高考英語書面表達(dá)讀后續(xù)寫輔導(dǎo)課件

讀后續(xù)寫訓(xùn)練篇“Yes,”hesaid.“Youmaybothgo,”saidhe.各種“說”tell告訴

ask問

answer回答add補(bǔ)充

shout喊

reply 回答state陳述

whisper輕聲說

exclaim呼喊argue爭(zhēng)論

interrupt打斷

repeat重復(fù) explain解釋

claim聲稱

complain報(bào)怨insist 堅(jiān)持

order命令

request請(qǐng)求demand強(qiáng)烈要求 suggest建議

recommend推薦announce宣布 beg請(qǐng)求

mock嘲諷apologize道歉 murmur低語

blurtout 脫口而出

“Whatisthematternow?”askedhiswife.“Ijustcan'trememberwhyIcomebackandwhereIamsupposedtobegoingonsuchahotsummerday,”repliedtheprofessor.However,therealreasonwasthatheforgotwherehehadlefthischildren.Sensingsomethingwrong,Mrs.Smithdidn'tbelievehiswords,becausewheneverhetoldalie,hewouldusuallyblinkhiseyesquickly.“Tellmethetruth,”orderedhiswife.“Asyoutoldme,Ididn'tforgetwhereIputthenameofthattown,butIforgetthestationwhereIleftourchildren!”whisperedtheprofessor,hisvoicetrembling.“Whatabadmemory!”shoutedhiswife.所見Atthesightofsth./sb.所聞Uponhearingthenewsthat......,sb.....所說“....”saidsb.所做sb.didsth,anddidsthsb.didsth,doing......所思Itwasatthemomentsbrealizedthat.....Itsuddenlyoccurredtohimthat.....第一類起到連接作用的高級(jí)句型和語法非謂語作狀語一。。。。就。。。。with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)/獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)so...that....倒裝as引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句形容詞短語作狀語第二類描寫的固定句型無靈主語（情緒描寫；心理描寫）強(qiáng)調(diào)句（點(diǎn)題）寫人說話時(shí)的倒裝（語言描寫）從未。。。。（心理描寫）迫不及待。。。。（動(dòng)作描寫）虛擬語氣（語言描寫，心理描寫）

心理描寫

內(nèi)心戲“所思所想”

腦海里的畫面和想法1.回憶

Allthose....memoriescrowdedintoone’smind.

所有那些。。。的回憶都涌入某人的腦海。Reflectingon......,sb.........

回想/反思。。。。，某人。。。。

Reflectingonwhathehaddone,Thomasloweredhisheadwithguilt.

反思自己做過的事情，Thomas羞愧地低下了頭。2.靈感Itflashedthroughone’smindthat......Itdawneduponsb.that......Itoccurredtosb.that......

某人突然想到。。。ItflashedthroughSteve’smindthathecouldspendtheweekendstudyinginthesmallwoods.3.決心

Sb.madeuphismindthat......Sb.wasdeterminedthat......

某人下定決心要。。。。。

Seeingmypartnersallinhighspirits,ImadeupmymindthatIwouldbynomeansbeacowardagain.看到伙伴們斗志昂揚(yáng)，我下定決心不能再做懦夫了。4.后悔

IfonlyIhadnotdone........

如果我（沒有）。。。。。就好了

IfonlyIhadlistenedtoherwords.

如果我聽了她的話就好了5.“托物言志”

Seeingsth.,sb.feltasifithadbeendoing....andsaying,.....

看到某物，某人感覺它好像在。。。，并且說：“。。。”

Seeingthehelicopterinthedistance,Janefeltasifithadbeencomfortingherwithitsthunderousnoiseandsaying,“Yourwaitingpaysoff!”

情緒描寫

刻畫人物的喜怒哀樂1.內(nèi)層“直抒胸臆”2.表層“眉目傳情”3.外層“寄情于景”內(nèi)層“直抒胸臆”1.形容詞句式Feeling+情緒，sb......./(Being)+情緒，sb.......

（感到）。。。。。，某人。。。。。

Feelingexhausted,hewenttobed.Beingexhausted,hewenttobed.

Exhausted,hewenttobed.Feelinganxious,hepacedupanddown.

Beinganxious,hepacedupanddown.Anxious,hepacedupanddown.

某人如此。。。。以至于。。。。（感覺好像。。。。）

Sb.wasso+情緒+thathe/shefeltasifSo+情緒+wassb.thathe/shefeltasif

Tomwassohappythathefeltasifhehadbeeninheaven.

SohappywasTomthathefeltasifhehadbeeninheaven.

Tom如此開心，以至于感覺自己好像身在天堂。2.名詞句式

句式1：

情緒的起因Toone’s+情緒（名詞），sb.......

令某人。。。。的是，。。。。。Totheirrelief,theirsonreturnedsafeandsound.

句式2：

情緒的后果

Outof+情緒，sb......

出于某種情緒，某人。。。。

Outofcuriosity,theywentthroughthetunnel.出于好奇，他們穿過了通道。

謂語/非謂語/形容詞+with+情緒(名詞）

某人。。。地。。。/某人因?yàn)?。。。。而。。?！?/p>

Shejumpedwithjoy.Hesighedwithdisappointment.Herfacelitupwithexcitement.Frozenwithfear,hecouldn’tutteraword.句式3：

情緒的把持/溢出/外露/變化/升騰Sb.wasoverwhelmedwith+情緒Hewasoverwhelmedwithexcitement.他激動(dòng)的不知所措。Sb.couldn’tcontainsb’s+情緒Shecouldn’tcontainherjoy.她抑制不住內(nèi)心的喜悅。Therewasapparent+情緒+insb’svoice/eyes/expression/behavior...Therewasapparenthorrorinhereyes.她眼神中有明顯的恐懼。Sb’s+情緒1+fadedawayandwasreplacedwith+情緒2Hisexcitementfadedaway,andwasreplacedwithdespairandworry.他的興奮耗盡了，取而代之的是絕望和憂慮。Sb.feltagreatsenseof+情緒+wellingupinsb’sheartandsurgingthroughsb....某人感到一股強(qiáng)烈的。。。。在內(nèi)心升騰，奔涌。Lucyfeltagreatsenseofjealousywellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.Lucy感到一股強(qiáng)烈的嫉妒在她心中升騰，奔涌。Sb.feltamixtureof+情緒1+and+情緒2+wellingupinsb’sheartandsurgingthroughsb.某人感到一股混雜著。。。。和。。。。的情緒在內(nèi)心升騰，奔涌。Seeingthehelicopterinthedistance,Janefeltamixtureofexcitementandgrievancewellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.

Withsth.doing/done,sb....

某物。。。。，某人。。。。Withthebrightmoonhanginginthesky,peoplefeastedongrandmeals,talkinginhighspirits.

明月高懸天際，人們把酒言歡As/With+情況惡化，sb.wasontheedgeofbreakingdown,totallyatalosswhattodo.

隨著情況的惡化，某人快要崩潰了，完全不知道該怎么辦。Withthewolfglaringathimfiercelyoutsidethecar,Macwasontheedgeofbreakingdown,totallyatalosswhattodo.表層（“眉目傳情”）

Thosewordschilledmyheart.那些話讓我心寒Thescenewarmedmyheart.這一幕讓我心暖Thesongsoftenedmyheart.歌聲柔軟了我的心Whathesaidpiercedmyheart.他說的話刺痛了我的心環(huán)境描寫

外層（寄情于景）

方位+lie/stand+景，介詞+whichis+物/人

（在。。。有一個(gè)。。。。，在它的。。。。有。。。。）Inthecenteroftheforeststandsagianttree,besidewhichisasmallcottage.AlitupB,which,asifbymagic,hadturnedintoC.

A點(diǎn)亮了B，好似魔法般，B變成了CThesettingsunlituptheriver,which,asifbymagic,hadturnedintoagoldenribbon.

夕陽照亮了這條河，仿佛變魔術(shù)似的，這條河變成了一條金色的絲帶。

Withsth.doing/done,sb....

某物。。。。，某人。。。。Withthebrightmoonhanginginthesky,peoplefeastedongrandmeals,talkinginhighspirits.

明月高懸天際，人們把酒言歡As/With+情況惡化，sb.wasontheedgeofbreakingdown,totallyatalosswhattodo.

隨著情況的惡化，某人快要崩潰了，完全不知道該怎么辦。Withthewolfglaringathimfiercelyoutsidethecar,Macwasontheedgeofbreakingdown,totallyatalosswhattodo.

Bathedin+天氣，otherswere......,whilesb.did.....,doing.....

沐浴在。。。中，其他人在。。。，而某人卻在動(dòng)作1，動(dòng)作2

Bathedinwonderfulsunshine,otherstudentswerebusychattingandtakingphotoswiththeirteachers,whilehewassittingquietlyonhischair,drawingsomething.在美妙的陽光下，其他同學(xué)都在忙著聊天，和老師拍照，而他卻安靜地坐在椅子上，畫著什么東西。

情緒描寫語料

名詞

喜悅：delightjoyhappinessamusementexcitement

悲傷：sadnesssorrowmisery痛苦regretdepression沮喪disappointmentdesperation絕望frustration挫折

憤怒：angerrage暴怒madness瘋狂

fury狂怒

恐懼：frightterrorhorrorpanic

滿意：contentsatisfaction

驚訝：surpriseshockamazementastonishment震驚

焦慮：concernanxiety

尷尬：embarrassment

愧疚：shameguilt嫉妒：jealousy好奇：curiosity形容詞喜悅：delightedjoyfulhappyamused

excitedcheerful悲傷：sadheartbrokenregretful

depressed

disappointeddesperatefrustrated憤怒：angrymadannoyedfurious恐懼：frightenedterrifiedhorrified

scared

滿意：contentsatisfiedpleased驚訝：surprisedshockedamazedastonished焦慮：concernedanxiousrestlessnervous

尷尬：embarrassed愧疚：shamedguilty嫉妒：jealous好奇：curious

動(dòng)詞喜悅：smilelaughgiggle咯咯笑grin露齒笑悲傷：cryweep哭泣sob抽泣c(diǎn)hoke哽咽sigh嘆氣

感動(dòng)：touchmove焦慮：shaketremble顫抖讀后續(xù)寫常用句法1.sb.wasdoing......when......某人正在。。。。突然。。。。

Tomwasdoinghishomeworkwhenheheardraisedvoices.2.Whattouchedmemostwasthat........最讓我感動(dòng)的是。。。3.Nosooner.....than....../Hardly....when.....一。。。。就。。。。

Nosoonerhadhesteppedonthestagethantheaudienceburstintothunderousapplause.4.Itwas.....that.....強(qiáng)調(diào)句

Itwasapieceofbrokenglassthatcutintohisleftwing.5.So....that.....如此。。。以至于。。。

SodelightedwasIthatIwantedtoyelloutandsharemyfeelingswithmydad.6.Only+狀語+倒裝句

只有。。。才。。。

OnlythendidIrealizethatthesnakewasreal,notatoy.7.形容+as+Iwas,主句

盡管。。。。，但是。。。。ExhaustedasIwas,Ifeltextremelyhappy.

動(dòng)作描寫

動(dòng)作鏈A,BandCShetookadeepbreath,leanedonhercaneandlimpedtohim.

她深吸一口氣，倚靠著她的拐杖，一瘸一拐地走向他。動(dòng)作描寫語料頭：

raiseone’shead抬頭lowerone’shead低頭

scratchone’shead撓頭

restone’sheadon把頭倚靠在

臉：Hercheekswereshiningwithtears.......,hisfacebeamingwithhappiness.Herfaceburnedwithembarrassment.

眼睛：Tearsblurredmyeyes.淚水模糊我的雙眼hereyeslitupwithexcitement眼睛因?yàn)榕d奮亮了起來

手：reachoutone’shand伸出手

clapone’shands鼓掌

graspsth.inone’shand把。。。握在手上

clenchone’sfists緊握雙拳

動(dòng)詞spot目睹catchsightof看見getaglimpseof瞥見grab抓住pat輕拍tap輕敲

rush沖dash疾奔storm沖/闖讀后續(xù)寫三大主題人與自我人與自然人與社會(huì)1.The_______(forgettable)experiencehasmademerealizethathelpingothersisthesourceofhappiness.2.Theunforgettableexperiencehastotallychangedme,_____(give)meannewlifeandhope.3.____thesayinggoes,“Honestyisthebestpolicy.”4.Ifyouworkhard,youreffor