsstingingmyeyes

(淚水模糊了我的眼睛),Ithrewopenthedoor,pulledherinsideandhuggedhertightly.ThedreamwasjusttoorealandIcouldhardlybelieveIwasnowhavingmydaughterinmyhug.Iwonderedifitwasbecausemypraywasanswered.Thenthroughmyblurredvision

(模糊的視野)Isawaladysteppingoutofthecar.

同義復現(xiàn)銜接Possibleversion：

“Mom,shegavemearidehome.”Beckisaid.“Mycarbrokedownonthehighwayandwithoutherhelp,Iwouldneverhavemadeithomeinmyhighheels.”shecontinued,exposingher