讀后續(xù)寫專題第4章10大高級(jí)語(yǔ)法句式 上部

10大高級(jí)語(yǔ)法句式最強(qiáng)攻略.豐富模板.范文偏愛(ài)寫法無(wú)靈主語(yǔ):心理、情緒;行為意義名詞;無(wú)生命事物作主語(yǔ)虛擬語(yǔ)氣:情態(tài)動(dòng)詞+havedone“當(dāng)初應(yīng)該”;Ifonly“要..就好了”獨(dú)立主格:Tearswellingupinhiseyes,hethankedthepolice...4、擬人比喻:likeaxxx;ashappyasaking;aseaofsorrow5、介詞短語(yǔ):with結(jié)構(gòu)/情緒;without結(jié)構(gòu)6、非謂語(yǔ):V-ing/V-ed/Todo/Havingdonesth,主句7、強(qiáng)調(diào)句:Itwassb/sththatdosth.倒裝句:地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ)/否定詞/Only狀語(yǔ)/o...that/Notonly..butalso讓步狀從句:Difficultasitwas.,...“盡管...."(轉(zhuǎn)折)長(zhǎng)短句相間:感嘆句/亮點(diǎn)小短句+長(zhǎng)句1:無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)(用無(wú)生命的事物來(lái)做主語(yǔ))(1)心理、情緒:“awaveof+情緒名詞+固定動(dòng)詞+sb'◆普通:IfeltregretfulwhenIheardthebadnews.聽(tīng)到那壞消息,我感到后悔。(“人做主語(yǔ)”)◆改成無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句子:Uncontrollably,awaveofremorsewashedovermeasIheardthebadnews.當(dāng)我聽(tīng)到這個(gè)壞消息時(shí)，一股悔恨的浪潮不受控制地席卷了我。Astrong/intensesenseofdelighttookholdofmethemomentIheardthenews.在我聽(tīng)到這個(gè)消息的那刻,一種強(qiáng)烈烈的喜悅抓住了我。Uncontrollably,awaveofremorsewashedovermeasIheardthebadnews.Astrong/intensesenseofdelighttookholdofmethemomentIheardthenews.happiness/joy/delight開(kāi)心anger/rage/fury狂怒sadness/sorrow悲傷gratitude/appreciation感激admiration欽佩/贊賞guilt/remorse愧疚悔恨fear/terror/fright/panic害怕astonishment/shock/surprise震驚seize(抓住/控制)catch(caught過(guò)去式)strike(struck過(guò)去式)surround(圍繞)takeholdof(控制)washover(沖刷)comeover(突然感到)envelop(籠罩)+sb◆改寫“我開(kāi)心”:Ifelthappy.改成無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句:Delightseizedme.->Awaveofdelightseizedme.?擴(kuò)寫:聽(tīng)到那壞消息時(shí)，我懊悔。(用無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句)Almostuncontrollably,awaveofremorsewashedovermeasIheardthebadnews.幾乎無(wú)法控制地，當(dāng)我聽(tīng)到這個(gè)壞消息時(shí)，一股悔恨的浪潮席卷了我。?擴(kuò)寫:聽(tīng)到好消息時(shí)，我開(kāi)心。(用無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)句)AstrongsenseofdelighttookholdofmethemomentIheardthegoodnews.當(dāng)我聽(tīng)到這個(gè)好消息的那-一刻，一種強(qiáng)烈的喜悅感抓住了我。◆拓展:亮點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)①:depriveof使喪失..(能力)句式:sthdeprivedsbofsth.-某事使某人喪失..能力例句:Astonishmentdeprivedmeofmypowerofspeech.驚訝使我說(shuō)不出話來(lái)。(喪失說(shuō)話的能力)◆拓展:亮點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)②:preventfrom阻止/使..無(wú)法做某事句式:sthpreventedsbfromdoingsth.某事使某人無(wú)法做某事例句:Astrongwaveoffearpreventedhimfrommoving.強(qiáng)烈的恐懼讓他無(wú)法動(dòng)彈。(取代掉:Hewastoofearfultomove.)(2)有行為意義的名詞:“sight/thought/walk/steps",“一見(jiàn)到/一想到”Thesight/thoughtofsthmadesb+情緒形容詞.一見(jiàn)/想到sth,某人就感到..Atthesight/thoughtofsth,sbfelt+情緒詞(adj./n.).一見(jiàn)/想到sth,某人就感到..◆真題運(yùn)用[浙江卷]:“一-見(jiàn)到那頭熊，他就緊張?！窕A(chǔ)寫法:Whenhesawthebear,hefeltverynervous.●無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)式改寫:->Theverysightofthebearmadehimextremelynervous.->Atthesightofthebear,hefeltastrongwaveofnervousness.(一看到熊，他就感到一陣強(qiáng)烈的緊張。)◆真題運(yùn)用(以下為范文句子)●Poppyjumpedwithjoyatthesightofthelttledog.Poppy(主角小狗的名字)一看到小狗就高興得跳了起來(lái)。[2020.01浙江卷](后半句移到前面就是無(wú)靈主語(yǔ))Hereyeswidenedatthesightofthebreakfasttray.看到早餐托盤,她瞪大了眼睛。[2021全國(guó)1卷](后半句移到前面就是無(wú)靈主語(yǔ))◆真題運(yùn)用●Atthethoughtofthehomework,Ifrowned.一想到作業(yè)，我就皺起了眉頭。[2022廣州一模]●Theone-hourdish-washinghadtotallywornmeout.一小時(shí)的洗碗讓我筋疲力盡。[2022廣州一模]Afewstepsthroughtheforestbroughtustothehumanterritory.穿過(guò)森林幾步，我們來(lái)到了人類的領(lǐng)地。Thesight/thoughtofsthmadesb+情緒形容詞.一見(jiàn)/想到sth,某人xxxxAtthesight/thoughtofsth,sbdidsth.一見(jiàn)/想到sth,某人xxxx.Theverysightofthebearmadehimnervous.一見(jiàn)到那頭熊，他就緊張Thethoughtofthemomentssharedwithgrandpafilledmewithgreatjoy.一想到和爺爺度過(guò)的時(shí)光，我就感到十分快樂(lè)Poppyjumpedwithjoyatthesightofthelittledog.[2020.01浙江卷]Hereyeswidenedatthesightofthebreakfasttray.[2021全國(guó)卷1]Atthethoughtofthehomework,Ifrowned.一想到作業(yè)，我就皺起了眉頭。Theone-hourdish-washinghadtotallywornmeout.一-小時(shí)的洗碗讓我筋疲力盡Afewstepsthroughtheforestbroughtustothehumanterritory.人類領(lǐng)地)(3)其他無(wú)生命事物作主語(yǔ):適合寫結(jié)尾句(以下建議背2-3句)Interestingly,theman'swordsstilllingeredinSam'smindevennow.有趣的是，那個(gè)男人的言語(yǔ)直到現(xiàn)在仍然在Sam的腦海中揮之不去。Thefunnystorytaughtusthatnevershouldwejudgeabookbyitscover.這個(gè)有趣的故事告訴我們，永遠(yuǎn)不應(yīng)該通過(guò)封面來(lái)判斷一:本書(以貌取人)ThenarrowescapemadeMacrealizehowtreasurablelifewas.這次驚險(xiǎn)的逃生讓Mac意識(shí)到生命是多么珍貴。Theuniqueexperienceenlightenedhimwiththefactthat...這段獨(dú)特的經(jīng)歷啟發(fā)了他/讓他頓悟...[詞匯積累]:lingerinsb'smind在某人腦?？M繞;teachsbsth教會(huì)某人某事;makesbrealizesth/that..使某人意識(shí)到...enlightensbwiththefacethat...使人頓悟..(其他好句)Anideasuddenlystruckthetwinsthattheycouldaskdadforhelp.雙胞胎突然想到一一個(gè)想法，他們可以向爸爸尋求幫助。Itgraduallydawneduponmethat...我漸漸恍然大悟/漸漸明...ItoccurredtoEllithatthebearmightbedistractedbythedeliciousbread.艾麗突然想到，熊可能會(huì)被美味的面包分散注意力。Themessinthekitchenremindedthetwinsoftheimportanceofpractice.廚房里的混亂提醒雙胞胎練習(xí)的重要性。Thepaperworkslippedmymind/memory.我忘記了論文作業(yè)。適合寫結(jié)尾句Interestingly,theman'swordsstilllingeredinSam'smindevennow.(腦中徘徊)Thefunnystorytaughtusthatnevershouldwejudgeabookbyitscover.ThenarrowescapemadeMacrealizehowtreasurablelifewas.Theexperienceenlightenedhimwiththefactthat..這段經(jīng)歷讓他明白..Anideasuddenlystruckthetwinsthattheycouldaskdadforhelp.(突然想到)Itgraduallydawneduponmethat...(逐漸意識(shí)到)ItoccurredtoEllithatthebearmightbedistractedbythedeliciousbread.Themessinthekitchenremindedthetwinsoftheimportanceofpractice.Thepaperworkslippedmymind/memory.(忘記論文作業(yè))讀后續(xù)寫句式1:無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)(用無(wú)生命的事物做主語(yǔ))總結(jié)(1)心理、情緒:‘a(chǎn)waveof+情緒名詞+固定動(dòng)詞+sb"Awaveofdelightseizedme.喜悅抓住了我/我開(kāi)心Astrongwaveoffearpreventedhimfrommoving.強(qiáng)烈的恐懼使他動(dòng)彈不得(2)有行為意義的名詞:“sight/thought/walk/steps”Thesight/thoughtofsthmadesb+情緒形容詞.一見(jiàn)/想到sth,某人xxAtthesight/thoughtofsth,sbdidsth.一見(jiàn)/想到sth,某人xxx.無(wú)生命事物作主語(yǔ),結(jié)尾句:“Thewords/Thestory..”Thewordsstilllingeredinone'smind.那些話還縈繞在心頭Thestorytaughtusthatnevershouldwejudgeabookbyitscover.Theexperienceenlightenedhimthat..這段經(jīng)歷讓他明白..讀后續(xù)寫句式2:比喻(多用于情緒/動(dòng)作描寫,強(qiáng)調(diào))●情緒句式一:“l(fā)ikeaxxx”“Filledwith+情緒，sbdosthlikeaxx”Filledwithrage,hechargedtowardsmelikeafuriousbull.他滿腔怒火,如公牛向我沖來(lái)Fallingintosadness,Roseburiedherfaceinarmslikeadeflatedballoon.羅斯陷入悲傷，像一個(gè)泄氣的氣球一樣把臉埋在懷里。Drownedinlaughter,Jimmydashedoutoftheschoolgatelikeafreebird.吉米沉浸在笑聲中，像一只自由的小鳥(niǎo)一樣沖出了校門。Happinesswashedoverhimlikewarmsunshine.幸福像暖陽(yáng)沖刷著他(likeabeamofwarmanddazzlingsunlight;likeasunbeam)Angertookholdofhimlikeawildbeast.憤怒像野獸一樣抓住了他●情緒句式二:“as+情緒形容詞+as+意象開(kāi)心:(be)ashappyasaking(be)ashappyasapiginmud(be)ashappyasaclamathightide(inhighwater)(地道俚語(yǔ);clam蚌)Onthelastdayofschool,Jimmydashedoutoftheschoolgatefeelingasfreeasabird.緊張;不安;焦慮:(anxious/upset)asnervousasanant(onahotpan)熱鍋上的螞蟻=asnervousasacatonhotbricks(地道俚語(yǔ))害怕:Atthesightofthesnake,sheturnedaspaleasasheet.一看到那條蛇,她(臉色)蒼白得像一張床單。表示喜怒哀樂(lè)的形容詞表格一喜(形容詞可替代:pleased;delighted;cheerful;overjoyed;joyful;blissful)ashappyasakingashappyasapiginmudashappyasaclamathightide怒(形容詞可替代:mad;furious)asangryasabullasangryasaragingstorm哀assadasahomelessdog累(形容詞可替代:exhausted)astiredasthewingsofabirdastiredasaworn-outshoeastiredasanox緊張不安asnervousasanantonahotpanasnervousasacatonhotbrick害怕sb'sfaceturnedaspaleasasheet表格二asstrongasanox健壯如牛/強(qiáng)/厲害astoughasanoldboot堅(jiān)強(qiáng)assilentasastone沉默ashungryasаhunter餓aseasyasapieceofcake輕而易舉asbitterasasourlime苦悶ascoldasice冰冷asbigasabus體積大asbrightasdaylight心情/臉亮起來(lái)asradiantasroses容光煥發(fā)asshiningasdiamonds像鉆石般閃耀asgentleasabreeze像微風(fēng)一樣溫柔Asslyasafox像狐貍一樣狡猾asbusyasabee忙得團(tuán)團(tuán)